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Geet, how do you know about my friends?ā€™ Maan asked with one brow raised.

 

She rushed to him and said near in his ear little loudly because of the loud music, mammy& dadima.ā€

 

He wanted to ask more but she stopped him, ā€˜we will talk about this later, for now enjoy your day and let me also do the same, plz.ā€™ She made a puppy face.

 

He shook his head at her antics...alright...ā€ she was ready to run but he again stopped her, but no alcohol.ā€™

 

Jiju...ā€™she pouted.

 

No means no...

 

Plz..

 

Alright,you do as you wish, I am going.ā€™ He played his card knowing she will listen to him now.

 

And she screamed next moment as he expected, NO!!ā€ you are not going anywhere...I wonā€™t drink, okay!ā€ she made an most irritating face before rushing away with her friends.

 

Maan turned around with the sweet smile on his face only to get teasing stares from his friends.

 

What!??

 

Something cooking between you two!? They teased.

 

What??No...not at all why would you guys say so, she is too small for me

 

Yes and you are silver fox...they broke into laughter irritating him further.

 

Stop it guys!!ā€™ he shouted.

 

Alright maan, but we thought, you and her like Sali adhi gharwali...type..ā€™

 

Karan...donā€™ti donā€™t like the joke. He said sternly for he couldnā€™t bear ta;k something like this against geet.

 

Forget it maan, letā€™s celebrate your bachelor day today...after this you will forget whatis it look like...and laughter filled the place.

 

Maan and his gang were escorted to an elevated table in the corner then, overlooking the DJ booth and the dance floor. Geet had already done the whole arrangement with the help of ammy.

 

They watched as the sparkler adorned bottles make a path from the bar towards their table.

 

The bottle servers open and pour glasses of champagne for Maan and his gang.

 

Everyone holds up their glasses to cheers and maan hold up his champagne.

 

Karan lifts his other hand with the vodka soda in it and encourages him to double-cheers.

 

I need to be sober for whatever happens here. He denied for other drinks while he took only one glass of champagne...keeping geetā€™s thought in mind.

 

The music was pumping, full of disco remixes and new wave.


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He looked across the bar and spotted geet and her gang at the other VIP tables. She looked at him and then all others. They raised their glass to him. He could see orange juice like drink in her hand and smiled softly before raising his back and smiled.

 

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It doesn't matter how attractive or kind her jijaji is. The fact is he is going to bound to someone she canā€™t stand.This thought bothered her very much.

 

Cheers to MK...ā€ her gang shouted and she was soon distracted from her thoughts. She smiled and joined her buddies in the fun.

 

Kya yaar tumhara jija...he canā€™t let us have drink..aur khud dekho.ā€ Nisha whined.

 

Oh come on, nish...this party is for him, so we have to follow his words. So letā€™s forget it...and we donā€™t have only this party to enjoy... we will have many more as we grown up.ā€™ Geet tried to cheer her mood.

 

My baby is growing up so fast.ā€™ Nish teased only to get a small punch in return.

 

They continued to have their mocktails...when geet suddenly spoke, whatever yaar... I so was looking forward to taste the alcohol today. I want to know how it is...how someone forgets the world drowning in it.

 

Geet you are speaking this, when sometime before...

 

I know ...I know... jijaji, she made a face.


I am not going to have it before his eyes and upset him... I wanna have just one shot and taste it without him noticing. Geet explained.

 

But now his attention is only on you geet, I mean us. nisha spoke looking at the way maan was giving looks in between his conversation with his friends.

 

Yeah...he is keeping his eyes on us, I know. Geet shrugged her shoulder.


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Letā€™s go guys....our next destinationā€™ she announced suddenly getting up and everyone shook their head in approval.

 

 

Just then sam walked in with Rajeev, just keep in touch and stay nearby me okay. She ordered him and he nodded before both parted.


She spotted geet and her group on the dance floor and walked up to her.

 

Geet waves to get the DJ's attention. She makes a hand gesture and he nodded knowing what to do and starts playing...

