MG SS:Our Journey From Marriage To Divorce-Updated Part8-24Mar.pg15 - Page 11

Hope to read the next part, thanks

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hope to read the next part, thanks

Hi dear.. 

Half of the update is ready, planning to complete typing it by tomorrow night. 

Hopefully I will update tomorrow night or on Friday morning. 

Will be waiting for the next update

Part 5:

A pearl white BMW came to halt infront of the building and a group of people were standing on the front broad stairs of it's entrance. 

After the car stopped, Maan came out from the front passenger seat and Geet from the back passenger seat. 

 A bald man moves towards them with a bouquet and few of them there follows his trail. 

"Welcome, welcome. Happy married life." he forwards the bouquet towards Maan, who accepts it smiling warmly. A woman forwards another bouquet to Geet 

"Happy married life"

Geet takes it giving a forced smile. 

"Thank you"

"Aap nahi aye *to the man* aap be nahi aye* to the woman *aur tum be nahi aye, Ravi* to another man in the group* haa, tumhe badh mai dekh lunga." 

Maan fakes hurt for them not attending his wedding. 

"Arre, shaadi ke liye nahi aapaya to kya hua, dekhye hum sab aap ke liye kya kiya hai." he points towards the people who were still standing on the stairs. 

The people in the front row move aside and a  tall man standing among them raises up a big beautifully decorated board where words were inscribed in big red coloured fonts which read 

*HAPPY MARRIED LIFE, WELCOME HOME * on a white background. 

"Thank you so much" Maan thanked them for their efforts with a smile while Geet was just starring. 

The bald man turns towards Geet, 

"Welcome Mrs.Maan." to which Geet just nods her head with a small smile, but inside she was burning for being addressed as Mrs.Maan.

"Hum hai aap ke aas-paas(neighbours)".

"Aas to aap sab hai, lekin paas kaha hai, kahi nazar nahi aarahi hai." Maan asked looking around 

"Paas to upar sab kuch ready kar rahi hai. Chaliye."

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Maaneet enter into Maan's apartment, Maan instructs the worker carrying their luggage to leave it beside the main door and sends them off with a polite thank you. 

He turns around to see Geet looking intendly at something, he comes closer to her and follows her gaze to find it on the music system there. 

The music player was on but their was no sound from it. 

They look at each other confused when the song began 

Mehndi laga rakhna

Doli saja ke rakhna

Mehndi laga rakhna

Doli saja ke rakhna

Lene tujhe o gori

Aayenge tere sajna

Geet rolled her eyes, while Maan turned away sighing. 

Had they been normal newly wed couples, all these arrangements would have been special. Alas! They were not. 

Next they heard someone singing along and voice was coming from one of the room's. 

Maan went in the direction and Geet followed him. There an old couple was decorating the room, well they were decorating less and romancing more. 

"Hello, Uncle. Namaste aunty." Maan greeted them with a warm smile which was reciprocated. 

"Welcome, welcome Mr and Mrs Maan."the old man welcomed them to their own place. 

Geet had enough of being addressed as Mrs.Maan from the time she came

" Sirf Geet be chalega." 

"Oh..ho, kya Maan? shaadhi hone ke badh aapne naam be badal liya?" the old man asked shocked 

"Nahi nahi nahi. Unki naam Geet hai, mai Maan he hu." Maan funnily confirmed that his name was still Maan.

"OK, ok. Don't waste your time I say, enjoy yourself. * he moves a little closer to Maan* these ladies I say, though they fight the whole day...at last they melt down only in the bedroom."

He cracks one of his silly jokes, his wife and Maan laugh slightly but Geet turns around and leaves the room. 

Maan understood what it was, while the old lady was worried seeing Geet go away like that before she could react, she heard her husband say 

"Oh, tumhara patni be meri patni ke tara strong lagta hai." he indirectly told Geet to be the dominating one in their relationship. 

"Kya kaha aapne?" his wife glared at him and left calling for Geet not before giving a look that meant 'zara ghar chalo tumhe mai waha dekh lunga.'

"Aapko kaise pata chala? " asked Maan out of curiosity for Geet being the dominant one. 

"Jab wo aapne naam se unko bolane keliye kaha tab he mai samaj gaya. *he doesn't stop there, and goes on giving free advice to Maan.*Bas aaj raat ko khedda(ditch) mai girana hai, to kal utne tak wo humari control mai honge. Aur hum usko chodna nahi chaye, saamji?"

By the time he finishes this he hears his wife calling from him 

"JI"

"AYEE... Hmm...I will send my wife in the morning, so that she can help you if you have any issues."

"Hmm."

"Mai aab chalta hu. Bye"

"Ufff" after the old man left, Maan leaves a sigh of relief. 

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Outside, Geet was looking around the apartment. She came across the open kitchen with attached dining room, which was connected to the spacious living hall. 

There she saw one side of the wall contained  a very big poster of Maan, the whole space was taken by it. In the picture Maan had a headphone on with a mic infront of him he wore a blue T-shirt and in the pic he seemed to be speaking something. 

Geet was curiosily looking at it, when Maan came searching for her. Seeing her looking at something he went stood a feet behind and found her looking at his pic. Geet stood watching the poster and Maan stood watching her. 

After few seconds Geet turned back to move but was startled seeing Maan just behind her. Composing herself, she asked the stupidest question 

"Aap yahi rahete hain?"

