Junior Ghajini Ashish Maitree SS

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Junior Ghajini Part 1


I dedicate this SS to 
Misthycupcake

who wanted me to write a story on the telugu movie 

Bhale Bhale Magadivoy which is remade in Kannada as Sundaranga Jaana  and in Tamil as Ghajinikanth.I have taken only the plot of the movie,the scenes are different from the movie.

I thank my dearest friend ingenuity_phoenix for the beautiful cover page.




 Lakhan and Avni were watching the movie 'Ghajini'.They witnessed Sanjay Singhania's(Aamir Khan)short term memory loss scenes.

Lakhan:It's so sad that he has short term memory loss.

Avni:Ya...poor guy.

Suddenly Avni started having labor pain.

Avni started moaning.

Lakhan:What happened?

Avni:I think the baby is going to come out.

Lakhan was shocked:Oh no!

Immediately he took Avni to the hospital and she delivered a baby boy.

Avni and Lakhan smiled at each other.



Avni and Lakhan smiled looking at the baby in the cradle.

Avni:Our son is so cute.

Lakhan:Yes..he is.

She smiled.

Lakhan:Ashish beta.....

Avni:So you named our baby.

Lakhan:Yes.Did'nt you like the name?

Avni:Yes.I liked it.

He smiled.



After 7 years....

Avni asked Ashish:Ashish...you teacher rang up and asked me why we did'nt attend the PTA meeting.Why did'nt you inform us about the PTA meeting?

Ashish:Sorry Maa.I forgot.

Lakhan:How can you forget such an important thing?

Avni:Lakhan...relax...he is a small child.Kids do forget.

Lakhan did not say anything.



Another day....

Avni opened Ashish's tiffin box after he reached home from school.It was full of the food items which she had kept in the tiffin box.

Avni:Ashish,why did'nt you have the food I sent you?I kept your favourite food items in the tiffin box.

Ashish:I was talking to my friends.So I forgot to eat it.

Avni looked at Lakhan.

Avni:Lakhan,I have been noticing that Ashish is always forgetting things.

Lakhan:When you were about to give birth to him you were watching 'Ghajini' which was about shirt term memory loss.Unfortunately it has affected him.

Avni:Means?

Lakhan said painfully:I think he has memory issues.

Avni was shattered:What?



After 18 years....

Ashish got ready to go to office.

Avni and Lakhan were shocked to see him.

Ashish:Why you both are staring at me like this?Why you both are giving me a shocked expression?

Lakhan:Junior Ghajini...you forgot to wear your pant.Will you go to office like this?

Ashish looked at his bare legs and got embarrassed.

Ashish ran to his room to wear pants.

Avni:Lakhan,don't taunt my son by calling him 'Junior Ghajini'.

Lakhan:You keep pampering him.But don't forget his defect.

Avni became dull.

Ashish returned wearing pants.

Lakhan:Ashish...there is a marriage proposal for you.The famous industrialist Mukund Kapoor's daughter.Today please come back home early.Because Mukund will come here to meet you before proceeding the marriage proposal.

Ashish:Ok dad.I will come home early.




Mukund visited the Tiwari house.But Ashish had not reached home.He waited for 3 hours.Still Ashish did'nt land up.Mukund lost cool.

Mukund:What is this?Where is your son?I waited so much.

Avni and Lakhan were embarrassed.

Lakhan:Sorry.I think he is busy with his work.That's why.

Mukund:But he could have informed us.I would'nt have wasted my time.Anyways I am leaving.

Lakhan-Avni became upset.

Ashish reached there.

Lakhan-Avni were relieved to see him.

Mukund looked at Ashish.

Mukund:You are Ashish.Right?

Ashish:Yes.Sorry...I could'nt recognize you.

Lakhan:Ashish..I told you about Mr.Mukund Kapoor visiting our home to meet you.

Ashish got embarrassed.He thought:Oh no...I forgot about that and went out with my friend.So this is Mukund Kapoor.

