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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: shaylini

Hey Attiya

loved this FF, you have written it so beautifully..

do write more, will be waiting 😉

Thank you dear!

Inshaallah ♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awww its Beautiful👏


Avi to FF start hua tha itni jaldi end ho gaya🥺

Please continue.


Itna kuch ho gaya but anokhi ko ab bhi lagta hai ki wo Shaurya ki girlfriend/lover nahi balki sirf  ek student hai

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: tashafarshi

Awww its Beautiful👏


Avi to FF start hua tha itni jaldi end ho gaya🥺

Please continue.


Itna kuch ho gaya but anokhi ko ab bhi lagta hai ki wo Shaurya ki girlfriend/lover nahi balki sirf  ek student hai

Momentary kiss thi😂

Awww..thanks dear♥️

3-4 shots are max for any situation. Will continue🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Totally amazing.❤️❤️

Loved their conversation . Shaurya's concern for her is  so palpable and so endearing.  He tried showing her all the future consequence of her actions but Anokhi's is so firm on her stand. 

 I totally loved this Anokhi  even more than Shaurya who was so clear that whatever happened can be mistake for him for her it is a beautiful moment. ❤️

And eventually he agreed that Anokhi is right.

But she is right about what?

That it was consensual or it was not a mistake.

Loved this update so much.

But it was last partsmiley19

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: krazykaju

Totally amazing.❤️❤️

Loved their conversation . Shaurya's concern for her is  so palpable and so endearing.  He tried showing her all the future consequence of her actions but Anokhi's is so firm on her stand. 

 I totally loved this Anokhi  even more than Shaurya who was so clear that whatever happened can be mistake for him for her it is a beautiful moment. ❤️

And eventually he agreed that Anokhi is right.

But she is right about what?

That it was consensual or it was not a mistake.

Loved this update so much.

But it was last partsmiley19

Aww thank you for such long detail!

You are only one maybe who got the clue; what she is right for?🤣😂... I just did it for my self to have a bit plot for future😂


You are sweet♥️💓🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Dher saara love for this FF ❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗

And, you left us at the crucial point😭 I wanted to read more ...

Loved it to the core. I must say, Anokhi stole the limelight.Really, the way she made herself clear was brilliant and correct on point. 👏Poor Shaurya... he didn't expect such a shade of Anokhi.  


"A moment" ... truly had a nice time reading it. 😊


Aap aise likhte rahiye.... hum padhte rahenge 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Dher saara love for this FF ❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗

And, you left us at the crucial point😭 I wanted to read more ...

Loved it to the core. I must say, Anokhi stole the limelight.Really, the way she made herself clear was brilliant and correct on point. 👏Poor Shaurya... he didn't expect such a shade of Anokhi.  


"A moment" ... truly had a nice time reading it. 😊


Aap aise likhte rahiye.... hum padhte rahenge 😆

Dheer sara thanks💓♥️

My perspective of women is reflected in the character and thats it!

I am glad people like it!

Inshaallah ♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago

no not accepted..aisaey kaisaey last part😡..continue like ladt part a, last part b,last psrt c..no no no..

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Posted: 3 years ago

very well written..beautiful..👏

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

no not accepted..aisaey kaisaey last part😡..continue like ladt part a, last part b,last psrt c..no no no..

Will write more♥️