SS: NandiniDarsh Sweet Beginnings (part 5 updated)

The show completely went downhill so I decided to write my own version of the wedding sequence post Nandini's return. Hope you guys like it. Please ignore typos I haven't proof read.

Part 1:

Darsh: Nandini are you ok? Tum theek toh ho?

Nandini (in a shaky voice): Haan Saheb

Overwhelmed with emotion she hugs him tight.

Darsh: Nandini it's alright, sab theek hai....hum sab hai na tumhare saath. Tum kahan chali gayi thi? Tum itni ghabrayi hui kyun ho? Batao kya hua?

Meanwhile Rajvee opens shamika's ghungat...(the same thing as the show - skipping typing it all...so please imagine the same).

After listening to Darsh's words about his relationship with Nandini Shamika apologises and walks away.

Rajvee: ab shaadi shuru karein?

Namrata: rukiye! Is ladki se pooch toh lijiye ke kahan thi yeh?

Rajvee: bas namratha ek aur shabd nahi! Varna mujhse bura koi nai hoga....tumhari harkaton ki wajah se aaj Darsh ki poori zindagi barbad hojati! Nandini tumhe kisi ko kuch bhi kehne ki koi zarurat nahi hai!

Namratha: kyun mom...koi isse kyun nahi poochta ke yeh jewellery le kar kahan bhaag gayi thi?

Woh bhaagi nahi thi uska kidnap hua tha...

Everyone turns around to see Charmi.

Shobit was shocked to see her there and so was Gunjan!

Darsh: Kya?

Charmi: haan Darsh bhaiya. Nandini ko woh Moped utha kar legaya tha.

Rajvee: yeh tum kya keh rahi ho?

Nandini: Haan MIL woh moped mujhse zabardasti shaadi karna chahta tha.

Bansuri runs and hugs Nandini

B: Nandu tu theek hai na? Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai ke moped ne....she starts crying.

N: mai theek hun, Jab mai wahan se bhagne ki koshish kar rahi thi tab mujhe charmi behn milgayi aur hum yahan wapis aagaye.

Charmi: Haan nandini ki haalat bohot kharab thi, woh toh bhagwan ka shukr hai ke main waqt se pohonch saki...

Rajvee: par tumhe kaise...tum shaadi ke liye yahan aa rahi thi toh hume bataya kyun nahi?

Charmi: woh auntie actually Shobit aur mai ek dusre se pyaar karte hain....

Everyone was shocked!

Rajvee: kya bakwas hai yeh...agar aisa hota toh shobit mujhe bata deta.

Charmi: usne bohot koshish ki thi par....anyway shobit kuch dino se mera phone nahi utha raha tha mujhse bohot weirdly behave kar rahata tha...phir mujhe ek engagement ring mili aur pata chala ke woh Goa main hai....mai yahan aagayi aur phir maine dekha ke shobit ki is Gunjan se shaadi ho rahi hai....

Is Gunjan ko pata tha ke mai aur shobit ek dusre she pyaar karte hai....

Shobit: kya? Gunjan ko pata tha? Kaise...charmi please stop aage kuch mat kaho..

Ch: please shobit mujhe bolne do...mai tumhari shaadi hote hue nahi dekh sakti aur woh bhi is ladki ke saath

Naveen: oh behn! Kya matlab hai aapka?

Ch: meri poori baat suniye phir aap bhi samajh jayenge. Jab mai yahan gunjan se milkar apne room mein ja rahi thi...tab maine Vanlatha auntie aur Gunjan ki baate sun li thi, unhone kaha tha ki shobit aur gunjan ki shaadi karvane ke liye woh koi bhi had tak ja sakti hain aur woh Nandini ko raaste se hata sakti hai toh main unke liye kya cheez hun?

Naveen: Ba kya yeh sach hai? KYA yeh sach hai?

Vanlatha: Are yeh ladki jhoot bol rahi hai...ay ladki tu kuch bhi bolegi aur hum maan lenge.

Charmi: mai sach keh rahi hun...isliye mai jaan gayi thi ke nandini koi musibat mein pad sakti hai, aur mein alert rehne lagi, Jab Nandini aur gun parlour gaye tab mai wahan pohonchi thi Nandini ko sachai batane ke liye....lekin tab tak Nandini kisi car mein baith chuki thi, lekin Darsh bhaiya ke driver wahin the...phir Gunjan wahan se nikli aur vanlatha auntie se phone pe keh rahi thi ke kaam hogaya hai...ab nandini mandap tak nahi pohonch paayegi. Maine phir nandini ka peecha karna shuru kiya tha...moped uske saath zabardasti karne ki koshish kar raha tha...par nandini bhaag nikli thi....maine use apne gaadi mein bithaya aur hum wahan se bhaag nikle.

Naveen: GUNJAN!

G: pappa yeh jooth bol rahi hai...papa please meri baat ka yakeen karo pappa, yeh sirf meri shaadi rokna chahti hai...she moves to shobit and begs him...shobit yeh sab sach nahi hai...

Shobit: Just shut up Gunjan!

Charmi: mai jaanti thi aap log meri baat ka vishwaas nahi karenge...is liye maine video bhi liya tha...Gunjan ke phone call ka...aur ek aur video Nandini ka jab woh moped se picha chuda kar bhaag rahi thi. Dekhiye...everyone sees the videos and are very shocked.

Gunjan: pappa maine kuch nahi kiya yeh sab kuch BA ka idea tha.

v: ay tu hosh mein toh hai kya bole ja rahi hai?

G: Ba aap hi ne toh kaha tha ke aap meri shaadi ek ameer ladke se karvaingi aur agar shobit milgaya toh pappa bhi aapse naraaz nahi rahenge!

V: tu chupkar...

Naveen: bas bohot ho chuka...koi mujhe sach batayega ke nahi...Rajvee behen ne Gun ke liye yeh rishte kaise bheja? SACH BOL?

V and G are scared they don't say anything.

Rajvee: mai batati hun jab main Nandini ka rishta lekar aapke ghar aayi thi toh inhone meri bohot beizzati ki thi aur mana kardiya tha...maine bohot samjhane ki koshish ki ke nandini aur darsh ek dusre ko pasand karte hain par inhone mujhe jaane ko kaha. Thodi der baad inhone hi yeh shart rakhi ke Nandini aur Darsh ki Shaadi tab hi ho sakti hai jab gun ki shaadi shobit se ho...darsh ki khushiyon ki khaatir maine shobit se baat ki aur woh maan gaya...mujhe charmi ke bare mein kuch nahi pata tha. Mujhe laga ke shobit ko sach mein Gunjan achi lagi...yeh main kya karne ja rahi thi! She starts sobbing....

Darsh: mom aapne sach mein shobit ka rishta meri wajah se tai kiya? Kyun ma?