Ashish: Sorry,I forgot that you will be coming home to meet me.

Mukund:What?How can you forget that?

Ashish:Actually since childhood I have memory issues.

Mukund was shocked.Lakhan and Avni were also shocked as they did not expect Ashish to confess his defect to Mukund.

Mukund stared at Lakhan and Avni:You hid such a big thing from me?Glad that your son's truth is out.I will never get my daughter married to him.

Mukund walked out.Lakhan and Avni were sad while Ashish was cool.

Lakhan:Why did you tell him about your memory issue?All your marriage proposals got cancelled because of your memory problem.I thought atleast this one will work.

Ashish:After marriage if this short tempered person had come to know about my memory issue,he would have asked his daughter to divorce me.Good that he came to know it now itself.

Lakhan and Avni were upset.




A middle aged lady from the old age home went out and met with an accident.A girl who came that way saw her lying on the road.

She:Somebody please help.We have to take her to the hospital.

Nobody listened to her.

She:Nobody has humanity.Pathetic!

Ashish who saw this stopped his car and went near them.Before she could seek his help,

Ashish told her:Let us take her to the hospital.

She:Thanks a lot.

They both took her to the hospital by Ashish's car.

The old lady was taken to the operation theatre.Suddenly Ashish noticed her face.

Ashish's face blossomed.

Ashish thought:She looks so pretty.

Suddenly Ashish got a phone call asking him to come for an urgent meeting in the office.

Ashish told her:I am sorry.I need to leave for an important meeting.

She:Ok.Your name?

Ashish took out his identity card from his pocket and gave it to her.Then he ran out.




In the night ....

Ashish bought snacks from the shop.They told him the price.Suddenly that girl rang him up.

Girl:Hi Ashish...I called you to thank you.

Ashish did not understand anything.

Ashish:Why are you thanking me?Who are you?How do you know my name?

She:My name is Maitree.I got to know your name from your ID card.Today morning you helped me to take an old lady to the hospital.I wanted to thank you for that.

Ashish thought:Oh!I had forgotten that incident totally.I was searching for my ID card and I had forgotten where I had kept it.Now I understood that I did a blunder by giving it to her.

She:Only a few people like you have the good heart to do that.The patient got saved only because you helped me to take her to the hospital on time.

Ashish smiled remembering her pretty face.

Ashish:You also have a good heart.That's why you took the initiative to take her to the hospital.

Maitree smiled.

Ashish:I wanted my ID card back.It's essential.

Maitree:Ok.I will come and give it to you.Where should I come?

Ashish:I will come and take it from you.Tell me where I should come.

Maitree:I have a dance school named 'Art of dance'.You can meet me there.

Ashish:Ya...I have heard of it.I will come there tomorrow.Bye.

Maitree smiled:Bye!

After cutting the call, Ashish forgot the price of the snacks he has to give the shop keeper.So he gave random amount of money.

The shopkeeper thought:He gave me double money.He has a good heart.


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Nice start dear

Just loved it

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Part 1

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Are Lakhan Avni played by Hiten Gauri? Both watching Ghajiniand suddenly Avni having labor pain was shocking. Avni naming their son Ashish wasnice. So I was right its Hiten, who’s the woman? Glad to see Naksh as Ashish, heforgot the PTA meeting. Shocked that he even forgot to have food. Does this ff symbolizesthat whatever women watch in pregnancy, it affects the child? Even Avni Lakhan thinksthe same. Am I right, means it does affect the child. Now Lakhan is taunting Ashishby calling him junior ghajini. Ashish confessing his defect was shocking. Ashishhelping the girl to hospital was nice. First he forgot about his ID card then theprice… perfect pics. Waiting for next. 

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Avni is played by Ritu Chauhan.

No,this ff does'nt symbolize anything.It's just a coincidence that the baby became like the hero of the movie Avni watched during pregnancy.

Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: salley145

Are Lakhan Avni played by Hiten Gauri? Both watching Ghajiniand suddenly Avni having labor pain was shocking. Avni naming their son Ashish wasnice. So I was right its Hiten, who’s the woman? Glad to see Naksh as Ashish, heforgot the PTA meeting. Shocked that he even forgot to have food. Does this ff symbolizesthat whatever women watch in pregnancy, it affects the child? Even Avni Lakhan thinksthe same. Am I right, means it does affect the child. Now Lakhan is taunting Ashishby calling him junior ghajini. Ashish confessing his defect was shocking. Ashishhelping the girl to hospital was nice. First he forgot about his ID card then theprice… perfect pics. Waiting for next. 

Edited by jasminerahul - 11 months ago
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Hey thank u jasmine for writing my fav mvi story on my fav actors shrenu amd namish..sorry i.lost my watpad login details so unable to.reach u there.

Coming to this ff..loved the title jr gajini😁😁 poor ashish frgt his meeting with mukund. I like mukund charcter in original..wish ashish and mukund have more interactions in ur stry also .loved maitree ashih fiest meet..poor guy frgt his id card bt he got reason to meet maitree🤩 waiting for more maitrish scenes🥰

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Thank u very much 

Salley,khwaishfan,glitter_goldie.Maivelli, MiniCupcake,la_Reine.






Junior Ghajini Part 2

Ashish went to Maitree’s dance school.Seeing him,she walked towards her.She was in her dance costume.

Maitree:Ashish!

Ashish smiled seeing her.He was lost in her beauty.

He thought:She looks so beautiful in her dance costume.She is really beautiful like a heavenly dancer.Good that Mukund Kapoor’s proposal did’nt work out.Maybe for Maitree God kept me unmarried.

Maitree gave him his ID card.

Ashish:Thank you.

She smiled.

Ashish:Will you teach me dance here?

Maitree was surprised.

Maitree:You want to learn dance?

Ashish:Yes.

Maitree:Sorry.I teach dance only to kids.

Ashish thought:Oh no…I thought to learn dance I can come here,so that i can see Maitree daily.But now how will I see Maitree?

Ashish looked at Maitree sadly.

Ashish:Bye!

Maitree:Bye!

Ashish walked out.

Maitree thought:Why did I feel sad when Ashish bid me good-bye?

 

 

Ashish went to his friends Rajkumar and Manmeet’s house.They are a couple.

Raj:Hi Ashish!

Ashish:Sorry,today I came to visit your son Nandish,not to see you both.

Manmeet:What?

Ashish went near Nandish.

Ashish:Nandish beta…

Nandish:Hi Ashish uncle…

Ashish:Nandish…can you do a favour for me?

Raj and Manmeet were stunned.

Manmeet:What favour does he want from our son?

Raj:No idea.

Ashish:I got a new friend named Maitree.Can you please join her dance school to learn dance?

Raj and Manmeet were stunned.

Raj:What is this guy upto?

Nandish:But I don’t like dancing.So I can’t.

Ashish became dim.

Ashish:Please don’t say like that Nandish.

Nandish:No uncle.

Ashish took chocolates from his pocket and gave them to him.

Ashish:What do you say now?

Nandish got excited and took chocolates from him.

Nandish:If you give me chocolates regularly I will learn dance.

Ashish smiled:Done.

They did high five.

Raj:Why are you asking my son to learn dance in your friend’s school?

Manmeet:One second..when did you get a friend named Maitree whom we don’t know?

Ashish:Yesterday.And I liked her.So if Nandish learn dance there,I can drop him there and pick him up regularly.Like that I can interact with Maitree.

Raj and Manmeet smiled.

Raj:So you have love fever.

Ashish blushed.

Manmeet:Interesting.

 

 

Ashish took Nandish to Maitree’s dance school.Maitree felt very happy to see him.

Seeing Nandish,her smile vanished.

She thought:Is this Ashish’s son?Is he already married?

Ashish:This is Nandish,my best friends’ son.I want his admission here.

Maitree was happy to know that Nandish is not Ashish’s son.

