Something About You- MG || (Part 42|Page 51) - Page 6

Part 3 

Fabulous Update 

Maan again getting drunk but thankfully

Geet is there , so she also has decided to get serious 

with her career 

as she is in catering now 

but why did Geet's family burn her hair ? 

Maan the next morning getting up to an unfamiliar surroundings

but also it seems like this is his lifestyle 

but this time he was just so cute , there certainly was attraction and curiosity

building to know Geet 

Star Commenter Awards

We are again starting our Star commenter Awards with this story. As i say, your comments are my fuel. More the comments utni hi jaldi energy I get to post the next update.

Congratulations to the following winners!

Early Bird Award- Gold.Abrol

Star Commenter Winner- Taahir

Special Mention-  Simran di & Sudha

While we are at it, let's guess how the story will progress in the next parts and any song that comes to your mind about the story. Let’s have some fun!!!

Part 4

G- I thought something in my career will move if I make connections at right places. That was no way to make connections...just enemies. I didn't know any other way. Nevertheless, that was all in past. Now, I make food for people. Mere baba ki Shimlapuri mein halwai ki dukaan hai, main yahan tiffin banati hoon. Bass yahi hai

She says suddenly turning and looking directly into his eyes.

She has those huge beautiful dark feminine eyes. Like one would see in a painting.

Her whole confidence was different today.

He looks away.

M-I am waiting for my driver to pick me up.

Maan explains.

Geet nods getting back to her chore.

M-So if you do Catering. Give me your card.

She starts to say something but stops before anything audible comes off her mouth.

She hands over her card to him while wondering why he is taking so much interest in her.

Maybe some teasing technique of his...some sarcasm may be....

Why is he loitering around?

He is just killing time talking to me....as he said he is waiting for the driver...don’t think too much into it.

She thinks to herself.

You still think about him because he was the first man you kissed, nothing else.

She rationalizes her inner thoughts.

He is deriving pleasure off your misery, nothing else.

I am not miserable!

She scolds her own thoughts.

I am a gifted cook.

Limelight is not for me.

She again scolds herself.

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Today, Maan is not attending a random party, in fact it’s his family's grandiose party.

His family is the owner of a conglomerate.

Geet was catering there.

It’s her super big break.

Some unknowns had suggested her name, and she finally got the contract after multiple tastings.

So, she is adhering to all the protocols and wearing uniform while working on catering.

She is busy in the live pasta counter.

Amongst so many people what is the probability of noticing a caterer?

That too wearing super non fancy clothes and working among people with face hidden in a mask and a hair cap, only the eyes visible.

The guests are wearing designer high end clothes.

The sheer number of guests are huge.

That too being noticed by the current head of the conglomerate. The ultimate bachelor that every woman has dressed to impress.

Maan stands at a side, being stared at by potential heiresses and their mamma’s; and excluded by his family.

All these people interaction sucks off his energy.

People also don’t walk up to him and talk though.... He is kind of unpredictable and dangerous...

People leave him alone and don't mess with him!! Unless he messes with them in return coz, he feels bored!

Maan might not be an extrovert, but he is a sharp observer.

He is silently scanning the room.

Uske dimaag ka radar achanak stops and focuses on the pasta counter.

Isn’t... she....?

He thinks it is, but he can't be sure.

Geet was busy cooking for people with all the demands.

She notices a familiar gait through peripheral vision.

Her actions pause for a second as her pupils dilate.

A smirk appears on his lips.

He is sure it’s her now.

She thinks there is no way he could guess it’s her.

It’s just he is part of the party and skimming for food.

Calm down and continue your work.

She reasons with herself.

Next moment she sees him standing at the counter.

His intense dark eyes gazing into her hazel eyes.

She tightens her wrist to tighten her resolve.

G- Sir, which pasta would you like?

He gestures with his hand to first serve the others as other guests arrive.

She is cooking for other guests while she could very well feel his gaze on her.

This goes on, he just stands there letting other people to first get served.

She thought she will be over with it but...

He has a slight signature smirk on his face. Woh mazze lene wala

It is high pressure enough for her, serving the snooty high class who look down upon her and her food and now this.

Does he want her to fail?

She stops herself from overthinking, trying her best to concentrate on the food.

She turns to serve the people, but the counter is empty except from him.

He gestures on something with his gaze.

She looks down to see him holding a glass of water.

M- have it. You are sweating.

She accepts it hesitantly.

She gazes up and finds him smiling.

Is this some kind of trap? She wonders.

She smiles a little behind her mask ...who could have thought he would look so different smiling...he has little unevenness in alignment of teeth like little vampire teeth’s.... like imperfections that makes things unique

Formal ball room dance starts in the party.

