Originally posted by: rekha_crm
Very well written.
Everything about it was perfect..
Anna ne maar diya Malhar ko. 😭
Kalyani ne revenge le liya.. 👏
AS 😡😡
thank you so much rekha ❤️
means a lot🤗
Originally posted by: rekha_crm
Very well written.
Everything about it was perfect..
Anna ne maar diya Malhar ko. 😭
Kalyani ne revenge le liya.. 👏
AS 😡😡
thank you so much rekha ❤️
means a lot🤗
Originally posted by: Sehreemlove
first episode is very very emotional Mai chahkar vi apne tears nahi rok pa rahi hu😭😭😭😭 but it's very beautiful and interesting story 😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I am very excited for next episode 😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
thank you so much 🤗
yeah this was emotional
next chapters will be fun❤️
Oh lord..I m totally emotional right now 😭 can't wait for the next chapter
thank you so much🤗
next chapters will be fun and romantic❤️
Emotional and interesting chapter
Aww
KalMa romance and nok-jhonk❤️
Malhar ji on mission to catch Anna
but Anna killed Malhar ji💔😭😭😭
Felt bad for Kalyani💔
Strong Kalyani👍🏼
Anna ko goli maari and revenge completed🥳👏
Pawar too supported her👍🏼
AS abhi tak nahi badli
Moksh❤️
Thanks for writing 👍🏼
Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius
Emotional and interesting chapter
Aww
KalMa romance and nok-jhonk❤️
Malhar ji on mission to catch Anna
but Anna killed Malhar ji💔😭😭😭
Felt bad for Kalyani💔
Strong Kalyani👍🏼
Anna ko goli maari and revenge completed🥳👏
Pawar too supported her👍🏼
AS abhi tak nahi badli
Moksh❤️
Thanks for writing 👍🏼
thank you so much bagu🤗❤️
hi just wanna tell you that i love all your stories and all of them are interesting 😊but i have a request can you bring back malhar in this story like nikhil is malhar but can't tell anybody as he is on a mission , something like that please can you bring back malharOriginally posted by: Chandu_500
Chapter 1
Kalma in their room
Kalyani is standing near the mirror and drying her hair. Malhar is staring at Kalyani while wearing his uniform. Kalyani notices malhar staring at her, she blushes and continues drying her hair. Malhar removes a button from his shirt.
Malhar: Kalyani yeh dekho na mere shirt ka button tootgaya hai, aake lagado please.
Kalyani knows everything, she saw him through the mirror, removing his shirt’s button. But, she didn’t say anything ( she too wanted to get close to him).
Kalyani: ji malhar ji, abhi aayi.
Kalyani moves her hair to one side teasing malhar and showing off her back to him and goes to the cupboard and takes sewing kit from there. She goes near malhar. Malhar hands her the button. She starts sewing,malhar tucks her hair behind her ear. He then places one hand on her waist. Kalyani smiles and continues sewing button on is shirt. Malhar pulls her towards him. Kalyani looks at him.
Kalyani: malhar ji kya kar rahe hai aap koyi aajayega chodiye muje.
Malhar: yeh humara bedroom hai Kalyani yeha kaun aayega, moksh bhi school gaya hai. Tum kaho tho aaj main office ke chutti leloon?
He places his finger on her lower lip and rubs it. Kalyani smiles, moves close to him and cuts the extra thread with her teeth, malhar closes his eyes.
Kalyani: sapnon ki duniya se bahar aayiye aur office jaayiye. Muje bahut kaam hai, abhi khana banana hai aur uske baadh muje bhi office jaana hai.
Malhar: Kalyani tum na, 18 saal ki Kalyani I teek thi,jab se DM bani ho poora kadoos hogai ho.
Malhar turns his head faking his anger, Kalyani smiles,moves forward and kisses him on him cheek, and whispers in his ear saying..
Kalyani: aap bhi singam rane hi teek the, abhi bahutbadmaash hogaye hai.
Malhar was about to reply to her, he suddenly gets a call.
Malhar: haan main abhi pahunta hoon, sab ko positions lene keliye bolo, main abhi aa raha hoon.
Kalyani: kya hua malhar ji? Sab teek tho hai?
Malhar: abhi tho a Kalyani, lekin bahut jald sab teekhojayega, hume information milihe anna ke bharemein, mere aadmi waha pahunchgayehai already, abhi muje jaana hoga. Ek bhar yeh anna pakda gay ana, tho tumharesar se uska katra bhi humesha keliye hatjaayega. Main chalta hoon.
Kalyani: malhar ji main bhi aapke saat chaloongi.
Malhar: nay Kalyani waha bahut katra hai, tum office jao, tumhara meeting hai na.
Kalyani: lekin malhar ji...
