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This was legit an awesome OS! She climbed over the wall for him and he came to the hostel. His feelings have taken over and he cannot stop ❤️ No wonder everyone is asking for more 🤗
This was legit an awesome OS! She climbed over the wall for him and he came to the hostel. His feelings have taken over and he cannot stop ❤️ No wonder everyone is asking for more 🤗
Oh my goddd! I loved the buildup to this cracker of a climax (pardon the innuendo). I love Shaurya's restless and confusion. I absolutely adored Anokhi's silent reciprocation. It's fab that they are running around and sneaking like teenagers.
Loved your writing. Hope to read more from you 💞😍
You have a beautiful writing style. Did Shaurya really ask her to jump the wall? It was so funny though I know this is a romantic OS. I have always wanted to see Anokhi fighting her feelings and eventually cope with them. Thanks for giving us that ❤️
Okay I remember I had reserved on this post but now I can't find where So I'm replying anyway!
Let's start with Live review 😎
"She would not slip into oblivion as his face would flash her eyes, but she would count petals of her heart ignoring the thorns that might prick her way. "
This is so beautiful.. how do you guys write so well ❤️
You have written down her feelings so well. Getting lost in his thoughts, craving for him, afraid of her new found emotions and blaming it all on Reema 😆 so cute!
OMG! the way he called her and asked her if they could talk .... shhooo cute
LOL! He reached her hostel 🤣🤣🤣 Poor guy! ☺️❤️
Hmmm.. so he got tensed after asking to meet her 🤪 he's such a cutie!
OMG! 🤣 Director of the college instructing her how to jump out of girls hostel 🤣 I CANNOT believe this ! This is definitely couple goals! 😆
Gosh! that scene where he carried her down ... omg! ☺️
Me:
Oh God he's taking her to the cabin 😲
My kachra mind :
Ohh Goshhh! He said he wants to kiss her ? 😲 I am DEAD! ☺️ I can totally imagine how he passed 3 days without seeing her 😭 I know how badly he wants to kiss her
Awwww the way she whispered - 'here' ☺️ I need a blanket to cover myself please!
Why do I find her keeping one hand on his chest so hot ? 😔 It's so hot!
Anyway, he kissed her o emm gee ☺️
Baap re was the kiss not enough that he placed her on top of the table as well? I am dying here! 🤣☺️
The end was so hot! But why did it end I wanted more 😭
I loved it Akanksha 🤗 Do write more!
And Cabin has become my new favorite place to write romance 🤣 🤪
I was dead for an entire dayy and then i was flying high and now this has pushed me beyond cloud 9.
I love your way of writing the flow of emotions are so real. I got so engrossed that i was blushing i felt so connected
Absolutley loved it ❤️
Originally posted by: itsRitzi
Omg its so well written u play with words so well absolutely loved it hot
Aww🥺
Thank you bro🤗
Originally posted by: Nan_ArHi
woah! Enjoyed reading! Just WOW! ❤️
Glad❤️
Originally posted by: Shivikafan2
Wow...... 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰awesomeeeeeeeee3eeeeeeeeeeee OS
It will make my whole day a happy one
Thank you so much for this beautiful os
Do write it in wattpad also please
And hearing this makes me so happy !!! I am glad you could enjoy ! 🤗❤️
Ps- I have been writing on wattpad since past 5 years . Lol
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