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Tannu. We had met on the KUDCA forum, when you were a regular there in the beginning 😆
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Originally posted by: dhun.laagi
Tannu. We had met on the KUDCA forum, when you were a regular there in the beginning 😆
sorry i cant remember much about you..but yes i was there in beginning in. kyu uthe forum ,uske baad show chod diya tha due to the siyapa they did..well anyways i am glad to meet you here..
sorry i cant remember much about you..but yes i was there in beginning in. kyu uthe forum ,uske baad show chod diya tha due to the siyapa they did..well anyways i am glad to meet you here..
That's fine. I also only remember only coz there were very limited members who came there, and your dp and un is the same, nahi toh meri memory bhi bahut kacchi hai 😅
PART 2
Recap-Tara decides to return as her responsibilities as a princess to her kingdom and her people were still unfinished. Dhruv, initially saddened by the decision, eventually agrees with Tara because they both understood and agreed that it was against the universal law to tamper with time and history.
@ Later at night ,
According to Tara's mother's calculation and instructions, they needed to reach the portal at a precise time. Since the road to the ruins of Navrang Van was dangerous, it was decided that Dhruv and Jai would accompany Tara and Mahavirji to ensure their safe departure.
In Guest room ,
After getting ready, tara thinks for few minutes and goes to dhruv’s room. She takes off a jhumka she was wearing and along with the letter and places it under his pillow.
Tara- (to herself) hum aasha karte hai yeh patra aap jaroor padenge..
Tara and mahaveer walks out of the house after taking blessings from elders and bids goodbye to everyone.
Tara-(whispering) hum prathna karte hai kanhanji ki agli baar jab hum iss ghar mein aaye toh iss ghar ki putravadhu banke aaye .. Aapki kripa drishti hamesha banaye rakhna kanhanji.. Shubh ho.. Mangal ho…
@While driving ,
Jai gets a call from prince…
Jai – haan bolo prince kya hua?
Prince- Jai bhaiya, speaker par lagao, bahut gadbad hogayi hai.
Jai puts the phone on speaker..
Jai- ab kya hogaya?
Dhruv- haan prince kya hua hai…
Prince- aree Dhruv bhaiya ,Jai bhaiya woh Dr. Tarun hai na, woh aur kuch press wale yaha aaye the ghar pe tara didi aur mahaveer bhaiji ke bare mein puch rahe the aur woh Tarun yeh bhi keh rahe the media waalo se ki woh time travel ki machine and 17th sadi ke logo se live telecast mil waayenge.. Naniji aur taiji ne badi muskil se yeh bolke bhagya hai ki mahaveer bhaiya ki tabiyat bigad gayi hai issliye aap dono unhe hospital gaye hai…
Dhruv- damn it!!! Woh Tarun ab hospital jaa kar check karega…
Jai- aur kuch bol raha tha woh Tarun?
Prince- nahi par woh yeh jaroor keh ke gaya hai ki usse patah hai ki aap log kaha jaa rahe ho …
Tara- ab hum kya karenge chikitsak doctor Dhruv?
Mahavir- haan, agar Tarun ji ko jagah patah chal gaya ki kaha se hum sadi ke aar paar jaa sakte hai toh anarth hoga, woh iss ka durupyog karenge aur toh yeh itihas ke samay kram ko bhi bigaad sakta hai..
Prince- oh god.. aap sab toh bina baat ke breaking news ban gaye ho….yeh Tarun ne toh breaking news bana di hai.. aap logo ka picha kar rahe hai.. woh news live aa rahi hai..
Dhruv opens his mobile searches n net and indeed they were being traced.
Jai- tara, aur koi raasta hai waha jungle mein jaha time machine hai?
Tara-haan hai parantu uss ke liye aapko uttar ki aur jaana hoga.. aur waha se jaaya jaa sakta hai par hamare paas ant mein bahut sesh reh jaayega.
Dhruv- who tension mat lo hum paunch jaayenge tara aur prince aur koi aaye toh yeh bolna ki hum dusre hospital le gaye hai emergency mein.
Prince cuts the call……
Jai changes the route…. the reporters are left long behind..
Dhruv gets a call from unknown number…
Dhruv – ab yeh kon call kar raha hai..
Dhruv puts the call on speaker..
Tarun- ka hua Dhruv babu , tum humko topa samjhe ho ka ? Tumko ka lagta hai tum raasta badal doge toh hume patah nahi chalega..
Jai looks in rear mirror..
Jai- shit!!! Yeh picha kar raha hai , raasta kaise mil gaya inhe?
Tarun- (laughs) iss baar toh tumko hum pakad ke hi rahenge aur toh aur samay chakra ki sachai bahar laake hi rahenge..
