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Sorry, it is Jajan. (Jay & Gunjan)
Sorry, it is Jajan. (Jay & Gunjan)
Really loved your writing.
Wanna read more. Plz continue soon. Waiting for the climax when Veer learns about the letter.
Continue soon plz plz
I thank each one of u 4 the beautiful comments n likes.
Dedicated to Kavitha who named Jay-Gunjan as Jajan.
The wind was blowing heavily.Bani struggled hard to close the window.Suddenly she saw hers and Veeranshu’s photo frame going to fall down due to the heavy blow of the wind.She ran towards the photo frame to catch it.Suddenly Veeranshu caught the photo frame and prevented it from falling down.Bani was relieved.
Bani:I was scared whether it will fall down and break.
Veer:Relax Bani.It did not fall down.Even if it had fallen down and broken we could have framed it again.
Bani:But people say that glass photo frame breaking is a bad omen.
Veer:When did a modern girl like you start believing in such superstitious stuffs?
Bani:I don’t know Veeranshu.But when I saw our photo frame going to fall down I got scared unknowingly.Because I don’t want anything to ruin our relationship.Because I can’t lose you.
Veeranshu looked at her emotionally.
Veer:Bani,when you could not catch the photo frame I caught it on time.Like this either you or I will be preventing such mishaps.So you don’t worry.Nothing is going to happen to our relationship.We will be always together Bani.
They embraced each other emotionally.
They broke their embrace.
Bani:I will bring a jug of water to keep it in the room.
Veer:Ok.
Bani turned back.By mistake she hit Veeranshu and both of fell on the bed losing balance.
Bani fell over Veeranshu.They got lost in each other as their eyes locked with each other.
Dil ibadat kar raha hai Dhadkanein meri sun
Tujh ko main kar lu haasil lagi hai yehi dhun
Zindagi ki shaak se loon kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujh ko main kar lu haasil lagi hai yehi dhun
Se o re o sama re o Se o re o
Se o re o sama re o Se o re o(Tum mile).
Veeranshu was searching for a file.
He opened his cupboard restlessly and threw the clothes out to find the file.
Suddenly an envelope fell down.
Veeranshu:This envelope….
Veeranshu remembered keeping it inside the cupboard long ago.
Veer:Oh no…how careless I am!Till now I did’nt open it and see.What if it’s something important?
He took the envelope and opened it.
He started reading the letter.
“Dear Adv.Veeranshu Singhania,
You are a well known personality in the society.You deserve the best person as your life partner.The girl Bani with whom your marriage alliance is going on is not at all suitable for you.She is characterless.She parties whole night.She is irresponsible.And she has affair with Jay Mathur.But she introduces him as her best friend to everyone to hide her affair.If you marry her going by her looks you will regret and you will suffer the whole life.So you better back out from this proposal and don’t go to her house to see her.
Your well wisher who wants the best for you”.
He was shocked.He became really upset.
Suddenly he remembered Bani asking him if he got any letter before their wedding.
Veer:Why did Bani ask me like that on our wedding night?That means she knew that somebody would be sending me such an anonymous letter about her?Who sent me this letter?
Vani photoframe & dialogues are romantic & emotional. The song sequence is romantic.
Veer finally saw the letter & is assuming that someone wrote an anonymous letter. Waiting to know his reaction if he gets to know that Bani herself wrote that letter.
Veer was irritated about the letter.
Veer:How dare he write rubbish about Bani in this letter?I think there was someone who was behind Bani.Bani must hav rejected him.So in order to take revenge by stopping our wedding he sent me this letter.This fool thought that Advocate Veeranshu Singhania is a fool to believe his words by reading a letter.
Bani entered the room.
“Veeranshu!”
Veer jerked seeing Bani and hid the letter.
He thought:Bani should not know about this letter.She will become upset.
I will find the person who wrote this letter and give him the worst punishment.After that I will reveal it to Bani.
Bani:Veeranshu,is everything alright?Why are you looking dull?
Veer turned off his face:Nothing like that Bani.
Bani:Veeranshu,from your facial expression I can understand that something is bothering you.Don’t try to hide anything from me.Tell me frankly what bothers you.
Veer looked at her emotionally.
He said in his mind:Bani understands me so well.
Bani:Veeranshu…say..
Veer:Nothing like you think Bani.I was searching for my file.I did’nt get it.
Bani:The blue file?
Veer:Yes.
Bani:I knew that you needed it.So I already kept it in your bag.
Veeranshu was surprised.
Veer:Thanks Bani.I was quite worried about it.
Bani smiled.
Veer:Ok Bani.I need to go now.
Bani:Ok.
While taking the bag from the table by mistake the letter fell off his hand.
Bani’s eyes fell on the letter.Veer took it in a hurry and Bani noticed nervousness in his face.
Veeranshu saw Bani looking at the letter and tried to hide it behind him.
Bani:What is that Veeranshu?What are you hiding from me?
Veeranshu became nervousness.
