Star Commentor Award (Part 70)
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Part 71
Duri taraf Maan was with his cousins
Mona-Why don’t you ask Geet to stay for the wedding
He shrugs
M-She won’t agree. She has her career in India
Mona-Do you want her to go?
M-How does it matter what I want?
Mona-You want her to stay back. Look at your sad pouty face.Why don’t you ask her to stay back then?
M- Why don’t you?
Maan Mona ke dimaag mein keeda ghusaake uthke chala gaya
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Geet aayi wahan super happily
She wants to share her joy with Maan
Geet aake Maan ko dhund rahi hai
Mona mili toh she asks:
G-Where is Maan?
Mona-What is it? You look so happy?
Geet is indeed grinning ear to ear
G-There is a good news. Where is Maan?
Sab peeche pad gaye ki kya good news hai, kya good news hai?
Ab Geet bol deti hai ii ye hua, internship mil gai
Sabko laga...oh ye good news hai, hum toh masaala dhundne aaye the
Mona- Great! Phir toh tum yahan reh jaaogi! So come to the wedding
Geet is surprised, ki
I? inki family wedding mein?
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Shaam ko villa mein Maan aata hai
Dono baithke khaa rahe hote hai toh he says:
M-I heard you got accepted for the internship. Congrats
Maan ne casually kaha
He felt ki mujhe nahi bataya...baaki bheed se sunna padh raha hai mujhe
Geet smiles happily
G-isn’t it great!
He nods
M-You will keep living in the hotel...?
G-No, we have a doctor's hostel near the hospital. I will shift there with my friends
M-Okay. Let me know if you need any help
G-I will be okay. I just have 2 bags
She replies
Both are wondering ki according to rule unko tab tak date karna hai ki nahi
Baat to thi ki vacation tak date karenge jab tak Geet India naa jaaye, ab technically vacation is over but Geet India jaa nahi rahi hai toh should they continue dating or not
M-Mona said she asked you to stay for the wedding. What did you decide?
Geet wants to say ki, what do u want?
Do you want me to stay in your family event?
But she says this instead:
G-emm...I don’t have any problems, unless...you have...I mean it’s your family event
She says hesitantly while waiting for his reaction
M- You have gelled with my cousins quite well. I am sure everybody will be happy to have you
Geet is like, sabki nahi....mujhe apna apna bataao. I asked about you
But kuch kehti nahi
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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