 

Everybody get down

This party is going to town

Ram baba loola, bam bam boo

Thereā€™s only one thing to do

Baby baby letā€™s rock

I said all night long

Till twelve oā€™clock ā€¦ yeah!

 

Hey geetā€¦ sam walked up to her sis,taking her attention.

 

Thanks for the party! She shouted over the loud music, over enthusiastically.

 

This is not for you, but jijajiā€¦I have just invited you samā€¦she told her bitterly and move away but she stopped again before passing away from her, whatever, enjoy the party, sam! Enjoy your bacheloretteā€¦ā€™she smiled genuinely and joined her friends in the dance floor.

 

Urghā€¦ sam groaned in anger feeling humiliated with her rude wordsā€¦when I thought she canā€™t be irritating more, she proves me wrong.Whateverā€¦ I am gonna enjoy this night just before your eyes sisā€¦ you just watch it! She mumbled angrily and joined everyone on the dance floor.

 

Gori gori, gori gori, gori gori

Kabhi kabhi, kahin kahin, chori chori

Gori gori, gori gori, gori gori

Kabhi kabhi, kahin kahin, chori chori

 

 

Ammy got hold of geet and did the couple steps with her. Nisha and other s also joined the gang.

 

Maan watched at the dance floor and shook his head seeing their childishness.

But soon he was also pulled by his friends gang on the floor, where he met sam and he introduced his friends to her on the dance floor itself.

 

 

Chup chupke tum mila karo

Pyari pyari baatein vaatein kiya karo

Par yoon na milna kisi se kabhi

Hamare sivah

 

Geet looked at the confrontation between both and smiled sadly. She just closed her eyes and moves her body to the music like she didn't have a single care in the world.

 

For one night only she gonna forget all those worries. She was gonna push her sadness away and live like it's her last night on earth. She came out here tonight to dance away her troubles

 

 

Gore gore, gore gore, gore gore

Bhole bhole, naye naye, kore kore

Dekho dekho hum dono meet hai

Suno suno dil ke joh geet hai

Par sunne paaye inhe na koi

Hamare sivah

 

 

Soon she was fully immersed in the music and her friendsā€¦ few boys tried to hit on her but ammy and friends were there to handle them.

 

Soon she felt him staring at her from the edge of the dance floor. His eyes were on her and her alone. She didn't look away from him as she continue to move her body.

 

Joh tum ho aa gaye

Toh sapne chha gaye

Joh tum ho meharban

Toh rut hai jawaan

 

 

Suddenly partners were exchanged and maan walked up to geet taking the opportunity. He grabbed her hand, pulling her in his arms, making the distance between other groups.

 

 

Joh hum hai mil gaye

Toh gul hai khil gaye

Joh hum tum hai yahan

Toh mehka samaan

 

 

That tall, dark and handsome god like structure of hisā€¦making her dizzy with desiresā€¦ desires for himā€¦ no words were spoke as they danced but have a thousand thoughts running through their mind.

 

Now tell me, how do you bring my friends here? He asked twirling her around. The moment seems to create magic around them. They wanted to lose themselves in the moment forgetting the reality.

 

Thatā€™s as simple as it is jiju. She cupped his nape tucking her body closer to him. I called each one of them,telling them about your engagement which you missed to tellā€¦ She tweaked his nose playfully making him smile.


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How did you get this idea? He frowned.

 

Are you not happy with this..?

 

Offcourse I amā€¦ infact I am so thankful to you for this pleasant surprise, I am very much happy to get my friends back.We so much catch up and still more has to doā€¦ā€ he spoke in one breath surprising her.

 

You talk this much, I never know.ā€™  She teased.

 

You donā€™t know much about me, try me.ā€™He gave teasing wink.

 

Always ready, jijaji. She playfully replied giving him same wink to which both broke into giggle.

 

I just wanted to see this smile and real happiness in your face. She admitted cupping his cheek.

