Dev-Raavi OS: Saviour Part 2, pg 2 (finished)

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Posted: 2 years ago

This is not a romantic OS- Please don’t bash me for Dev-Raavi. This is a much needed conversation between the two. If anyone here is a Dev lover, they might not like this one. 


Raavi was sitting on the terrace. Her mami, Anita and maa had arrived just an hour ago. Dhara had strictly told her not to say anything to them. Raavi would have been glad to see them but she was too preoccupied with what happened downstairs sometime back. Rishita insulted her and blamed her about coming between her and Dev. Raavi had zero interest in doing that, but she couldn’t hold back her tears.

She had no interest in Dev. Ever since she saw Dev getting married to Rishita, she gave up on him. She realised he was never hers and the whole thing had just been her dream. Even the beautiful sunset did little to calm her heart. Rishita hurling those false accusations hurt, but what hurt her the most was the truth of it. She really has no love in her life. Raavi, too, had dreams about having a husband who would love her more than everything else, someone who would kiss her in the rain. But those dreams might never come true. 

“Raavi.” 

Raavi looked back to see Dev calling out to her. They never had a conversation alone since his marriage. Why was he here now? If Rishita saw them, she would throw another accusation at Raavi. So she decided to walk away, but Dev held her hand. 

“Mujhe tumse baat karni hai Raavi. Ruk jao.” Dev said. 

“Mujhe koi baat nahi karni Dev.” Raavi said. 

“Main tumse maafi mangna chahta hu abhi jo kuch bhi hua niche uske liye.” Dev said. “Rishita ko aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha. Dekho, woh dil ki buri nahi hai. Bas gusse mein kuch bhi bol deti hai.”

Raavi couldn’t believe Dev was still defending his wife even after everything. Not only did she insult Raavi, she also insulted Dhara di. Dev could have said something then, for his bhabhi atleast. But he was too busy diffusing the situation. He didn’t take a stand for his bhabhi. If it had been Shiva, he would have done something. He wouldn’t have let his bhabhi get insulted. Raavi was sure he wouldn’t let this matter go, he will definitely do something. She trusted him there. 

“Dev, mujhe iss baare mein koi baat nahi karni.”

“Mujhe karni hai. Raavi, ab humare beech mein bhi ek rishta hai. Tum mere chote bhai ki biwi ho.” Dev said. 

“Rishton ki baat na ki jaye toh achha hai. Main bhi toh Rishita ki Devraani hu na, aur Dhara di uski bhabhi. Mujhe choro, par Dhara di toh rishte mein bari hai. Toh Rishita ne yeh sab kaise keh diya?”

“Rishita ko inn rishto ko samajhne mein waqt lagega.” Dev said. “Main tumhara gunehgar hu. Tumhara aur Shiva ka. Meri wajah se tum dono iss rishte mein bandh gaye ho. Agar koi bhi narazagi hai toh woh tumhe mujhse honi chahiye. 

“Dev bas ek baat mujhe samajh nahi aayi.” Raavi asked. “Pandya parivaar iss pure Somnath ki best family hai! Aaj tak unhone kabhi bhi tumhe kisi baat ke liye na nahi kahi, humesha support kiya. Toh tumne unse apne rishte ki baat kyu chupayi?” 

“Rishita ki family... tum toh dekh hi chuki ho. Aur deri karte karte pata nahi kyu par darr lagne laga.”

Raavi didn’t have anything more to say. If he didn’t have the courage to accept Rishita in front of his family, then he probably didn’t even deserve her. She never thought Dev to be a coward. She always thought of him as her saviour. He would save her from Shiva, the villain of her life. But life was funny! The villain of her life saved her from dying. 

“Shiva ne kaha tha ki main tumhe sab bata du, par...” Dev couldn’t continue. “Sab meri galti hai.”  

He was right of course. But Raavi wasn’t mad at him. In fact, she felt nothing towards him. Looking back, she was glad Shiva saved her. It would have been a waste to die for Dev. He didn’t even have the decency to come and check up on her. Instead, all she got was his wife’s humiliation. He didn’t save her then. Perhaps he was never her saviour. She had gotten this whole story wrong. Dev was never her Prince Charming. He was just a side character. 

“Galti toh meri hai jo main bachpan se life ko ek fairy tale maanti aayi. Koi prince, princess, knight in shining armour nahi hota.” Raavi said. “Arrey meri toh mere story ke villain se hi shaadi ho gayi.”

“Shiva villain nahi hai Raavi.” Dev said. “Ho sakta hai wohi tumhara prince ho.”

