Ariya Os The Surprise - Page 2

Hey, bloomie, thanks a lot for the pm. This was one of the sweetest, the cutest and the most adorable one shots on Ariya I have read till now. I just loved Arjun's confusion, hesitation, nervousness & his mind talks. Also, loved Riya's family time in Delhi, the glimpses of the day in her household on her birthday. Equally, appreciable are Ariya scenes as well as the one where Riya's father knocked some sense into his daughter's brain. Last but not the least the use & placements of the poetic lines in between the narration & conversations (I don't actually know if these are the lines of any songs or not). 

Originally posted by: naaheean

Hey, bloomie, thanks a lot for the pm. This was one of the sweetest, the cutest and the most adorable one shots on Ariya I have read till now. I just loved Arjun's confusion, hesitation, nervousness & his mind talks. Also, loved Riya's family time in Delhi, the glimpses of the day in her household on her birthday. Equally, appreciable are Ariya scenes as well as the one where Riya's father knocked some sense into his daughter's brain. Last but not the least the use & placements of the poetic lines in between the narration & conversations (I don't actually know if these are the lines of any songs or not). 

it's a song

Main Taare- Movie The notebook

Originally posted by: Shrutu10

This one is the cutest yaar..😍😘

Loved it.. 

And yes please update the long forgotten epilogue...

And start new story soon... Eagerly waiting

Humsafar extra part? ha woh I am not finding time to write. Will do it as soon as I can

Originally posted by: Shrutu10

This one is the cutest yaar..😍😘

Loved it.. 

And yes please update the long forgotten epilogue...

And start new story soon... Eagerly waiting

Humsafar extra part? ha woh I am not finding time to write. Will do it as soon as I can

Fantastic os

Love it

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: bloomie

it's a song

Main Taare- Movie The notebook

Thanks for the information ❤️

Ohh so sweet 

Mindblowing didu

Loved it Sharvi 

Awesome and beautiful😍✨❤ os 

Surprise by Arjun arriving on Riyas birthday was really sweet & thoughtful to give her a hint of his heart 😊 

I really love how ETF was shocked & their reaction on Arjuns leave 😂😂 Aisha is right this was grammatical error Arjun & leave together 🤣🤣 

I loved how poor Arjun turned nervous at her place & proximity 😊 the gift was extremely beautiful😍✨❤ 

Father ne bhi pakad liya i really laughed at innocence of Riya & in last proposal was straight & beautiful😍✨❤

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

Omg it was soooo good. Definitely worth waiting.

I really didn't want story to end. Arjun and Riya were so cute.

I really liked her father character.

Thank you so much for writing this.

Loved it so much.

such a beautiful story ❤️

thanks for pm