Start Commentor Award (Part 5)
Winner: Creampuff
Runner ups: Karamjeet, coderlady
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-ups
Note:Lets continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun
Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Lets see, who gets it most right
Song game: So for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Lets see part padhke sabke mann meinkaunsa song aata hai
Part 6
M- Or may be my date has better taste of this ice-cream
He says wiping ice cream from her upper lip with his thumb and places it in her mouth
She is frozen at her place white as sheet
She berates herself in her mind. she knew this was a bad decision, but still she had to come with him alone
M- Chalein...?
She moves away agitatedly
G-No No No. You are a creep...I am not coming with you. Never!
She starts to book her cab while walking to a well-lit area
He follows her
M- Kahan jaa rahi ho? Waise, tumhare ex ki shaadi hai in a few weeks, mujhe invitation bhi aaya hai. Chaaho toh you can come as my plus one
Geet ke kaan khade ho jaate hain. But she curbs her curiosity
G-Not interested! You are creeping me out with your ice cream feeding and what not
She thinks of it as some sexual innuendo
M- Arrey aise kaise cheap? Ice cream maine tumhe hi to hi khilai hai... Khud to nahi khai....
He says this with a fit of a laughter
She stops shocked at his laughter
G-Why are you laughing?
M- Well.. Tumhari shakal dekh ke... Bhoot dekh liya hai kya..??? Hahhaha... Shakal dekho apni hahaha... Seriously..?? Tum darr rahi ho..???
She tries to normalize....will she even admit ki wo darr rahi hai
G- Mujhe! Mujhe tumhari ice cream khaani bhi nahi....ewww gross
She looks away.....continuing to walk
G- Tum! Tummm ice cream apni date ko khilao...haan usko hi...uska atitude dekha hai...."look at me! I have boobs!"
She rolls her eyes
M- Well she has!!! Didn't she...??
She gives an angry smile
G-Really? Breaking news Maan- everybody has!
She is just too on your face about it
G- Do you realize how much silicon she has in those?
She shrugs
G-Khair mujhe kya
M- What... How do you know...???? Mere itne kareeb thi but I didn't realize...
G-Hello...I am the doctor here. Tumhe waise bhi kahan kuch pata lagna hai, tumhe ghurne se fursat thi?
M- Ohh someone has noticed this too!! I think kahin se jalne ki bu rahi hai...
G-Whatttt??? Main kyun jalun usse?? I am just saying as a doctor aur log toh notice karenge hi...aise openly ghurna band karo phir
She mimics her...
G-O sorry Maan...napkin gir gaya....
She acts by picking up an imaginary napkin and does an over the top mimic
Maan bursts into a laughter at her mimicry
G-I tell you; she wants your money!
M- I know that she wants my money. Tabhi iss time main tumhare saath hoon yahan aur chahta hoon ki yeh raat kabhi khatam naa ho
She gives him a dead pan look
G-Seriously, what do you want? s*x?
Maan raise an eyebrow
M- Uske liye brothels hain I guess
He says giving her a convincing look
G- Maine sex kaha STD nahi. You just get STDs in brothel
She sighs
G-Then what do you want?
M- Nothing.... Bass tumhara saath... It's just that ki it feels like it's me... Mujhe dikhawa nahi karna padta jo main saara din duniya ke samne karta hoon.. Tumnahi samjhogi. Ab chalein? Thand baadh rahi haiβ¦aur raat bhi
G- Lets make this clear. You say you donβt want anything from me...bass "saath" really? Am I supposed to believe this? After kissing me 4 times for revenge you want saath? No, you want revenge. I know it.This is some kind of plan of yours, Maan Singh Khuraana
Maan thinks for awhile ki how she gets to read him this perfectly... But yeah... He is THE Maan Khurana... How can he put his feet back?
M- Ohh you got me...
He Smirks
M-I kissed you because tumne bhi koi acha nahi kiya tha uss din... Main chahta to tumhe pata bhi na chalta aur tum log kahan ke kahan gayab ho jaate... Lekin I appreciated your efforts for your family... Lekin hisaab toh barabar karna tha naa.. I think it was not harmful for you... Maybe you enjoyed... (he winks)
She gasps with shock
G-You are gross! You assaulted me...am I supposed to enjoy an assault? I should have filed a complaint for molestation. You just ruined it with your last line
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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