DhruvTara- Kahani Samay aur Sadi se pare ki Part 3 (last part ) Pg. 6

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(P.s I have written this fiction way before Dhruv Tara decided  go to 17th century, so some part of  story will not be similar to the current track. For story fiction purpose, just assume preeti didn’t tell about truth  of fake marriage of DT and family still assume that DT are married. The family confronts both Dhruv and Tara about fake marriage when Tara's brother Mahaveer asked about marriage and tara tells them the entire truth and why they had to continue the drama.)

 

 Dhruv and Tara had decided to go back in time and performthe surgery , but there  was still lack of knowledge  , unsure aboutsuccessful surgeries in 17thcentuary , especially  when  other  factors were not in their  favor, theydecided  to take bhaiji  to 21st century however,  due toadverse conditions, it was difficult task. So, Dhruv  start’s  his medication procedure to  control  Mahaveer's deterring  condition, that would  help Mahaveer tosuccessfully travel the time.

Tara’s mother beforedeparture asked them to come back as early as possible and alsogave instructions regarding the directions and procedure to come back.

The operation was successful and  Mahaveer ‘scondition was improving, Tara was taking at most care of her brother ,meanwhile, the truth of Dhruv's birth too comes out in front of Dhruvand jai, which was shocking for both. Both were in denial mode , but withTara's help they both understand the situation and accept it.Further, she was successfully able to amend the relation of Jai and Dhruv .

All this while, Dhruv and Tara's feelings for each other increases, but they knew the reality so they refrained from saying it.

Few weeks   before departure ……

Days pass by Mahaveer regains his health, and is cleared out all test and procedures.

Dhruv confesses his feelings to Tara, she is happy but, asks for sometime  for her answer.

 

@In guest room...

 

Mahaveer-Tarapriya, yeh aap kya keh rahi aap… kya aapne sahi mein yeh nischay kiyahai..?

 

Tara-haan,bhaiji, iss  vishay par humne bahut vichar kiya hai , aur uske baadhi iss nirynay pe  aaye hai,          bhaiji.

 

Mahaveer-(sighs) tara..(makes her sit on bed)taru..  dekhiye, aap maa ,aur maharajki chinta kadapi na kare,hum unhe sab samjha lenge.aur rajya ki chinta bhi naa kare..hum kabhi rajya ka ahit nahi hone denge, aap chikisak doctor Dhruv se prem karte hai yeh hame gyat hai  aur iss mein hame koi  aapati nahi hai.

 

Tara-bhaiji, kai baar hame hamare niji hith ko chod ke wahi  nirynay lenachahiye jis mein praja ka hith ho, aur   aisa toh kanhaji ne swayamkiya hai, unhe bhitoh gokul ka tyag karke Mathura aaye the, sab ko chodke  rajdharm , apne dharm aur karm ka palan kiya tha, iss liye, hum bhi wohi kar rahe hai, hum apne  rajdharm nibha rahe hai aur yeh nirynay Tara ne nahi apitu Vallabhgadh ki Rajkumari Tarapriya ne liye hai.

 

Mahaveer-toh thik hai rajkumari Tarapriya hame aapki yehnirynay swikar hai, aur aaj aap parhame bahut  garv hai ,hum bahut khush hai aur hum yeh bhi vaada karte hai  ki hum aapke saath hai..

 

 The day before departure

Tarainforms dhruv that she wanted to give her answer for hisconfession and shouldmeet her after lunch on terrace…

 

Dhruv  comes onterrace and saw her staring at Taj Mahal.

 

Dhruv- hmm..tara ,tumne bulaaya tha? Woh mere sawaal ka jawab.. ..

 

Tara- haan,Chikisak doctor dhruv , aapne kuch  din pehle jo prashan  pucha thabas ussi ka utar dena chahte    hai,par woh uttar dene se pehle humaapse yeh batane chahte hai..ki humne jo bhi nirnay  liya hai woh  soch samjh kar hi liya hai..mein asha  karti hoon ki aap mujeh samjhenge aur hamare nirynay ka samaan karenge.

