KALMA FF- Yahi Rahoge Tum Mujhme (CHAPTER-5 UPDATED 19/10/21)

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PROMO 

Kalyani- kyu kyu kyu....kyu diya dhokha aapne mujhe....itne dino se kyu dhokhe m rakha....hmmm btaiye.....

Malhar- kaly..

Kalyani- kya haa kya.....apne diye huye dhokhe ka justification dena chahte hai.....arey vo to aap denge hi aapka sach jo pta chal chuka hai mujhe 

Malhar- kalyani meri baat to suno....

Kalyani- kya sunu....or bhi kuch bacha hai kya itne dino se sunti hi aa rhi hu or maanti bhi aayi hu....lekin aaj nhi aaj aap sunenge or main bolungi samjhe aap....

Malhar- chup bilkul...ekdum chup or meri baat suno tum 


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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

PROMO 

Kalyani- kyu kyu kyu....kyu diya dhokha aapne mujhe....itne dino se kyu dhokhe m rakha....hmmm btaiye.....

Malhar- kaly..

Kalyani- kya haa kya.....apne diye huye dhokhe ka justification dena chahte hai.....arey vo to aap denge hi aapka sach jo pta chal chuka hai mujhe 

Malhar- kalyani meri baat to suno....

Kalyani- kya sunu....or bhi kuch bacha hai kya itne dino se sunti hi aa rhi hu or maanti bhi aayi hu....lekin aaj nhi aaj aap sunenge or main bolungi samjhe aap....

Malhar- chup bilkul...ekdum chup or meri baat suno tum 


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DID YOU LIKE IT???

PLEASE TELL SHOULD I CONTINUE THIS???

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aee praku it was suspense creating promo 👍🏼

Malhar ne kya dhoka de diya kallu ko hamari yaa kallu ko kuch misunderstanding hui hai 

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Promo looks quite promising, prakriti. 

I just want it to be kalyani's misunderstanding, mj can't give dhoka to kalyani. 

Can't wait to read the update. 

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Nice promo... 

Kya kiya hai iss Malharji ne🤔🤔🤔

Kallu ko kitna gussa😆

👍🏼interesting 

I think Kallu kuch galat samaj baiti hogi.. 😆

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Wow suspense I love it 

Please continue

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Plz continue 👍🏼


Promo looks interesting 


Aisa kya kiya Malharji ne  🧐 
Eagerly waiting to know 


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CHAPTER- 1 

THE TRACK IS AFTER KALYANI FOUND OUT THAT NEITHER MALHAR IS MARRIED TO AVNI NOR HE IS GOING TO HAVE CHILD FROM AVNI....IT WAS OF AHIR 


Note:- here avni's character is positive....ahir didn't died.....kaka after knowing the truth became positive....swara didn't died ( main kbhi nhi chahti thi ki CVs swara ke saath esa krein..par in my story iam keeping her alive) ... Mukku is moksh....( Abhi tak kallu mallu dono ko nhi pta ki mukku moksh hai)....ahir's character is positive....aparna is in negative character ( as usual )....


IN THE HALL (AT AN) 

Everybody was gossiping about avni and malhar.....AS was standing and smirking there.... Deshmukhs and Ranes were in complete shock 

Pallavi- dekho ji....kya mast tamasha dekhne ko mil rha hai n....

Vivek- haa pallavi mujhe to samjh hi nhi aa rha ki hasuu ya inki beizzati karke inko nicha dikhau....

Pallavi- main to kehti hu ki khade hoke mast program ka maza lete hai....arey arey....abhi to kalyani malhar ka drama tu shuru hi nhi hua...inka drama dekhne layak hoga....

VIVEK AND PALLAVI LAUGHED SILENTLY 

KALYANI WAS CONSTANTLY LOOKING AT MALHAR ( with teary eyes)....MALHAR ISN'T ABLE TO MEET HER EYES WAS FACING HIS FACE TOWARDS FLOOR 

Lady 1- aau saheb....esa ek bhi din nhi hota jb AN mein tamasha na ho....or aaj to had se jyada tamasha ho gya...