He thought:Bani is so intelligent.I have not experienced this much nervousness during any court case.
Bani:Something is there in that paper.
Veeranshu was stunned.
Veeranshu:This is related to my case Bani.
Bani just snatched it from his hand.
Veer:Bani!
Bani opened it and read it.
Bani was shocked.
She thought:This was the letter I sent him before marriage.
Veeranshu was finding it difficult to face her.
Bani looked at him emotionally.
Bani:When I asked you whether you got any letter before coming to meet me you denied it.Then what about this letter?
Veer:Actually when I got this letter I did’nt have time to open it.So I kept it in my cupboard.Today only I saw this letter.
Bani asked him painfully with nervousness.
Bani:Veeranshu,after reading this letter do you feel like deserting me?Trust me Veeranshu.Jay is only my best friend.I love only you and Jay loves only Gunjan.
Veeranshu looked at her emotionally.
Veer:How did you even think that your Veeranshu will misunderstand you reading this letter?Will I judge your character based on this coward’s letter?I know you very well.I know your character very well.I know the purity of your friendship with Jay.
Bani became so happy and touched by Veeranshu’s words.
Veer:I promise you Bani that I will find the culprit and put him behind bars.
Suddenly he remembered Bani asking him about getting any letter after their marriage.
Veer:Bani,you know the person who sent me the letter.Right?In fact you expected him to send me the letter against you.That’s why you asked me about the letter that day.
Bani became dull.
Veer:Is he any stalker?Was he disturbing you?
Bani:No Veeranshu.It’s she,not he.
Veeranshu was shocked:Who is that female enemy of yours?
Bani:You read the letter in a disturbing state.So you could’nt identify the hand writing.Read the letter carefully again.You will be able to identify the person.You know her very well.
Veeranshu took the letter from her and looked at it.
He looked at Bani in disbelief.
Veer:Bani…it looks like your hand writing.
Bani said tearfully:It is my hand writing.I only wrote this letter to you.
Veeranshu was shocked.
Veer:Are you joking?You wrote rubbish about yourself?Unbelievable!
Bani:It’s unbelievable as no one can write such stuffs about themselves to the man who come to see them with the marriage alliance.But I did it.Because I was crazy.
Veer could not even understand how he was feeling now hearing her confession.
Veer:Why did you do that Bani?
Bani:I was not mentally prepared to get married.So I wanted to stop you from coming to see me.I did’nt want to marry you.I thought when you read bad things about me you will decide not to visit my house and thus the alliance will get cancelled.But when I met you,my opinion changed.When our married life started I realized what a big blunder I did by writing that letter to you.But I became glad that you did not get that letter.Now when I saw that letter with you I got scared whether you will leave me reading that dirty letter I wrote about myself.But you told me that you don’t believe that letter.My respect for you has increased more. I don’t want to put you in darkness more.So I confessed that I wrote that letter to you.
Veeranshu-Bani looked at each other emotionally.
Bani:Please forgive me Veeranshu.Please don’t be angry with me.I can’t bear it.
Suddenly Veeranshu embraced her.
Veeranshu replied emotionally:Why should I be angry with you for your childishness?I was shocked.But you yourself admitted that it was your blunder.I also know how much happy you are with me and you love me very much.Then why should I be angry with you?
Bani looked at him:Veeranshu!
Veer:Your Veeranshu can never be angry with you silly girl.
They both smiled and got into a sweet embrace again.
Time passed….
It was Jay and Gunjan’s wedding…
Jay and Gunjan exchanged garlands.
They took 7 steps around the sacred fire
and Jay filled Gunjan's partition of hair with vermilion.
Veeranshu-Bani clapped hands.
As the wedding rituals got over Veeranshu whistled to cheer them up.
Veeranshu-Bani congratulated the couple.
Veeranshu:Congrats guys.
Bani:God bless you guys.
Bani:Jay…Gunjan…always be happy with each other like this.
Jay and Gunjan smiled happily.
Veeranshu:Sweet heart.Give them privacy.Let us also have privacy.
Bani stared at him:Veeranshu!
They giggled.
The End
Thank u everyone 4supporting me in this journey.Plz write your favourite scene,favouritecharacter n why u liked them.
The letter part is inspired from the malayalam movie Porutham.I have seen not seen the movie except the climax,but I have an idea about its theme.But this FS's story is different.
Amazing story. 👏
Loved it.
The beautiful bond between Bani and Jay was so amazing, childish , fun. 😆👍🏼
VANIlicious.... perfect for each other.
Bani fell love at 1 st sight with our Veeranshu. 🥳
Such an understanding couple. 😊🤗
He keeps on proving her point of view about him wrong every time. 😎
Loved that last chapter - the conversation between them Regarding the letter , she confessing about her stupidity. 🤣👏👍🏼⭐️
Beautifully written with perfect pics. 👏👍🏼
Glad that Veer forgave Bani after confessing that she wrote that letter about herself. Jay and Gunjan's wedding scene went well. Surprised that you ended the ff so quickly.
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