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Amazing and beautiful part
Just loved it
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 🤗💞😍
Amazing and beautiful part
Just loved it
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 🤗💞😍
Omg poor Pratha I feel sorry for her, Rishab is playing a game with her that’s not good. It will be very sad when she finds out. I can’t wait for the next update.
Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Love over lies Part1
I dedicate this to rbb1 who wants a PraRish story.This concept belongs to my dearest friend Naina_Writes and using my imagination I shaped it into a story.The title credit also goes to Naina.Please don't expect logic at all.Consider it a pure fantasy thriller.It has many twists.Don't get angry seeing Thapki with Rishab.She will be out soon.
A man was at an exhibition.
He was looking at the paintings of female serpents.A girl passed by.She collided with him and when she slipped he held her.She was lost in him.
He took his hands off her.
He:I am sorry.
Girl:I... a...am so....rry.Be...be....cause I should have.... walk......walk..ed ca...care....fu....fu...lly....And than...k you fo...for ho....lding me.Otherwise I would have fallen down.....
He felt weird.
He:You ...
Girl:I ha....ha...ve...sta....mmer..ing pro...prob...lem....
He felt sad for her.
He:It's ok.It's not a big defect.You are able to convey and that's more important.
She smiled.
She:Otherrrrr...tha...than my sis...ter...it's you only you who...di..did not tea....tease...me..
He smiled.
He:What's your name?
She:Tha..Tha..pki....
He was shocked:What?
Thapki:Sin...ce...I stammer,my o..own da...dad named me Thap....Thapki...
He felt sad.
He:Your own father insulted you.Sad.Where is he now?
Thapki:He is no..no..mo...re.
He was shocked.
Thapki:You...rrr...name?
He:Rishab.
She smiled.
Rishab:I came here for the exhibition as I am doing research on serpents...naagins.This exhibition is very useful.
She was surprised.
Thapki:Me...to..too...
Rishab was surprised:Wow!So we both are on the same line.Nice to meet you.
He extended his hand.She held his hand happily and they had a hand shake.
Rishab was driving his car in the evening.He saw a girl walking on the street alone.Some boys walked around lustfully.
He was shocked.
Rishab:Pratha!
Rishab stopped the car and went near them.
Rishab:What are you guys going here?
Pratha:Rishab Sir...these boys are troubling me.
Rishab stared at them angrily.
Rishab:Are you guys not ashamed to trouble a girl like this?
One of them:Why do you care?Who is she to you?
He was silent for a moment.
Then he said:She is my fiancee.
Pratha stared at him in disbelief.
Rishab:Don't dare to trouble my fiancee.Otherwise I will not spare any of you.
They just walked away.
Pratha:Sir...why did you lie that I am your fiancee?I am only your dadi's home nurse.
Rishab:I am sorry for lying.But if I say that you are only my dadi's home nurse they will question me why i care for a home nurse.That's why I lied.
She was silent.
Rishab:Sit in my jeep.I will drop you.
Pratha:No thanks Sir.I will go by myself.
Rishab:If you go alone,again those guys may trouble you.So i will drop you.
Pratha:Ok.
She got inside his jeep.
After some time,she said:Sir..please stop here.My house is near by.
Rishab:Ok.
He stopped the jeep.She got out of the jeep.
Pratha:Thank you Sir.
Rishab:Bye!
Pratha:Bye!
At night while lying on the bed, Pratha remembered Rishab calling her his fiancee and blushed.
She thought:He did not mean those words.Still why I feel so happy when he called me as his fiancee?
The next day Pratha went to Rishab's house.
Pratha gave medicine to his dadi.
Pratha:What is this dadi?Why did'nt you have medicine?
Rishab's mother Seema:Pratha,she takes medicine only if you give her.She does'nt listen to us.
Pratha:Dadi,I won't be here always.So you should have medicine when others give you.Right?
Dadi:No,I will not.You be here always.
Pratha:How can I be here always?
Seema:There is an idea.
Seema held her closer and said:You marry Rishab and stay here as our daughter in law.
Pratha smiled unknowingly.
Pratha:I will arrange food for dadi.
Pratha walked out blushing.While walking she collided with Rishab and lost her balance.Rishab held her by her waist before she could touch the floor.
They got lost in each other's eyes.
Is lamhe ko rok doon
Ya main khud ko is mein jhonk doon
Kya karun.. kya karun.. kya karun..
Is lamhe main kuchh bhi jaanu na..
[Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage]Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Ban gaye silsile...Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Ban gaye silsile
Tose naina jab se mile(Mickey Virus).
Pratha moved away from him shyly.
They both smiled at each other.She walked away.
Rishab was relaxing near a swimming pool while many people were there swimming and relaxing.He was surprised to see Thapki there.She was walking like a lost soul.She slipped and fell into the pool.The shocked Rishab jumped into the pool and held Thapki.Thapki was surprised to see him.