Aur shobit tu? Tune haan kaise ki...maine tujhse poocha tha na...how could you? Tu apne aapko bohot mahan samjhta hai? Mere liye apni puri life daw par lagane chala tha?

Shobit: I'm sorry bhai, aapko nandini ke saatha itna khush dekh kar main aur kuch nahi soch paya...aapne kaha tha ke aap Nandini se apni dil ki baat kabhi nahi karenge...par main aap dono ko milana chahta tha.

Darsh: Tujhe kya laga ke jab mujhe aur nandini ko yeh baat pata chalti toh kya hum khush reh paate? Shaadi koi khel nahi hai...

Aur tum Gunjan...How dare you...maine pehle hi kaha tha ke agar kisi ne mere bhai ko sataya toh mai use chodunga nahi...aur tumne toh ab hadd hi kardi tumne sirf shobit ko hi nahi balki meri nandini ko bhi hurt kiya hai....tumhe toh main police ke hawale karunga...

Gun: pls mujhe maaf kardo yeh sab BA ka kiya dhara hai....pappa please bacha lo...

SLAP!

Naveen slaps Gunjan really hard for what she tune aaj mujhe kahin bhi muh dikhane ke layak nahi choda...ghin aa rahi hai aapne aap pe ke meri beti aisi hai...ghalat toh tu pehle se thi par itna gir jaayegi maine kabhi nahi socha tha.

V: Naveen zara shaant hoja...

N: CHUP! Tum dono ka bohot ho chuka...meri maa aur meri beti ne itna bada khel racha....chee!

He turns towards the rawal family and apologises to everyone....ab mai dekhta hun tu shobit se shaadi kaise karegi...aaj yahan teri shaadi nahi hogi.

Gun: pappa pls

N: mat bol mujhe pappa...tera pappa teri wajah se jeete ji mar gaya!

Just then Bansuri walks over and slaps Gun

Tumne itni ghatiya harkat ki, agar nandini ko kuch hojata toh? Aur BA aap? Aap kaun hoti hain Nandini ki shaadi tai karne wali...nandini khud apna faisla le sakti hai...aur nandini ke behn zinda hai....hum dono ek dusre ka pariwar hai...isme aap kahan se aagayi uspar shart lagane? Aap kaun hoti hai uska rishta karne wali? Aur Rajvee behn aap...aap inki baaton mein aagayi? Aapne ek baar bhi mujhse ya nandini se poochne ki koshish nahi ki? Nandini Darsh saheb ko pasand karti hai...woh shaadi ke liye kabhi mana nahi karti...use toh yakeen hi nai ho raha tha ke Darsh saheb jaise insaan ka rishta uske liye aa sakta hai...

Rajvee: haan tum theek keh rahi ho bansuri...maine kuch socha hi nahi main kisi bhi haal mein yeh rishta karwana chahti thi.

Vanlathaji aapko aur aapki is granddaughter ko toh jail bhej dena chahiye...pehle toh aapne humare ghar ek jhooti ladki bheji maine aapse kuch nahi kaha Nandini ki wajah se lekin ab aur nahi aap dono ne saari hadein paar kardi....filhal toh mai police ko nahi bula rahi hun...mai naveen bhai ko aur takleef mein nahi daalna chahti. Lekin agar aap dono ne bhool kar bhi kuch aur kiya toh mujhse bura koi bhi nahi hoga!

Aap logon ko paise chahiye na...maang lete hum nandini aur darsh pe se waar ke aapko de dete magar itni gandi chaal chalne ki kya zarurat thi?

Nandini: kaki mujhe toh pehle hi samajh jana chahiye tha jab aap mujhse big behn ke dahej ke liye mujhe blackmail kar rahi thi, lekin main bhi kitni bewakoof thi maine socha ke big behn ki khushiyon ke liye mai woh sab karlungi aur maine yeh nahi socha ke aap jaise lalchi aurat ke saath meri big behn kaise khush reh sakti hain? Lekin big behn Naveen bhai ko pasand karti thi na is liye mai chup rahi aur dahej ka saman ban kar main yahan chali aayi! Mujhe tab bhi samajh nahi aaya jab aapne Darsh saheb ke saath dhoka kiya...maine toh iljam bhi apne sar leliya....aur aapne and gun behn ne kya kiya? Mera aur big behn ka faida utha ti rahin? Mera sauda us moped saath kardiya....cheee....meri jagah agar Gun behn hoti aur humne yeh sab kiya hota toh? Kaki maine aapse baar baar poocha tha ke Malkin gun behn ke liye rishta kaise de sakti hai....aur aapne itna jhooth bola aapko sharam nahi aayi?

Naveen: nandini beta main haath jod kar in dono ki taraf se tujhse maafi maangta hun...mujhe sach mein yeh sab nahi maloom tha...maaf karde mujhe...ab mohurat ka waqt nikla ja raha hai...

Dadaji: yeh baaki ke drame hum baad mein karsakte hain....ab shaadi ki shuruat karen?

Shobit: ek minute mera kya?

Rajvee: tu khushi mana tu bach gaya...hum teri aur charmi ki shaadi karwaenge dhoom dhaam se...lekin aaj nahi....aaj Darsh aur Nandini ko phere lene do...

Shobit: thank you mom....thank you charmi...tum yahan nahi aati to...thank you...

He hugs rajvee and then charmi...

Rajvee: arey! Nandini, Darsh tum dono ready ho

Darshini: hum toh kab se ready hain!

Everyone laughs...

They proceed towards the mandap ( wedding sequence same as the show with the same vows).

To be continued

Precap: Moped's revenge

It's indeed mind blowing FF. 

Really I love how charmee confronts Vanlata and Gunjan both. If like this would be happen in the show then I must say show would go well. 

Ending also good how they share sweet moments😳

Please keep writing🤗

Wish it happens like that in the show

Butchered and murdered the story like anything there 

Please do continue 

Would love to read more 

We have to adjust by imagining the show with ffs and ss. No hopes on CVs to bring the show back.

If they keep on following original, can’t bear to watch that crap

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

It's indeed mind blowing FF. 

Really I love how charmee confronts Vanlata and Gunjan both. If like this would be happen in the show then I must say show would go well. 

Ending also good how they share sweet moments😳

Please keep writing🤗

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Swetyz

Wish it happens like that in the show

Butchered and murdered the story like anything there 

Please do continue 

Would love to read more 

We have to adjust by imagining the show with ffs and ss. No hopes on CVs to bring the show back.

If they keep on following original, can’t bear to watch that crap

I completely agree. Imagination can only help.

I didn't watch the show after the wedding so, not sure which rituals happened, so just writing what was shown in the precap.

Ps: I do not mean any disrespect towards the visually impaired when I use harsh or rude words...I'm just writing from the character and perspective of the villains.

Part 2:

Nandini and Darsh both gave a sigh of relief as finally after all the drama their wedding was complete. Both of them were elated.