Tara-itna bhi abhimaan acha nahi hai Tarun ji, aap jo swapn dekh rahe hai hum unhe puraa nahi hone denge.
Tarun- areee taraji yeh toh thodi der mein patah chal jaayega. Kon jeetega aur kon hare ga.
Tarun cuts the call.
After driving for some time, the road gets dense, and view is not visible, jai stops the car near by a tree..
Jai- yaha se paidal chalna hoga.. aage gaadi nahi jaa sakti…
Dhruv- okay, hum google map se dhoondh lenge raasta …
Dhruv checks his phone but it turns out to be switched off..
Dhruv- shit… shit abhi hi isko bhi… oh god.. ab hum waha kaise jaayege..
Jay tumhare phone mein battery hai?
Jay- nahi mera bhi switch ho gaya hai…
Dhruv- aree yaar.. Damn!!Abhi aise waqt pe phone ko switch off hona tha..
Meanwhile, tara and mahaveer are looking at sky and calculating something.
After few minutes tara climbs a nearby tree
Jay- yeh dekho hum yaha tension mein aur yeh log gin kya rahe hai? Aur yeh tara ped pe kyu chad gayi hai..
Dhruv- (whispers) tara .. tara yeh kya kar rahi ho aur uttro .abhi haath paav tud wana hai ka.. aur yeh aasaman ki aur kyu dekh rahi ho... Tum yeh kya kar rahi ho…
Tara- shsss .. shsss ek shan!!!
Dhruv – yaha time nikla jaa raha hai aur yeh ek shan ek shan bolke bandoro ki tarah ped chadhi hai…(almost shouting) tara…tara.. utaro niche ..kya kar rahi ho.. uttro. Uttro . gir jaaogi hospital lena jaana padega.. phir hojaayga tumhara time travel..
Tara- shsss..shsss…. ek shan ..ek shan. Chikitsak ji… shsss.
Dhruv- tara…tara.. . tara niche uttro niche taang tutt jaayegi..tumhari..
Mahavir- taaru mil gaya raasta , woh dekhiye shukr grah, aakash ke iss disha ki aur hai ..
Tara jumps down ..
Dhruv is scared and leaps forward to catch her in hero style , but she lands safely….
Tara – aap yeh bahein faila kyu khade hai .... . ab aap aise khade hokar samay vyarth na kijiye hame naksha dijiye..
.Dhruv-( murmuring to himself) yeh time waste khud kar rahi hai aur samjha mujeh rahi hai..!!!
Tara- ji kuch kaha aapne chikisak doctor Dhruv ? aur aap sunn rahe hai.. buth ke jaise kyu khade hai.. aap hame naksha diiye…
Jai suppresses his laughter...
Tara and mahavir traces, the map and pin points their location,
Tara- bhaiji , hum uttar disha mein hai yaani ki yaha… aur , navrang van ke khander ka paschimi dawar yaha hai ,iska arth yeh hai ki hume shukr griha ke raah par chalna hoga arthath iss paschimi disha ki aur ..
Dhruv- ek sec ek sec.. tum bol kya rahi ho.. tum kaise sure ho ki .hum sahi raaste jaa rahe.. itna andhere mein patah kaise chala...aur tum upar kyu chaddi hui thi…
Tara – chikisak doctor Dhruv, jab yeh yantra nahi the toh tab hum hum aakash mein taramandal aur unki gati vidhi se raasta dhoodhte the.. aur yeh bahut hi sachot maarg darshak hai.. aap chinta naa kare hum paunch jaayenge..hum raaste mein jaate waqt kuch chinh banate jaayenge taaki aap ko wapas aane mein koi dudvidha na ho sake.
Dhruv and jai makes some cue points on the way and follows tara and mahavir.. inside the jungle.
Meanwhile, Tarun who was chasing them reaches the same place where they stopped a minute a ago. Tarun sees the cue marks and follows them
While searching the path they come across tarun , who ran after them.
Dhruv- jai tu ,mahavirji, aur tara ko leke aage jaa mein, tarun ko yahi rokta hoon..
Jai – nahi mein yaha rukta hoon , saath mein rokenge toh better hoga..tara aur mahaveer ji aap dono aage jaaye , hum tarun se nipat kar aate hai.. waqt bahut kam hai.
Tara- nahi , doctor Dhruv hum aap dono ko aise akele nahi chod sakte ..hum sab saath mein jaayenge..
Dhruv- tara zidd mat karo, time nahi hai,kuch nahi hoga abhi tumahara navrang van ke paas paunch na tarun se bhi bahut important hai..
Tara tries to refute but seeing dhruv’s determination she agrees.
She hugs him ..
Tara- shigrah aayega chikisakji, hamare prasthan karne se pehle..
She breaks the hug and follows her bhaiji.
