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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Hey everyone,

Here is the next part of Care & Confession 


Part 2


The next day
Abhi had got fever due to injury so he didn't join everyone for breakfast.
Akshu was impatiently waiting for him but he didn't come
She asked Neil
Akshu - Abhimanyu nahi aya breakfast ke liye
Neil- Nahi bro so rahe hain
(She thought it's 9:30 a.m. he is still sleeping
She got concerned and decided to check on him after breakfast

After breakfast, she went to his room.
He was sleeping like a baby and his messy hair made him look cuter 

She called him but he didn't respond
She shook him a bit and he woke and replied in a sleepy voice)

Abhi-Tum sapno main bhi ane lagi ho ab

Akshu-Nahi main sach main yahin hun

(He realized that it's not a dream and sat on bed smiling)
Akshu-Main check karne ayi thi tumhe..how are you feeling?
Abhi- Abhi tak toh thik nahi tha ab better feel kar raha hun
Akshu- Kyu kya hua
Abhi- Thoda fever hai injury ki wajah se isliye medicine leke so gaya

(Neil came to meet Abhi)
Neil- Bro hum Pahadi wale Mandir ja rahe hain aap chaloge?

(Before Abhi could reply Akshu said)
Akshu- Abhimanyu ko fever hai kaise jayega
Neil - Okay Bhai aap rest karlo


(Arohi came searching for Akshu)
Arohi- Tu idhar hai main kabse dhundh rahi hun tujhe  chalna nahi hai
Akshu- Nahi mera mood nahi hai
Arohi- Okay boldungi Kairav bhaiya ko

(They all left except Abhi and Akshara)

Abhi-Tumne breakfast kiya

Akshu- Hnn  aur tumhare liye soup layi hun
Abhi- Layi ho toh apne haathon se pila do

(She started feeding him and his eyes didn't move from Akshu's face as if the only thing in the room was her face
She could feel his eyes on her and it made her blush

After feeding him she changed his dressing)  


Abhi- Tumhe jana chahiye tha

Akshu- Main chali jati toh Dr. Abhimanyu tumhe entertain kaun karta ... Phir tum apni methi dane jaisi shakal leke lete rehte 
Abhi- Achaaa phir karo entertain
Akshu- Ummm okay…..Kuch sunau


(He instantly replied yes why not and she started singing)


Kehte hain Khuda ne is jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai us Rab ka ishara maano
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kuchh to hai tujhse Raabta ×2
Kaise hum jaanein humein kya pata
Kuchh to hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna isi ke liye
Kehte hain Khuda ne is jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Meharbani jaate jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta sa lamha ek daman bhar gaya
Tere nazara mila, roshan sitara mila
Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila
Sadiyon se tarse hain jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sohbat mein duayein hain usi ke liye
Tere milna hai us rab ka ishara maano
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye.....


(She sang the whole song staring at him
His heart was full of emotions and his eyes were moist
Yesterday she confessed and rannow she is sitting in front of him and confessing her love through a beautiful song.

There was silence but their heart was beating in sync.

He stood up and gave a soft kiss on the forehead.

He kissed but her eyes were tightly closed like she was in pain)

Abhi-Kya hua tum thik ho

Akshu-hmmm..period cramps

Abhi- Tum itni der se mera dhyan rakhte rakhte apna dhyan nahi rakhna bhul gayi

Akshu- Tum ho na mera dhyan rakhne ke liye
Akshu-  Btw song Kaisa laga
Abhi- Puchne ki zarurat hai


(She smiled and nodded no)
Abhi-I love you Akshara... You're the best thing that has happened to me
Akshu- I love you too (she hugged him tightly)

(He winced in pain)
Akshu- I'm so sorry
Abhi- It's okay

They stood together at the window enjoying the view.


Hope you all will enjoy it!❤️

So cute! Thank you for tagging me! You are an awesome writer!

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice I liked it

song selection was gud


taking care of each other wow cool ha 


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Posted: 2 years ago

Thanks for tagging me, I can’t believe you wrote a part 2 for this OS, I was continuously wondering what would have happened after Akshara kissed him and ran away, and this second part perfectly summed up everything. You’re a great writer. Keep up the great work. Hope to read many more Abhira stories from you.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Mira.Rajput24

So cute! Thank you for tagging me! You are an awesome writer!

Thankyou dear🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: imkt

Nice I liked it

song selection was gud


taking care of each other wow cool ha 


Thank you dear❤️

Yes Abhi is so caring towards Akshu we have seen his face in today's episode when she said chot lag hai 😆

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Thank you dear❤️

Yes Abhi is so caring towards Akshu we have seen his face in today's episode when she said chot lag hai 😆

because of work load I am not able to keep track but I am trying yar 


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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Thanks for tagging me, I can’t believe you wrote a part 2 for this OS, I was continuously wondering what would have happened after Akshara kissed him and ran away, and this second part perfectly summed up everything. You’re a great writer. Keep up the great work. Hope to read many more Abhira stories from you.

Thank you so much🤗

I will try writing more on AbhiRa❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: imkt

because of work load I am not able to keep track but I am trying yar 


It's okay Dear even I watch it in early morning and write at night 😅

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Posted: 2 years ago

Badiya badiya badiya... It was so realistic and cute.... Very well written zenu... 🤗


Loved reading it... U are rocking... Beautiful song selection....❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Amru4krish

Badiya badiya badiya... It was so realistic and cute.... Very well written zenu... 🤗


Loved reading it... U are rocking... Beautiful song selection....❤️

Thank you Thank you 🤗

I'm happy that you people are enjoying my work ❤️