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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Its an ITV thing. The culprit never goes to jail. 

in reality too.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

But ITV ke failure rates zyada high hai 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Great!! Amazing.......

I wanted to write something on this plot and could definitely tell I would have not be able to do justice the way you did.

Hats off!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Great job, loved to read this and would like to read stories more from you 

Thanks! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Manju1066

Beautiful it made me cry .one of the best I hv read so far 

Awww ! ❤️ I just wrote it so randomly but you guys are so lovely !!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Luilui

I really loved it🥰🥰🥰🥰please continue your writing 😊😊😊

Thank you !!❤️

You see I wanted to write something today even. I had time it was Sunday but no plot clicked me. Since they are showing a professor student thing it is just so tough to write any random shit. The relationship they share is too fragile. I mean you have to maintain that thin line while writing. Chemistry should not turn creepy at the initial stage atleast. 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: krazykaju

Exceptionally beautiful!!

The responsibility of doing the right thing, the guilt of being the reason, the pain for doing this to her own brother, everything makes it soo painfully beautiful.💔

Just love how she decided to stand for herself. How she decided to show mirror to everyone not in many but just in few words.

She actually is alone right now and she decided to keep it that way rather thn running to somebody for help.🤗

Totally loved this vulnerable but strong Anokhi and loved the way you described her inner dilemma, her inner Shor.

Amazing.

Do write more on these two if time allows.

Love!!🤗

This made me smile hard❤️

Shukriya ...bahut bahut shukriya! Also, I might write since I am kind of obsessed with them now but I am too blank for now. Today I even thought of few plots but nothing came up well. My sunday was wasted. The falling in love part between a teacher and student is too tough to write actually. Like you have to maintain that dignity. It can't be just sexual tension. 😵

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome os

Loved it

Shaurya understood pain is not only coz of someone absence👏

Do write more!!

Thank you ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: sweetnoori

Woow so amazing do write more 👍🏼


Thank you❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

can you please continue with the next part? please dont say no...😭..

hmm painful hey.

Continue tou karlun par likhungi kya 🥱

I have no idea what to write further in this🤣