Darsh: Finally humari shaadi hogayi!

N: Haan mai toh bohot ghabra gayi thi ke agar shaadi nahin hui toh? Par koi nai, ho to gayi na.

D: nahi hoti? Aisa chance hi nahi tha!

Bansuri: arey arey ab baatein baad mein kar lena abhi bohot rasme hain.

She gets emotional Nandu mai tere liye bohot khush hun.

Rajvee clears her throat....Bansuri abhi tumne hi kaha tha na ke baatein baad mein...ab chalo

Nandini and Darsh performed some rituals together. Darsh gave each one a romantic twist.. which left everyone in awe of the couple.

Shobit: bhai aap itne romantic hain hume toh pata hi nahi tha...

Charmi: shobit tum bhi humari shaadi par yeh sab karoge na? Darsh bhaiya kitne romantic hain! Kuch seekho unse.

Everyone laughs

Rajvee: waise mujhe nahi pata tha ke tune itni zyada research ki hai shaadi ki rasmo par

Darsh: ma come on, meri help ke liye shoni hai na...aur waise nandini bohot zyada nervous thi...aur woh bohot special hai is liye uske liye kuch special karna hi tha uski nervousness kam karne ke liye.

Rajvee: woh toh hai, theek hai ab hum tumhari taang aur nahi kheechenge.

Agli rasm anghooti ki rasm hai...

D: pata hai ma...jisko anghoothi milegi ghar par uska raaj hoga...

N: ek minute, yeh theek nahi hai, inhe toh anghooti dhoondne mai ek minute bhi nahi lagega...mai hi haar jaungi...

D: yeh kya baat hui?

N: yahan par sabse zyada tez, woh english mai kya kehte hain? Haan senses aapke hai...aapko toh angoothi ek second me mil jayegi.

D: nahi nandini, tum start to karo

N: nahi! She folds her hands and pouts...

Rajvee: meri bahu kitni cute hai...chalo nandini ab bachon jaise zidd mat karo aur khel shuru karo...mere darsh se ab aur wait nahi ho raha hai..

Suddenly Darsh splashes his hand in the bowl...sending water droplets everywhere...everyone was stunned for a second.

D in a loud voice: NANDINI START KARO

N: she stares at him in shock so does everyone else

D starts laughing: tumhe mere gusse se dar lagta hai na...agar tumne start nahi kiya toh mujhe sach mein gussa aajeya ga...

N: theek hai pressure cooker ki tarah phat mat jaye ab, ghussa kumar

D: ab yeh kya naya naam hai?

She twists her face at him and says theek hai mai start karti hun

She puts her hand inside the bowl...only to meet his fingers...that touch sent shivers down her spine. His touch was so loving and gentle, slowly he places his palm over the back of her hand and leads her hand towards the ring...together they pull it out.

Rajvee has happy tears while Dadaji and others were beaming ear to ear. Vipul and Chetan felt guilty for judging nandini. Vipul was now convinced that both of them are made for each other....he felt so awkward and uncomfortable thinking of his behaviour towards Nandini.

D: dekha humne saath mein ring nikaal li...hum dono jeet gaye.

Nandini beamed with happiness only she understood the meaning of what he had done. Both of them had their insecurities and both thought they weren't good enough for the other. But now Nandini understood what he tried to convey to her...both of them would fill the gap for the other, life was not going to be easy but together they would make it worth it, and work towards every obstacle that came their way.

Nandini was so overwhelmed that happy tears flowed down her cheek...she had unexpectedly found love....something she thought she wasn't prepared for...it just happened and it was so beautiful.

Meanwhile:

Raging with anger moped swore to make Nandini his....after he recovered from the shock of the fire and Nandini's escape he decided to reach the wedding venue. Fuming with anger he wasn't able to think...but as he walked towards the Rawal resort wrapped in a shawl he heard a few ladies gossiping:

Arey bechare andhe se kaun shaadi karta...woh toh mandap pe bhi akela reh gaya....kisne sochta tha ke ladki bhaag jayegi ( these were some aunties who had walked out of the wedding earlier, when Nandini was missing).

Moped was shocked at first then turned delusional with happiness...Nandu mujhe pata tha ke tu mere saath aisa nahi karegi....tu mujhe dhoka nahi de sakti...mai aa raha hun tere paas...(with an ugly smirk).

He reached the resort but was barely able to see anything....soon to his relief he saw Rakla walking towards the gate....

Ay rakla, rakla sun...

Rakla (thinking): ab yeh kahan se aagaya...agar Rawals ne mujhe iske saath dekh liya, mera toh kaam bigad jaaega. He was thinking how to avoid moped...but moped kept yelling his name....rakla came out and pulled moped to a corner...kya chahiye tujhe?

Moped: nandini chahiye

Rakla: nandini thi na tere paas phir kyun nahi sambhala use?

Moped: woh bohot chalak hai, aag laga kar bhaag gayi....par tu yeh sab chod, Maine suna nandini us andhe ko chod kar bhaag gayi..and he starts laughing like a mad man....main bohot khush hun.

Rakla: oh bhai tu apne dimaag ka screw kahin kho kar aaya hai kya?

Moped: nahi, mai bohot khush hun nandini ne mujhe dhoka nahi diya.

Rakla (thinking): ise kaun batayega ke andar itni love story wali shaadi hui hai)

Moped: mai nandini ko lene aaya hun, bol na bhai kahan hai meri nandu?

Rakla (thinking): tujhe kaise bolun tujhe nandini sirf khwaab mei hi milegi, waise woh andha jitna seedha dikhta hai na...uthna hi tedha ho jata hai agar uske apno ko kuch hua toh....kya aisa risk lena theek hoga?

Moped: bolna bhai?

Rakla: theek hai tu idhar ruk mai nandini ko kuch bahana karke yahan lata hoon tu use lekar bhaag ja....mai tere piche aata hun taaki is baar tu koi gad bad na kare.

Moped: theek hai theek hai jaldi la na meri Nandu ko

Rakla walks off...

A few minutes later

Moped sees a bride standing near a tree. He grabs her from the back and closes her mouth so she doesn't yell...he wasn't going to make any mistake this time.

He sees Rakla who gives him a thumbs up.

Moped makes her sit in the car, rakla follows on a bike, they reach a secluded cottage...

Moped: Dekha nandu maine kaha tha na ke tera Darsh saheb kuch nahi kar sakta. Ab toh humari shaadi hone se koi rok nahi sakta...

The bride kicks him

Moped: ay zyada haath pair mat chala samjhi? Bus bohot hua tera natak kabse bole ja raha hoon ke mai tujhse pyaar karta hun! Samajh nai aata kya tujhe...

He gets another kick...ab bohot hua! He pulls open the ghungat only find

GuNJAN! Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai....Nandini kahan hai.

Rakla: Nandini apne pati ke saath resort mein romance kar rahi hai...