Maitree:Sure.Why not?I will teach him dance.

Maitree caressed Nandish’s face.

Maitree:Beta…you love dancing?

Ashish gave him a pleading look.

Ashish:Of course…he loves dancing.That’s why I brought him here.

Maitree smiled.

 

Maitree started teaching dance to Nandish.Thus Ashish became her regular visitor.

 

Ashish told Maitree:I know that you cannot teach me dance here.But would you mind dancing with me?

Maitree blushed.

She nodded:Yes.

Ashish held her hand happily and danced.

Ashish and Maitree became good friends.

 

 

Once when Ashish dropped Nandish to the dance school,Maitree noticed his barefoot.

Maitree:Where are your shoes?

That time only Ashish realised that he had not worn shoes.He became dull.

Ashish thought:I forgot to wear shoes.It’s so embarrassing.If she comes to know that I forgot to wear shoes I will have a bad impression on her.

Ashish lied:My shoe broke while I was driving.So I removed my shoes in the car itself.

Maitree:Oh!By the way Ashish…there is an exhibition in the town hall.Would you like to join me?

Ashish:Sure..why not?

Maitree smiled.

Ashish thought:Guess Maitree is also interested in me.That’s why she called me to join her.

 

 

 

Maitree was waiting at the exhibition venue.

Ashish reached there.Suddenly he got a phone call from Raj.

Raj:Hey Ashish.Raj here.Tomorrow is Nandish’s birthday.You should come.Don’t forget.

Ashish:Sure.

Manmeet took the phone and said:Bring your Maitree also.

Ashish smiled:Ok.

After cutting the call,Ashish wrote about Nandish’s birthday on his palm,so that he will remember about his birthday party.

Ashish thought:Why did I come here?I think instead of going home,I came at the wrong place.I should go back home.

Ashish turned back to go to his car.Suddenly Maitree saw him and called him:Ashish!

Ashish turned back and looked at her.

He went towards her.

Ashish:Hi Maitree…what a pleasant surprise!Why are you here?

Maitree’s face became dull.

Maitree:Why are you talking like this Ashish?I only told you to come here for the exhibition.After coming here you are asking me why I am here?

Ashish became dull.

He thought:Oh my God!I forgot about the exhibition. Like a fool I was planning to go back home.If Maitree had not called me,I would have gone home.Then Maitree would have been angry with me for not accompanying her to the exhibition.

Ashish laughed.

Ashish:It was a prank.You believed it?

Maitree smiled:What kind of a stupid prank was it?

They both laughed.

They enjoyed the exhibition.

Suddenly Maitree noticed Ashish’s palm.

Maitree:Why have you written about Nandish’s birthday on your palm?

Ashish smiled to cover up his embarrassment.

Ashish:Just like that.

Maitree:Nandish has invited me for his birthday party.

Ashish:We will go there together.

Maitree smiled:Ok.

After entering the car immediately he wrote on his hand about taking Maitree to the birthday.

Ashish:I hope I won’t forget it.

 

 

 

The next day Ashish and Maitree went for Nandish’s birthday party.

Seeing Nandish,Maitree hugged him.

Maitree:Happy birthday Nandish…

Nandish:Thank you teacher.

Ashish:Happy birthday dear.

Nandish:Thank you uncle.

Maitree and Ashish gave him birthday gifts.

Manmeet and Raj smiled.

Manmeet:Hi Maitree…we are Nandish’s parents.

Maitree:Hello…nice to meet you both.

Raj:We are also happy to meet you.

She smiled.

Manmeet:We will celebrate the birthday together.

They all smiled.

Ashish and Maitree celebrated Nandish’s birthday with Raj and Manmeet.

After some days….

Maitree’s father called her:Maitree beta….Maitree:Yes dad….

Maitree went near her father.He was none other than Mukund Kapoor.


Edited by jasminerahul - 11 months ago
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Beautiful part dear

Just loved it 🤗

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Part 1 


Fabulous Start

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Part 2

Nice update.... awesomely written