Thapki:Ri...Ri..shab!Why a...are you here?
Rishab:You fell into the pool.How can I simply watch it?I got scared.
He cupped her face in his hands and asked:Are you alright?
Thapki looked at him emotionally.
Thapki asked him in her mind:You care fo...for me thi...thi..this much?
Thapki:I..I...am al..al...right.I know swi..swi..mming.So you did'nt have to jum..jump in..into the poo...pool.
Rishab:Oh,I thought you did'nt know swimming.By the way why are you here?
Thapki:I came to thi...thi..this hotel for a jo...jo..job interview.But I was rejected be...be..because of stammering.So I am up...up..set.
Rishab:Don't worry.They don't deserve you.One day you will get what you deserve.
She smiled.
Rishab:Come with me to the hotel room and change your wet clothes before going home.Otherwise you will catch fever.
Thapki was silent.
Rishab:Don't worry.You can trust me.
Thapki smiled:I trust you.
He smiled.
Rishab took Thapki to the hotel room.
He gave her his shirt and pant to wear.He also changed his wet clothes.
Rishab:Are you comfortable?
Thapki:Yes.Thanks fo...for this.I was fee...fee...ling cold in wet clothes.
Rishab:By the way in my clothes you look cute.
They both giggled.
Rishab:By the way how is your research on Naagins going on?
Thapki:It's not for P.HD.It's my per..personal re...re...search for fun.What about you?
Rishab:It's going fine.I need to collect more information on Naagin.
She just smiled.
Thapki thought:For the first time a ma...man showed care to me.No wonder that I am fall....fall...ing for him.How can I not love the only person who cares for me?
Rishab looked at Thapki's certificates lying she kept under the fan to be dry.
Rishab:Thapki,you are qualified.Why don't you join my office?I mean...would you like to me by PA?
Thapki was excited:Sure.
He smiled.
Thapki thought:How can I lose the opportunity to be with Rishab?
Thapki ran towards her sister.
Thapki:Di...I am in love.
Her sister looked at her happily.She was none other than Pratha.
Pratha:Really?I am also in love.
Thapki was surprised:You too?
Pratha:I love the son of the house where I work.And you?
Thapki told her everything.
Pratha:I am glad that finally you got true love in your life.
Thapki smiled.
Suddenly Pratha became dull.
Pratha:But will our lovers accept us if they know our truth?
Thapki became dull.
Thapki:Truth?
Pratha:The truth that we are actually Naagins.
Both Pratha and Thapki turned into naagins.
Thapki:My ma..man is doing research on naa...naa..naagins.So he won't have problem.Guess he likes Naa...gins.
Pratha:Human beings may like naagins.But no human being will like to marry a Naagin.
Thapki became upset.
Pratha:The family where I work is very nice.They have no problem with middle class girls.Infact they indirectly hinted that they want me as their daughter in law.But if they come to know that I am a Naagin,forget about making their daughter in law.They will kick me out.
Thapki:But I can't lose the only per..person who cares for me di.So I will hide my iden..identity from him.You also do that di.Don't lose your love.
Pratha:Yes.But how long can we hide our identity?One day,the truth will come out.Right?
Thapki:But till then I want to be wi...wi..with the per...pers..person I love.
They both hugged each other and cried.
Thapki:What's our fault if we are born as shape shifting serpents?
Pratha:We never wanted to be naagins.But we are born ichadari naagins.We are helpless.It's our fate.
They both wept.
Would have loved to see Rishabh in the Hunter avatar in the serial.Anyway its an awesome story.Please do continue and conclude the same.
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I was going to rant about him doing that stupid stunt for making Pratha confess her love but it turn out he is faking and he is hunter?? Does he knows about thapki too? That's why he is helping her??
Thank u very much all of u for the detailed comments
The credit for the Tejasswi’s collages goes to Shazi.
Rishab met someone.
Rishab:I proposed to Pratha and she accepted my marriage proposal.First she rejected me.But I did a risky drama to make her accept me.I tried to jump off the cliff in my own way.
That person was shocked.
“What?Are you mad?What if you had really fallen down?”
Rishab:That would not have happened.Because I knew that a Naagin has the strength to save me alone and being a Naagin saving me was easy for Pratha.Anyways I have trapped Pratha in my fake love.
The other person:Good.But make sure that Pratha never comes to know that you are a serpent hunter.
Rishab:Never!She will never know that.
That person smirked.She was none other than Seema.
There were Dadi and his father Lalit also in the room.
Flash back….
Rishab saw Dadi weeping.
Rishab:What happened Dadi?
Dadi:Our astrologer said that our family ..our family heritage..everything will perish because of an evil naagin.
Rishab:Evil naagin?
Dadi:Yes.Years back an evil Naagin tried to harm our family.With a snake charmer’s help we caught that serpent and killed her.But her clan cursed our family.But we did not care.But now our family is facing the consequences.Your father is a heart patient and I am not able to walk properly.