Moped: rakla yeh tune acha nahi kiya!

Rakla: maine kya kiya? Nandini teri chungal se bhaagi thi, mere nahi, aur waise bhi tu Nandini ke sapne dekhna band kar...woh tujhe milne se rahi....isi se kaam chala le warna kunwara reh jayega zindagi bhar.

Moped: bakwas band kar apni.

Rakla: soch le moped...mai ise lekar wapis ja sakta hun.

Gunjan was struggling to free herself.

Moped: waise baat toh tune sahi ki hai. Us vanlatha se badla lene ka yahi ek tareeka hai.

In dono ne milke mere saath dhoka kiya, woh jhooti aurat ne mera paisa saaf karliya...nandini se shaadi ka wada karke...yeh jhooti ladki bhi mujhe uksati gayi...taaki iski shaadi us rawal ke chote chokre se ho jaye...jhooti aurtein, aur kitna girogi tum dono....mere paise toh wapis aane se rahe ab uski wasooli mai tujhse karoonga!

Rakla to gun: ab dikha apne malkin hone ka rob?

Gunjan tune mujhse panga le ke acha nahi kiya! Pehle toh mai is moped ka saath de raha tha taki nandini aur darsh ki shaadi tooti toh teri bhi toot jayegi....tera us ghar mein hona mere liye khatra tha...tu meri saari mehnat par paani pher deti...woh acha hua ke woh charmi behn yahan aagayi.

Phir maine socha ke woh Nandini aur Darsh to ek dusre se chumbak ki tarha chipke hain...woh toh alag hone nahi wale...aur mujhe un dono se koi dushmani nahi hai....tere kehne par maine Nandini ko cheda aur use sataya...mujhe laga main Darsh ki wajah se jail gaya...par woh hero toh sirf apni heroine ko bacha raha tha...un dono ki nahi...teri galati thi...tere kehne par sab hua...Nandini bhi mujhe teri wajah se hi daanti thi. Par nirali aur meri shaadi ke baad unhone mere saath kuch nahi kiya...arey woh nandini tera rishta bachane ke liye mere paas aayi thi....aur tu kya karne chali thi...mai bohot kamina hoon par tujh jaisa gira hua nahi hoon. Ab tere saath shaadi kaun karega....ek toh tu mere saath bhaag gayi thi, ab woh shobit ne bhi tujhe mandap par chod diya....ab tera bechara baap kya karega...tu moped se shaadi kar hi le...tere paas koi aur rastaa nahi bacha...

To be continued

Precap: Moped begins the wedding rituals

Part 3:

Gunjan: Moped pls mujhe jaane do....tu nandini se pyar karta hai na toh uske paas ja...mujhe jaane de

Moped: arey aise kaise jaane doon? Tune aur us budhiya ne bola tha na ke tum dono kisi bhi haal mein Nandini aur Darsh ki shaadi nahi hone doge toh phir kyun nahi roka? Iski saza toh tujhe milegi.

Rakla: dekh gun tu kuch waqt tak mere saath thi is liye tujhe samjha raha hoon...apni izzat bachane ke liye yahi rasta hai tere paas...tera baap toh ab tujhe apne ghar mein rakhne wala nahi hai....voh vanlatha kaki bhi kuch nahi karsakti woh toh saanp ki tarah hai sirf apna hi matlab dekhti hai...woh kya tera saath degi...teri woh nayi ma Bansuri woh toh apni behen ka badla tujhse legi....meri baat maan...moped se shaadi karle...hum sab ko yahi batayenge ke tu aur moped ek dusre se pyar karte the par vanlatha kaki ke kehne par tum shobit se shaadi kar rahi thi...phir kam se kam samaaj me kisi ko toh muh dikhane ke kabil rahegi.

Gun: tum dono mere saath acha nahi kar rahe ho...mai tum dono ko chodungi nahi...

Moped: rakla tu jaake pandit ko bula la...isse toh aaj mai shaadi karke hi rahunga.

Moped thinking:

A while ago (flashback)

Rakla: moped zara yahan aa...he takes him to a side...sun meri baat..agar tu yeh shaadi karlega toh Rawals yahi samjhenge ke tu sach mein Nandini se pyar nahi karta aur kaki ke kehne par natak kar raha tha...tera hi fayda hai, unki nazrein tujh par se hat jayengi, police volice ka chakkar bhi nahi hoga...tera badla bhi pura hojayega aur toh aur tu Nandini tak bhi baad mein pohonch sakta hai...is gun ko mohra banakar....tu toh jaanta hai nandini apni big behn ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai....

Moped: sahi keh raha hai tu aisa toh maine socha hi nahi.

Rakla (thinking): acha hua yeh bewakoof maan gaya....ek teer se do nishaane...ek toh yeh moped apna muh khol kar mera naam nahi lega....aur yeh gunjan bhi mere raaste se hat jayegi. Ab moped sambhale us musibat ko.

Back to the present moment:

Gunjan felt helpless for a second she thought about how Nandini would have felt when moped was forcefully trying to marry her. But on second thoughts Rakla was right her father would never let her out of the house again....she wouldn't be accepted and in a small town like hers gossip spreads too soon...the only way out sounds like this wedding. She wished her scheming grandmother was by her side to help her out. No amt of manipulation would work now....so she made a decision

Gun: moped mai is shaadi ke liye tayyar hun.

Moped: man gayi? Chalo acha hai ab zabardasti nahi karni padegi.

Rakla (thinking): teri yahi baat mujhe bohot achi lagti hai ke tu bina soche meri har baat maan leti hai...

Rakla gets a pandit and the wedding takes place.

Back at the resort - Nandini and Darsh's bedroom:

Nandini is sitting on the bed waiting for Darsh. He comes and sits by her side. He snaps his fingers and as always she clinks her bangles and they both start laughing. Darsh reaches out and lifts her ghungat. She looks up at him, her heart bursting with emotions....

N: Darsh saheb ek baat bolun?

D: tum kuch bhi bol sakti ho par pehle yeh sahib bulana band karo pls. My name is Darsh

N: arey aise kaise? Hume sharm aati hai

D: oho ab tumhe mera naam kehne mein sharam aati hai? Par jab tum mujhe gyaan kumar, lafanga, chor, pressure cooker, gussa kumar bulati ho tab tumhari yeh sharam kahan chali jaati hai...?

Nandini laughs...theek hai Hari Prasad...

D: come on Nandini not now!

N: hehehe theek hai theek hai...waise aaj aapne mere liye itna sab kuch kiya mera din special banane ke liye toh mai itna toh kar hi sakti hun...mere pyare Darsh Saheb!

D: Phir se? Tum mujhe chidha rahi ho? Koi apne pati ko aise shaadi ke din chidhata hai kya? Yeh tumhare romance ka idea tha? Phone pe toh badi badi baatein kar rahi thi...mujhe pata tha woh sab tum aise hi keh rahi thi....