 

Tara turns around..facing dhruv..stepping forward ..

 

Dhruv- thik hai.. par tum batao toh sahi kya faisla kiya hai tumne..

 

Tara-(controllingher tears) hum ne, hum  ne.. hum ne.. yeh faisla kiya ki hum wapasapnebhaiji ke saath jaayenge hamesha ke liye .Hum aapki  prastaav swikaar nahikar sakte..

 

She said it as simple and straightforward as she could withoutmincing her words or beating around the bush..

 

After  hearing to Tara's reply , Dhruv  felt as ifsomeone had knocked the air out of him. He knew somewhere   in hisheart and mind  about the possibility of rejection and had mentallyprepared for it but, still it was hard to hear Tara's answer.

 

Dhruv-(controlling his tears)(sniffs)k… kyu.. k..kyu? kyawajah hai.?  Kya wajahhai ki tum wapasjaana chahti   ho? Dekho shayad , mein tumherajkumari ki tarah nahi rakh paaungayaha , mein tumhe woh jeevan  shaili nahi de paaunga jis mein tum pali badi huiho.. par mein bahut koshish karunga aur mehnat karunga  taaki tumhe thode bahut toh de saku.aur meri family ne jo kiyauss ke liye mein tum se   maafi  maangta hoon

 

Tara is baffled…She was never materialistic and was never hurt by his family  behaviour as she believed it was kanhaji's test forher.

 

Tara-chikisak doctor dhruv !!!! yeh aap kya keh rahe hai..hum  iss liye mananahi kar rahe hai ki hume yaha koi vaibhav aur dhan ki kami hogi.. hum kisi aurwajah se mana kar rahe hai.

 

 

Dhruv finally breaks down. .Tara too finally lets her tears downfor once and all .She too wanted to relieve the pain which was in her heartfrom the decision  she had made, but she had to be firm on her decision.

 

Dhruv is inconsolable , but Tara some how makes him sit down onnear by charpaai and pleads him to listen to her for once…

 

Tara-chikitsak doctor Dhruv,  doctor Dhruv  hamari aur dekhiye, humaapse prathna karte hai.(folding her hands). kripiya hamari aur dekhiye..chikitsak doctor Dhruv , kripiya hamari aur dekhiye., aap samajhiye humne jofaisla liya hai..woh soch samjh kar liya hai.

 

Dhruv  was not ready to hear anything, at the moment hefelt so many emotions all at once.

 

Tara wipes his tears and gives him some time to calm down.

 

After few minutes….

 

Dhruv  had now calm down , So  Tara continues..

 

Tara-Chikitsak doctor Dhruv, mein jaanti hoon ,aap bahut pidit hue hai hamare nirynay se parantu kripiya  ek baar, ek baar sirf, ek baar aap hamari baat sun lijiye, hum vinti karte hai aapse..

 

Dhruv-(wiping his tears) thik hai..

 Tara sits besides him, holds his hands and making him face her..

Tara-(wiping her tears) Chikitsak doctor Dhruv ,sab se pehle toh aap yeh jaan lijiye ki hum aapse bahut prem karte hai, aur hamesha karte rahenge,  par hum... hum iss samay, iss sadi ke nahi hai, hum iss  itihas ke ek kirdaar hai ,jo samay aur sadi  ki sima laangh kar aaye the ,ek lakshya ke saath  ,aur uss lakshya mein kanhanji ne  aapko hamare sahi yaatri  ke roop mein bheja  tha,hum aa jeevan , aur har shan hum  aabhari rahenge ki aap hame mile.

 

 Parantu hum iss yug, iss daur ke nahi hai. Hum itihas ki ek kadi hai, aur agar woh kadi nikaal di jaaye toh,  iske doorgrami pravabhav   sab par hoga ,har uss itihas ke pahelu par hoga  jo hum se juda hai, aap.. aap samjh rahe hai chikitsak doctor Dhruv , hum kya  vartalaap kar rahe hai. 

