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PART 29

Next day

In Khurana Mansion

Anjali came to Maan's room

Anjali: Maan chalo beta breakfast ke liye

Maan was  looking out of window 

Anjali : Maan chalo beta

Anjali saw him looking at geet who was in garden with seher

Anjali: kab tak Maan aise hi rahoge? Dekho Geet ki taraf usne zindagi jeene ki wajah dhund li hai tum kab samjhoge

Maan: Kya samajhu. Mere zindagi me agar aap tino ke alawa meri zindagi ka hissa sirf Geet ban Sakti hai. Seher uske jine ki wajah hai. Mere jine ki wajah geet hai. Pyar ka Naam hamesha pana to nahi hota na

Anjali: jaisa tum chaho. Please breakfast to karlo

Maan: ok mom chaliye.

At breakfast table

Amar: Maan aaj hame charity function ke liye Amritsar jana hai.

Maan: Dad main nahi aa paunga aaj important presentation ki tayari karni hai meeting ke liye

Amar: Par beta hum sab jaa rahe hai. Mohinder ki family bhi. 

Savitri: Haa beta. Devki ji Amritsar se  hamare sath lautne wali hai.

Maan: Dad jaa rahe ho na aap sab . Brij to hai aapke sath. Wo sab kam handle kar lega

Anjali: Aise Achha lagta hai kya koi bhi kaam Brij par dal Dena

Maan: Yes Mom. Wo mera best friend hai . Aur KC ka employee bad me

Amar: Tumse to baat karna hi bekaar hai

Maan: Am done with breakfast. Office ke liye Nikal raha hun. Bye all

In KC

Maan entered staff greeted him.

Maan saw Geet was not present there.

Maan: Romeo geet nahi aayi.

Romeo: Wo aaj sab Amritsar Jane wale the to fir Geet

Maan cut him between

Maan: oh right aaj Geet nahi aayegi. Romeo main cabin me kuchh files dekh Raha hun

Kal ke presentation Ko ready kardo. You know better it's home project.

Romeo: Ok Maan sir.

Maan in cabin

Maan: You are fool Maan bas Josh me aakar mana kar diya. Geet ke saath reh pate. Leave it focus on work 

In Outhouse.

Rano: Beta chalo na. Hum milkar Seher ka khayal rakhenge. Aur phir lautne me der ho jayegi dadi Ko bhi to lane jana hai.

Brij: Haa Gudiya chalo na saath. Yaha tu Akeli kaise rahegi

Geet: Papa ji AAP to samjhiye Seher ke liye main nahi aana chahti. Uski bahar care nahi kar paungi. Phir wo rone lag jayegi. Abhi abhi iska Rona kam hua hai. Aur Veer ji ye Khurana mansion hai. Itni security hai kya hoga kisi Ko awaz lagayi to daud kar chale aayenge

Brij: Thik hai dhyan rakhna. Bye Gudiya. Chhoti gudiya Ko bhi bye( said to Seher).

Al left

In office, 

Romeo: Sir ye presentation ke related jo file hai wo Geet ke pas hai

Maan: Don't worry. Main Brij se baat kar leta hun. Outhouse ki dusri key hai mere pas.

Maan called Brij

Maan: Brij main outhouse se file Leni hai chabi hai mere pas bas inform kar Raha hun.

Brij: Geet hai ghar me. Chabi ki jarurat nahi padegi.

Maan: Ok Brij bye

Brij: Bye Maan

In Outhouse 

Geet was in drawing room playing with seher.

Just then maan came

Geet: Sir aap 

Maan: kal ke presentation ki file chahiye thi

Geet: Ji Abhi layi.

Geet kept Seher in cradle went upstairs to bring file.

As geet left she started crying

Maan saw her, held her in his arms.

Geet saw Maan holding Seher

Geet: Thodi der ke liye bhi akele nahi Rehti Rone lag jati hai. Ye Rahi file. Come Seher

Maan: ok geet. Bye.