Rishab:For that,the best doctors are treating you and dad.
Dadi:But still there is no improvement.Don’t you know that?
Rishab became dull.
Seema:Dadi is right.Doctors can’t do anything.Now dadi and dad are suffering.Very soon I will also be sick.After that even in young age you will also fall sick.
Rishab:Mom!
Seema:I am saying the fact beta.
Rishab:But what can we do mom?
Seema:There is a solution given by the astrologer.
Rishab:What is that?
Seema:The grand daughter of the evil naagin has to be given to the Guru Mata of Megha Mountain.Guru Mata will punish that naagin by making her her slave or by killing her.Thus her evil naagin clan will perish and the curse fallen on us will vanish.
Rishab became upset.
Rishab:But because of the evil naagin,why should her innocent grand daughter suffer?
Dadi:Rishab,you care about that naagin or your own family?
Rishab:Of course,my own family.
Dadi:Then don’t pity that naagin.
Rishab:But how will we find that naagin?
Seema:We have already found out that naagin.That naagin has a special rare zodiac sign.We tried to find her through her zodiac sign and we realized that she is none other than our home nurse Pratha.
Rishab was shocked:Pratha?Just because of the zodiac sign you confirmed that Pratha is a naagin?I think it’s a misunderstanding.
Seema:We started observing Pratha and once purposefully we brought a snake charmer here by lying to her that a snake has entered our compound.Hearing his music,Pratha was becoming restless and tried to hide her face from us.My eyes were on her and I saw her changing into a Naagin.She ran to a room before she became a complete Naagin.She thinks that nobody saw her real form.
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Rishab was shocked.
Rishab:But mom,how can we take Pratha to Guru mata?She won’t come with me.
Dadi:She will come with you if she trusts you.
Lalit:For that, you woo her and trap her.
Rishab was shocked:Pratha is not that type of a girl.
Seema:We know that.You marry her.She won’t deny to come with you anywhere if you marry her.
Rishab was shocked.
Rishab:To save our family,I have to marry her also?Oh no…
Dadi:Yes,you have to do that for our family Rishab.So make her feel that you love her.She will love you and she won’t refuse to marry you.
Lalit:You need to be a Naagin hunter to trap Pratha.Instead of Guru Mata,even if you kill her as a Naagin hunter,our family will be saved.
Rishab was shocked.
Rishab:You are asking me to be Naagin hunter dad?How can you even think that I can kill someone?
Lalit became dull.
Lalit:It’s for the family Rishab.For the family, you may have to do the things which are against your conscience.
Rishab:But I can’t do that.I can’t be cruel enough to kill someone.But I can trap her and hand her over to Guru Mata for my family.It’s a sin.But I will do that sin to protect our family.
They smiled.
After that Rishab started doing research on shape shifting serpents.
Present…
Pratha saw many books in Rishab’s shelf.
Pratha:You have many books Rishabji.Nice book collection.
Rishab:Yes.I love books.You like books?
Pratha:Yes.I also like books.
Rishab:Then we will read books together.
He took some books and kept them on the table.They both sat down there.He wrapped his arms around her shoulder and they both enjoyed reading.
Pratha told Thapki about accepting Rishab’s proposal.
Thapki hugged her: I am so ha…ha…happy for you di.
Thapki:You say my ji..ji..jiju’s name.
Pratha replied with a blush on her face:Rishab Gujral.
Thapki was shocked:Wha…what?You ha…ha..have his picture?
Pratha:Yes.Today we took some cute photographs together.
Pratha showed her the photographs with Rishab.
Thapki was shattered.
Thapki:He..he is my Boss.
Pratha was surprised.
Pratha:Really?I can’t believe it.By the way what about your love?The person you love…
Thapki lied painfully:I…di…did not mee…mee..meet him af…af…ter that.
Pratha felt sad for her.
Pratha:Don’t worry Thapki.You will meet him again or you will meet your true love.
Thapki smiled emotionally.Then she went to her room and cried.
Thapki did thandav suppressing her emotions while Pratha did thandav at the Shiv temple to express her gratitude.The other shape shifting serpents also joined them in their thandav dance.
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Seema and Dadi hugged Pratha.
Dadi:I am so happy that my Rishab chose you.
Pratha was very happy.
Seema:We always wanted you to be our daughter in law.
Pratha smiled.
Dadi made her wear a grand chain.
Dadi:This is our family chain and this is yours now.
Pratha smiled.
Thapki was gloomy in her office.
Rishab went near her.
Rishab:Why are you gloomy Thapki?
Thapki smiled in a fake manner:Not at all.By the way your beloved Pra…Pra…Pratha is my sister.
Rishab gave a shocking expression:What?
Thapki:She told me tha…tha..that you both are get..get…getting married.
Rishab kept silent.He was lost in some thoughts.
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