Unravelled mind Rishab Maya thriller SS

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Unravelled mind Part 1

 I dedicate this SS to Mahiiimaa who wants a Rishab Luthra Maya Jaisingh SS with a revengeful Maya.

Many girls had come for the interview of the post of Mrutyunjay Roy's private assistant.

A girl knocked at the door of his cabin.

MJ:Yes..come in.

She got inside.

She:Good morning Sir!I am Maya Jaisingh.

Mrityunjay looked at her.He was shocked to see her.

He extended his hand towards her:Welcome Miss.Maya.

She also extended her hand towards him.

They had a handshake.

Mrityunjay remembered shaking hands with a woman in another situation while shaking hands with Maya.That woman looked entirely same as Maya.

Mrtyunjay thought:This girl....how is it possible?

MJ:Please Sit Maya.

Maya sat there.

MJ:Can I see your biodata?

Maya:Sure Sir.

She gave him her biodata.

Mrityunjay:Maya Jaisingh;the daughter of Shekar Jaisingh and Anshima..

Maya:Yes Sir.

He looked at her certificates for namesake.

Mrityunjay:You are appointed Maya.

Maya was surprised.

Maya:But you did not take my interview.

Mrityunjay:But I saw your certificates.You are well qualified with good scores too.I need only this much.

Maya smiled.

Maya:Thank you so much Sir.

MJ:You can join tomorrow.

Maya:Sure Sir.Thank you again.

When Maya went out of the cabin,his eyes were fixed on her.

While going out,Maya bumped into someone and her files fell down.

That man:I am sorry.

Maya:It's ok.

Both bent down to take the files from the floor.He helped her to pick up the files from the floor.

Maya:Thank you.

He:You...?

Maya:I am appointed as MJ sir's new PA.

He:O that's nice.I will be your colleague.

Maya:You...

Another man came near them.

He:He is Rishab Luthra.

Maya:Are you the business magnet Mahesh Luthra's son?

Rishab:Yes.

Maya was surprised.

The other man:Though he has a big family business,he wanted to be independant.So he is working here.Within a limited time through hard work,he became MJ Sir's favourite employee.

Maya smiled.

The other man:Well...I am Kabir;Rishab's best friend.

Maya:Hi Kabir..

Rishab:He is not only my best friend,but also my sister Ruchika's fiance.

Maya was surprised.





A girl was waiting in a place.Kabir came from behind and embraced her.

She blushed:Kabir!

Kabir:How did you recognize me Ruchika?

Ruchika:Other than you,who will dare to hug Ruchika Luthra?

Kabir and Ruchika smiled.

Ruchika:These days you have no time for me.I doubted whether you will come today to meet me.

Kabir:I am sorry Ruchika.You know the hectic work schedule I have.Luckily today I got time.

Ruchika:I know that Kabir.But I really miss you.

Kabir:I also miss you Ruchika.

He caressed her face.

Kabir:Anyways we got time to spend with each other.We should be happy with the limited time we get to spend with each other.We should utilize the time we got.

Ruchika:Yes.You are right.

They smiled.





The next day...

Maya was doing her work.Mrityunjay stood behind her and observed her movements.

Maya felt him standing close to her and became conscious.

Maya:What happened Sir?Am I not doing my work properly?

MJ:Nothing like that.I was just observing your work.You are doing good.My decision to appoint you did not go wrong.

Maya smiled:Thank you Sir.

He smiled.

MJ:If you have any doubt you can ask me or Rishab.He is excellent in it.

Maya just smiled.






The next day...

Maya was finding it hard to do some work.

Suddenly she remembered Mrityunjay telling her to ask his or Rishab's help if she need any help.

Maya:I can't ask MJ Sir.I get tensed thinking of that.I will ask Rishab.

Rishab came near her.

Rishab:Hi Maya...how do you do?

Maya thought:What a coincidence that Rishab came to me when I wanted to ask him for help!

Maya:How do you do?Well...Rishab,can you please show me how to do this?

Rishab:Sure.I can solve any problem of yours.

Maya gave him a sarcastic look.

Maya:O really?This much pride and arrogance?

Rishab was embarrassed.

Rishab:It's not my arrogance,but my pleasure to help my friend.

Maya:But when did I become your friend?

Rishab:The moment I met you,I had friendly vibes towards you.

