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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Sochiye sochiya .

I would just say that this story is more on the depth of Ariya love and less on all the cases and all, coz i m bad at thtπŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺ.


Yrr itna views aur sirf ek hi ne storyline guess ki, aaplog bhi kro na jldi.

Mujhe aisa guesses pdne mein bda mjha aata hai, aaplog bhi try kro na

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Arjun aur Riya ek dusre ko jaante hain.

I think Arjun is saying all this for Riya.

Something happened and everyone left him at that time Riya came in his life and accepted him. Now Riya is most important person of his life without her he can't live.


Voh sirf ek dost nahi saathi hai mera, jiske bina yeh jeevan hai aadhura.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Nice cs

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Asya99

Arjun aur Riya ek dusre ko jaante hain.

I think Arjun is saying all this for Riya.

Something happened and everyone left him at that time Riya came in his life and accepted him. Now Riya is most important person of his life without her he can't live.


Voh sirf ek dost nahi saathi hai mera, jiske bina yeh jeevan hai aadhura.

Aapne to puri story draft kr di.

Per hmari story vo hai ke nhi uske liya to wait krna pdega. 

I just wanted to write something complete different from usual Ariya stories but at the same time in that usual setting.

Mtlb  setting vhi story nayiπŸ€—



But thanks for your effort.πŸ‘

Thoda sabar kijiya.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Sorry plot kharab krne ke liye par mujhe shayariprhna aur likhna dunno bhut pasand hai toh aapki shayari prhke   maine voh likha .im really sorry par i will be waiting for your story . 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Asya99

Sorry plot kharab krne ke liye par mujhe shayariprhna aur likhna dunno bhut pasand hai toh aapki shayari prhke   maine voh likha .im really sorry par i will be waiting for your story . 

Are aap sorry kyun bol rhe ho.

I appreciated your idea.

Mujhe bhi shayari pdna aur likhna psnd hai.

πŸ‘Even i insist aap aise hi apne views btate rho. Mujhe pdne mein bda majha aata hai.

I love reading it.

Aise hi likhte rhoπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ‘

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

                    

           πŸ€—   Part  1 πŸ€—


Etf office: 


A normal day in etf .


Shree with his first loveπŸ‘¨β€πŸ’»

Chotu in dreams of pav bhaji πŸ˜‹

Ayesha with her confused and frustrated mind involved in completing files.

 Words in files are difficult than algebra  equations for her.  Vo bina soche smje seconds mein bnde uda skti hai pr ye files usse nhi smblti.😭😭😭



Arjun as usual with penπŸ–ŠοΈ between his fingers and mind wandering to zenith and ________ 🀫. ( Janaab kahi khoye khoye se lg rhe hai socho socho kahaπŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€«)


Sakshi:πŸ’­πŸ’­πŸ’­πŸ’­

Arjun is looking towards Sakshi bended on one knee.

Arjun (looking into her eyes) : Sakshi jabse tum meri zindgi me aayi ho u have changed it, u are an angel. I love you . Plz accept me. 

Will you marry me ?

Main ab tumhare bina ek second bhi nhi bita skta. Tum mera sb kuch ho . Plz mujhe apna lo, main tumhare bina nhi jee skta


Sakshi is very happy and  just smiled shyly.

He hugged her and she also hugged back 

His lips come more near to her and they started kissing each other.


At the moment Rathore enters in conference hall with a  frowned face ( vaise ye 😾😾 inka normal face hai ) and a bang.


Sakshi falls from chair and comes out of her dreamland. (  Ye na sudherengi . Madam ji jara dekh ke ho skta hai jis raaste pr aap ja rhi ho vha ________________________ ho.



Choree and ayesha stifles their laugh, Arjun rolls his eyes and rathore ignores her.               Sbke liya ye normal hai ( kyunki ye madam ji abnormal hai🀭)


Sakshi (in mind) : uff..how handsome he is ,par ye iska gussa.... Ise to bas bahana chahiye sbpar chillane ka.. meri taraf to dekhta bhi nhi hai. Pta nhi kaunsi duniya mein khoya rehta hai ki is sundar chehre pr iski nazar hi nhi jaati

 ( looking to Arjun from corner of her eyes) .                                                                                            ( Pov : Kahi iski koi girlfriend to nhi ya phir wife ) 

Sakshi : nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😭😭


Ayesha use shake Krti hai . Sbko apni taraf ( except one ) dekhta dekh vo conscious ho jaati hai aur sbki taraf dekhkr normal nod krti hai.

 

Rathore :  Damn it. Sakshi tumhara dhyan kaha rehta hai, pta nhi tum is team mein ho bhi kyun,  I dont get it .Kbhi to serious ho jaya kro. Forget it and team focus    

 

Chotu  : Sir koi case hai. Kya hai. Ab kaun mrgya ya phir smuggling ya kidnaping . Kahi murder to nhi.

Shree: Are nhi yrr aisa koi mail to nhi aaya , na maine aisa kuch suna.

Ayesha: Maine bhi aaj news nhi dekhi ,shyd kuch serious ho.