Malhar: chinta mat kato Kalyani muje kuch nay hoga,yeh anna jaise hazaaron mujrimon se hum roz nipatthe hai, tum tho kudh DM ho,yeh sab jaanti ho na.
Kalyani; DM hone se pehle main aapki patni hoon,chinta tho hogi na. aap muje promise keechiye kia aap apna dyaan rakhenge.
Malhar: accha Kalyani, teek hai, main vaada karta hoonki main apna dyaan rakhoonga, ab main jaao? Already bahut late hochuki.
Kalyani nods her head. But she gets a strange feeling that something bad is going to happen. But she brushes off her thoughts and goes to office.
Kalyani finishes her meeting and realizes that malhar didn’t call her at all after he left to work. She calls malhar, but he doesn’t answer the call, she gets worried. She tries to contact pawar, pawar doest receive the call either.
Kalyani: yeh ho kya raha hai, koyi bhi phone nay uta raha hai, situation chahe jo bhi ho malhar ji humesha mera call utathe hai. Mera dil kyun ithna gabra raha hai.
Kalyani suddenly notices that in TV they are showing the area that malhar went to to catch anna. She increases the TV volume, in news they show about the shootout that happened in that area and they say that many goons and policemen died and some got injured.
Hearing this Kalyani panics, TV remote drops from herhand. She runs to her car and asks driver to her to that location.
Seeing Kalyani there, some policemen surrounds her giving protection. Kalyani sees pawar there.
Pawar: madam aap yeha? Aap ko katra hosakta hai, aapyeha kyun aayi?
Kalyani: pawar kaka woh sab chodiye, malhar ji kaha he? Shootout katam hogayi na, phir bhi who mere call receive nay kar rahe hai. Kab se try kar rai hoon main. Kaha hai woh?
Pawar remains silent. And his eyes are filled with tears. Kalyani gets worried.
Kalyani: aap chup kyun hai? Main aap se kuch pooch raihoon, aura ap ro q rai ho? Kaha hai malhar ji? Unhe chot lagi kya? Koyi baatnay main aagayi hoon na, main unka first aid karrongi woh teek hojayenge, ismerone wali kya baat hai? Kaha hai woh?
Pawar: Kalyani madam, malhar sir ko seene mein goli lagi, aur…
Kalyani: aur kya? Aur kya pawar kaka batayiye..
Pawar: doctor ne check karke bola ki unki saanse naychal rahi hai. Goli lagne se usi waqt malhar sir ki…..
Kalyani faints hearing this.
Scene shifts. after one year, Kalyani is making breakfast for moksh.
Kalyani gets call from inspector to inform them that they caught anna, he stayed hidden for 1 year and now he was trying to escape by flying to Dubai. Kalyani’s eyes filles with tears remembering what happened to malhar and how anna shot malhar and escaped, remembering that Kalyani burns in anger,she cuts the all. Asks anupriya to drop moksh at school and she goes to the police station.
Kalyani enters the police station and sees anna.
Anna: aayiye aayiye DM sahiba, aapk hi ka intazaar horaha tha. Main jaanta tha kia ap k eek din mulakaat zaroor hogi.
Kalyani is burning in anger.
Anna: kya hua? Ithni chup kyun hai aap? Aap ko muje dekh ke mere gala daba kar maarne ka mann karna chahiye na, ohhh ek min, gala dabakar nay, goli maarkar, jaise main ne aapke pati ko maara tha. Bahut uchal raha tha…goli maardi main ne.
He starts laughing. Kalyani couldn’t control her anger.Kalyani asks pawar (inspector) to open the gate and let him out.
Anna was surprised. Pawar does as kalyani said. As soon as anna came out, kalyani takes pawar’s revolver and shoots anna. Pawar gets shocked. Kalyani starts crying remembering malhar.
Kalyani thinks that finally she took malhar’s death revenge and now she don’t care about the consequences of her actions.
Kalyani: ayisa kya dekh rahe hai aap pawar kaka? Haan mainne maara hai isse, aone haaton se, aaj mera badla poora hua, meri malhar ji kiaatma ko shaanti milegi, aaj unhe Insaaf mila. Ab aap muje arrest karsakte hai.
Kalyani brings her hands forward asking to arrest her.Pawar wipes his tears.
Pawar: madam, aap ko jail ke salaakon ke peeche dekhkar malhar sir ki aatma ko shanti kaise milegi? Aur aap jail jaayenge tho moksh baba ka kya hoga?
Kalyani looks at pawar with confused expression.
Pawar: iss ke saat jo hua yeh uske karmon ka phal tha,na jaane isne aaj tak itne pariwaaron ko barbaad kiya, ithne logon ki jaanli,kithne bacchon ko anaad kiya, ayise aadmi ko maarkar aapne kuch bhi galat nay kiya. Aap yeha se jaayiye madam. Yeha jo bhi hua main sambhaal loonga.
