FF discussion thread - Page 4

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Dekho malhar bhale hi kalyani ko shaadi karke ghar le aayein

Lekin malhar kein pass ek good reason hona chahiye ki vo kyun kalyani ke saath iss relation ko aagein nahi chatha when kalyani realised her feelings and confessed it 

Mere hisaab se Malhar ko 30 tak ka rakhna chahiye usmein uskien paas do teen saal ka job experience bhi hoga jismein settle hote hi Malhar ki family uski shaadi karwane ki sochti hai 

Vo sampada ko select kar lete hai uskein liye and they both got engaged though Malhar pehle se hi thoda reserved type hota hai but still vo iss shaadi ko ache se nibhane ki sochta hai but at last moment sampada bhaag jati hai

And that can work ki vo shaadi ya pyaar vagehra main believe nahi rakhta we always show ki kalyani ki journey kaisi rahegi iss baar malhar ke emotions ko explore karte hai 

  That will be like repetition of real story as well as tumhare hi story na 

Originally posted by: Phlo004

priyu ye idea hi hum continue kar rahe hai bata kaisi lag rahi hai 

Tune Malharji k emotions ko explore karne ka kahkar hi Mera dil jeet liya..

Haye Mere Malharji 

Kitni depth thi inke character me..

But nalayak CVs kabhi kuch achha dikha hi nahi paaye…

But mujhe tum logo se bahut ummid hai..

then he can have a chota past too which makes him feel nobody would love him as such 

not like third angle or vamp

ias training ke samay he had a thing for a friend and felt she has it for him too 

since he is that studious perfect gentleman like character he hesitated   by the time he decided to ask for he understood she was in love with another friend of thers and they were couple for a long and they didnt even tell him 

so inferiority complex thoda rakh sakthe he

 That's enough

And not every one would have thought of shaadi and settlement

Malhar ka focus nahi tha ek settled life pe 

And 

Ajanak se ek din kallu aaya 

He married her doesn't mean he should feel it like that immediately

And mujhe kallu ka confessions bhi jaldi nahi cahiye 

She feels but doesn't want to tell him until he feels bass 

Certain people aise bhi he 

Jisne socha nahi he about settled married life  

Kuch ko unke career and all syada maine rakthe he 

Upparse 

He can feel ye job bhi easy nahi he like life or threat he 

Many army men say no to Marraige as they feel their life is momentary

And their wife may suffer if they die soon 

So even police is not an easy job 

It's just like Malhar doesn't like being too emotionally attached to anyone or anything

He feels he may loose them or if something happens to him unhe bhi sad hoga  

Like he saw the death of kallu ka dead it could have been him too 

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Certain people aise bhi he 

Jisne socha nahi he about settled married life  

Kuch ko unke career and all syada maine rakthe he 

Upparse 

He can feel ye job bhi easy nahi he like life or threat he 

Many army men say no to Marraige as they feel their life is momentary

And their wife may suffer if they die soon 

So even police is not an easy job 

It's just like Malhar doesn't like being too emotionally attached to anyone or anything

He feels he may loose them or if something happens to him unhe bhi sad hoga  

Like he saw the death of kallu ka dead it could have been him too 

Ok phir main aisa hi kuch likhti hoo 

Iss story ka name Kya rakhein koi bato mujhein 

Originally posted by: Phlo

this reason is perfect gayu 

Ok phir main aisa hi kuch likhti hoo 

Iss story ka name Kya rakhein koi bato mujhein 

Kehne ko Humsafar hai…

Originally posted by: Phlo

this reason is perfect gayu 

Ok phir main aisa hi kuch likhti hoo 

Iss story ka name Kya rakhein koi bato mujhein 

Tere naina saawan bhaado, fir bhi mera man pyaasa

Vanshu.. 

A request 

Pls list down the plot points.. 

Varna hume khud confusion ho jayega. 

Interesting concept

Gayu tera writing padhne ke liye I am excited

Ha mostly positive 

RomCom story rakhte hai

family bonding etc

Di aap jabhi likho yaa koi aur ..

Next chapter main Malhar umar Gao pooch jata hai aur vahan par usskein liye ek samman ceremony hoti hai to vahan par uska swagat kalyani karti hai...

Aur unn dono ki pehli mulaqat thodi khatti mithi rakhana jo bhi likhega 

Aur atul aur Malhar ek gundein ko pakadne vale hote hai jo vahan illegal dhandha karta hai at last malhar caught him but that gunda before running snatch the revolver from officer hand 

And tries to shoot Malhar but atul save him by taking bullet on his chest 

It's totally depend on you whether you all want kalma scenes more before marriage so just make it long or of you want to keep this mission part short jo just finish it in one or two chapters