Maan finds sameness and fakeness of people around him boring.

Men look clones of each other with similar tuxedos and women also the same with similar botoxed plastic surgery faces and similar designer gowns and same makeup same perfumes same hair.

All the perfection is mind numbingly boring.

All the elders are prompting Maan to join the dance with a partner.

All the women are smiling thinking ki ab toh hum mein se ek ko choose karna padega

But our man is all about surprises. They had their way by pushing him to dance now he will have his own.

Geet was working in her pasta counter.

Before she could understand she finds Maan walking towards her and her being pulled into the dance floor.

Amidst all the elite eyes judging and staring at them.

Everybody is shocked ki ye kya...he is dancing with an uncouth server. Is she even a woman? Look at her attire!

Geet tries to protest.

M- Shhhhh....just bear with this...pls. please.

G- Whaaa...?

He twirls her.

They are quite close.

She puts her arm around his shoulder, as a reflex.

She is very aware of eyes on her.

She gazes up to see his gaze fixed on her.

Thankfully she is wearing full sleeves, or her goosebumps would have been very evident.

His fingers slowly trace her face mask to pull it off.

She resists.

He stops.

But miracle did happen, he did dance with a girl at a party.

Koi maane naa maane those few minutes were captivating.

Geet jaldi se goes back to her pasta station.

She takes her bare minimum stuff and flees the area.

Originally posted by: Gold.Abrol

Loved it dear Neelu

Awesome update 😃

I really loved the starting part where Maan was teasing Geet & finally they moved ahead but Maan seems to be intruded in her

Finally they again met 😄 & Maan was totally drunk & Geet helped him in this situation & took him to her apartment

🤔 Hmm so now Geet told Maan everything in the morning making Maan more surprise but what exactly happened with her looking forward to it

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

Glad you are liking the character progression

Originally posted by: akkub.92

Nice update, poor geet got punished for her stupidity and how can her family burn her hair, can't wait to see how the story continue and how they love story start 

Update soon

Any guesses how their love story will start?

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 3

Fantastic Update Thanks

Geet is now in catering 

while Maan again at another party getting drunk

but this time he is the one that spots Geet

so she is the one that took him to her house 

but she clearly made him aware that her place is not any hotel 

and there is no payments needed .

seems like Maan really finds Geet interesting Good observation

Originally posted by: aparna3011

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maan remember geet after few moths also

he find her in one party who is drunk in highest point

geet took him with her 

geet change her profession as she thinks it was stupid of her 

maan surprise to see change in her as this geet is totally different but with same innocence 

Thanks for reading & commenting

Originally posted by: babelicious

Aww, this is sad… Geet’s condition got me emotional.. thank god they meet again! Loved the update. Maan played with her one time but he couldn’t forget her. Loved their second meeting. Geet’s family is bad, they burnt her hair meaning how bad her situation would have been. Aww really even Maan felt guilty abt that, and she told him honestly why she did that.. I’m hoping they keep coming into each other from here.. he is affected by her it felt

Wonderful observation

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 3

Great update… nicely written

yet again Maan is drunk

so he was stunned seeing Geet

of cos he thinks it was his imagination

well Geet was shocked seeing Maan

her reaction was justified

as expected Maan awakened with a headache

at least Geet helped Maan

nice that she even gave him breakfast

Maan's remark was anticipated

good that she threw his words in his face

glad that Maan was curious yet intrigued by her

Maan's question was reasonable

pleased that Geet was direct with Maan

now Geet is in catering

liked that Maan feels responsible for what he did

angry that her family burnt her hair

they are so mean

feeling for Geet

not surprised that Maan confronted Geet

for Geet it was stupidity

everything certainly changed for Geet

how and when will they meet? Any guesses on this?

update soon

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 3 

Fabulous Update 

Maan again getting drunk but thankfully

Geet is there , so she also has decided to get serious 

with her career 

as she is in catering now 

but why did Geet's family burn her hair ? They are conservative family and her venturing into entertainment career of acting & stuff is beyond their strict conservative values

Maan the next morning getting up to an unfamiliar surroundings

but also it seems like this is his lifestyle 

but this time he was just so cute , there certainly was attraction and curiosity

building to know Geet 

 

Wonderful update Neelu

Just loved it 🤗

Well I am happy that Geet is trying her best to fix all the issues herself in her life 😔 also she is strong enough to deal herself

I think it's not just a coincidence that she is here in the party which is really good start to her professional life 😁

Well I loved the dance performance of Maan and Geet & everyone is very surprised to see them like this

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️