Rishbala ff solace part 6 on 14th January

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Auction heading one.the family is sad the kundra family..

The head of family Mohan kundra sitting sadly with his mother..

His wife place her hand on him and assure that everything will be fine.

Mohan:maa, i never thought these days Will come...

Dadi: don’t worry beta good thing and bad thing happen in the life we have to fight for it.

“Dadi is right,bade papa..” a girl enter in the picture.she is none other than

Madhubala Malik..

Madhubala:bade papa you always think about us.

Don’t worry we will work something on it.

Radha: madhubala, you don’t know how much lucky we are as you are going to marry our son Kabir..

Madhubala:lucky is me that.after my parents died you guys bought me up like you own child.

Dadi: where is Kabir.

Radha:he went out to bring any way to stop the auction.

Mohan: after the losses in business now i have to do auction on this house..

Mohan have tears in his eyes.

Kabir enter the picture with he look down in disappointment.

Which give them hint that now there is no way to stop the auction.

Binder:20 crore..

20 crore.. 1

20 crore.. 2.

20 cro.

“25 crore..” a man enter in the hall,all look at him and do talking..

Binder:25 crore 1

25 crore 2

25 crore 3..

And this beautiful mansion goes to mr . Rishabh kapoor.

All claps.all do talks.” Acha he is Rishabh kapoor the famous business man..”

All congrats Rkbut Rkhave his eyes on the family of kundra..

Madhubala look at rkand remember..

Rkcome to them.

Rk:mr.kundra..i give you three days Time.

Vacant my the mansion.

Kabir:mr.rai..mind your touge.

You don’t know whom you are talking.

Rk:i know very well..

Whom I’m talking.

Madhubala: hello you are talking rudely to my bade papa in our house.

Rk: your house..

Miss..what was your name ..you are that girl right who meet me at There.

Madhubala:yes..

Rk: I’m giving you three days time vacant the place.

Rkwent out of the Mansion.

Bittuji with him.

Bittuji: sir don’t know think that you bought this in more price.

Rk:this mansion is priceless to me

Now Rishabh kapoor is going to write the Destiny of these kundra.

Bittuji:sir..what you want from there.

Rk: everything.

Radha: madhubala you know him.

He was saying something.

Madhubala: yeah bade maa last week,i met him.

Flashback,

Madhubala pipe on the old factory.

Madhubala see some goons bring two kids in this factory.

Madhubala: where is the police..

There is two kids of 8 years old.They were tried up with rope.

Kidnaper: they are children of Rishabh kapoor..he is a very big man we will get money a lot.

Madhubala can’t see Those kids in pain.she lastly pick up a rod and enter to the place and hit goons with them.

Goon get hurt ,one goon pull out gun from his pocket and place it on obe girl head..

Aah..

Madhubala:leave the kid.

Don’t harm them..

Suddenly a rod hit that goon.

They look at the way and find Rishabh kapoor with Police.

Papa.. kids run to rk.

Rkhug them.

Rk:sheena meera you both are alright naa.

Sheena: Yeah papa..

Police arrest the goon.rklook at madhubala.

Rk:what you think yourself haan superwoman. Do you know what can happen if we can’t reach in time why you enter here.

Madhubala:i can’t bear their tears.

Rkstop .

Sheena:papa this aunty is very good.

She save us.

Rklook at madhubala.

Flashback ends.

Madhubala:that the day i met him while saving his kids.

Radha:Kabir take maa to room.

Mohan and Radha leaves.

Madhubala think : should i go to mr. Rishabh kapoor.if i request him he may give us time or do anything.

Precap: madhubala come to Rkhouse.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Congrats for the new story 

The first part is interesting with different characterization 

Waiting for rm meet 

Continue soon 

Thanks for the update

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In some places vansh name there plz edit it to Rishabh

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Part 2:-

 Rk come to his house.bittuji is telling him details.

Rishabh: bittuji..you too Come with me.

Let it be i will go alone.

You stay alone.

Suddenly a ball hit them.

Rishabh:what the hell..

Meera can’t you see.

Meera: sorry papa..

Rishabh:where is Sheena?

Meera: papa..she is in room.. crying..

Rishabh:Crying what happened..

Rishabhcome to the room and see sheena sitting silently.

Rishabh:sheena bacha What happen..

Sheena: nothing papa.

Rishabh: telling lies to papa.

Sheena:today i saw a mother daughter duo.so i get emotional.

Hearing that Rishabhtoo get emotional.

As he know his daughters miss their mother a lot.