Suddenly he felt a soft peck on his cheek...before he could relish in its warmth it was over....it was something he never felt before.

N: Darsh....thank you aan

D: beaming from ear to ear...kis baat ke liye? Waise welcome aan....aur thank you aan

N: ab kaun apni patni ko chidha raha hai? Aur aap thank you kyun keh rahe hai...

D: kyunki jab tum nahi aayi na tab mai bohot dar gaya tha Nandini, tumhe khone ke baare mein soch bhi nahi sakta...

N: waise mai bhi bohot dar gayi thi...she cups his face in her hands...maine kaha tha na ke mai bohot darpok hoon, par aap jaante hai...pehle mai dar gayi thi, phir meri aakhon ke saamne aapka chehra aaya aur mujhe aapke paas aana tha...is liye mai us Moped se lad padi aur wahan se bhaag aayi...

D: us moped ko toh mai chodunga nahi uski himmat kaise hui tumhe haat lagane ki.

Nandini: sshh mujhe uska naam bhi nahi sunna hai...waise agar mai waqt par nahi aati toh aap us shamika se shaadi karlete aur mera kya hota?

D: aise kaise karleta? Uska haath pakadte hi mujhe pata chal gaya ke woh tum nahi ho...

N: aap ne uska haath pakda?

D: haan

N: haan?

D (thinking): how cute kya yeh jealous ho rahi hai....

aur mujhe itna bura lag raha hai ke maine usse itni romantic baatein ki yeh samajh kar ke tum ho....

N: hhaaawww romantic baatein bhi karlin aapne uske saath? Kya kaha tha aapne?

D: jaane do...mujhe yaad nahi hai...bohot saari baatein ki thi...

N: bohot saari? Boliye mujhe apne usse kya kaha tha?

D: arey tum jaan kar kya karogi

N: woh sab aap mujhse keh rahe the na...ab mai aapke saamne baithi hun...toh kuch nahi bol rahe hain... she twists her face.

D: tum jealous ho rahi ho?

N: nahi toh!

D: yes you are jealous

N: haan hun toh usme kya hua? Jab aap jaante hain ki mujhe pehle hi acha nahi lagta ke mai shamika behn ki tarah apki takkar ki nahi hoon phir bhi aap?

D: nandini bas dobara apni toolna uske saath mat karna...acha hai ki tum uski tarah nahi ho... tum toh lakh darje behtar ho usse...woh chah kar bhi kabhi tumhari tarah nahi ban sakti. Nandini mujhe lagta tha ke mai usse pyar karta tha...par pyaar ke asli maiyne maine tumse milne ke baad jaana hai...toh pls tum yeh fuzool ki baatein apne dimaag se nikaal do.

N: theek hai theek hai hum koi aur baat karte hain...waise apne thank you kyun bola?

D: woh toh mai tumse kab se kehna chahta tha....thank you meri zindagi mein aane ke liye...thank you mujhe meri kamiyon ke saath apnane ke liye...tumne meri zindagi mei itni roshini aur itne saare rang bhar diye ke tumhe samjha bhi nahi sakta...mai tumse ab ek pal ke liye bhi alag nahi rehna chahta...

Aur tum koi darpok warpok nahi ho...aur tumhare jaisi brave ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi..

Nandini felt like her heart would explode with love for him.

N: sach poochiye toh mai bhi nahi reh sakti door aapse. Mere liye toh meri big behn hi sab kuch hai...lekin ab unke alawa bhi ab mera itna acha pariwar hai...sabka dil jeetne mein waqt lagega...par jab tak aap mere saath hai...mujhe kisi aur ki koi fikr nahi hai....ab aap hi mere sab kuch hain.

Darsh and Nandini had happy tears in their eyes both of them wiped each other's tears.

Waise ek aur baat bolun....aaj aap na itne handsome lag rahe the...bilkul ek raja ki tarah...aur aapko dekhte hi mujhe laga ke main aapki rani hoon...

D gets sad: tumne toh mujhe dekh liya par main apni rani ko kaise dekhunga? Nandini mujhe kabhi kabhi aise lagta hai ke kaash meri aakhein hotin taake mai tumhe ek baar sirf ek baar dekh sakun...mai jaanta hoon tum aaj bohot khubsurat lag rahi hogi...

N: theek hai toh ab dekh lijiye apni man ki aakhon se...she places his hand on her ghungat yeh safed aur gold rang ka hai...yeh mera tika hai...he moves his hand around and nandini describes her clothes, jewelry and make up to him.

D: bilkul pari jaisi khubsurat. He smiles at her lovingly. Yeh sab bohot heavy hoga na...tum change karlo....

N: aap bhi change karlo, uske baad hume aapse bohot sari baatein karni hai..

D: baatein?

N: haan....woh hume pehli baar zindagi mein big behn ke alawa koi mila hai jisse mai apni dil ki saari baatein kar sakun....big behn ke shaadi ke baad hume waqt hi nahi mila baith ke pehle jaise baat karne ka...big behn ki apni zindagi hai....par sirf aap hain jo sirf mere hain...hain na?

D: of course

After they changed Nandini chatted her way through the night with Darsh she shared her life story with him about her childhood and how the two sisters grew up supporting each other. Darsh was so proud of her....she spoke and he listened through the night.

To be continued

Precap: Nandini Darsh light hearted nok jhok 

Guys I would like to get your feedback. If the FF isn't interesting let me know I'll convert it into an SS and end the story after a bit, or please let me know if I should continue. I guess many of us have lost interest in the show so I don't want to make it boring.

Part 4

Shoni: it's 8:30am

Nandini wakes up in a hurry....arey itni der ho gayi, shaadi ka pehla din hai aur hum itne late ho gaye...sab kya sochenge? Mai toh roz subah 5 baje hi uth jati hun aaj kaise itni der ho gayi

Darsh stirs in his sleep....meri shatabdi express apne bak bak ki train par break lagao...kuch nahi hua...hum soye hi nahi toh late honge na.

N: theek hai mai tayyar hone ja rahi hun

D: theek hai saree pehene mei help chahiye toh bata dena

N: nai uski koi zarurat nahi hai...MIL ne kaha ke mai kuch bhi pehen sakti hun

D: waise Nandini yeh humari shaadi ki pehli good morning hai aur tum tension le ke time waste kar rahi ho

N: good morning. Ab mujhe disturb mat kijiye.

Nandini wore her regular suit the ones she wore before marriage.

After a while Nandini and Darsh went out for breakfast.

Darsh: good morning everyone

Shobit: good morning bhaiya aapko ko toh bohot achi neend aayi hogi na...

D: arey kya achi neend hum to raat bhar soye nahi

Everyone starts laughing...

Nandini presses his hand....

Woh mai aur nandini raat bhar baate karte rahe toh waqt ka pata hi nahi chala...

