Sharing a Devakshi ff- Asha's Death

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Posted: 2 years ago

https://www.wattpad.com/story/288615377-closing-the-distance


Hi guys, this is a short story, my reimagination of this horrific season 3. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Loved this....its like the missing part has been fixed....they never explained why it has become strained...why Dev couldn't possibly be available at the most important time when Sona needed him....but ur story explained it....and it was like our Kuch Rang was playing in front of my eyes

...so beautifully written....

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Soumya23

Loved this....its like the missing part has been fixed....they never explained why it has become strained...why Dev couldn't possibly be available at the most important time when Sona needed him....but ur story explained it....and it was like our Kuch Rang was playing in front of my eyes

...so beautifully written....


Thank you for reading❀😊

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Posted: 2 years ago

Love your writing.. it's the KRPKAB that we all wanted and needed. It was supposed to be about Dev and Sona and their struggles, not Serendipity, nonsense, Dev, some more nonsense and then Dev-Sona.

Please keep writing and filling the void that Devakshi will leave in our lives 

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Posted: 2 years ago

I have been reading this slowly but I just had to comment. That scene when Sona is falling and waiting for Dev to catch her? πŸ˜­ WOW

Just. Wow. It was so good, I got tears in my eyes.

You are an awesome writer, and that scene is so emotional! I loved it.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Thank you. It's ongoing.

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Originally posted by: AubodroKhargosh

I have been reading this slowly but I just had to comment. That scene when Sona is falling and waiting for Dev to catch her? πŸ˜­ WOW

Just. Wow. It was so good, I got tears in my eyes.

You are an awesome writer, and that scene is so emotional! I loved it.


Thank you so much β€πŸ™πŸ₯Ί

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Posted: 2 years ago

Thank you for reading!πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 2 years ago

I reached the part where Dev found out about Asha Ma death and *slow claps*


so so good. I could feel the urgency, fear and desperation of Dev in the whole chapter. From worrying something happened to Sona to his urgent NEED to talk to her, to reach her. 


THIS is my Mr Aubhodro, not the S3 Dev they showed in between who would rather sleep in the garden.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: AubodroKhargosh

I reached the part where Dev found out about Asha Ma death and *slow claps*


so so good. I could feel the urgency, fear and desperation of Dev in the whole chapter. From worrying something happened to Sona to his urgent NEED to talk to her, to reach her. 


THIS is my Mr Aubhodro, not the S3 Dev they showed in between who would rather sleep in the garden.


Thank you 😊 


Right??!! I cannot understand how they could damage a character this badly! S3 Dev is simply unrecognizable to me. πŸ€·β€β™€οΈ