Rishabhhug sheena.

Rishabhcome to near a photo of a girl the galand hanging on it.

Rishabhremember his past.

Flashback,

Rishabhis busy in his books and he dash with a girl.. shaddha..

They look at each other while falling in love with 1st sight.Rishabhis hesitate to confess love to shaddha.

But shaddha was always after him.

Finally they starting their dating.

But shaddha’s father come to know about their affair.

Shaddha and Rishabhget married against her father wishes.

After marriage,

Rishabhget a job well and shaddha start her fashion designing work.

And their life become more happy when shaddha give good news to Rishabhthat she is pregnant.

Shaddha give birth to twin girls.

Sheena and meera..

When they were 3 months.meera and Sheena are sleeping ,their nanny taking care of them.

Rishabhcome to house.

Rishabh: shaddha,come i want to show you something..

Shaddha:what..

Rishabh: come na..

Rishabhbring shaddha outside.

There is a expensive car standing..

Rishabh: how’s it.

Shaddha: Rishabh.. This..

Rishabh:our car... come let’s go for drive.

Shaddha: kids..

Rishabh:nanny is there na.

Shaddha:acha i will Drive.

Rishabh:as your wish madam..

Shaddha is driving Rishabhis with her

Rishabh: shaddha careful..

You come in highway..

Suddenly a truck come Infront of them ..

Rishabh: shaddha...

The truck hit them.

Flashback ends.

Rishabhopen his eyes and lit up diya Infront of shaddha’s picture.

Rishabhis going to the car.. when meera and sheena run to her.

Meera:papa,bring a new football for me

Sheena:and a new Bride doll for me

Rishabh:okey i will bring Barbie doll for my doll..

Oh goss don’t know how

Will i make you bride.

And meera ,she is going to bring daughter in law for me i think some time.

Sheena and Rishabhlaugh as meera is quite tomboy.

Sheena: don’t worry i will marry you..

Meera:me too.

Rishabhlaugh.

Rishabh: Acha don’t do any masti i will come soon,take care.

Rishabhsit on car And drive off.

Madhubala reach to Rishabhhouse.she ask Watchman.

Madhubala:ji i want to met Mr Rishabh Kapoor .

Watchman:chief is went out of town.

Madhubala: out of town..

Watchman:yes,he just went out in mintutes..

Madhubala:acha when he will come.

Watchman: don’t have any idea.

Madhubala: achcha achcha I will come later.

Madhubala heard a sound.

She turn and find meera and Sheena.

Sheena:hi aunty you are here.

Meera:why are you standing here.

Come inside.

Madhubala is always fond with kids They start playing.

Bittuji was on phone talking to Rishabh.he see madhubala playing with sheena and meera.

Bittuji:what she is doing here?

Rishabh:who bittuji..

Bittuji:chief.. Madhubala the girl from kundrafamily.

She is here and right now playing with kids.

Rishabh:she may come for the house.

They are going to see more bad days.

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Meera :ouch..its paining.

Madhubala: nothing beta its just small cut.

Meera get hurt by playing and crying.

Madhubala:see see now it will be okey.

See your nanny bring milk.

Meera:i hate milk.

Madhubala:you have have to drink .one minute close your nose.

Yeah drink drink.

Yes..

Madhubala make meera have Milk by closing her nose.

Bittuji see them and think.

Madhubala see the time in watch.

Madhubala:oh no.. I get late.

I have to go.

Sheena: Aunty you stay more na.

Madhubala:no beta i will come Tomorrow.you guys take care.

And it is my number.

Call me.

Madhubala went Away..

Meera: madhubala aunty kintu ache hai na..

Sheena:humare mumma bhi unke tarah hote..

At night,

Madhubala enter to the hall.Radha see her.

Radha: madhubala you are coming now.

Madhubala: sorry bade maa i got late..

Radha: where did you go.

Madhubala:i... actually i Go to meet my friend.

Radha:oh Acha come let’s have dinner together.you go washen up.

Madhubala: sorry bade ma to lie but i have reason.

I hope mr. Rishabh Kapoor will give us more time or anything.

I have to go there again to meet him.

Rishabhsee some files.his lawyers show him.Rishabhthrow it.

Rishabh:i will never let that happen.

At kundraMansion,

Radha come to Mohan.and sit near him.

Radha:we will move to my parental house.

Mohan:Rishabhhe won’t stop..

Radha:what you think he will stop.

Mohan:he is trying to destroy us..

I can’t see my family like this.

