AbhiRa TS~ Chaos (Part 2 Updated)

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Hey everyone,

Here is my another os on AbhiRa

Enjoy and please drop your precious reviews😊



Mahima wanted to meet Goenka and Akshu so they invited Goenka's to Diwali party at Birla's House

Akshu was not feeling well but Mimi insisted to join them at the party.

They all were warmly welcomed by Manjheri, Anand, Neil, and Parth.
Party was in full swing everyone was chatting around but Akshara regretted coming to the party as the noise around was only intensifying her headache and she started feeling fatigued. She adjusted herself on a comfy couch in corner of the hall.

Abhi was busy addressing his guest and he saw Kairav and Vansh. He went to greet them and started his chit-chatting but his eyes were searching for Akshara.
Abhi questioned- Sab nahi aye kya?
Kairav- Nahi sab aye hain
Abhi- Okay

Now that he knew his lady love is at the party he couldn't resist meeting her... His excitement went to another level. Finally, after struggling for a few minutes he located her on the couch...But she looks exhausted and pale.

Abhi -Hey, Yahan kya kar rahi ho?
Akshu - Hii, enjoying  the party
Abhi- Enjoying akele woh bhi bina kuch liye
Akshu- Yeah I didn't feel like having anything
Abhi- Are you okay?
Akshu- Ummm ... No, I think I need some fresh air
Abhi- Let's go then...
Akshu-Kahan?
Abhi- Lawn main aur kaha..


(Mimi saw them together so she came to talk to them)
Mimi- Bacchon kahan ja rahe ho?
Abhi- Woh Dadi Akshara ko fresh air chahiye isliye lawn main walk karne
Mimi- Akshu beta hume tumhe zid karke nahi lana chahiye tha
Akshu - no it's okay Mimi main theek hun

On lawn (they were sitting on a bench)
Abhi- So what are your plans?
Akshu-  I am done with my MA in music but I want to join some NGO and help needy ones.
Abhi -That's great, Badi Maa ka bhi NGO hai
Akshu- I know, Monday ko interview hai mera
Abhi- That's good, All the best!
Akshu-Thank you
Abhi- Andar chalein?
Akshu- Hnn

(She stood up but she slipped... Luckily Abhi caught her on time)

Akshu- Thankyou
Abhi- Akshara tumhe fever hai
Akshu- Shayad
Abhi-You should rest Chalo let's go to my room.
Akshu- No it's okay
Abhi- Fever badh jayega... Main medicine de Dunga thodi der main You'll  feel better

(They were on their way to Abhi's room. Abhi thought to inform Akshus family so he went to inform Swarna and Dadi

Akshu was feeling thirsty so she asked the waiter for a glass of water
There were 2 glasses she mistakenly took alcohol)

Abhi- Chalo
Akshu- hmmm Chalo

In Room
Abhi- Tum rest karo main medicine leke ata hun
Akshu -Okay

(He came back with medicine and a glass of water
Akshu was staring at a frame that had Abhis  picture
She was intoxicated)

Abhi- Kya dekh rahi ho?
Akshu- Mimi ke hero ko dekh rahi hun
(He felt weird because Akshara would never stare at his picture and reply to him like this... But he took it lightly and further questioned)

Abhi- Accha Mimi ka hero kaisa lag raha hai
Akshu-  uffff!!! Hot
(Abhi was taken aback by her unexpected comment)
Akshu- Dr. Abhimanyu Birla.... Koi haq nahi hai tumhe itna hot dikhne ka
(Abhi was now sure something is wrong with her... A few minutes back she was normal but now she is acting weird)
(Although he was enjoying her compliments ..he wanted to know what's wrong with her)
Abhi- Akshara tumne kuch piya tha kya?
Akshu- Ummm Thoda sa pani(signaling through her finger) 

Nahi thoda nahi thoda zyada actually pura glass tha pyas lagragi thi toh pura pi liya... Phir accha laga toh ek aur glass pi liya
(Abhi didn't know what he should do now... She was already having a fever and now she is drunk)

Akshu- Abhiiiiii
Abhi- Hnn meri maa (He said cutely)
Akshu- Mujhe headache hora hai tum sir dabao mera
Abhi- what?
Akshu- Main guest hun na... Mimi kehti hai Atithi bhagwan saman hota hai.. Seva karo meri
(Abhi was trying hard to control himself from laughing seeing her logic)

Abhi- Okay Baitho

(He made her sit on the bed and started giving her head massage
Akshu gave a soft moan feeling relaxed)

(Abhi in thoughts- If she was not intoxicated I would have kissed her)

