Posted: 2 years ago

Raghvi Os: Ab kya karein


Raghav Rao picked up one of his finest wine from his luxurious Bar and poured for himself. He wanted to celebrate his victory of renvenge. He was not in his usual formal attire today. Anybody who sees him now can clearly tell he has just arrived from a South Indian wedding and to be precise from the wedding Mandap. As he sat on the long bar chair with the glass of wine in his hand and a smirk of triumph, he take a look at his wife, pallavi, right opposite to him sitting on the sofa. Costumed in a otherwise spotless white saree which was ruined due to vermilion, she was looking at him with furrowed eyes. Much to his surprise she was not sobbing like other brides do in their vidaai .


As Raghav started drinking from his glass he noticed Pallavi got up and walking towards him and before he could take his first sip the glass was snatched from him. He startled at this unexpected jolt.


'Shaadi toh kar liye ab aage kya karna h kuch socha hai?' Pallavi finally breached the silence she has been tolerating from last one hour.


'Ab kya Saree ka dukaan ..Ab main badla lega tumse' he snatched back the glass from her and raised it in front of her face to show off his victory but quickly realised the probablity of it to be taken away and kept it over the bar counter, a bit far from her immediate access.


'Dekho Mr Raghav rao' Pallavi Raised her arm in air and said ' yeh sab Badla game hum kal se khelenge .. aaj main bahut thak gyi hoon..toh jaldi se batao tumhara room kaunsa hai?' pallvi clearly looked tired and irtitated.


'Mere room ka kya karega tum?' Raghav wanted to sound stern and bossy but he could not stop his fear overpowering them. Though a little but the fear of getting his territory seized was evident on his face.


'Kya karna h matlab...puri zindgi kya main iss hall mein baithke tumhara gamandi chehre wala photo ko dekhte rahungi?....itna sara saaman layi hoon apna... wo sara arrange karna hai' pallavi pointed at the giant suitcase and few other bags which together looked no less than a mini shop. " aur mujhe change bhi karna hai. Tumhe darane ke chakkar mein yeh safed saaari pehen li, ...tum toh dare nhi ulta saari gandi ho gyi' Raghav looked horror struck at this. He was so immersed in his revenge plan that he never bothered about the responsibilities and consequences any marriage brings by default. Unluckily Farhad was deprived of this marriage experience to be able to become a good adviser.


'Yaha bahut saare rooms hai tum koi aur room le lo' He suggested after gatherings all his confidence which he felt was missing a moment back ' aur sab kamra achha hai toh tumko koi problem nhi hoga' he hoped she gets convinced at this logical point.


'Aise kaise kisi aur room mein Rahungi?' Pallavi crossed her arms and threw a sly grin ' tumhare sare maids kya kahenge..jab bahar ke logo ko pata chalega wo kya kahenge...aur biwi toh tumhari hoon na toh kisi aur room mein kyu rahungi?'


Raghav breathed in sharply and pointed his index finger to her and said ' Dekho Saree ka dukan....' pallavi ceased his sentence midway making him visibly pissed off ' kab se dekh hi rhi hoon...Tum rehne do ..main khud dhundh lungi' saying this she walked towards the staircase .


Raghav followed her swiftly till staircase, leaving past her he quickly placed himself between Pallavi and the stairs. He spread his arms wide and blocked the entrance to the stairs. 'The Raghav Rao ke room mein bina permission ka chiti bhi allowed nhi hai ...ardhamaindya?.' He bragged lifting his chin high in pride.

' Tumne chiti se shadi ki hai ya mujhse? And The Pallavi Deshmukh har jagah allowed hai ..samjhla? ' pallavi uttered with exact imitation of his expressions.


'Pallavi Raghav Rao hai tum ab' he corrected. For some unknown reasons he did not like Pallavi introducing herself as a deshmukh now.


'Exactly...ab tumahara naam bhi mera hai...yeh ghar bhi aur kamra bhi..ab hato samne se' pallvi jabbed her fingers in his chest as if reminding that she is not the submissive one here. She is the equal participant in this revenge game , not his winning trophy.


'Main janta tha, tum bhi baaki ladkiyon ki tarah hai , gold digger... tabhi main socha tum vidaai mein roya kaise nhi...tum toh khush h na mujhse shadi karke' He stood still, bearing all her pushes strongly.


'Main gold digger toh tum brain digger.. jab dekho mera dimag khate rehte ho...ab hato bhi' palavi was disappointed with her muscle power as she could not move Raghav from his place even an inch.

Raghav did a happy dance in his mind thinking he is successful as of now.

Pallavi waited for few seconds and ascended two steps above, exactly where Raghav was standing and reached very close to her so much so that his nose get a good access to her hair. As planned by Pallavi Raghav immediately got engrossed into her hair. Closing his eyes he took in the smell and said ' Rose this time' followed by a powerful jolt.


He was shoved by her before he realised anything. He turned to witness pallavi running up and screaming ' Galat Jawab Mr Ghamandi Rao... iss baar jasmine tha'.


Pallavi finally reached his room huffing and threw herself on his bed. Raghav who was running after Palalvi yelled from the door ' wo mera bed hai.. .neeche utro waha se' and entered into his room.


Resting her head over her elbow pallavi position herself comfortably on his bed and smiled ' yeh bed ab mera hai tum sofa par so jao'


'Main kyun sofa mein soyega...mujhe bas apne bed pe neend ata hai main idhar hi soyega' he snapped back and jumped on other side of the bed.

Before pallavi could utter anything Raghav took off his shirt and lied opposite to her with half naked, facing towards her and flushing a cunning smile.


Pallavi squeezed her eyes shut and turned to opposite side. ' yeh tum kya kar rhe ho..baat baat pe kapde kyun utaar dete ho' pallavi gritted her teeth.


' main apne kamre mein aise hi sota hai ..tumko probleam hai toh kahin aur jaane ka' Raghav teased stretching his arms and keeping them behind his head , fully displaying his well toned body.


' Yeh ab mera bhi kamra hai' Pallavi tried to sound authoritative, still did not dare to open her eyes.


'Toh tum bhi kapde utarke sona..maine kab mana kiya' Raghav Replied casually and soon realised his mistake.


Now both embarrassed, they slowly turned their head away from each other and room filled into awkward silence.



Hey all...

After the marriage promo ..this popped in my head ..

So couldn't stop myself from writing this.

Hope you like it!!

THANKYOU 😃

Posted: 2 years ago

This was really good, I wanted more! Will you be continuing the story?

Posted: 2 years ago

I loved their cute banter. Thus seems so like happening onscreen....It was really nice. Do write more👏

Posted: 2 years ago

This is simply awesome...

“Hatho samne se” would be Pallavi’s tag line one day..

It was so realistic though... Raghav can get nervous too.. And Pallavi finally realising the impracticality of wearing white saree... This is by far the best version of her homecoming...

Would definitely want to read more from you... And make it as long as you can.. Your writing is so engrossing that i wanted it to go on and on and on...

Posted: 2 years ago

Pallavi already jamaoing haq on rr 's room! That was definitely expected 😂😋😍🙌🏻

So well written and amazing, please do write more on them😋❤

Edited by TunesOfHeart - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

This was fun!! 

Raghav’s obsession with sniffing her hair can be totally exploited 😆

Posted: 2 years ago

hi.......

Magnificent OS..... well written 

Posted: 2 years ago

thus is so practical o just loved it.



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