Radha:and what about Rishabh’s family.

Mohan: Radha..

Radha:Mohan we both know why he is here.why he is after us.

Mohan:the secret will be opening soon.

Radha:i will talk to him.

Mohan:no use..

Radha: I’m saying.

They heard a knock and find madhubala standing here.

Madhubala:bade Papa your milk..

Radha:i will give him.you Go beta good night.

Madhubala: good night bade ma.

Madhubala leave the place.and thinking.

Madhubala in mind:did bade papa bade ma knows why Rishabh Kapoor is after us.

What is the matter i have to find out.

Precap: madhubala and Rishabhmeet.

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Good update 

So rk's wife died in an accident 

The kids are getting close to madhu ,

Waiting to know why rk is after Kundra's ,

Continue soon 

Thanks for the update

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Part 3:- 

Madhu is getting ready.Radha come to her room. 

Radha:  madhu, where you are going? 

Madhu:bade maa i have to go somewhere. 

Radha:aaj kal kaha ja rahe hai tum. 

Madhu:Bade maa main baad mein baata tha ho.im going.. 

Madhu went out of house.kabir come to meet Madhu. 

Radha: Madhu just went out side. 

Kabir:oh acha.where is dad? 

Radha:he is taking rest... 

Kabir:what you guys hiding from me. 

Radha:what.. nothing..you go and take the keys we will shift to your nana house. 

Dadi is looking at the house.Madhu see her. 

Madhu:dadi, what happens. 

Dadi: I'm sad Madhu you don't know what this house to me. 

I can't bear all this things. 


Dadi cried Madhu console her. 

Madhu:i promise dadi we won't move from this house. 


Mohan is checking his files. 

Mohan:we are bankrupt now.hardly we have any money. 

Radha: don't worry everything will be fine. 

Mohan:i told Kabir to join my office but no he join police. 

Radha: will you be please calm down... 

Mohan:if he join my office then after my health condition get worst we may not see this worst days. 

Radha: right now.. mostly we all are on kabir's money and we quite comfortable with that.. 

Radha leaves that place. 


Mohan see the house he cant bearing this humiliation. 


Madhu enter the house and see meera and Sheena drawing. 

Meera:aunty.. 

Madhu:hi bacho how are you? 

Meera:we are good.and right now we are more good after meeting you. 

Madhu and meera and Sheena both are busy in laughing and talking. 


RK see them from balcony and having his morning coffee.he look at them carefully. 

Servent make Madhu sit on study room. 

Servent:sir will come in few seconds. 

Madhu: Okey thanks. 

Servent: would you like to have any refreshments. 

Madhu:no thanks. 

Servent leaves. 

Madhu see the room and find RK pictures with his wife and kids. 

Madhu: there is not any pictures with RK's wife with kids in their young days. 

RK:she died when they were 3 months old. 

Madhu:you..oh I'm so sorry actually i was just. 

RK: please sit down. 


Madhu and RK sit down on sofa. 

RK:i get to know you come here last day also. 

Anything important. 

Madhu:why are you buying kundra 

Mansion? 

RK:it my wish. 

Madhu:i want to request you that.. 

That.. 

Please don't buy that Mansion. 

RK: excuse me.. 

Madhu:i know you put your money's there.that mansion is a mansion for you.but for us it our home.we have deep root attrectment to there. 

RK:how you related to kundra? 

Madhu: I'm orphan,my mother was friend of Radha kundra. 

Even father was in business partner.i was in class 10 ,when my parents died. 

Then i start living there. 

RK: nice... 

Madhu: please our family is in problems please don't take this house give us time we will pay the money. 

RK: sorry I can't accept your request. 

Madhu get sad. 

RK: but i want to give you a offer. 

A proposal. 

Madhu: proposal.. which kind of proposal. 

RK:i want you to marry me. 

Madhu:what.. 

Madhu stand up hearing that. 

Madhu:what are you saying... 

RK:marry me... 

Madhu:do you know what are you 

Saying? 

RK:yeah...my children have a special bond with you and I want this marriage for them. 

Madhu:this is not possible.. 

RK:why this is impossible. 

Madhu: because I'm engaged to Kabir kundra.. 

RK:i don't care.. 

Madhu:mr.Kapoor..if you want i can come to meet your children regularly but not marriage. 

Madhu stand up to go when RK stop. 

RK:then don't expect any good from me.as I'm going to make you guys see the bad days of life. 

Madhu: please don't do anything.. 

RK:my offer is still open..24 hours you have 24 hours. 