Akshu- Abhi
Abhi- Hmmm
Akshu- Will you go on a date with me?
(Abhi was well aware that she will forget all these things in the morning once she will be normal)
Akshu- Bolo
Abhi- Hnn par kahan jayenge
Akshu- Ummm wahin jahan pehli baar mile the
Abhi -Okay  phir wahan jake kya karenge
Akshu- Main Methidana ubal ke pani ka kadha bana ke laungi tumhare liye... Tumhara gala saaf ho jayega....Tum bahut bura gaate ho ... Tumhara gaana sunke mera panic attack aur badh gaya tha (she said jokingly)

(Abhi couldn't complain coz he was well aware of his singing skills)

Akshu- Chalo ab headache sahi ho gaya ab mujhe sona hai
Abhi- Okay rest Karlo
Akshu- kahan ja rahe ho?
Abhi- tumhe rest karna hai na
Akshu - No, main akele thodi soungi ayse kahin par tum yahin aake let jao

(Abhi didn't have any option so he sat on another side of the bed)

After 10 min...
Akshu- Abhimanyu
Abhi- hnnnn
Akshu- mujhe nayi jagah neend nahin ati ghar jana hai
Abhi- abhi?
Akshu- Hnnn

(He thought anyways she is drunk so I will have to drop her home
Meanwhile, he called  Neil to be with her
He went to inform Kairav and Swarna and took permission to drop her home as the party would take 2 hours more)

Neil- Akshara ji aapko kuch chahiye toh nahi?
Akshu - Woh chahiye (pointed towards Abhi's picture)
Neil - Abhi Bhai?
Akshu- Hnnn tumhare handsome bhai ke liye mere jaisi cute bhabhi honi chahiye na? Bolo
Neil - hmn bilkul thik keh rahi ho aap bhabhi... Ruko main bhai ko bhejta hun
Akshu- okay byeee

(Abhi was at the door)
Neil- Bhai kitni der laga di Bhabhi dhundh rahi hai apko jaiye
Abhi - Bhabhi???  Kaun Bhabhi toh Parth bhaiya ke sath hain

Akshu - Dr. Abhimanyu Birla Neil ki bhabhi main hun.... Bahut sawal karte ho tum

(This was too much to handle for him)
Abhi - Akshuuu ghar chalna hai hume chalo


(He tried helping her to make her stand but she was unable to stand properly So he finally decided to carry her to the car and they reached Goenka House)


Akshu - Yeh jagah toh mene pehle dekhi hai
Abhi - Yeh tumhara hi ghar hai

(He carried her to the room and put her in bed
She immediately dozed off 
Abhi checked her temperature it was still high so he started putting a wet cloth on her forehead
(In his thought-He was remembering all her cute antics she did today after getting drunk and those memories only made him smile).


Hope you all will like it!


Part 2 on Pg 4

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Omg it’s a very cute one 

“Nashe si chadh gayi oey” I remember this song while reading this …

Mind blowing conversation.. that methi dana kada hilarious 😂 

Hmm Neil ko jab kaha ki woh chahiye

Hnnn tumhare handsome bhai ke liye mere jaisi cute bhabhi honi chahiye na? Hayee mein marjawaa 

keep up the good work going on my friend ❤️






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Omg it’s a very cute one 

“Nashe si chadh gayi oey” I remember this song while reading this …

Mind blowing conversation.. that methi dana kada hilarious 😂 

Hmm Neil ko jab kaha ki woh chahiye

Hnnn tumhare handsome bhai ke liye mere jaisi cute bhabhi honi chahiye na? Hayee mein marjawaa 

keep up the good work going on my friend ❤️






Thank you so much sweetie 🤗

I enjoyed writing this OS  

I hope we get to see cute scene like this in show also 

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Thank you so much sweetie 🤗

I enjoyed writing this OS  

I hope we get to see cute scene like this in show also 

yes off course yar and if they didn’t get idea then our OS is still there ha ha ha 


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yes off course yar and if they didn’t get idea then our OS is still there ha ha ha 


We can fulfill all our dreams by writing OS😆

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This was such a lovely One shot 😍😍😍 talli Akshu and caring Abhi... Haaye ❣️

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So cute! I couldn’t stop smiling throughout the os. You write SO WELL!

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Akshara Goenka as cute as ever - Dr. Abhimanyu Birla wouldn't stand a chance against her charms. 


That was super duper cute. I loved reading it! 

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Zenu zenu zenu yaar... Kya tha eh? 🤣 


Too too good... I enjoyed every bit of it.... Laughing like an idiot reading all their conversation....


Aise light hearted ones are much needed.... Pls show mein bhi aise kuch cute sa scene ho...


I literally laughed so much my tummy is aching... 


Take a 🤗 for this OS...