AS- dekhiye hum samjhte hai pa....

Lady 2- aapka to ye roz roz ka hai....or ye Avni...hunnh....baccha kisi or ka pati kisi or ka.....

Avni was constantly crying....anupriya was consoling her....

Anupriya- Avni dekho tum ro mat....agar tabiyat bigad gyi to bache par asar pdega....

Avni- maai.....

Anupriya- main samjhti hu tumhare dil pe kya beet rhi hai par jo hua vo na hota to behtar tha....

Lady 3-  anupriya ji mujhe to laga tha ki aap avni se nafrat krti hongi kyu ki aapki kalyani ka ghar jo tod diya tha isne...par aap hai ki iski duhaai de rhi hai vaah....

Lady 1- chalo...hum ghar chalte hai.....varna pta nhi aaj or kya kya dekhne ko milega.....

Lady 4- (goes towards sarthak) sarthak ji ab to apni biwi or kalyani se nafrat krna chodd dijiye....5 saal pehle iss ghar m....kalyani malhar ke saath or aapke or Anupriya ji ke saath jo hua....kisi bhayanak yaad se kam nhi tha....5 saal pehle aap logo ne bohot kuch khoya hai or usse guzre bhi hai....par jis tarah se aap inke saath pesh aaye hai...koi paraya bhi esa na kre....apni aankhein kholiye....

SARTHAK WAS JUST STANDING THERE LOWERING HIS EYES 

All the people left the AN gossiping 

AS- vivek...aaj pta hai koi keh rha tha ki dohaaljeevan yahi hoga.....agar nhi hoga to main anupriya ko leke chala jaunga.....

Vivek- haa aao saheb (with this he along with pallavi and AS laughed) 

Sarthak- chalo avni yaha se ( with angry look) 

Sarthak and avni (cryingly) left the AN....

There was a awkward silence in the hall....All the family members were looking towards kalyani and malhar (kalyani still looking towards malhar with mixed emotions) 

MALHAR LEFT THE HALL....(KALYANI WAS WATCHING HIM LEAVING THE HALL) 

Kalyani- mukku.....tu swara aunty ke saath andar ja or tujhe jo khana hai vo meena kumari aunty ko bta dena....vo tujhe bna ke khila dengi.....hmmm.....aai ...swara 

Anupriya and swara understand that what kalyani wanted and hummed in response 

Kalyani POV- aaj saare sawaalo ke jawab dene honge aapko malhar ji fir chahe raat hi kyu na ho jaye...

WITH THIS KALYANI LEFT THE HALL AND SAW MALHAR ROAMING IN FRONT OF THE AN MAIN GATE (inside) 

Kalyani- kaha ja rhe hai aap???

Malhar understood that now he has to face kalyani......

MALHAR TURNED TO HER.....

Kalyani angrily holds his collar with tears in her eyes....

Kalyani- aaj har sawal ke jawab dene honge aapko.....btaiye kyu kiya esa kyu itne time tak mujhe dhokhe m rakha (she was crying) 

Malhar was in tears....HE HAS NEVER SAW HER PAGLI LIKE THIS AFTER WHEN SHE GOT TO KNOW THE TRUTH ABOUT ANUPRIYA , MADHURI AND ATUL. 

Kalyani- main baat kr rhi hu aapse jawab dijiye...malhar rane!!!! Main koi nhi lagti kya aapki???......

Malhar- kalyani plea....

Kalyani- or main bhi bevkuf.....aapki baato pe yakin krti gyi krti gyi.....kaise maine ye maan liya.....(SHE BROKE DOWN....SHE WAS VIGOROUSLY CRYING) 

Malhar- dekho kalyani tumhari tabiyat kharab ho jaye....