Rajvee: baatein kar rahe the ya kuch aur hume koi explanation dene ki zarurat nahi hai...

D: come on ma...

R: theek hai theek hai shobit in dono ki taang khinchna band karo varna humari Nandini sharma ke bhaag jayegi...

Nandini goes and takes dadaji's and everyone else's blessings.

Rajvee: waise taiyyar ho jao nandini tumhe pag phere ke liye Bansuri ke paas jaana hai...tum uski room mein hi chali jao...aaj ke liye Darsh tumhe kal subha wahan se le aayega.

N: theek hai MIL. Lekin kya aap mujhe saree pehena sikhayengi? Woh mai yahan kuch bhi pehen sakti hun par Naveen bhai aur kaki thode purani khayalat ke hai na...shayd unhe acha nahi lage...

R: theek hai chalo

After Nandini gets dressed and rajvee goes out...Darsh comes in...

N: aapko kya hua aap aise muh latkake kyun khade hai?

D: ek toh tum pure din ke liye jaa rahi ho upar se tumne maa se keh diya ki tumhe saree pehena sikhaye.

N: usme kya hua? Ma roz saree pehenti hai...woh nahi sikhayengi toh kaun sikhayega?

D: maine kaha tha na ke mai tumhari help karunga...kya socha tha maine ke roz subha uthke mai tumhe tayyar karunga aur hume thoda waqt bhi miljayega ek saath hone ka...par tumne toh meri romantic subhah ke kwabon ke upar pura ka pura samandar pher diya...

N: romantic subah ke liye saree pehnane ki hi zarurat nahi hai...subah ko romantic banane ke liye hum bohot si aur cheezein kar sakte hai....

D smirks: jaise ke?

N: haww yeh aap mujhse kya kya bulva rahe hain...hatiye mujhe jaane dijiye...

D: arey aise kaise pehle apni baat toh puri karti hui jaao

N: aapna bohot woh hote ja rahe hai.

D: woh kya?

N: kuch nahi...ab mujhe apni baaton mei mat phasaiye...mujhe der ho rahi hai...bye..

She moves towards the door when he snaps his fingers she flicks her bangles and then runs out. Leaving a smiling Darsh behind.

At Bansuri's side of the resort.

B: tujhe pata hai nandu pehle mujhe teri shaadi ko leke bohot parehshani ho rahi thi par shaadi ke din darsh sahib ka tere liye pyaar dekh kar mujhe yakeen hogaya ke woh tujhe bohot khush rakhenge.

Jab tum nahi mil rahi thi na toh woh khud ja kar tujhe dhoondne ke liye zidd kar rahe the....phir sabke saamne unhone keh diya ke I Love her...

Nandini blushed

Sabke paas itni himmat nahi hoti...tu bohot bhagyashaali hai ke woh teri zindagi mein hai...jab woh shamika aai na tab hum logon ne bhi nahi pehchana ke woh tu nahi hai par unhone pehchaan liya...mai tere liye bohot khush hun...she hugs nandini.

Nandini (thinking): woh gyaan kumar sabko gyaan baate phirte hai par unhe itna bhi pata nahi ke unhe mujhe i love you kehna chahiye....mujhe toh aaj tak bola nahi aur saari duniya ke saamne bol diya woh bhi jab mai wahan nahi thi....kaise hain woh...

B: kahan kho gayi...waise kal raat yahan bohot tamasha hua...

N: kaisa tamasha?

B: woh gun ne moped se shaadi karli...

N: Kya?

B: mujhe toh samajh nahi aata ke woh apne pappa ko aur kitna tension degi...kal raat woh dono yahan aaye the...inhone bohot gussa karke unko yahan se jaane ke liye kaha...shaadi toh ho gayi ab hum kya kar sakte hain...jab gun ke pappa ka gussa thanda hoga na tab jaake unhe samjhungi ke un dono ki shaadi phirse sab ke saamne kar de... yeh Ba aur gun ka kissa toh mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha hai...in dono ko kya chahiye...yeh log itna gir sakte hai yeh soch soch ke gussa aa raha hai...

N: jaane do big behn tum bas un dono se bach ke rehna...acha hua jijaji ko sab pata chal gaya.

Nandini's phone rings

D: hello

N: haan hello kya chahiye aapko?

D: kya hua tum itni chidi hui kyun ho

N: nahi toh...aapne phone kyun kiya?

D: yeh batane ke liye ke maa ne kaha hai ke tumhe raat ko hi pick karsakta hun...kyunki yeh resort hai na...tum kahan sogi?

N: aapko kya shaadi ke pehle mai jis kamre mein thi wahin rahungi...

D: nai...aise kaise...woh kamra free nahi hai

N: kya matlab? Jo bhi ho mai manage karlungi...mai pehle rasoi mein soti thi ab balcony mein so jaungi.

D: nandini kya bakwas kiye ja rahi ho? Tum balcony mei kyun sogi?

N: kyunki mujhe yahin rehna hai...wahan nahi aana kyunki aap bohot bade bhulakkad hain!

D: kya bhool gaya mai?

N: woh bhi mai aapko bataun? Khud sochiye aur ab hume tang mat kijiye...she cuts the call

D: arey....ise kya hua? Itna ajeeb kyun behave kar rahi hai?

Shobit: kya hua bhai? Aap itne confused kyun lag rahe hain? Bhabi ne phir aapki class lagayi kya?

D: haan....pata nahi kya hua? So strange she seemed irritated about something.

Shobit: aapne kya kiya is baar?

D: usne mujhe bhulakkad kaha...kya bhool gaya mai?

Shobit: gift dena bhool gaye kya...

D: nahi, par yeh sab materialistic cheezon se nandini ko koi farq nahi padta...aisi kya baat hai...

Shobit: theek hai aap zyada socho mat hum dono dinner ke baad jaakar bhabi ko le aayenge...phir aap unhi se puchlo.

D: ok

After dinner Darsh and shobit went to bring nandini

When she saw Darsh at first she gave a huge smile, the next second she was visibly irritated about something

Shobit whispers to Darsh: bhai aap toh gaye...bhabi ki expression bata rahi hai ki woh aapse bohot irritated hai...

D: yaar ab kya karun?

Shobit: mujhe nahi pata bhai aap hi deal karo babhi se

D: acha beta! Tera waqt bohot jaldi aayega.

N: aap itni jaldi kyun aaye?

D: jaldi?

N: haan, aapko kal subah aana tha na

B: arey tujhe kya hua ab...ja na. Acha kiya jijaji ne jo yahan aagaye...

N: theek hai big behn, mai tujhse kal milti hun.

In Nandini and Darsh's room

D: nandini kya hua tumhe? Tum kis baat par gussa ho? Batao na

N: bataya tha na aap bohot bhulakkad hai.

D: kya bhool gaya mai?