Choree : Kya baat kr rhi hai aaj tune news nhi dekhi .Yeh anarth kaise ho gya. Hey bhagwan!!!!


Ayesha unke glare krte hue kehti hai : Ho jaata hai yrr . Aaj late uthi thi ; vo kl vala case late solve hua tha na isiliya.

Chotu : Haan aaj maine bhi late utha isiliya jyaada kuch kha nhi paaya.


 Vo sb aisa hi aapas mein baatein krne lg jaate hai. Sakshi  Arjun ko dekhne mein busy hai. Rathore teeno ko bulata hai pr koi uspr gaur nhi krta.


Tbhi insb se irritate hokr .

Arjun ( loud voice mein ) : Chup ek dum chup. Pura din chik chik lgaye rkhte ho . Kaam ek bhi dang se nhi hota tum logo se. Vo bol kya rha hai vo to sun lo. Ab complete silence nhi to samjhe ya samjhaun.


Rathore bs nod krke uski trf dekhta hai , Arjun ignore krta hai .


Rathore : Team silence aur focus kro.


EvryoneπŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€πŸ‘€πŸ‘€πŸ‘€πŸ‘€πŸ‘€πŸ‘€πŸ‘€


Rathore : Commissioner sir ke saath meeting thi.

Phir sb discuss krne lgte hai.

Choree : pkka koi bda case hoga . 

Ayesha : ha mujhe bhi yehi lgta hai.


Rathore : Shut up. Damn it. 2 min chup nhi baith skte tum sb. Ab jb tk mera bolna khtm na ho koi beech emin nhi bolega. ( sb nod krte hai ) Ayesha ,ab se tum sb ko  ye  reports and all akele nhi krna hoga .


Ayesha: kyu sir ???

Rathore glares her for speaking un between  


Rathod : ku ki kl se hme ek research specialist join krne wali hai .


Shree: kya ?? sir ek aur ldki?

Ayesha Sakshi glares him.


Shree: nhi mera mtlb sir vo field pr sb kaise handle kregi ? Upr se research department se aayegi to vaise hi use guns kaha chalani aati hongi.


Rathore: Dekhte hai filhal to Commisioner sir se kaafi tareef suni hai , baaki kl dekh lenge. For now ab tum sb last week ke saari cases ki file complete kro aaj ke aaj. Bahut time paas kr liya tumlogo ne.  Poora din baatein krva lo bs tumse.



Sakshi : arre yrr ye isko daure pdte hai kya . Chlo shodo ek nyi ldki aayegi hmara kaam to km hoga. Arjun tumhe kya lgta hai.


 Choree: Are yr ise sote hue sher ko kyun jagana hota hai. Shanti nhi psnd hai kya ise.

Khud to mregi hi hme bhi mrvayegi is khadus se.


Arjun: (I dont care wale attitude mein use glare krte hue  )  Ek aur ko babysit (☺️) krna pdega   aur kya.   

Aur tum apne kaam se kaam rkho , hr baat mein apni reporter wali taangein mt adao .  Phir se tut jayengi aur is baar schmein.  


Aur ha files mujhe 3 ghante mein chahiye  Samje ya Samjhaun  kehkr chla jaate hain.

( Pyaar tera bcheya vaarga ae🀫🀫🀫🀐🀐🀭🀭😍)


 Sakshi sbki taraf dekhti hai.


Choree and Ayesha use glare krte hai aur jldi jldi reports complete krne mein lg jaate hain.


Sakshi:  Are yrr aisa mt dekho, main to bs . Vaise bhi isse to kuch puchna hi bekaar hai.


Rest : yehi hm smjha rhe hai


Sakshi: Pr phir bhi kitna hot lgta  hai yrrπŸ’­πŸ’­. Hayee kisi din jaan hi le lega inka pyaar.


Rest 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐



 


Aajke liya itna hi baaki ki baatein agli update mein. Aur ha aap sb apne views ekdum bindaas hokr dijiya . Hm sb pdenge aur ha reply bhi karenge.


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Neeche vali shayari apko Ariya ke reference mein jaise aap chaho vaise explain krni hai.

Aur ha sabko krna hai ,vrna smje ya samjhaun.



Tumhe nazar na lage is zamane Ki

Zaroorat hai tumhe sabse chhipane Ki

Aarzoo hai ki tum hamari ho jao

Bahut hasrat hai tumhe sine se lagane ki….

Edited by Antiqueimpulse - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Interesting CS

Continue soon 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Sakshi aur uske dreams....

Choree ayesha kyu inta bolte ho ki arjun ki daant sunne prhe 

Arjun kbhi nhi sudhrega .


For shayari - i like to think both of them are saying this to each other.

Riya to Arjun - she thinks that Arjun is brilliant , everyone likes in  a way so , she doesn't want anything bad happening to him.

She loves him and wants him to like her too . She wants to take away his pain.

Arjun to Riya- He thinks she is so loveable , everyone likes her. So wants to hide her from everyone. He wants to tell her that he also love her.


Thnx for the update

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Nice update

Love it

Cont soon