AbhiRa TS ~ Care & Confession (Part 2 Updated)

Posted: 2 years ago

Hey Everyone,

Here is another OS on Abhira❤️


They all are at Iccha Kund, Abhi wished to get his love 

Akshu was still standing with her coin trying to understand what her heart wants... Her heart says Abhi but her brain wanted to wish for Aarohi's Happiness.

 

Everyone was roaming around clicking pictures and enjoying the view.

Abhi was talking with Kairav and Vansh  but his heart was stuck at glancing Akshu from another end of the lake 

Boys were so engrossed in a convo that they didn't realize Abhi at the  corner of the stairs 

 

Akshu's was in deep thoughts staring unknowingly at Abhi but what she saw the next moment created a panic inside her, Abhi  was near the corner of the stairs one more step and he will fell off from those stairs 

She had  already lost her mother in this kind of accident

Akshu (screamed)- Abhimanyu...  (The coin slipped and fell in Iccha kund)

He was too far to listen but he felt her voice so he turned and accidentally slipped .

Her worst of fear came trueShe ran as fast as she could to reach him.

Kairav and Neil were already running towards Abhi.

He got a scratch on the forehead and hands.

She came running and hugged him  tightly as if her life is dependent on him 


Akshu-Tumhara dhyan kahan rehta hai.... Tumhe aur kuch ho jata toh main kya karti 

Batao kaise rehti main tumhare bina ? (She said in between her sobs) 

  

He was so surprised and overwhelmed with an unexpected hug... She was running away since yesterday now she is hugging him

 

Akshu-Tum thik ho na...Abhimanyu tumhe toh chot lagi hai.... Wait main clean kar deti hun 

(He was silently enjoying the care from his lady love ) 

Abhi-I am fine Akshara don't worry Kuch nahi hua mujhe 

Akshu-Kaise kuch nahi hua kitni chot lagi hai chalo hospital chalte hain 

Abhi-Nahi main thik hun 

Akshu-Nahii tumhe kuch nahi pata 

Abhi-Tum Ek doctor ko hospital leke jaogi 

Akshu-Toh kya tum insaan nahi ho maine tumhe methi dane se compare kya kardiya tum apne aap ko wahi samjhne lage

Abhi-Phirse methi dana ..... Seriously

Akshu-Accha I'm sorry par kitni chot lagi hai main dressing kardeti hun

 

Kairav coughed to make Akshara realize there are other members as well

She finally realized her surroundings and stood up...She was embarrassed about the way she reacted

 

Dadi-Abhi beta jao Akshara tumhari dressing kardegi aur Haldi wala doodh bhejte hain hum usse aram milega tumhe

 

Dadi's comment made her more embarrassed she wanted to vanish at that moment

 

Abhi’s Room

Neil Bought a first aid kit

Neil-Bha….Akshara ji apko aur kuch toh nahi chahiye

Akshu-No, Thank you.

Neil-Aap bhaiya ki dressing kijiye , I will be right back.

 

Akshara started dressing his wound and he winced in pain

Akshu- Kya Hua?

Abhi- I think back main thodi lag gayi hai

Akshu -Main pain relief ointment laga dun?

Abhi -Hnn


Akshu pointed to take off his shirt 

He took it off…Due to shyness she turned her face and started applying ointment on his back

 

Akshu-Hogaya …

Abhi-Okay.....Kahan ja rahi ho? (while putting his shirt on)

Akshu-Kyu kuch chahiye?

Abhi-Hnn jawab chahiye?

Akshu-Kaisa jawab

Abhi- Abhi thodi der pehle kya kehrahi thi tum ki kya hota tumhara agar mujhe kuch ho jata toh?

Akshu-Woh main kehrahi thi...

Abhi-Hmmm I'm listening, bolo….(Abhi was taking steps forward and she was moving back)

Akshu-Main Woh…(she was remembering everything that happened half an hour back, how she unknowingly confessed her feelings to him)

Abhi-Akshuuuu bolo kya karti tum?

(They were standing too close to each other that they could feel each others breath)

Akshu-Abhimanyu

Abhi- Hmmmm

Akshu- I love you! (She pecked him and ran away due to shyness)

He stood smiling like idiot touching his cheek where she kissed him.



Hope you people will like it .


Part 2 on Pg 3

Edited by Zenab78 - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

haye haye!! 

loved how she confessed her love to abhimanyu...

indirectly she wished for abhi and i hope aise hi show mein ho.. 😉

Thank you for the wonderful OS 🤗

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by scorp1AN


haye haye!! 

loved how she confessed her love to abhimanyu...

indirectly she wished for abhi and i hope aise hi show mein ho.. 😉

Thank you for the wonderful OS 🤗

Thank you🤗

I really hope she accidentally wishes for Abhi  

I am eager to see how will Akshu confess.. Coz half of the time she is running away from Abhi 

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by Zenab78


Thank you🤗

I really hope she accidentally wishes for Abhi  

I am eager to see how will Akshu confess.. Coz half of the time she is running away from Abhi 

me too! 

i don want a sacrificing kind of FL... need someone who can take a stand for herself... hope they will show something different from the usual norm...

Posted: 2 years ago

Too too good zenab...❤️


Hope writers read this and aise hi implement karein....i was just imagining the scenes while reading... 


Splendid dear... 🤗


Adi made u do brilliant vms 😃


Abhi is making u write mesmerizing os.... 😉

Edited by Amru4krish - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by Zenab78


Thank you🤗

I really hope she accidentally wishes for Abhi  

I am eager to see how will Akshu confess.. Coz half of the time she is running away from Abhi 


Abhi will not let her run....now that he has realized his feelings... He will surely grab and hold her tight never to let go....abhi par pura bharosa hey... Jo bhi kartha hai poore man se kartha hai.... No half baked business at all  

Edited by Amru4krish - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by Amru4krish


Too too good zenab...❤️


Hope writers read this and aise hi implement karein....i was just imagining the scenes while reading... 


Splendid dear... 🤗


Adi made u do brilliant vms 😃


Abhi is making u write mesmerizing os.... 😉

Thanks a lot Amru❤️🤗

Yes I am learning new things with Harshad's different characters 😃

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by Amru4krish



Abhi will not let her run....now that he has realized his feelings... He will surely grab and hold her tight never to let go....abhi par pura bharosa hey... Jo bhi kartha hai poore man se kartha hai.... No half baked business at all  

Yes I am trusting Abhi on this

After all he is Mimi ka hero 😆

Posted: 2 years ago

OMG, this is too good yaar, You’re such a good writer, you should write more, maybe a full fledged fan fiction or at least a TS. Thank for this OS yaar, this and repeat mode on last few episodes is what’s going to keep me sane through the misunderstandings in the coming weeks.

Posted: 2 years ago

This is so cute! Very realistic! Amazing!



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