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Posted: 2 years ago

Inside ACP Quarters: Aurangabad


"Mohit zara hari chai lana," A woman calls while applying nailpaint.


"Abhi to aapne coffee banane ko bola tha," Mohit answers back.


"To ab main Hari chai bol rahi hoon. Tera kaam bas jo main kahoon use manna hai, kainchi ki tarah zubaan chalana nahi."


"Huh, green tea bolna tak nahi aata, aur hari chai piyengi ye. Malhar Bhau rehte hain to Pallavi Vahini control me rehti hain magar Bhau kaam se teen din ke liye Satara gaye hain to ye to mera maatha satka dengi."


"Pallavi, main kya keh rahi thi ki Sampada aur Malhar bachpan ke dost hain. Dono ek doosre ko pasand bhi karte hain to kyon na inki shaadi...."


"Thamb, thamb Aparna," Pallavi said, "IPS afsar hai mera devar. Ladki dhoodungi to aisi jo uske barabar hogi. Teri Sampada to bas ek mamooli si publishing company me naukri karti hai. Uski aur mere Malhar me kya baraabri hai?"


Aparna thinks to herself, "Sab jaanti hoon...apne IPS devar ke naam pe khoob saare paise kamaane ke sapne paal rakhe hain is Pallavi ne. Dahej to Malhar ise lene nahi dega, isliye Moti kamaai vaali nahi dhoondh rahi hai jiski salary apne kabze me rakh le. Par main bhi dekhti hoon, kaise hoti h Malhar ki shaadi?"


Pallavi thinking to herself, "Paise wali Bahu dhoodungi aur use apne ishaaron pe nachaungi, saath hi uski salary bhi meri. Vaah Pallavi tu to Rani banne ka rahi h. Us Malhar ko saas sasur ke marne ke baad itna padhaya likhaya ki acche paise kamaakar de mujhe, magar use to imandaari ke keede ne kaata hai. Uske classmates jo UPSC crack tak nahi kar paye the aaj dollars me kamaa rahe hain. Aur ye hai ki sarkaari pagaar me hi santusht hai. Magar bas, devar nahi badal sakti to devrani to apni pasand ki laa hi sakti hoon jo mera har hukum maane aur meri har iccha poori kare."


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Ek laal batti waali car khadi huyi hai jiske aage District Magistrate likha hua hai.


Anupriya makes Kalyani eat sugar and curd and says, "Aurangabad pahunchkar mujhe phone karna."


"Haan Aai main charge sambhaalte hi tujhe call kari hoon," Kalyani said. She was wearing a plain dark blue Sari with hair in a bun.


"Aur haan vahaan kisi ladke ke saath bhaag mat jaana!"


Anupriya says in disgust, "Kya bolti hain aap Aau Saheb? Kam se kam aaj meri beti ke liye itna bada din h aaj to aisi baatein mat kariye."


"Ham to sirf sach kehte hain," AS said, "Aur sach hamesha kadwa hi hota hai. Kitna kehte the ki vo Atharv sahi ladka nahi h. Magar meri to koi sunta hi nahi h. Isne bhi nahi suni. Bhaag gayi aur hamari ijjat mitti me mila di. Jab iska pati ise peetta tha to hamne hi sahara diya tha isko."


Anupriya said, "Aur ye jo aap saare Wakad me ghoom ghoom kar kehti hain ki meri poti DM hai, ye mauka bhi Kalyani ne hi aapko diya hai. Aur ye ghar sirf aapka nahi h Aau Saheb, ye ghar mera bhi utna hi hai."


"Accha Aai mujhe der ho rahi hai, main chalti hoon," Kalyani said.


Uske kaanon me abhi bhi Atharv ki aawaz goonj rahi thi, "Hamara beta mara paida nahi hua tha Kalyani. Aau Saheb ne tumse jhooth kaha tha. Vo zinda hai."


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Should I continue the FF or not? Please let me know.


Updates jaldi jaldi nahi de paungi but I'll try to give on weekends.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Are tag karna to bhool hi gayi thi

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Posted: 2 years ago

This is nice and different.. 

Please continue Pragya.. 

And stress mat lo.. Exams ke liye prepare karo.. 

When you get time you update.. πŸ‘πŸΌ

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

This is nice and different.. 

Please continue Pragya.. 

And stress mat lo.. Exams ke liye prepare karo.. 

When you get time you update.. πŸ‘πŸΌ


Thanks Rekha 😊

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Posted: 2 years ago

It's so goood pragyu I like this os a lot mazza aaya padhne main mujhein ...pls continue it meri jaan aaram sein paper dekein continue karna hum aaram sein intezaar karenge πŸ€—πŸ€—

Ohh god that pallavi iskein paison ke in sapne poorein nhi hote hari chai πŸ€£πŸ€£

Malharji nhi hai yahan but unka naam hi kaafi hai acp sahab hai apne aur kya imandar humesha ki tarah apuuuuuuu teri beti hi hamari watt bhi lagati hai aur vahin kalma ko pass bhi laati hai πŸ˜†

Kalyani become dm Anupriya apni beti ko bhej rahi hai ..par aausaheb taunt marein bina kaha reh sakti hai ...

Ohh god kalyani kein saath kitna bura hua he used to beat her that's so horrible this man suppose to be root in hell πŸ˜‘😑

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Phlo004

It's so goood pragyu I like this os a lot mazza aaya padhne main mujhein ...pls continue it meri jaan aaram sein paper dekein continue karna hum aaram sein intezaar karenge πŸ€—πŸ€—

Ohh god that pallavi iskein paison ke in sapne poorein nhi hote hari chai πŸ€£πŸ€£

Malharji nhi hai yahan but unka naam hi kaafi hai acp sahab hai apne aur kya imandar humesha ki tarah apuuuuuuu teri beti hi hamari watt bhi lagati hai aur vahin kalma ko pass bhi laati hai πŸ˜†

Kalyani become dm Anupriya apni beti ko bhej rahi hai ..par aausaheb taunt marein bina kaha reh sakti hai ...

Ohh god kalyani kein saath kitna bura hua he used to beat her that's so horrible this man suppose to be root in hell πŸ˜‘😑


Thanks Vanshu. Is FF me Sampu is a positive character. She and Malhar are childhood sweethearts but haven't yet confessed to each other but Pallavi ka laalach...


Kallu aur Mallu ki forced marriage h because Malhar apni bhabhi ki baat nahi taal sakta.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Wow Pragya it is amazing story and something different also❀️

Achi baat hai abhi tak sampada aur Malhar ki shaadi nhi huvi and Pallavi uff is aurat ka kuch nhi hoga

Humera Malhar ke liya kalyani hi best hai ❀️😍

I hope unha ek dusre se pyaar ho jaye 

Plzz continue ❀️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: sehreemstory

Wow Pragya it is amazing story and something different also❀️

Achi baat hai abhi tak sampada aur Malhar ki shaadi nhi huvi and Pallavi uff is aurat ka kuch nhi hoga

Humera Malhar ke liya kalyani hi best hai ❀️😍

I hope unha ek dusre se pyaar ho jaye 

Plzz continue ❀️


Thanks a lot Arwa. If you get time, please read my other FF Sochta Hoon ki vo kitne maasoom the too. I've tried something different from my usual FFs there.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Pragyaa, this ff is too good and different as well. 

I really liked it, plss do continue. 

I hope kalma ek dusre ko pasand kare, this atharv and sampada should get out from kalma life. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Pragya, aisa ho sakta hain ki tum koi FF likho aur humein pasand naa aaye ya padhne ka mann na ho?