For that came Maan's taunt "A.. Aha. Yehi paas mai ek slum hai, pehle waha ti. Aab naye naye shadhi hogai haina, isliye iss flat ko gift mai de diye hai.."

Geet looked at him confused when he denied the place they were standing was where he lived, but she rolled her eyes as he completed his sentence. 

"Hmm..dekho mai zara fresh hokar aatahu * points towards the kitchen* wo rasoee hai, aur sabee saman hai waha par. Kuchh khaana pakao."

The audacity of this man, first he taunts her for the simple question she asked and now he wants her to cook for him. Geet says smiling sarcastically 

"Ha..Don't dream that I will cook and you will eat what ever you want lazing around. Mujhe khaana banaana nahin aata."

The immediate response she got was 

"Khaane ko?" 

"Ha? "

Maan repeated again. 

That was again a taunt which meant that do you know how to eat..

Geet fell silent while he continued 

"Mujhe be, khaana pakana nahi aata. Maggie  ek banata hu, khaoge?*he turns around and walks to the kitchen * Usme poochne keliye kya hai, khaane he padega. Sab meri karm hai."

Maan switches on the gas, placing a water filled utensil. He puts the content into it after cutting open the packet. 

After 5minutes, Maan lifts the noodles with the spoon which he used for stirring it 

"Wah.. Maan..wah. Shaadi ke pehle be yehe, shaadi ke badh be yehe. Chaye tha kya tumko ye sab?" 

He serves the Maggie into a serving bowl and turns around to take it to the dining table after tucking in two forks into the noodles. 

"I have done what I could do, aab khaana hai to khalo..aaa"

Maan looks up from the Maggie and the view he saw left his mouth hanging. 

He saw his wife, sitting on the dining chair and having her dinner. He moves towards her shocked and surprised with the amount and variety of dishes he saw in the steel tiffen carrier.

"Arre..re..re..ree. These many items!! Pakana to chod agar tum bheek be maagoge, itne sare food items itne jaldhi nahi milegi."

"Next door aunty gave it." Geet simply answered thinking why did this person had to over exaggerate everything. 

"Hmm...aur tum akele khaa raheho? At least couldn't you have called me out of courtesy?"

"Mai aapko kyu bulaoon? You cook and eat what ever you want and I will eat what ever I like."

Maan angrily pulls the napkin that was on his shoulder which he had used for cooking and slams it on the chair. 

"Hmm..Very good."

He takes out the plate and serves the food from the tiffen boxes along with the Maggie he had prepared. He pulls out a chair and starts having his dinner. 

After half an hour, Maan finally completed his dinner, Geet had finished her's long back. 

"Annadātō sukhī bhava (let the provider of the food be happy, contented and peaceful)"

While collecting the plates, carrier 

"Kam se kam bartan dhone mein to mere madat karonge?"

Hearing no reply he looks around to find her asleep on the sofa. 

Maan gets up shaking his head and sighing in disbelief. 

"I am the only fortunate one...today I am the virtuous one....lala...laalla...lala...laalla" Maan sarcastically sings while washing the utensils. 

There was a glass window right infront of him which would open into the corridor and right opposite to the window was a door to another flat. There was a small board beside the door which read 

'P. MOHAN

RETD PROF'

While Maan was busy, the old man, his neighbor who was about to enter into his flat sees Maan. 

"Arre Maan!! *Maan looks up* Tumhare liye kitne kuch arrangements kiya. Khaana bhee bheja tha.. taaki tumhare time barbaad naho. lekin tumhe dekho.. har jagah light on kar ke  kya kar rahe ho?"

While Maan smartly answers him 

"Uncle, aankhen kyon hain?"

"Sundar cheeze dekhane keliye."

"Phir..light off karoge to kya dikhai degi" Maan answers winking at him. 

Mohan (old man) was like these many years got wasted, then he screams 

"Oh..Sharada (his wife) sare light on karo."

Maan was taken aback, Mohan goes into his flat. 

While Maan shakes his head in disbelief, he had a herd of crazy people around him and his cute, old, romantic neighbors were the craziest. He admired their bonding, the love they had for each even after these many years of their married life. Every time he saw them he was reminded of his parents. These couple had helped him with his breakfast, lunch and dinner from the time he started staying there. Though he had denied in the start, they had forced him to accept.

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Precap: Maan barges into Geet's room looking at something in his hand, and Geet was standing in front of the mirror busy tucking in her sari pleats and her pallu was on the ground.

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Part 6

Updated Part 5 👆 

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Nice update 

Poor maan first night was like that, hope geet try to be good wife to maan 

Update soon next part

5

geet still behaving rudely with maan even though he promise to divorce geet 

Great update fabulous😋✨

Thanks for the update

Part 5

Wonderful update….excellently written 

so Maan and Geet arrived at his flat

he has amazing and friendly neighbours 

at least Maan appreciated his neighbour's efforts

of cos Geet is annoyed when they call her Mrs Maan

uncle was funny

well Maan taunted Geet

gosh Maan cooked

alas the aunty sent food

hate Geet's attitude and behavior

Maan is the same boat as her

alas he is not being rude

poor Maan has to wash dishes

nice precap

update soon

Part 5

Fabulous Update 

Maan has been welcomed in such a beautiful manner 

by all his Neighbours while Geet feels bored and disinterested 

if Geet truly does not want Maan then she should leave 

but she is staying on until her lover returns while at the moment she

is so rude to Maan

I'm hoping soon she can at least change her attitude towards Maan 

at least she should have some respect in her 

oh and I just admire the elderly couple