 

Dhruv just nods his head like a little kid,who was just getting scolded for talking in class.

 

Tara- aur toh aur hum Rajkumari hai chikitsak doctor Dhruv , aur humara rajdharm hame iss ki swikruti kabhi nahi dega, kyuki  sabse pehle hamare liye , hamari maatru bhoomi vallabhagadh, hamari praja, unki  raksha karna hamara rajdharm hai.  Aur hum hamare rajdharm se picche hatt nahi kar sakte. Agar hum yaha ruk bhi jaate hai na chikisak doctor Dhruv , hum aa jeevan iss aatm gilaani mein jeete rahenge ki  hum ne apne niji swarth ke liye rajdharm ka palan nahi kiya. Hum aapke liye aapki Tara hai, parauntu sab se pehle yeh aapki Tara Vallabhgadh ki Rajkumari Tarapriya hai jiska rajdharm sampoorn nahi hua hai.Iss liye hum aapka prastav swikaar nahi kar sakte  aur iske liye hum aapke apradhi bhi hai. Humne aapko aur aapke  hridhy ko pida paunchayi hai..(folding her hands) aap hame jo bhi saza dena chahte hai hum  usse swikaar karenge.

 

 

Dhruv-(stops her from folding hands)  nahi … Tara ..please haath ,mat jodo..please  tum meri doshi nahi ho ,(wiping his tears)  mujeh kahi na kahi patha tha ki tum 'na' bhi keh sakti ho.. par bas woh shayad sunn ne ke liye tyar nahi tha.. mein tumhe jaane se nahi rok sakta, kyuki yeh hum dono ke liye aur itihas ke nazariye se galat hoga, par kya tum  woh sena pati samrat se vivah karogi  wapas jaane ke baad?

 

Tara- hame nahi patah chikisak doctor Dhruv,  hamare bhavishya mein kya hoga ,parantu,  uss din jo pandit  ji ne kaha tha agar wah kathan satya hai ,toh hum  yeh vivah jaroor rokne ka prayaas karenge.

 

(Dhruv remembered how the priest informed them that as per one folklore, vallabhgadh saw its downfall and was erased from history due to the marriage between Senapati Samrat and princess of Vallabhgadh. As no regal heir was left, due to vallabhgadh’s prince untimely death  and then senapati blackmailed the royal king and queen for  taking  over the throne. Further ,the priest also mentioned that  how princess of vallabhgadh  died due to the treachery of Senapati )

 

Dhruv remembered how tara was furious after that and wanted to kill senapati on the first chance after returning to 17thcentuary. However, they successfully stalled the marriage till they return and was able  to put senapati in prison , but still the chances of upsurge  was there, so  they decided to handle the matter at once  , once Mahaveer and Tara were back)

 

 Tara – agar humara  vivah  uss dusht sena pati ke saath hone  se hamare rajya ka patan hona likha hai , toh hum yehniyati avyashya badlenge,  hum hamare rajya ka patan nahi hone denge,phiriske liye chahe hame hamare pitashri ke diye  vachan ka ulanghan karnapade toh wah bhi karenge  parantu  hum hamare rajya ka astitv khonenahi  denge.

 

Saxsena family  too who witnessed the talk decides to give them time and space.

At terrace, Dhruv Tara talks about everything , about their childhood, their schooling ,about her mother and how much she missed her,she also told about him about how her father  was not on talkingterms  with her mother, and her mother’s time travel.

 

Dhruv-kya??Toh tumhari  maa kaha gayi thi? Aur konse saal mein gayi thi ?

 

Tara- yeh toh hame gyat , hamari matashree ne kabhi iss sandharbh  meinhamare saath vartalaap  nahi ki, aur woh  kis wajah se gayi thi isska kathan kabhi nahikiya.

