This was amazing!! Exactly like the way I want the story to go forward. Faizi and Sanju teaming up in criticizing Monami's impulsive decision! Well done with the dialogues! Totally loved it!! Can't wait to read more!!
I just loved the way u written faizi and sanju's anger.......
jaldi update karo.....plz pm me
Awesome 👍
Continue soon
That was spine chilling
I totally justify the action of Faizi & Sanju & if Karan really they should react to it in the same way
Well I disagree to Mrs Batra being overprotective & emotional covering up his entire mess just like this Sid deserves to be punished
I believe Monami would need a shock jolt to understand this entire thing & now Sid & MONAMI both will understand their mistakes
Waiting for more
Keep writing ✍️
Yeah! Easy for you to say.
Anyways this has already turned from one shot to two shot!
Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat
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Loved the way Sanju-faizi & Mr.Batra took stand for Karan ..
What happened to him 😭?
waiting for Next part ...
I think Of those 3 as brothers in arms, so they will support each other through everything.
He took 3 bullets and is bleeding out.
Thanks for the reply.
Originally posted by: Cheshtha
Amazing😍😍. Please continue soon
Thank you so much, I will try to finish it in next couple of days.
Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart
This was amazing!! Exactly like the way I want the story to go forward. Faizi and Sanju teaming up in criticizing Monami's impulsive decision! Well done with the dialogues! Totally loved it!! Can't wait to read more!!
I wish this would happen too but I do not have a lot of hopes of this happening so I wrote it down myself.
Thank you so much for reading. I am glad you liked it.
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