Maya smiled.

Rishab:Anyways i will show you how to ease your work.

Rishab stood close to her and took the mouse to browse the net on the laptop.

He explained everything to Maya and she got relieved.

Maya:Thank you Rishab.Now I will try to do it myself.

Suddenly Maya kept her hand on the mouse without remembering that Rishab was holding the mouse.

As Maya's palm fell on his palm he looked at Maya.Maya also looked at him.

They shared an eye lock.

Maya took her palm off his.

Maya:I am sorry.

Rishab:No.I am sorry.

He took the palm off the mouse.

Rishab:Now you can do it.

Maya smiled.

Maya started doing it and it was becoming successful.She smiled happily.Rishab also smiled.

Maya:Thanks again Rishab.

Rishab:No need of thanking me.But tell me whether I have become your friend.

Maya:I have to think.

Rishab:What?You need more time to decide whether I should be your friend?

Maya:Yes.Because Maya Jaisingh does'nt make anyone her friend so fast.

Rishab:Ok..as you wish.But I will wait for your friendship.

She smiled.

Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Loved it dear  ... 

Awesome and interesting start

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

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I loved it. Please continue. 👏

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Congrats on the SS!


Part 1

Amazing update.... well written 

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Interesting start

curious for next part

Thanks for writing 

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Part 1 


Fabulous Start

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Thanks a lot ws_loki,Bacillusbadius,Taahir,Khwaishfan,Glitter_Goldie





Unravelled mind Part 2

 Thank you very much sxursaep for the lovely cover page.

Rishab was standing near his car with a dull face.Kabir was also there.Maya went near him.

Maya:What happened Rishab?

Rishab:My car is not starting.I need to call a mechanic.But I need to go home as it's my mom's birthday.

Maya:Don't worry.I will drop you home.

Rishab:Thanks.

Rishab and Kabir got inside the car.Maya started driving the car.

Maya:Do you both go back from the office together?

Kabir:Yes.Actually it's Rishab who drops me home as I don't have my own vehicle.But I am saving money.Hopefully I will be able to buy my own car before I get married to Ruchika.

Maya smiled.

Maya dropped them to the Luthra house.

Rishab:Thank you Maya.

Maya:No mention.

Rishab:But you need to come to my house.You meet my family.

Maya:Ok.

Maya went inside with Rishab and Kabir.

Rishab's parents Mahesh and Rakhi,sister Ruchika,brother Karan and his wife Preeta came.

Seeing Rakhi and Mahesh,Maya touched their feet.

Mahesh:God bless you beta.

Maya smiled and said:Happy birthday aunty.

Rakhi and Mahesh were confused.

Rakhi:Thank you.But you...

Rishab:She is my colleague Maya.

They all smiled.

Rakhi:You are very nice beta.Seeing us,how you touched our feet was a nice feeling.These days only a few youngsters do that.

Maya and Rishab smiled.

Ruchika:Hi..I am Ruchika.

Maya:Hi..I know you.Kabir had told me about you.

Ruchika blushed.

Maya saw Karan and got excited.

Maya:Cricket star Karan Luthra.

Karan smiled.

Karan:You know me?

Maya:Who does'nt know you?You are a star.I am a big fan of yours.

Karan:Now even I have also become your fan.

Maya smiled.

Maya:But why are you my fan?I am not a celebrity.

Karan:The Karan Luthra is a fan of all his fans,especially beautiful girls.

Everyone except Preeta laughed.

Preeta frowned looking at Karan.

Preeta:You can never stop flirting.Right Mr.The Karan Luthra?

Karan giggled.

Karan:Are you jealous baby doll?

Preeta:Jealous?No way.

Karan:You are jealous.When you are jealous,you look very cute.That's why purposefully I praised Maya to make you jealous.

Preeta smiled.

Maya:Nice to meet you all.I am leaving.

Rakhi:How can you leave like that?Today is my birthday.You have to attend my birthday party.

Mahesh:Yes.You just can't go without attending the party.

Maya:But I am in my casuals.

Rakhi:That's ok.I will give you a saree to wear.

Ruchika:I will give you my dress.Mom...saree is so old fashioned.

Maya:No problem Ruchika.I like sarees.Only on special occasions we get a chance to wear saree.Right?