N: aap mujhse ek bohot hi jaruri cheez kehna bhool gaye....bina bole hi aapne seedhe humse shaadi karli.

D: kya nahi bola mai

N: yahi ke aap mujhse....

D: mai tumse kya?

N: aapne chilla chilla ke sabke saamne kaha par humse nahi kaha....

D: mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai

N: rehne dijiye...

D: arey?

N: aap jake sojaiye aapko toh samajh aane se raha.

D: Nandini please bolo na....theek hai tum gussa mat ho pls..baitho tum

(Thinking: aisa kya hai jo maine sabke saamne kaha par nandini se nahi kaha? Maine toh kitni romantic baatein ki, shobit se baat karke dekhta hun) mai abhi aaya.

Darsh goes out and calls up shobit:

D: hello shobu

Sh: kya hua bhai, lagta hai aapki achi class lagi...bhabi gusse mai kyun thi?

D: pata nahi mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai..woh keh rahi hai ki mai usse kuch kehna bhool gaya.

Sh: bhai mujhe bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai...ek kaam kijiye bhabi ka gussa kam karne ke liye abhi ke liye aap unhe ek phool de dijiye aur ek simple sa I love you bol dijiye.

D (thinking): i love you....maine toh aaj tak Nandini ko I love you nahi bola...kahin woh is baat se toh naraz nahi hai?

Sh: kya hua aap chup kyun hogaye

D: woh maine Nandini ko aaj tak I love you nahin bola.

Sh: burts out laughing on the other end....kya...you're unbelievable bhai..aapne ab tak i love you nahi bola? Bina bole aapne bhabi se shaadi bhi karli? Aapne unhe propose bhi kiya tha ke nahi?

D: nahi

Sh: ajeeb ho aap dono...seedha shaadi karli....swimming pool mei toh aap khushi se chilla kar keh rahe the ke I'm in love, I'm in love, kal bhi sabke saamne I love her kaha aur ab tak bhabi ko hi nahi kaha? Hahhah

D: shayad nandini isi baat se naraz hai...

Sh: koi bhi unki jagah hota toh naraz hi hota

D: theek hai theek hai. Thank you aur good night.

To be continued

Precap: I love you

Hey,I'm ending this story with this update. No more motivation to write. They seem to be jumping from one plot to another without having a clear storyline...it's getting very irritating and confusing with this Charmi's death and stuff and with Darsh being an emotionless monster (from what I've heard). It's like each one is doing what they feel like and no one knows what's happening. If there was some hint of the differences being resolved either by Darsh realising that his love for Nandini is too strong or by Nandini retaliating properly or even the truth being revealed but no such thing seems to be happening. Doesn't look like there is going to be genuine romance btwn those 2 for a long time. The childhood friend thing also seems to make no sense. When that Darsh doesn't trust her only, how will he be jealous? I'm sure he will accuse her of way more horrible things and that would be the last straw. Sorry about the rant.Hope you enjoy the last part.

Part 5 (Last Part)

Darsh had to tell her exactly how he felt, this was the right time, forget about fancy flowers or chocolates and about dream confessions. Their love story was unique anyway. It felt right, so he called the room service for a few things. And walked into their room

N: ab pata nahi kahan chale gaye? Unhe samjh me aya bhi ya nahi....she was talking to herself...

Darsh chuckled at her words....she was so cute! innocent yet so brave, so warm and caring yet she could beat the hell out of people with buckets and slippers and what not, she was so fragile yet so strong. She was just like an angel who lit up his dark life. She was now everything to him, he couldn't even think of his life without her....he felt so lucky to have her...he thanked God for sending her in his life.

D: Nandini?

N: hmmm

D: gussa kuch shaant hua?

N: kyun shaant hoga? Aapne shaant kiya? Aapko mera gussa shaant karna tha par aap pata nahi kahan gayab hogaye!

D: mai yahin tha room ke bahar, tumhara gussa shaant karne ki tarkeeb dhoond raha tha!

N: sach mei? Aapna bohot ache hain

D: huhn maine abhi kuch kaha bhi nahi aur tum itni khush hogayi...gussa bhaag gaya kya?

N: arey haan...nai mai abhi bhi gusse mei hun.

D: not fair Nandini...ab tum mujhe chidhane ke liye gussa kar rahi ho...mujhe pata hai..

N: aapko kya lagta hai aapko sab pata hai?

The door bell rang

N: Yeh kaun aagaya?

D: mai kholta hun, tum ruko.

D: Nandini tumhare gusse ko kam karne ke liye dekho mai kya laya hun? 

N: Kya hai?

D: thandi thandi kulfi, poora box hai tumhe jitne khaane ho utne khao...tumhara gussa bhi thanda hojayega! 

N: arey wah kulfi, thank you aan, she was so excited.Darsh felt so happy just listening to her excited voice. She had already ripped open the wrapper and started off.

D: mujhe bhi toh ek do!

N: nahi nahi nahi aap bilkul bhi nahi khaenge!

D: kyun?

N: pichli baar jab humne kulfi khayi thi aapki kya halath ho gayi thi, meri toh jaan hi nikal gayi thi...aap jaante hai mai kitna dar gayi aapko uss halath mei dekh kar....nahi pls aap mat khaeye

D: ab aisa kuch nahi hoga, aur hona hai toh tumhe bhi kuch ho sakta hai...toh tum bhi ise mat khao...

N: nahi khaeyenge toh kulfi waste hojayegi, aur phir use bohot bura lagega

D: huhn kulfi bura manegi? Aisa thodi hota hai...tum bachi ho kya...?

N: aap ab chup rahiye! Mujhe khaane dijiye nahi toh pighal jaeygi...

D: mujhe bhi chahiye...

N: nahi

D: phir tum bhi nahi kha sakti, saara ka saara khud kha ke mere saath share nahi karogi? 

N: theek hai...hum ek saath ek kulfi share karke khaeyenge...kuch hua toh dono ko hoga aur nahi hua toh hum aur kha sakte hai...

D: good idea...Both of them shared each stick they ate around 4 kulfi sticks...in the same manner....which turned out to be very romantic for both of them.

After they were done...

D: mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

N: boliye

D: thank you Nandini, mai tumhe jitna thank you bolun utna kam hai....tumne mujh jaise aadmi ko accept karke, mujhse shaadi ki, yeh jaante hue ke mai tumhe har khushi nahi de sakta, mai tumhe theek se dekh bhi nahi sakta, tumhare kitne sapne hai jo mai pura nahi kar paunga....lekin phir bhi tumne mujhse shaadi ki, uske liye (he holds her hands) thank you so so so so much Nandini!

N: kya thank you laga rakha hai...thank you toh mujhe kehna chahiye...aapko koi bhi achi, padi likhi, english bolne wali, smart si ladki mil sakti thi, lekin aapne mujhe kaise chuna. Aapne mujhse shaadi karke mujhe bohot badi khushi di hai...