“Nahi Dev. Ab mujhe koi prince nahi chahiye. Mujhe toh reality ka saamna karna parega.”

“Raavi, tumhare maasi ki wajah se humare dad ki death hui thi. Aur Shiva isi wajah se tumse aise behave karta aaya hai. Par trust me, Shiva dil se tumse nafrat nahi karta.” Dev tried to make her understand. If Shiva-Raavi got together, it would ease up his conscience a little. “Ab woh tumhara pati hai. Aur mujhe apne bhai pe pura vishwaas hai ki woh iss shaadi toh puri imaandari se nibhayega. Tum dono ka rishta toh humesha se special raha hai Raavi. Tum use samajhti ho, tumhe bas use kaise samjhana hai woh sikhna parega. Then trust me, Shiva tumhara Prince Charming banke dikhayega.”

Raavi didn’t say anything more. Could Shiva ever be her Prince Charming? He certainly wasn’t her villain anymore. And Raavi knew, however rude he was, no matter how many pranks he played on her, he would never hurt her intentionally. At least not like Dev. If Shiva had been in Dev’s place, he would’ve told everyone about Rishita two years back, and he would have dealt with Janardhan too. She didn’t know why she was comparing both the brothers. It was wrong to compare two people. But turns out, Dev wasn’t the man she thought he was. She realised that she respected Shiva way more than she respected Dev. Shiva was her kind of person.

Suddenly, Raavi had this desire to be with Shiva. She smiled at Dev and rushed towards her own bedroom.


Should I write a bonus Shivi part after this?

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Posted: 2 years ago

Ah loved it!!! Yes please do give us a ShiVi scene!! We def need it after nothing today! Very well written!! ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

For once, Dev did somet right!!


And yes, please! Do you even have to ask. Would lovebi is ShiVi part!

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Posted: 2 years ago

Lovet it.  Would love to read next shivi scenes 

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Posted: 2 years ago

OS mein hi sahi, Devi kisi kaam aaya!! 😆


I really liked it. Yes, to ShiVi part, please!! 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice update 👏 thank you 🙏

To answer your question, yes... definitely yes! 🥰

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice one! Finally some good dialogues from Dev's mouth

nice to see raavi finally understand shiva somewhat

Would love a ShiVi scene next!

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Posted: 2 years ago

An OS without Shiva feels incomplete. So here’s a Shivi part for all of you. 


Raavi found her husband in their bedroom. He was still sweating from working on those logs. With one swift motion, he removed his t-shirt and Raavi looked at his shirtless body. She had never known he looked this hot without a shirt. Maybe, if he had been nicer to her in his childhood, she would have fallen in love with him, instead of Dev. Things would have worked out perfectly fine. 

“Ghoor kya rahi hai?” Shiva asked. 

Raavi looked down and wondered if she would tell him what happened today. Dhara bhabhi had said no but she really wanted to tell Shiva everything. But she also knew telling him would be a mistake. He would definitely react, and his reaction would be extreme. Her husband not only had the name of Shiva, but he also possessed the anger of Shiva. And did she really want to drag the matter further? No, she just wanted peace. 

“Ab aise statue ki tarah kyu khari hai?”

She could let go of her humiliation, but not Dhara Di’s. Shiva had a right to know that, but Dhara di wouldn’t appreciate her telling Shiva everything. Raavi was never good at keeping secrets. She felt like her stomach would burst if she didn’t tell everything to Shiva. Maybe she could vent her feelings and not tell him anything about the incident. 

“Ae maami ki behen ki beti, coma mein chali gayi hai kya?”

Raavi saw him move closer towards her and she got a good look at his body. Okay, it was too distracting. She would forget everything if he didn’t put a shirt on. What was happening to her nowadays? Why couldn’t she stop staring at him?  

“Tu pehle shirt pehenle phir baat karungi.” Raavi turned to the side so as to avoid looking at him. 

“Mann nahi hai. Baat karni hai toh aise kar warna mat kar.”

“Tu na ek number ka gadhera hai. Samajh nahi aa raha important baat karni hai?”

“Toh bol na.”

Leave it on Shiva to make matters tough. She took a long breath to calm herself down. Dev had told her to think of a way to make Shiva understand her, and Raavi knew it would only work if she was calm herself. If Raavi wasn’t careful, Dev and Rishita would receive the worst of his temper. And for Dhara di’s sake, she didn’t want any arguments in the family. After all, Dev was still Shiva’s brother, and Rishita was still their bhabhi. 

