Confession a maan fan fiction

To be honest, we all maaan fans and genuine lovers(read critics) of the show had a lot of dreamy expectations from this confessions track- Anupama saying the three magical words to get Prince Charming, the two walking hand in hand to their p glorious and peaceful (read shah-free) sunset singing 90's song to each other.

But instead of our lovey dovey mature couple's mature romance, we were served with a filler confession and then back to square one with the chauvinistic obsession with Vanraj and his maniac family.

Although I refrain much from dissing out the show, for it is the writers creative field and we can only criticize not question, we do have the freedom to imagine alternate scenes for our dear couple and spun pragmatic real-life situations around them.

So, honouring my fan instincts, I have recreated the confession scene in the stylus of my own pen. Hope you would like it.

You can write however you want to shape the story. That is part of the fun. 👍🏼

I will update tonight

THE BEFORE CONFESSION SCENES

There has been a strange quivering in her stomach since morning, as if a thousand butterflies fluttered in anticipation of their freedom. But, equal to the fluttering in her stomach there was a tense reverberation in her heart clamping and frightening her. She dug her teeth into her pallu, what a terrible state her nerves were in. "Kanhaji, help me, " Anupama could not hold herself from crying aloud for help to her Dear God.

"What a fool love has made of me ", Anupama wondered aloud. " At one moment I am dancing and tripping like a mad deer and the next moment I am shivering in anticipation of the upcoming dangers. What a terrible blessing this Ghalib Kapadia has made me, that pagal chokra, he was himself mad and has made me half- mad huff......

Ani went on muttering and complaining to her Kanhaji as she chopped the vegetables away, unaware that her very own kanhaji was standing by the door, hearing each and every word with a very elated smile on his face.

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Anuj threw himself on the bed, blanking out for a minute ; was it true, was it true, was the only thing he was capable of whispering having worked himself upto a frenzied level of excitement, he was breathless and on the ninth heaven. His thoughts ran at 750 km/h, there was no means, no power to control them, he had just heard the word love and his world shattered spining what will happen when they will.... He stopped, he was too chaste to think any further.

He wanted to call kaka, and throw at him the most joyful news of their lives but he was too overpowered by the frenzy of his feelings. All he could do was to let himself be overpowered by them and to drown in them.

But, beep, beep.... the reminder for the meeting with the P2P company (and his prospective employer) rang, throwing him out of his 19th heaven. The business had died but not the business man, his time was still negotiated into useful chunks and a busy schedule, but the ever-busy Anuj Kapadia wanted to just laze around in the thoughts of Anupama, Oh! even her very name arouse thrills in his body, and now that he had the legitimacy to dream, he should not be disturb.... ring, ring again this time with a call from the company head. Irritated and dazed, Anuj dashed out the call and hitting the cancel button furiously.

Just then his eyes fell on the date displayed on his phone-14th February, 14th February, Valentine's , the day of love......

On another such Valentine's Day, 25 years ago, he had experienced the same euphoria as today in his hand was the rise, in his mouth the words uttered umpteenth time before the mirror. But the euphoria has soon turned to devastation. Instead of a yes to his purposal, he had got a wedding card with the name of the beloved and the trashcanraj etched upon it.

Anuj still feeled a tinch in his heart each time he revisited his memory lane, he saw only loss, tears and devastation there. His was a life created by loss - first his parents, then Anupama and now Mukku, business and even his hard-won identity. No, he jumped from the bed, no he was not going to lose Anupama again this time.

Today is the day of love and he must hear from her lips the words he has died everyday to say and hear. She had whispered it to kanhaji, but she must boldly proclaim it for him, today, now, itself. He has obtained the legitimacy to dream, he must obtain the legitimacy to act.

Fantastic update. Loved it

Very good wait for next scene

THE BEFORE CONFESSION SCENES

Anupama had no interest in anything today, not in the puja, not in the kitchen, not even in the dance academy. All the time her eyes darted back and forth from kanhaji and the calendar, the calendar and kanhaji. Today was the day he must hear her, but should she say or not say not say or say, no at last she decided she would say today, come hell and shower or heaven, Anuj will hear her today

THE BEFORE CONFESSION SCENES

Anuj had received a call from Anupama to meet her in the balcony, she wanted to discuss something regarding the dance academy. Oh! does this boring girl has nothing to think about except work and chores, oh yes! She does think and say about the Shahs, how can he ever forget her obsession with them. But does the idea of spending time with him, confessing to him, loving him, touching him, talking to him never crosses her mind. Oh! How shackled she is still by the society and the hell she calls family.

"But, no worries Anu, I am there, I will free you eventually from your mind 's shackles, but first I must hear what is going on in your blessed mind"-Anuj thought with a very shy smile on his face.

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Anupama fidgeted her hands tracing the bridge of her nose, unconsciously copying Anuj's mannerisms. Was it the right time with all the vanika fiasco and all. And is this the right place with just a few candles and a few flowers. Something does not feel right.

But, but, she must speak to him today. She cannot control herself any longer and her dear hubby (would-be she corrected herself) never really understands sign language. Utter fool of a man, could not he just know it without her saying , complained her woman-heart, but knowing Anuj even if he knew he would still want her to say. Everything seems so rosy today, everything will be alright.

But, but still somewhere within her a voice cried in fear; what if everything does not turn out to be so rosy,,what if she got betrayed again? But this time she had Anuj, her heart reasoned, he is not going to leave her broken, he loved her. Ok ok. Her brain unreasoned, I can trust Anuj, but can she trust life again. Each time she had risen, life had pushed her back again how to fly again now, that too in so uncharted a sky?

Good buildup for the story, please continue. Curious to know next part

Will update by tomorrow thanks for encouraging me