 

Dhruv-hmmm …tara tumne aur bhaiji ne socha hai ki woh senapati ke saathi aur uske spies kakaise saamna karoge, woh log  toh navrang van ke bahar  tambu gaadebaithenge hoge, red carpet bichake kab tum dono wapas aao aur kab woh logattack kare .

 

Tara- hamegyat hai ,aur iska upaya bhi hamare bhaiji ne dhoondh liya hai. Bas, kanha jise prathna hai ki woh hame iss kaarya mein safal kare.

 

After some time, bhaiji followed by Saxsena family entersthe terrace with  food and desserts..

 

Tara- Areeeyeh sab,(looking at various  prepared modern dishes) itne vishsit vyanjanaap ne kab banaye aur kab banaye, hame bulaa liya hota..

 

Naniji- areeaaj kuch nahi sunna mujeh, aaj toh mein tumhe aur tumahre bhaiji ko modernkhanna khilaaungi...dekho kal toh tu jaa rahi hai..toh  kitne dino se tukhana bana rahi hai tara , toh aaj apni yeh nani ke haatho ka haath ka jaadudekh…

 

Naniji feeds to tara first morsel of food..

 

Tara  gets emotional..

 

Naniji- naiaaj koi rona dhona nahi hoga, aaj toh khushi ka waqt  hai..acha ab batakaisa laga khana ..

 

Tara- adbhut,ati adbhut , yeh toh bahut swadisht hai.

 

Dhruv tara feeds to each other. the food they. ignoring thebackground commentary of family members.

 

 

End of part 1...

 

 

P.S. I hope you all like it, I am trying to give most logicalend to story. The story will be three to four parts only. Also please see thereference to endings are inspired by k dramas  so thoda seh lena  ) 

 Sorry for spelling mistakes and grammatical error.

The editing in india forum for topics is still crappy . If you find something weird in editing let me know in replies. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Very well written! 👏

You are an amazing writer ❤️

Love the way you maintained their characters, language and the story! 👍🏼

Look forward to the next part, please do update soon!! 😳

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Lovely write up ... ❤️

Loved the convo between Bhaiji Tara and DT ... 

DT ke emotions bang on ... 

Well written keeping intact the main characters in frame ... 

Excited for the departure and the DT moments ... 

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I was not ready for the heartbreaking rejection scene with my tissue box 🥺🥺 *sniff* *sniff*

Abhi aur kuch likhne ki stithi me nahi hun.....to abhi ke liye reserved this spot.....baad me will edit 

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Interesting plot👏


I hope you find a way to make Dhruv Tara marry each other though 😳

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Kitna logically likha hai tumne very good 👍🏼

Future me Tara kabhi Dhruv ko reject karegi to yahi dialogues bolegi 😆

Waiting for next part 🤗

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Originally posted by: dhun.laagi

Very well written! 👏

You are an amazing writer ❤️

Love the way you maintained their characters, language and the story! 👍🏼

Look forward to the next part, please do update soon!! 😳

awwww thank you so much..your comments means a lot to me. I am just trying to maintain the logical and reasonable aspects of story...☺️☺️☺️😉☺️


  sure i will update soon...

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Originally posted by: dhun.laagi

Very well written! 👏

You are an amazing writer ❤️

Love the way you maintained their characters, language and the story! 👍🏼

Look forward to the next part, please do update soon!! 😳

by the way whats your name

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Originally posted by: shridharg

Lovely write up ... ❤️

Loved the convo between Bhaiji Tara and DT ... 

DT ke emotions bang on ... 

Well written keeping intact the main characters in frame ... 

Excited for the departure and the DT moments ... 


awww thank you so much for your comments..I just try my best to live up the expectations..i am happy you loved it.I will update soon.Also aapka naam kya hai..yaha sirf ek do persons ke naam jaanti hoon

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jaldi jaldi unres bhi kar dena