Connecting the dots drabble ep.207

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hey guys!!! Here I present you my version of clearing MU.

P.s.-Barkha doesn't want to give me a brainstorming session😭

also....this is after today's ep.(ep no.207)

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(Its night at Pandya Niwas, Shiva enters and as he starts going to his room...Rishita approaches him as she saw him at the clothes shop)

"Shiva tum toh shopping kar rahe they na...khali haath kyu aagaye...tumhe toh Dhara di paise deti hogi na mere jese thodi..."(frowns),  To which Shiva with a little smile replies, "Bhabhi aap yeh kya bolrahe ho mujhe samaj nahi aaya..."; and Rishita as always in a mood to create a fuss, starts taunting him in a way that her voice can be heard in the kitchen where Raavi was preparing for dinner...Rishita says while continuing, "Sach sach batao Shiva kya tum ki  Bhavesh bhai ke fashion shop pe nahi gaye they...udhar bahar voh black hoodie tha usko nahi dekh rahe they...tumne...tumne Bhavesh bhai ko bhi toh bola ke tumhe apna STYLE badalna hai...tum jooth kyu bol rahe ho"

Hearing this, Raavi's attention got dragged from making rotis to the edge of aangan where Rishita and Shiva were talking; Shiva had no answer he just said, "Haan bhabhi voh toh mai bas ese hi...voh Krish ke liye dekh raha tha...par achha nai tha na aur bohot mehenga bhi tha toh nahi liya maine" with a convincing smile...Rishita again said getting more and more furious, "Nahi Shiva maina suna Bhavesh bhai ne bola ke Raavi ghar aagai hai toh usko bhi toh Shiva naya dikhna chahiye na...bolo yahi baat hai na?"

and before Shiva would say anything Suman entered saying, "Aye patrani...jab voh bol raha hai toh vesa hi hoga na tu kya uske man ki baat padhke aai jo tujhe sab pata hai?" and before Rishita would get more enraged to reply, Raavi came with plates calling everyone to have dinner...

After the dinner, while wrapping with the chores she was thinking about how Suman had told her about Shiva's second marriage and that too so easily...she was drowned thinking about how can anyone Gaumbi,Dhara di and for instance even Suman kaki would do such a thing...were they really thinking about getting Shiva married for the second time...and...and would Shiva agree to that...was she so incapable that he would get married to someone else now....one by one she was getting drowned in connecting the dots which had ocurred in front of her today, then she came to her conversation with Dhara di, where all out of sudden Dhara had asked her about why did she leave Shiva and why was he still feeling inferior to her, she then realised that she had used a wrong word,'kamzor" really was wrong word for him but what she meant was, that why couldn't he not confront and talk things out instead of running away, pushing her away and getting angry on her...and also, breaking the ties with her...and just then a simmering voice increased and she came out of her thoughts and when she saw Shiva turning gas off as the boiling milk which had risen up and almost the whole gas was covered with milk, she looked at Shiva in shock...Shiva looked so soft and cute...did he looked like that since beginning or its just a few times she had noticed this...she thought to herself, but then as if coming back to reality, she shrugged her thoughts.

Before he could even utter a word(as he himself was busy gazing her and they as always had cute eye-contact)...she said, "Voh...voh sorry mai...mera dhyan nahi raha..mai saaf kardeti hu" and he still kept looking at her as if she was a wonder, and she got nervous, a cold shiver passed through her spine...when he leaned in and tucked her hair strand behind her ears, as he started coming closer, taking little steps...she kept going backwards and her hand fell on gas which was covered in milk and she hissed as her hand got burnt, it all went red instantly and Shiva's attention fell on her hand so he immediately took her hand and said, "Raavi..dard horaha hai kya...ruk tu...ek kaam kar chal pehle paani mein haath daal" while dragging her through hand near the faucet and running tap water, she held her hand and washed it, then he dragged her to the cot and made her sit, he brought the first aid kit and started applying burnol...as she winced in pain, he hissed and said, "Jalan horahi hai kya?"...to which she still in that drowned thoughts, unknowingly blabbered out, "Mujhe kyu jalan hogi teri dusri shaadi ho ya teesri mujhe usse kya...mai...mai thik hu" and she pulled away her palm from his hands, Shiva still unknown watched her in disbelief, wondering what she had meant.



okay, ik ik its short but i'm too drained out so sorrryyyyyyyyyy but i hope you like this!Happy Reading!!!!



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Posted: 2 years ago
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res

4 mins 

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow 😭😭😭😭 bs ittu sa 

I want next part tomorrow only 🤧🤧🤧



BTW it's amazing😍 ❤

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Ahha...dil ki khawashein puri kardi❤️...

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Posted: 2 years ago
#5

It was cute❤❤

Please continue it

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Jaanu this is nyc.. Tu ointment scene le aayi🥺🥺
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Awww cute! ❤️ At least here Shiva applied ointment to Raavi 😆

Hopefully they will have a conversation and clear things out!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This is a good start. Hopefully, Shiva will try to find out what she meant and will go after her to see why she was effected by it. And the MU can be cleared. Because I don't think Raavi will herself question that.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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YES GIVE ME JEALOUS POSSESSIVE RAAVI WHO ONLY WANTS HER HUBBY SHIVA

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Aww lovely. 

Wish it was longer. 

Do write more. ❤️