D: tumne mujhse shaadi kyun ki?

N: kyunki aap hai na, bohot bohot bohot bohot ache hain, ap kisi ki bhi madad karne se peeche nahi hat te, aapka dil na woh heere ki tarah hai...aap itne ache hai na ke dil chahta hai ke aapko itni khushiyan doon ke aap humesha haste rahein, aur jab koi aapko takleef pohonchata hai na...toh lagta hai ke mai usse maar maar kar itna sabak sikhaun ke dobara aisa karne ki soche bhi nahi, aapki takleef mujhse bardasht nahi hoti aur mujhe pata bhi nahi ke kyun....aur toh aur aap itne cute aur handsome hain...filmi hero bhi aapke saamne phike pad jaye. She pinches his cheeks. 

D: toh meri pyari si biwi ko yeh bhi pata hona chahiye ke woh bhi kisi se, kisi bhi tarah se kam nahi hai, tum itni achi ho, itni achi ho ke ji chahta hai...tumhe duniya ki har khushi la kar doon. Tumhara man kitna sacha hai, tum kisi ka bhi bura kabhi nahi soch sakti, tum thodi si pagal ho, par bohot bohot cute ho, mujhe toh bohot pasand ho....

He hold her hands and places it on his heart. Nandini tum ab meri aatma ka hissa ban chuki ho, meri har saans tumse jud chuki hai. Ab mai tumse ek pal bhi door nahi reh sakta....meri dil ki har dhadkan mei tumhara naam hai, tumne mujhme phirse khul ke jeene ki ummeed jagayi hai aur is zindagi ka har pal mai sirf tumhare saath bitana chahta hoon...mai nahi jaanta ke mai tumhare layak hoon ya nahi bas itna jaanta hoon ke mai tumse behad beinteha aur bohot bohot pyar karta hoon....Nandini I LOVE YOU, I love you very very much, I love you too much....

Nandini couldn't stop her happy tears she hugged him.

N (half smiling, half crying): toh finally bol hi diya, mujhe laga ke aap bolenge hi nahi.

D: aise kaise nahi bolta...bolna toh tha hi par maine socha tha ke kuch filmi type karun, phir woh idea mai ne chod diya. Tum toh bohot simple ho, chocolates, balloons,phool jaisi cheezein yeh sab tumhe fuzool kharchi lagte na toh nahi laya...sirf tumhari fav kulfi laya.

N: iska yeh matlab nahi ke aap hume kuch bhi tohfa na de? Har biwi ko apne pati ke diye hue tohfe ache lagte hai...aur mujhe chocolates bhi ache lagte hain.

D: ok noted my love! Ek aur cheez hai...

N: woh kya?

D: cake! Maine mangwaya hai...chalo kaat te hain

Nandini opened the box to find I love you Charmi written on the cake.

D: kaisa laga?

N: Charmi?

D: Charmi? Use kya hua?

N: cake par I love you charmi likha hai...

D: aise kaise? Maine toh nahi likhwaya tha? Yeh shobhu ki harkat hogi! Sach mai nandini kuch aisa waisa mat socho tum.Maine toh unhe sirf cake aur icing alag se bhejne ke liye kaha kyunki mai chahta tha ke hum dono milke cake par I love you likhe...

Nandini starts laughing: yeh shobit bhai toh aapse zyada romantic nikle....ab unhe phone karke bataye varna unka romance flop hojayega. 

D: is shobhu ko to mai....he calls shobit and asks him to take the cake.

Sh: acha hua bhai cake yahan tha varna kahin aur pohonch jaata toh kya hota?

D: sabko tere romance ke baare mein pata chalta...ab jaldi cake leke jaa yahan se...mera romance to kharab kar hi diya par apna mat kharab hone dena.

Sh: mai aapka cake order la kar deta hun phir chala jaata hun...

Whispers in Darsh's ear: vaise bhabi ko i love you bola ke nahi?

D: shobhu tu jaa yahan se!

Sh: theek hai, ok sorry bhai, sorry babhi mai abhi aap dono ka cake lakar deta hoon.He brings the cake, hands it over to Nandini and leaves.

N: itne ache hai na shobit bhai...mujhe hamesha ek bhai chahiye tha...ab aapki wajah se hume woh bhi mil gaya...

D: use chodo tum, cake box kholo

She opens it and sees that shobit had written something on it

N: kuch likha hai ispe

D: kya likha hai?

N: Nandini and Darsh (she spells out the rest to Darsh) 

D: Forever, yaani humesha humesha ke liye....Both of them smile, cut the cake and feed each other...then Nandini put a little on Darsh's nose...

D: arey yeh kya kiyaN: sorry aan aap bohot cute lag rahe the toh maine aise hi laga diya...She wipes it off.

D: ab tumhari baari

N: kis cheez ki baari?

D: maine tumse I love you kaha aur tumne koi jawab nahi diya...

N: oh woh...mai

D: sshh he places a finger on her lip and then kisses her forehead. Nandini felt his emotions through that kiss on her forehead. It was so tender and gentle as if he was afraid it would hurt her. Nandini had never felt such strong emotions or such sensations before...

N: Darsh! 

He placed his forehead on hers

D: hmmm

N: woh mujhe pata nahi kab aur kaise par mujhe aapse bohot zyada pyar ho gaya. Mai wada karti hun ke aapka saath kabhi nahi chodungi, aap hi meri sari duniya hai, aapki wajah se mujhe itni saari khushiyan mili, wada kijiye ke hum humesha aise hi ek dusre ke saath rahenge, har mushkil ka saamna saath milkar karenge. Kabhi ek dusre se kuch bhi nahi chupayenge, kabhi bhi nahi, thoda bohot ladai jhadga karenge par use suljha bhi lenge.

D: lifts his head, holds her hands....wada karta hun tumse ke bilkul aisa hi hoga.

N smiles and stands on her toes...she cups his face in her hands and slowly kisses his left eyelid and then his right eyelid.

I love you...bohot jyada, 

Darsh couldn't stop his happy tears.

N: aap jaante hai aapki aakhein bohot khubsurat hai. Yeh mujhe sabse zyada pasand hai, mujhe inme koi kami nahi dikhti...

She kissed his eyelids again.

Nandini and Darsh spent a very romantic night together to celebrate their togetherness. They knew a life full of worldly challenges awaited them but now was the time to cherish the love, their time together and to celebrate the sweet beginning of their love and companionship.

The End!

Hi! It's a shame that you had to end this so soon and none of us read it!!

Really sorry about that.. I can understand how it feels when you write something and if you don't get feedback...I think none of us were watching show so didn't come to forum also that regularly!

I've read till chapter 3.. you've written things that we would love to see on the show . Especially Darsh telling Nandu to stop calling him Saheb and their cute banter on wedding night .