Think wise and reply your answer to me. 


RK went out of study room.Madhu have tears in her eyes. 

That time meera and Sheena enter the room. 

Meera: aunty see we make drawing of yours. 

Sheena:and i make this.friendship brige. 

Isn't it nice. 

Madhu don't say anything but just run Away from there.she went out of the Kapoor house. 


At kundra Mansion, 

Radha is doing work when she see Madhu entering to the house. 

Radha: Madhu... where was you? Dear i called you many times. 

Madhu check her phone. 

Madhu: sorry bade ma. 

I did not notice. 

Radha :where did you go? 

Madhu:for some work.i just come after washen up. 

Madhu leave. 

Radha get a msg.she come to a corner. 

And dial a number. 


After some time, 

Radha is giving medicine to Mohan.kabir enter to the house. 

Kabir:papa..i have a question to ask.is our family have any problems with mr.Rishabh Kapoor. 

Radha and mohan get shocked. 

Radha: Kabir what are you saying. 

Kabir:mom,Rishabh Kapoor is quite responsible for our business Criss. 

He make it i can feel there is something otherwise why a man will after us like this. 

Radha get tensed and mohan get hyper. 

Mohan:why you are asking one question again and again please stop it. 

I can't bear it all. 

Mohan fastly when to his room. 

Radha: Kabir .. I'm sacred . 

All went to the door And bang. 


Mohan is not opening to the door. 

Madhu:bade papa.. 

Radha: Kabir i think we should broke the door. 

Kabir break the door and all enter the room and get shocked. 

Precap: Madhu's decision. 

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Rk wants madhu to marry him for meera and sheena.i think she will agree to marry rk for saving kundra mansion.

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Good update

Rk asked madhu to marry him for the kids,

Curious to know what Kundra's hiding, from whom Radha received msg from,

Continue soon

Thanks for the update

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Part 4:- 

Kabir and all are knocking at the door. 

Radha: Kabir break the door, I'm not feeling good. 

Madhu:bade Papa..bade Papa.. 

Kabir broke the door and all enter into the room. 

And shocked... 

They are shocked to see Mohan hold and hanging rope.he was about to commit suicide by hanging himself. 


Kabir:papa.. 

Radha: Mohan.. 

All run to him.kabir throw the rope Away. 

Radha:what were you about to do? 

How could you think about this? 

Mohan:i know i know what i was doing wrong but I'm not getting anything I can't see my family like this 

Mohan cries.all get emotional and hug Mohan. 


Madhu is in her room she have tears in her eyes.and tension .. 

She siting and thinking about all this misap.mishapening..the proposal of Rishabh Kapoor. 


Rishabh Kapooris sitting in his study room.looking at some picture. 

Rk: tomorrow is the Day... 

Tomorrow I'm going to change the destiny of singhnia s.. 

My revenge will be completed... 


Madhu: Rishabh Kapoor is doing all this for some motives,i can feel it. 

He is trying to harm us.he is enjoying to see us in pain. 

Today what happens.. 

I can't let any bad things happen to my family. 


Madhu look at her engagement ring. 

Rk is looking at the picture. When he gets a call. 


At temple, 


Madhu and Rk are sitting in the mandap of mandir. 

The wedding is happening.. 

Madhu accept Rk's offer to save her family in crisis. 

Bittuji and pandit are witness. 

Madhu sits next to Rk. Marriage rituals starts. 

They exchanging garlands.rk look at Madhu's face she is quite emotionaless..same like him. 

Rk places the mangasutra around her. 

pandit asks them for the pheres. rk start taking pheres, Madhu remember her moments with Kabir.. Radha and all.. 

Rk turn and see her. 

Madhu look at  him. 

Rk:now you will take round ahead.. 

Madhu walk ahead Rk walk after her 

Rk fills sindoor in her maang. 


At singhnia Mansion, 

All are doing packing as today They are leaving the house 

Radha: Kabir,did you get Madhu.. 

Kabir:no mom I'm trying to call her. 

Radha: don't know where is she,? where she is gone in this morning. 

Kabir: I'm trying to call her. 


Madhu feels a jerk,she feel the Car stop.Madhu see rk sitting next to him. 

Madhu:yeh car kyu roka. 

Rk:we come to our destination. 

Madhu see around and surprise to see themselves Infront of singhnia Mansion. 


Precap: truth comes out. 

I know it's a very small part,i will try to write Long from next part after seeing you guys reaction. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Rishbala got married

Waiting for the truth

Thanks for the update