Maan reached office occupied with work

In evening

 maan got call from  Brij

Brij: Maan aaj hum nahi Laut payenge. Meri Dadi maa ki BP badh gayi. Aur Sara kam ab Amar uncle aur papa par aa  Gaya hum sab kal dopahar Ko lautenge. Tum ghar pohchte hi Geet Ko Bata Dena uska phone nahi lag Raha 

Maan: Ok Brij take care

Maan left for home. As he entered through mansion main gate he saw Geet. She was panic. Seher was with her too. 

Maan: Kya hua Geet?

Geet: Seher Ko fever hain. Aur roye jaa Rahi hai. Mujhe hospital Jana hain.

Maan: Geet calm down. Chalo mere saath.

Maan drove Geet to hospital. 

Maan: Don't worry Geet. Dr. Seema Agrawal wo bohot achhi doctor hai. 

In hospital 

Doctor did check up of Seher

Geet: Doctor kya hua Seher Ko?

Doctor: I know aaj kal ladkiya  sab figure conscious ho gayi hai. But it's necessary for child health. 

Geet : Seher is my adopted daughter. Bas kuchh din pehle hi Seher ki maa ki death ho gayi

Dr: Am sorry log janbujhkar Aisa karte hai to main thoda overreact kar gayi.

Geet: Aap bohot achi hai. Patient ki boht care hai aapko.

Doctor: Abhi aap jo milk de Rahi hai it's not good for her. Main aapko formula milk likhwa deti hun. Par ye bohot jyada costly hoga. It's not usual brand. But itni chhoti hai. Ye uske liye thik hoga. I hope you understand. Abhi ke liye Maine medicine de di hai thik ho jayegi. Buy it as soon as possible

Geet: Ji doctor 

Geet left with Maan to buy medicine

In medical shop

They bought Medicine

Handed bill to geet. 

Geet: Itni mehengi 

Ji medicine aur formula milk milakar its Rs. 8000 

Shopkeeper: Har mahine formula milk ka kharcha kam se kam 6000 to hota hai.

Geet checked her purse. 

Maan knew it she never carry this much money with her.

Maan gave his credit card to shopkeeper

Maan: Swipe kar dijiye.

Isase pehle tum kuchh Kaho main keh deta hun

Maan: Tum mujhe baad mein de Dena

They reached mansion 

Maan dropped her to Outhouse

Maan: Geet main kuchh help kar du

Geet: Abhi sab aa jayenge.

Maan: Geet main tumhe batana bhul gaya. Aaj sab log nahi aa payenge. Tumhari dadi ki Tabiyat thik nahi hai

Geet: wo thik hai na kya hua

Maan: Kuchh nahi bas BP ka problem ho Gaya tha. Unhe aaj rest Lene ke liye bola hai. 

Geet: Shukar hai. Thank you Maan sir aaj ke liye. Main aapke paise lauta dungi.

Maan: main Janta hun. Thik hai bye. take care.

Geet: Ji bye sir.

Maan left. 

In KM

Maan was taking rest. His phone rang.

Brij: Maan Geet ka dhyan rakhna wo akeli hai.

Maan: Use kaha kisi ki jarurat hai.

Brij: what happened?

Maan: kuchh nahi milke aata hun thodi der me

Brij: Bye Maan

Maan: Bye

Maan thinking " jau ya nahi"

Suddenly lights went off

Maan called servant

Maan: ye suddenly lights off Kyun kya hua?

Chandu: Area me power failure ho Gaya hai major problem hai

Maan: Generator to ON karna tha na?

Chandu : Ji wo.....

Maan: Diesel khatam ho Gaya to lana chahiye tha na

Chandu: Ji wo generator kam nahi kar Raha

Maan: Tum logo ka dhyan kaha rehta he. Maine kaha tha sari chije up to date chahiye chahe jarurat ho ya na ho

Chandu: Ji aaj hi check kiya tha. Maine call bhi kiya, repairing ke liye aadmi kal aane wala tha. Par aaj hi

Maan: Ok jao tum Mansion me candles Laga do  aur charging light ON kar do. Bring me torch

Chandu: Ji sir

In Outhouse 

Geet was not able to do anything though she turn on mobile flash as Seher was crying continuously

Just then Maan reached Outhouse heard Seher crying

Maan : Geet  Geet

Geet: Maan sir me yaha bedroom me hun

Maan went upstairs 

Maan: Kya hua

Geet: Pata nahi achanak Rone lag gayi. Phir power cut

Maan: Main call karta hun. Doctor Ko

Maan talked to doctor

Maan: Geet doctor ne kaha do tin din me  sab control ho jayega

Geet: waise bhi iska medicine ka time ho Gaya hai shayad so jaye.

