Riansh ff: "My Family " last Chapter updated page 21

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MY FAMILY        

        

  The spread of flame in the forest just started 


CHAPTER -1

 

It's just an other day is VR mansion but it was gloomy day for Riddhima because vansh might have known her secret and is not behaving well with her . Riddhima is feeling the pain of parting . 


Riddhima in sad , confused state walks down to the hall and see's the ladies of the house  in the hall sipping there coffee and Ishani skimming newspaper . 


As riddhima enters 


Ishani on seeing Riddhima 


Ishani :  Mom, yeh dekho Riddhima naam ke log kahi par bhi ho kuch naah kuch aisa kar dete hai ki pura ghar barbad hojaye . ( Ishani sarcastically turns the news paper to Anupriya )


Riddhima is confused 


Anupriya smirks 


Chanchal smiles 


Siya is with straight face (don't know what to do)


Anupriya and chanchal read the news paper ,it states that 'A young scientist found dead in his car holding a love letter after commiting suicide because of Kerala CM's grand daughter Riddhima his lover gets married '.


Dadi listens to ishani 

Dadi : Ishani woh tumahari bhabhi hai so behave .

Ishani : laughs ( leaves the hall)


Riddhima is thinking something and stands there ,dadi looks at her and is concerned .


Dadi : Riddhima

Riddhima comes to dadi 

Dadi :tum uski baaton ki parwa mat karo ,tumhe pata hai naah woh aisi he hai , tum tik ho ??

Riddhima assuringly smiles 

Riddhima : it's okay dadi main tik hu ,koi baat nahi .


Everybody leaves the hall ,Riddhima picks up the news paper and reads the news and takes the newspaper and dumps it in trashbin  . 


Vansh observes Riddhima and is again suspicious of her actions .


Riddhima leaves the hall and goes to her bedroom .


Vansh follows her and entering into the room 


Riddhima : ( gibberish language ) we need to start the game .


Vansh takes away the phone from Riddhima and silently puts the phone near his ear to listen .


Riddhima is worried and shocked and helpless 


Riddhima : yeh kya kar rahe ho vansh ( Riddhima thinks she is caught red handed and vansh will know everything )


On the other side of the phone 

The person hears what Riddhima told .


Person : hello hello , Riddhima .can you here me?? 


Vansh realises the person is a women 


She cuts the call for not being audible 


Vansh holds her hand 


Vansh : kis se baat kar rahi ho sweet heart?? Aur itna tension mein kyun ho ?? 

 

Vansh puts his palm on her face 


Riddhima relaxes herself 


Riddhima : woh mere school friend hai , tum aise phone kaise le sakte ho jab mein baat kar rahi ho toh .


Riddhima leaves in anger .


Vansh : kya game start karna hai sweetheart  ?? 


Riddhima shocked ......





Please guys tell me if this is interesting or not , I will continue to write if you find it good to read . It's a story which comes in my mind whenever I think of Riddhima's character .


Index : 

Chapter 1 - page 1  

The spread of flame in the forest just started 

 

Chapter 2 - page 3 

The game  starts now 


Chapter 3 - page 4

Is vansh a murderer ??


Chapter 4 - page 5

I will protect you, because your my family 


Chapter 5 - page 6

Vansh stabbed Riddhima ?


Chapter 6 - page 7

Riddhima kidnapped Anupriya  ?


Chapter 7 - page 9

Riddhima killed Anupriya ?


Chapter 8 -page 10  

Mujhe Riddhima aur angre ka sare sach pata hai 


Chapter 9 - Page  11

 Riddhima's heartfelt confession


Chapter 10 - page 11

Just lean on my shoulder 


Chapter  11- page 13 

We will hold each other hands 


Chapter  12 -Page 14

Vansh is not good enough for  Riddhima  


Chapter 13 -Page 15 

Riddhima tumhara intezaar kar rahi hai !