Kalyani doesn’t move from there.
Pawar: jaayiye madam, moksh baba ko aapki zaroorat hai. Please jaayiye.
Kalayni thinks about moksh and agrees to go from there. She comes home, she locks herself in her room and takes out her marriage album and remembers all the moments that they spent together, a smile appears on her face still tears rolling down her cheeks. She hugs that album.
In the evening they arrange a pooja, moksh drags kalyani by hand asking her help him in decorating god’s idol. Kalyani was about to touch the flowers, someone holds her hand to see it was AS.
AS: yeh tum kya kar rai ho? Kithni bhar samjaya haitumhe kalyani, tumhe samaj q nay aata, main ne tumhe samjaya than a ki jab kuchacche kaam keliye ghar main pooja ho raha ho tho tum apne kamre mein raha karo,phir bhi mooh utake chali aati ho humesha.
Kalyani cries thinking how AS always taunted her sayingshe is manhoos. and how she blamed kalyani saying she was not able to save her husbandeven after being a DM. kalyani cries and runs to her room.
Moksh stares at AS angrily.
Hope u all liked this part, I know it’s a sad and emotional part. but there are fun chapters ahead of this and lots of twists and turns. Do comment down below and share ur views.
Originally posted by: Rimsha_Jawed13
hi just wanna tell you that i love all your stories and all of them are interesting 😊but i have a request can you bring back malhar in this story like nikhil is malhar but can't tell anybody as he is on a mission , something like that please can you bring back malhar
hi rimsha,
am glad that you like my stories.
thank you so much❤️
i like your suggestion, as this is a collaborative ff i will have to discuss this with the other writer, to make any developments. we will surely consider your suggestion. 👍🏼
Though it’s FF but my heart ached while reading about Malharji’s death.
I want Malharji back
Chapter 2:
Moksh : Mere baba shaheed hue hai. Meri Aai ne mujhe bataya. Aap meri Aai ko kuch nahi bolegi
he left
Kalyani was crying clutching Malhar ji's pic
Moksh : Aai! Tu chinta mat kar. Maine AS ko acche se suna diya. Aur dekho aapke room mein bhi Ganpati Bappa ki murti hai. Hum dono uski Pooja karte hai
Kalyani wiped tears and hugged Moksh
They both performed Pooja
On the other hand AS was fuming
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#Next day
Morning
Place : Kulkarni House
Nikhil's mother woke up Nikhil
it's 9 AM
Nikhil : Mom aap bhi na. Thodi der aur sone dijiye
Mother : Nahi. Uth ja. Office bhi toh jaana hai
Nikhil : Ok! Give me some more time
He lazily woke up
His room was filled with all his pictures
He smiled and said handsome toh main hoon
He was exercising
His abs are droolworthy😳
His mother fed him breakfast
He got ready and left for office
In the car he was chatting with 2-3 girls and was flirting with them🤣
He reached office
His business is of real estate
All are happy to see him in office
Hos secretary Kiara hugged him and welcomed him
Nikhil : Good morning baby! Let's do some work
Other secretary Rohan : Kiara madam sir has important meeting
Nikhil attended meeting
Other party was happy and they fixed the deal
OTOH
Kalyani too was working in her office
her secretary : madam I think there is discrepancy in papers which minister Kulkarni sent. I think there is big scam
Kalyani : let me analyse it
She went through document of Scheme - Jal Yojana
She found that it's not genuine and up to work
She sent pics to Anupriya
Anupriya too suggested her not to sign them as she may get into trouble
Kalyani understood it
She decided to meet minister and clear everything
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#Evening:
Kalyani came home and was tired
AS asked her to cook
Kalyani : Pushpa mavshi will cook today, I am tired
AS : Badi aayi thakne wali. Kaam taal rahi ho bass
Anu : AS jaane dijiye na. Main khaana banati hoon
AS : Tum dono maa beti yahi karti raho
Kalyani taught Moksh and they all had dinner
#Club:
Nikhil was having fun dancing
but he drinks only orange juice
He danced with girls on dance floor and left saying his mother is waiting for her
He went home
Minister was having urgent meeting
Minister : DM Kalyani Deshmukh did not sign papers. What if she found our plan?
PA : we will talk to her
Minister : If she will agree then ok! Otherwise we have other options, uske husband ko bhi toh tapkaya tha na
They laughed
Minister : Message her to meet us tomorrow
PA agreed
Nikhil went to meet his dad and asked Any problem
Minister : Abhi tak toh nahi
Nikhil went to sleep
Kalyani got message
she was startled as it was 11 PM
meeting scheduled tomorrow at 11 AM
She slept with Moksh
nikhil ❤️
my new crush😳
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