She started crying again 

Maan: Geet main ye bed Ko window ki taraf shift kar deta hun. Shayad use behtar Lage. Thodi hawa jyada aayegi 

Geet: Jee 

Maan shifted bed.

Maan: Ho Gaya Geet.

Geet sat with Seher in her arms. 

Geet: Seher so jano na baby. Mumma Ko bohot fiqr hoti hai.

Geet was feeling sleepy 

In moonlight Maan was observing Geet continuously way she was worried for Seher.

Geets eyes were heavy. Maan holded her head. Seher was in her lap. Maan arranged pillow for her. Took seher from her lap. By now she stopped crying but didn't slept

Maan: Hey Chhoti Snow-white tum hamari snow-white Ko Kyun pareshan kar Rahi ho. Maan tried to make her sleep. 

While talking to Seher who was in her lap. Maan slept. After some time Geet woke up 

She found torch. Geet took Seher who was sleeping carefully. Kept her in Cradle. Took pillow and arranged it according  Maans back  comfort. It was little cold So she covered Maan with   shawl. She lost balance cause of improper light she fell. Her head collided with Maan's  chest. Maan became conscious. Maan could see her face in moonlight  Geet tried to get up

Geet: I am sorry. Wo main shawl aur pillow. 

Maan: It's ok Geet. Tum so jaoi. Thank you for shawl pillow. Maan helped her to get up

Geet: Nahi mujhe neend nahi aa Rahi.

Maan in his mind " Mere itne Karib aa kar tumne to meri neend uda di Geet"

Maan: Still take rest

Maan was going out

Geet: Aap kaha ja rahe ho 

Maan: I need to use washroom.  Geet tumne khana khaya?

Geet: Nahi wo Seher ki wajah se dhyan hi nahi Raha.

Maan : Ok.

 Maan called Chandu. Told him to bring dinner to Outhouse.

Maan went to washroom. When he came out

Geet: Sir Maine khana Laga diya hai. 

Maan: Tum geet

Geet: Sath me khayenge. Thank you aaj ke liye.

Maan: Thanks to mujhe kehna chahiye. Chahe kaise bhi ho but you gave me importance

Geet: Sir aap shadi kyu nahi kar lete

Maan dropped the spoon.

Maan: Tum ache se janti ho Geet. Kyun puchh Rahi ho? Main tumhare Siva kisi aur ke saath khud ki life imagine nahi kar Sakta Geet.

Geet: Agar meri shadi Ranvir se ho jati to aap kya karte

Maan: Tab shayad kuchh karne ki jarurat hi nahi padti. Kyunki tab main yeah sochkar khud Ko Sambhal Raha tha ki tum bohot khush ho Ranvir ke saath. Tum ek dusre se bohot pyar karte ho. Geet tum ab bhi Ranvir se pyar Karti ho tabhi to move on nahi karna chahti naa

Geet: Mujhe Achha nahi lagta AAP meri wajah se is tarah behave karte ho. Maan sir aap samajte

Kyun nahi aap ek Baar shaadi ke liye haa bol dijiye. Sab sahi ho jayega. Aunty ne mujhe ladkiyon ki photos dikhayi hai. Bohot achi ladkiyan hai trust me sir. Usme se kisi se  bhi shadi kar lijiye. Aap ka boht dhyan rakhegi. 

Maan: main apna Dhyan rakh Sakta hun Geet. Mujhe pura KC sambhalna hai. Mere employees ki responsibility hai mujhpe

Geet: Aap sab ki care karte hai. Par aap nahi chahte aap ki care karne wali koi ho.