Kalyani- arey nahi hai parwaah mujhe meri....or aapko meri tabiyat ka khayal kyu aa rha hai haa.....jb ye jhoot bolte hue aapne mere baare m nhi socha to ab kyu....or bhi kayi jhoot bole honge aapne mujhse.....btaiye.....aaj ye sach bhi aapko btana hoga ki aapne mujhpe goli kyu chalayi....5 saal pehle meri aankho ne jo dekha main usse jhootla nhi skti thi par dil main hamesha se janti thi ki mere malharji mujhpar goli nhi chala skte...jarur koi to baat hogi....par jb aapne itne saalo mein mujhe dhoondne ki koshish nhi ki to ye veham ghar kr gya mere dil mein.....

Malhar- kya kaha tum....tumne maine tumhe dhoondne ki koshish nhi ki....(sarcastically smiling) 

HE STARTED CRYING....HE REMEMBERS ALL THOSE DAYS WHEN HE WAS FRANTICALLY SEARCHING FOR HIS BELOVED KALYANI....HIS KALYANI....HIS PAGLI....HIS LIFE....HIS ONLY HOPE TO LIVE. 

Malhar- kalyani tumhe andaaza bhi kai ki maine tumhe kaha.....

Kalyani- main iss baare m aapse abhi baat nhi krungi...mujhe vishwas ho gya ha ki aapne mujh pr goli nhi chalayi thi....nhi chalayi thi (she was fighting from her emotions..... thousands of thoughts in her mind) kyu ki jo insaan apni mohabbat se aaj bhi bahar nhi nikal paya vo to uspe bandook taan ne par bhi katrayega....

IN KALYANI'S ROOM 

MUKKU WAS SLEEPING AFTER SHE HAD HER MEALS 

Swara- maai aapko kya lagta hai sb pehle ki tarah thik ho jayega???

Anupriya- pta nhi swara....bas bappa se yhi prarthna kr rhi hu ki sb thik ho jaye...or kalyani Malhar mein sulah ho jaye.....dono ek dusre ke bina nhi reh skte hain....dekha tha na tumne kya haalat bna li thi malhar ne kalyani ke jaane ke baad....

Swara- haa maai...bhagwan kre sb pehle ki tarah thik ho jaye....or ye dono ek ho jayein.....ek duje ke bina adhoore hai maai ye dono 

Anupriya- hmm....

Anupriya POV- bappa mere dono baccho ko ek kr do....in dono ne kaafi kuch sahaa pichle 5 saalo mein...ab khushiya aayi hai to inhe vapas mat cheen na 

AT AAU SAHEB' ROOM 

Pallavi- pta nhi aau saheb...ye kalyani malhar ki kya khusur phusur chal rhi hai pakka yhi keh rahi hogi ki tumne dhokha kyu diya ye kyu kiya vo kyu kiya....

Vivek- nhi nhi pallavi...mujhe to lagta hai ki inn dono ki gutur goo chal rhi hogi....

Vivek and Pallavi laughed.....

AS- vivek pallavi 

Vivek- maaf kijiyega aau saheb...

PALLAVI'S SMILE VANISHED DUE TO AAU SAHEB'S SCOLDING 

BACK TO AN'S MAIN GATE (INSIDE) 

Kalyani- btaiye malharji.....inn 5 saal mein saari yaadein bhula di kya meri....itna bada jhoot bolne se pehle ye khayal nhi aaya kya mere dil pe kya beetegi...aapko kisi or ka hote hue dekhne se to acha hai ki main mar ja.......

MALHAR KEPT HIS HAND ON KALYANI'S MOUTH PROHIBITING HER TO SPEAK ANYMORE 

THEY BOTH WERE LOST IN EACH OTHER'S EYES 

BOTH WANTED TO HUG EACH OTHER DESPERATELY BUT DUE TO CONSEQUENCES THEY WERE HESITATING.....

THEY BOTH FIND RELAXATION IN EACH OTHER'S EYES WHICH THEY WERE TRYING TO FIND FROM YEARS AND WAS LOST.....

Malhar- (IN A SLOW VOICE)  please kalyani...ye mat kaho....fir se tumhe nhi khona chahta hu bohot mushkilo se mili ho dobara agar gyi to mere jeene ka koi mtlb nhi hai...tumhare or moksh ke bina kaise bitaye hai ye saal koi nhi jaanta....

