This was sooo goood...
Cant wait for more to read...
This was sooo goood...
Cant wait for more to read...
It looks realistic one for them, had fun reading it.
hey.. Thankyou for reading.Originally posted by: Shiney19
This was really good, I wanted more! Will you be continuing the story?
I will surely try for another part😊
Thankyou😊
Thankyou for reading. I'm glad you liked it😊I loved their cute banter. Thus seems so like happening onscreen....It was really nice. Do write more👏
This is simply awesome...
“Hatho samne se” would be Pallavi’s tag line one day..
It was so realistic though... Raghav can get nervous too.. And Pallavi finally realising the impracticality of wearing white saree... This is by far the best version of her homecoming...
Would definitely want to read more from you... And make it as long as you can.. Your writing is so engrossing that i wanted it to go on and on and on...
Hey!
That's so sweet of you to say this. Thankyou.
I will keep it longer for next time.😊
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Pallavi already jamaoing haq on rr 's room! That was definitely expected 😂😋😍🙌🏻
So well written and amazing, please do write more on them😋❤
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Pallavi knows where to request and where to jamaoing haq😅
Thankyou for reading😊
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This was fun!!
Raghav’s obsession with sniffing her hair can be totally exploited 😆
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Pallavi definitely knows where and how to trick him 😉
Thanks for reading😊
Originally posted by: virmantaarey
Kaash aisahi hota
Aisa hi Hoga ..I trust the writers..till now they have been doing really great.
Thanks 😊
Thankyou😊
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