Dhruv- ab yeh tarun se nipt te hai… jai yeh le….(takes out a thin rope from pocket)..tu baayein taraf ja mein daayein taraf..aur sunn jaise hi tarun gir jaaye, toh uska mobile le lena,mobile mein bahut saare proofs hai.. woh destroy karna hoga..
Jai- okay.shss!!!! chup ja lagta hai woh aa raha hai..
Dhruv- (whispers)1
Jai-(whispers) 2
Dhruv- (whispers)3
Dhruv and Jai at the same time gives a tight tug to rope and makes tarun..
Tarun- ahh. Yeh ka..(looks at jai and tdhruv) tum dono bach nahi sakte..
Dhruv pushes tarun down , while jai snatches his phone…
Jai- mil gaya .. mil gaya.. phone ..
Tarun- ae hamara phone do wapas.. dekho mein tumhein na high post pe job de doonga government hospital mein , tum yeh phone wapas de do..
Jay- thank you … but no thank you.. Mujeh tumhari offer nahi chahiye..
Jay keeps the phone with him..
Tarun- aeee(trying to get up ) shoves Dhruv to ground and stalls jai..
Dhruv- aee chod usse..
There is clash between jai , Dhruv and Tarun.
Tarun is strong as compared to both brothers , but soon the duo over powers tarun and successfully dodge and escape tarun..
Tarun runs after them.
Tarun- nahi iss baar hum haar nahi manenge…iss baar toh time travel ke machine tak jaa kar hi rahenge.
On the other side, Tara and Mahavir finally reached the ruins of Navrang Van. They carefully made markings, ensuring that Dhruv and Jai would be able to locate them easily. Tara anxiously waited at the entrance, but there was no sign of Dhruv and Jai.
Mahavir observed the faint light of dawn on the horizon, indicating that their time to return was approaching.
Mahaveer- Tarapriya paau fatne ko hai, bahut kam samay hai ab, chaliye, hame aur vilanbh nahi karna chahiye
Tara stood at the entrance with teary eyes, desperately waiting for Dhruv and Jai to appear. However, as minutes passed, there was still no sign of them. With a heavy heart, she reluctantly turns away from the entrance and walks back towards the circle.
Tara- (to herself ) kaha hai aap chikisak doctor dhruv..?
Tara and Mahavir stepped into the central part of the circle.
The sky grew ominous as dark clouds gathered, crackling with lightning that emitted eerie purple rays.
The temperature in the surrounding area begins to drop down.
On the other side,
Jai- yeh acahnak mausam ko kya hogaya.. abhi toh subha hone waali thi.. aur badal acanak kyu garajne lage hai..
Dhruv notices the effects..
Dhruv- yeh mausam nahi badal raha hai.. jai.. time machine shayad start ho rahi hai.. hame jaldi jaana hoga aur waqt nahi hai…
Both of them ran as fast as they could, not wasting any more precious seconds.
As soon as they reached the hall, the machine started its circular motion, creating shockwaves in the nearby area, and a thin veil of sand soon covered the entire area.
Through this thin veil, Tara caught a glimpse of Dhruv entering the hall.
Dhruv and Tara desperately tried to see each other, wanting to imprint each other's faces in their memories for one last time. They knew that after this moment, they would be forever separated by the veil of time, with only remaining the cherished memories of the time spent together.
Dhruv-(whispers) Tara…. ..
Tara- (closes her eyes) Shubh ho.. Mangal ho.. Chikisak doctor dhruv..
Is all Dhruv could hear among the rumble… and for few minutes there are multiple rumbles of lightening in the sky and surrounding area.. making it impossible to hear anything, then suddenly everything becomes quite and clear, the rumbling has stopped ,and there was no veil of sand in the air….
Jay- (looking at Dhruv) tara aur mahavirji nahi hai…toh iska matalb? Woh wapas..
Jay traces off not wanting to complete his words..
Dhruv- haan woh wapas apni sadi mein chali gayi hai aur ab hame bhi chalna chahiye ..isse pehle ki aur koi aajaye…
The duo comes out of the hall and start walking back towards the jungle…
Dhruv- (in his mind) Tara agar tum meri baat sunn sakti ho to yeh baat zaroor sunnana tara… apna dhyan rakhna… aur mein bhagwan se yahi pratha karta hoon ki.. shayad hum iss sadi mein mil paaye hum…jaha hume samay aur sadi ki wajah se alag hona na pade…
Silent and lost in their own thoughts, neither of them uttered a word. Dhruv's was consumed by worry for Tara's safety and the uncertainty of his own destiny, as he awaited her return. As for Jai, he remained stunned, having witnessed something he had only ever seen in movies and read in books.
Dhruv cast one final glance towards the direction of the ruins, before joining Jai on the road where they had hidden the car.
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