 

You always said me, you have no friendsā€¦they what are they; you were actually lying to me. She complained cutely.

 

He was lost in her selflessness and special care for him. She can read him like a book and can see from his face what he is feeling.

 

He was about to say something when all of sudden an alarm goes off like the one on submarine. The music was lowered and all lights go off on the dance floor except for one slow blinking neon sign that says splash zone.ā€™

 

Whatā€™s happening? Maan looked around dazed.

 

You will see...Geet smirked.

 

He puts his arm around her back and pulls her closer after hearing her...

 


Lights goes around the perimeter of the club and Water starts pouring from the ceiling and the crowd hooted around as the lights came on with the flashing....

 

All cheered and screamed in joy... taking showers and dancing on the platforms.

 

Maan instantly pulled Geet away getting partially wet.

 

Jiju...let go up there and get wet...ā€™ she shouted over the loud music.

But our cloths are getting wet...ā€™

 

What if you take them off first...ā€™ she teased with wink while her eyes sparkled with anticipation.

 

Maan gave her stern look making her pout in response for getting this look. You stay here alone, I am going to enjoy fully...she glared at him cutely and took her shoes off before joining her friends on the dance floor.

 

Bheegi bheegi, bheeni bheeni hai hawa

Khoyi khoyi, soyi soyi hai fiza

Dhire dhire hum mein yeh kya ho gaya

Haule haule hosh hi kho gaya

Ab na rahe tumhe yaad koi bhi

Hamare sivah

 

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She began dancing like crazy with friends...soon her cloths became transparent...she looked mermaid came out of the ocean...her body looked more attractive with sticking wet cloths.

 

She has been dancing for a while maan has not stopped watching her once.


Maan couldnā€™t remove his gaze from her. He was transfixed by staring at her. He snaps out of it when he noticed other guys lustful gazes on her.

 

He saw two guys approaching her and now had circled her. Geet realized it and suddenly her gaze went on maan, she smirked inwardly seeing him getting angry.



 

Joh hai yeh dooriyan

Toh hai betaabiyan

Joh paas aao yahan

Toh hazir hai jaan

 

 

She  can see he is getting mad so she pulled ammy by her side and raised her arms, lifting it around his neck pulling him closer to her. She looked back at maan, only to see him walking towards her.


He walks over to them and shoves ammy away. He glares at him in a way that she havent seen before.


Oh shit I am so sorry. Ammy muttered, giving puppy look he rushed away to the other girl.


Geet turned her back to him just tease him further and looked over her shoulder as she felt him press his body against her.

 

Joh tum betaab ho

Toh ab tum yeh suno

Joh tum is dil mein ho

Toh doori kahan

 

 

 

Are you not getting wet now? She asked teasingly, he pulled her around briskly ignoring her comment as he caught her in his arms and bend her over. His moments were highly passionate filed with silent anger and jealousy.

 

In one jerk, he pulled her up, both breathing heavily with the aggressive dance moves they sharedā€¦the passion and desire burning inside.


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Zara zara, jhuki jhuki si nazar

Abhi abhi, thodi thodi thi idhar

Meethi meethi baatein kaho toh kaho

Pare pare lekin abhi tum raho

Kuch din kaato aur zindagi

Hamare sivah

 




She  look into his eyes for a while as he held her. She ran her fingers through his black hair. His piercing brown eyes lock into her and felt the pull that he had felt at their first encounter.

 

Gori gori, gori gori, gori gori

Kabhi kabhi, kahin kahin, chori chori

Chup chupke tum mila karo

Pyari pyari baatein vaatein kiya karo

Par yoon na milna kisi se kabhi

Hamare sivah

 

 

 

To be continued...

 

 

Precap ā€“ Kiss or miss..?

 

What do you guys want...let me know, plz...

 

Plz leave your reviews on this chappy, readers...if I get the comments fast then definitely will come up with remaining party chapter fast. There has more to come...party abhi baki hai....

 

Ps- long update...so expecting long comments plz...



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