Rakhi:See Ruchika..not all are allergic to sarees like you.

Ruchika just smiled.





Maya wore the traditional saree which Rakhi gave her.

Rakhi:Aree Wah Maya!You look so pretty like Hema Malini.

Maya smiled:Thank you aunty.

Rishab was mesmerized by her beauty.Seeing him stare at her,she blushed.

Since Rishab was not taking his eyes off her,Maya called him:Rishab!

Rishab came back to senses.

Maya:What?

Rishab:Nothing.Actually you look very beautiful in saree.

Maya blushed.

They celebrated Rakhi's birthday by singing the happy birthday song.

Kabir-Ruchika,Mahesh-Rakhi and Karan-Preeta danced.

Rehna tu pal pal dil ke paas
Judi rahe tujhse har ik saans…
Khud pe pehle na itna yaqeen mujhko ho paya
Mushqil si ghadiyan asaan huyi ab jo tu aaya

Ik baat kahun tujhse
Tu paas hai jo mere


Seene se tere sar ko laga ke
Sunti main rahun naam apna
Seene se tere sar ko laga ke
Sunti main rahun naam apna

Oh likh di tere naa’ jindadi zaaniye
Bas rehna tere naal ve zuriye
Rehna tu pal pal dil ke paas
Judi rahe tujhse har ik saans

Seene se tere sar ko laga ke
Sunta main rahun naam apna
Ho naam apna

Naal tere ik ghar main sochaan
Baari kholaan te chann dikh jaave
Akkhaan’ch beetan raatan saariyan
Je mann laage te akh na laage



Pyaar hi odhein te pyaar hi khaana
Vich koi aave te pyaar hi aana
Duniya de vich assi duniya ton door
Hunn naal tere mera har sapna

Seene se tere sar ko lagaa ke
Sunta main rahun naam apna o…

Teri ungliyon se aasmaan pe kheechun ek lambi laqeer
Aadha tera aadha mera iss jahaan mein hum do ameer

Koi nazar na aaye mainu
Tu duniya ton wakhri ho gayi
Uthaan tainu takkda jaawan
Tu hi meri naukri ho gayi (x2)

Dooriyan ek pal bhi na gawaara ho
Chal ghoome duniya phir sang awaara ho

Seene se tere sar ko laga ke
Sunti main rahun naam apna
Seene se tere sar ko laga ke
Sunti main rahun naam apna

Rehna tu pal pal dil ke paas
Judi rahe tujhse har ek saans

(Pal pal dil ke paas).

Kabir and Ruchika looked at Rishab standing alone with Maya.

Ruchika:I feel bad to see Rishab bhai alone.He is single and alone.

Kabir:He will find someone Ruchika.

Ruchika:He has a good rapport with Maya.Is there anything brewing between them?

Kabir:What are you saying Ruchika?Maya is new to our office and they are just friends.

Ruchika:Oh ok.




After 2 months...

Mrityunjay,Maya,Rishab,Kabir and others attended a press meeting regarding the new big project their company gained.

Maya and Mrityunjay were standing next to each other and talking to the press media.

They were chatting and laughing too.

Rishab's face became dull seeing their closeness.

Mritunjay announced:We have grabbed a big project.In order to celebrate this happiness I am throwing a party to all of you.

All were excited.




Party....

All were dancing and enjoying the party.

Mrityunjay went near Maya.

MJ:May I dance with you?

Maya smiled in a shivering way.

Maya:Ok.

He held her hand and started dancing with her without taking his eyes off her.

Maya was feeling very uncomfortable.

Rishab who watched this closed his fist in anger.

He thought:Why I can't tolerate Maya dancing with MJ Sir?

Maya was at home...

Maya remembered Mrityunjay dancing with her romantically.She got irritated.Her irritation turned into anger.She took a knife and said angrily:How dare you?I will kill you MJ.

Suddenly a man came there.

He:Maya!What are you doing?Control your anger.If you just kill him like that,you will be in the prison.

Defeat him with intelligence by tearing his mask.

Maya:But MJ has to die.

He:He should die in such a way that nobody can figure out that you are behind it.

Maya smirked.

Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

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Nice part

loved Luthra family's bonding with Maya

PreeRan🤣

Rishabh & Maya❤️

MJ😡

Thanks for writing & sending PM👍🏼