Maan: Geet tum khana kha kar so jao. Mera ho Gaya

Geet: Nahi aapne finish nahi kiya hai. Khana bacha hai aap ki plate me. Please kha lijiye

Maan: Ok. Tum bhi kha lo

Geet remembered " Anjali told her (Maan har baat ka gussa khane par nikal deta hai. Shaadi ke bare me bolo to kehta hai ki wo sirf tumse shadi karega. Tumhari jagah kisi aur ladki Ko nahi dena chahta."

A tears escaped from her eyes. Geet cried. Maan could sense that she was crying.

Maan: Geet kya hua tum ro Kyun Rahi ho? Tum thik to ho na? Kahi dard ho Raha hai kya?

Geet: Sir aap itne ache kyu hai?

Maan: Geet main hamesha se Aisa hi hun

Geet: Aap Selfish Kyun nahi ho sakte.

Maan: Geet main selfish hun tabhi aise behave karta hun. Agar nahi hota tar ghar me sabki sunta

Maan: Ek tum hi ho jiske sath main apni zindagi guzarna chahta hun.

Geet: Main kaise samjhau aap Ko

Maan: Mat samjhao rehne do

Geet: Agar Maine aapse shadi kar li. Aur kabhi aapse pyar nahi kar payi. Aur wo bhi nahi kar payi jo ek patni pati ke liye Karti hai. Ye rishta naturally expectation rakhta hai. Kuchh jarurate Hoti hai Maan sir. Use kai aage nikal aayi hu main.

Maan: Hum dono ke liye mere akele ka pyar kafi hai Geet. Mera pyar itna ghatiya nahi ki main tumse kuchh bhi jabardasti Karu. Bas tum mere aas pas rahogi Wahi mere liye sab kuchh hai. Mujhe pura Bharosa hai tum bhi mujhse pyar karne lagogi

Geet: Aur na hua to

Maan: Main to isi baat se khush rahunga ki Geet jo mere hisab se duniya ki Sabse achhi ladki hai usne Maan Singh Khurana Ko Chuna. Main to isi me khush ho jaunga. Aur ab to mujhe bhi Seher ki aadat ho gayi hai Geet. Tum se juda har rishta apnana chahta hun. Bas ek baar haa keh do Geet

Geet: Haa

Maan: ok.  Wait.. wait.... Geet tumne haa kaha

Geet: Haa main aapse shaadi karungi. 

Maan holded her hand tightly

Maan: Sach Geet.

Tears escaped from Maan's eyes.

Geet: Sir aap ro rahe ho

Maan: Nahi ye meri Khushi hai jo mere aankho se dikh Rahi hai

Geet: Mujhe is waqt ye baate nahi karni chahiye. Par meri aur ek wajah hai shadi karne ki. Main aapse kuchh bhi chhupana nahi chahti

Maan: Batao Geet. Mujhe tumhari yahi baat pasand hai tum honest ho.

Geet: Main shadi ke bare me sochna bhi nahi chahti. Ek bar shadi tutne ke Baad himmat hi nahi thi

Geet: Ek aap hi ho jisne mujhse  koi expectations nahi rakhi. Agar aap is tarah se mujhe apnane ke liye ready hai. To main bhi ready hun. Aur Meri Dadi ka narajgi bhi kuchh kam ho jaye. Wo waise bhi mujhse khush nahi hai. Seher Ko ghar me dekhegi to pata nahi kya hoga. Unki tabiyat thik nahi agar meri wajah se unhe kuchh ho Gaya to.

Maan: Main samajhta hun Geet.

Geet: Meri baate Abhi puri nahi Hui sir

Maan: Bolo Geet

Geet: Main nahi chahti humari shadi ke bare me aap kisi Ko bhi bataye. Bas simple wedding chahiye. Khurana construction me bhi nahi. Main aapki kisi cheej par koi haq nahi jataungi. Aap Ko mere sath shaadi register karne ki bhi jarurat nahi sir. Aap itna sab kuchh selfless ho kar rahe ho to main bhi aap par koi cheej nahi thopungi. Jaise main pehle KC me kaam Karti thi waise hi job karna chahti hun. Ghar me ek bahu Bankar main Apne pure farz nibhaungi. Aisa kuchh bhi nahi karungi jis wajah se ghar me kisi Ko bhi hamare rishte par Shak ho. Bas main ye baate hum dono ke beech me rakhna chahti hun. Aap Brij Veer ji Ko bhi mat batana. Waise bhi aaj kal wo aapki side jyada lete hai. 