Kalyani- to fir bta dijiye na kyu chupayi itni badi baat mujhse (TEARS FLOWED FROM HER EYES)......Bina btaye main jane nhi dungi aapko fir chahe hum buddhe hi kyu na ho jaye....

Malhar smiled due to her talks.....kalyani too smiled seeing her malhar ji 

Kalyani- main sach keh rhi hu main jane nhi dungi aapko....aaj aapko sach btana hoga....vamanji ne ye to nhi kaha tha na ki kalyani ko ye baat mt btana ya fir kisi bhi gharwale ko mt batana....main kuch nhi hu kya aapki??? 

Malhar- tum duniya ho meri.....meri pagli ho tum samjhi....

Kalyani- (SMILING A BIT ) to btaiye apni pagli ko kyu jhoot bola kyu rulaya aapne mujhe.....aapko lagta hai ki main strong hu...nhi hu....nhi hu main strong malharji...ek kaagaz ke tukde ki tarah kamzor hu samjhe aap....or ye bolne m mujhe koi sharam nhi aati....malharji dekhiye kaafi time ho gya hai aapne tbse kuch nhi btaya mujhe....chaliye ab jaldi jaldi bolna shuru kijiye....quick ....fast...asap....

Malhar smilingly and wiping kalyani' tears...kalyani too wiped malhar' tears....IN THE PROCESS THEY BOTH FEEL EACH OTHER'S TOUCH....WHICH WERE MOST SOOTHING TO THEM RIGHT NOW ....

AFTER DROPPING AVNI TO MALHAR'S OLD HOUSE SARTHAK IMMEDIATELY LEFT FROM THERE 

Avni- kaka....Kaka...meri baat.....kaka itni raat ko kaha ja rhe hai...shayad aaj jo kuch bhi hua uski vajah se tensed honge....thodi der baad phone krke pooch lungi....(WITH THIS SHE LOOKED AT HER BELLY AND SAID):- Don't worry baby...jb tak mumma aapke saath hai aapko kuch nhi hone degi.....

She opened the entrance gate of the house and after having her meal she lay down on her bed 

Avni- aaj jo kuch bhi hua usse kalyani or malhar ko bhi bohot bada jhatka laga hoga...mujhe nhi pta ki aage kya hoga par bappa se yhi vinti krungi ki jo bhi acha ho...agar kalyani malhar fir se ek hona chahte hai to main unhe interrupt nhi krungi...mujhe koi problem nhi hai....

Saying this her eyes got heavy....she fall down asleep. 

In AS room 

As- jaao tum dono yaha se hmare sone ka samay ho gya hai....

VIVEK AND PALLAVI LEFT THE ROOM  

AS POV- Samjh nhi aa rha ki khush ho ya fir....uss insan ne hamare vansh ka chiraag cheen liya.... iske liye to hum use ka hi maaf nhi krenge....par dekha jaye to galti kahi n kahi hamari hi thi agar nal ko humne bhagne ke liye nhi kaha hota to esa kbhi nhi hota....hume baat krni hi hogi...

WITH THIS SHE RETIRED TO HER BED AND GOES TO SLEEP

Malhar- chalo mere saath....

Kalyani- malharji raat ke 10 baj rhe hai kaha jana hai...

Malhar- chalo to....

Kalyani- par....

WITH THIS MALHAR TAKES KALYANI WITH HER....  

WHERE WAS MALHAR TAKING HER???

WHAT WILL THEY TALK???

WILL TWO HEART WILL UNITE ONCE AGAIN???

SO HOW WAS THE CHAPTER GUYS....

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interesting promo plzz continue
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very much exicted plz post soon❤❤
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Wow yaar superb update 

Budhhi hone tak wait mat karana jaldi update kar lena 

We never really got such things because swars death 

Please keep updating 

It was so good 

Waiting Malhar kaha leke jaa rahi he kallu ko 🤔🤔🤔 gutur gu keliye toh nahi 🤣🤣