“Rishita ne aaj Dhara di aur meri insult ki.” Raavi said. “Dhara di ne mujhse promise karwaya tha ki main kisi ko kuch na bolu. Par mujhse control nahi hua. Isiliye tu thoda thand rakh aur gussa mat karna.”

“Ab kya kiya usne?” Shiva asked. 

So Raavi narrated the entire incident. How she had walked up on them kissing and how Rishita insulted her and accused her of creating problems between her and Dev. How Dhara di had defended her, but got insulted by Rishita again. 

“Dhara di nahi chahti ki koi aur jhagda ho iss ghar mein. Especially maa ke saamne. Toh tu gussa mat karna.”

But Raavi could already see the wrath in his eyes. She felt the heat of his anger spreading and she knew if she didn’t contain it, it would burn the entire haveli. “Tujhe Dhara di ki kasam tu Rishita ko kuch nahi kahega.” She know this was the only way she could control his anger, and it worked. His anger was replaced by his love for his bhabhi. 

“Agar react nahi karna tha toh bataya kyu?” Shiva asked. 

“Kyuki mujhe bhi bohot gussa aa raha hai. Uski himmat kaisi hui meri Dhara di ki insult karne ki?” Raavi finally started venting out her feelings. “Main apni insult bhul sakti hu par Dhara di ki nahi. Woh tere liye teri maa jaisi hai, par mere liye bhi woh meri best friend, meri di, meri sabse favourite insaan hai.”

Raavi felt lighter. She had vented out her feelings. Shiva’s gaze softened as he looked at Raavi. He was proud and glad that his Dhara bhabhi had the same place in Raavi’s heart she had in his. But Shiva couldn’t let this matter go. Not only for his bhabhi but for his wife too. How dare Rishita insult either of them? 

“Yeh Rishita itni aasaani se nahi sudhregi. Maine toh pehlei kaha tha Krish se. Iss Ameer baap ki bigdi hui beti ka kuch toh karna parega.”

“Tujhe jo karna hai kar. Bas maa ko aur Dhara di ko kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye.” Raavi said. “Aur tu dekh lena ki woh ameer baap ki bigdhi hui beti aake meri Dhara di se maafi maange.”

“Maafi woh tum dono se maangegi.” Shiva said. 

Raavi smiled. Finally, Shiva proved that he was her real saviour. No, he was everyone’s saviour. How dumb she had been to be in love with Dev all her life? How could she have been so blind? She had misjudged everything right from the very start. Most importantly, she has misjudged Dev. He was a nice person, of course. But her heart didn’t want nice. It wanted passion, and the fierceness only Shiva carried within his heart.

Raavi was overwhelmed with these feelings. Without another thought she wrapped her arms around Shiva. Dev was right! Shiva was her prince. 

“Ae maami ki behen ki beti, paagal ho gayi hai? Chipak kyu rahi hai?”

Raavi broke the hug and looked at him angrily. This prince still needed to learn how to treat his princess. “Tu pehle jaa aur nahake aa. Kitna paseena paseena ho rakha hai.”

“Toh maine kaha tha, aa aake mujhse chudail jaise chipak jaa?” 

“Tere jaise pishaach se toh chudail hi chipke gi na, Deepika thodi chipkegi?” Raavi said. 

“Ae mami ke behen ki beti, jaa jaake mami se chipak. Khoon pi le uska. Mujhe baksh de.”

“Tujhe bakshne ke liye maine tujhse shaadi nahi ki thi. Ab toh tera khoon, sukh, chain sab kuch pi lungi main. Pure saat janmo tak tera khoon piyungi.”

Shiva felt as if she was different today. Her fighting style was different. Why was she hugging him all of a sudden? And why was she talking about saath janam? What was wrong with his maami ki behen ki beti? The sadness and the worry he has been seeing in her face these past few days had all disappeared today. She was looking genuinely happy. 

“Tu kyu ghoor raha hai?”

“Aaj alag lag rahi hai tu.” Shiva said. 

Raavi laughed. She had decided to give this marriage a chance. A real one with all her heart. But she wouldn’t tell this bhootnath just yet. She wanted him to want to give this marriage a real chance too. And for that she needed to make him love and respect her. He needed to see that she was his Raavi, not maami ki behen ki beti anymore. 

“Tu Rishita ko sudhaar. Main tujhe sudhaarti hu.” She thought. 



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Posted: 2 years ago

Thank you!! This is so sweet. Loved it. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Good one 👌 i always loved 'shirtless Shiva and Raavi checking him out' scenes 😍 thank you for updating the second part soon 🙏