Maan: sab manjur hai Geet. Waise mujhe sunkar acha laga Brij meri side leta hai.

Suddenly Seher started crying. 

Maan: Rehne do Geet main Sambhal lunga. Tum so jao waise bhi it's 1.30 thodi der so jao. 

Geet: Nahi aap so jaiye. Main Sambhal lungi. Please sir.

Geet sat near Cradle trying to pat her to sleep. 

Maan lied on bed staring at  both of them he drifted to sleep

In morning, Geet woke up 

She saw Seher in Cradle , Maan was sleeping She covered Maan with shawl

Went to freshen up performed pooja and made breakfast

Maan woke up saw himself  with shawl Geet was not there. He went near cradle, Seher wasn't crying anymore. 

Maan: Yaar tum to sach me angel ho jo main itne saalo me nahi kar paya. Tumne to kuchh dino me kar diya. 

Geet: Sir breakfast ready hain. 

Maan: Geet main fresh hokar aata hun.

Geet: Maine aap ka Saman mansion se magwa liya aap yahi ready ho jaye. Kyunki servants ne bataya ki light na hone ki wajah se tank me Pani nahi bhar sakte. To Pani nahi aa Raha. 

Maan: Ye sare servants Ko ho kya Gaya hai? Kuchh jyada hi dheel mil Rahi hai

Geet: Aap breakfast kar lijiye. 

Maan freshen up . Maan saw Geet was feeding to Seher. 

Geet: Sir breakfast table par hai

Maan: Tum Geet

Geet: Seher Ko khila dun phir. Aap kha lijiye aapko office Jane me late ho jayega

Maan had breakfast. 

Chandu: Sir light aa gayi

Maan: Mujhe dikh Raha hai. Aur servants kya kar rahe hai ye bhi dikh Raha hai. Tum chalo main aata hun

Maan went 

Geet: Seher ye kitna chillate hain. Hum kaise rehenge inke sath

Maan heard this but pretended he didn't 

Maan came 

Geet: kya hua?

Maan: Wo main mera phone bhul Gaya

Geet: Thank god suna nahi

Maan went to KM and called servants

Maan: Dekho main chillana nahi chahta. Par aap sab majbur karte ho

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thanks for update

finally geet agree for marriage with her conditions which maan accept happily

Thank you for updating

Part 29 

Fabulous Update

Maan tells his mother that he has always only thought about Geet

and cannot marry someone else

Geet now decided to marry Maan but why she wants to keep everything a secret 

Maan is happy that Geet has agreed and he tells her his love is sufficient 

for both of them 

hope somehow everyone finds out 

thanks for the pm and update

Part 29

Magnificent update.... amazingly written

can understand Anjali's concern

Maan loves Geet so much...... 

liked his thoughts about love

of cos Geet refuses to go out with Seher

oh no Seher has fever

Thank God Maan came at the right time

at least Seher will be fine

well Brij is worried about Geet and asks Maan to take care of her

Maan's dilemma is reasonable

so there is a power failure

Maan's anger with the servant is justified

great that Maan is there with Geet

Geet confronts Maan about getting married

liked that Maan was direct with Geet

wow she agrees to marry Maan but will not love him

his love is enough for both of them

she wants a simple wedding 

Maan is happy

will she ever fall for him?

update soon 

 Maan is happy geet accept his proposal but this alliance have some condition but maan agree fr every conditions

Nice update..

Finally geet agreed to marry maan..

Continue soon..

Interesting.. 

Both the families went to Amritsar, geet n maan took care of seher n got to spend some time together.. 

Finally geet agreed to marry maan.. 

Seher is so cute.. 

hi, how are you?

shall await an update

sorry meant to tag Priyal