Chapter 14 -Page 17

Mission : investigating vansh...


Chapter 15 -Page 18

Riddhima,bitter gourd ,taunts 


Chapter 16 -Page 19 

Vansh ka game hamesha set hota hai 


Chapter 17 -Page 19

Stop victimizing riddhima ...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It is good please make riddhima an awesome grey character aisa that woh  AP and ishani ki acche se class le ...🤪🤪😎

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I am really looking forward to a complete ff. Do make changes as per your imagination....looking forward to it. Hopefully you will continue it ❤❤❤😊

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@raveena0605......i completely agree with you. I really want to see Riddhima in a strong character....not a confused emotional one .......aache se band bajaye ishani aand Ap and Kabir or whoever else features in your story. 

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vansh she is playing ludo the game we all played from childhood any problems

really this man and his family i tell you

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Interesting 

Update Soon 

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Continue soon please.. 

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Its very interesting, pls continue👍🏼

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interesting loved it update soon 

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       Chapter 2 

         The game starts now ...



Riddhima doesn't have a answer to what vansh asked her,she doesn't turn back .


Riddhima Sweating and in tension 


Riddhima : woh main ...woh main bas ludo game ki baat kar rahi thi ,hum phele bohat khelte thay ....


Vansh comes forward and holds Riddhima's waist from behind and whispers in her ears 


Vansh : aur kitna jhooth bologi sweetheart ??

 

Riddhima panics 


Vansh still holding her tells her 



Vansh :Maine kal kaha tha naah ek shaadi nibhane keliye trust hona chahiye .jab tum mujh pe trust karogi tab he humara life start hoga ek dusre ke saath .


Vansh : naa jaane kitne raaz hai jisse mein janta nahi hun 


Riddhima in tears 



Riddhima : vansh tum trust ki baat kar rahe ho naah ek shaadi nibhane keliye toh tum kyun mujh pe trust nahi karte . Please mujh pe trust karlo 😭


Vansh resist's  Riddhima and leaves from the room 


Riddhima feels guilty because she is hiding so much from vansh and fears if this goes on then she would not be able to save there relationship .


Riddhima cries 


Riddhima : I am sorry vansh main tume kuch bhi baata nahi sakti mein majboor hoon .


Riddhima remembers something and clears up her tears 

Riddhima : 24 hours se bhi kaam time hai mere pass jo karna hai jaldhi karna hai warna sach sab ko pata chal jayega aur main nahi kar paungi jo karne keliye aaiye thi .


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Kabir in his office 

Kabir is restlessly walking around his office room and remembering Riddhima's words of vansh being innocent and not a criminal and she trusts him fully ,In his agitation to her words he breaks the flower vase bleeding himself .


Kabir : yeh ho nahi sakta , Riddhima vansh ka saath nahi de sakte .


Starts hitting the wall with his bleeding hand 


Kabir : usko mera ishq mein he hona hai . Usse woh har cheez kar na tha jo main chahu woh meri mohra hai usse meri har baat mana tha .


Kabir : uspe kitni mehnat kiya hai maine ,zaya nahi hona chahiye . 


Kabir : zaya nahi hone dunga ( shouts) 


Kabir relaxes himself 


Kabir : 7 din ka time hai mera pass vansh ko criminal or apne aap ko innocent prove kar ne ke liye aur woh saboot Riddhima he mujhe la kar degi .


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Vansh in his study thinking riddhima's words 


Vansh : tum chalava ho ya sach mujhe yeh samjh nahi aaraha kal tak toh yeh laga tum mujh par trust nahi kar rahi ho aur aaj pata chala ki tum kuch karne wali ho.


Vansh remembers siya's words about Riddhima always keeping herself before any problem comes to him and always caring about him .  


Vansh : sorry Riddhima but mujhe tumhara raaz jaan nah hi hoga iss baar.  


Vansh : 3 dino mein tumhare sare raaz pata karlunga aur woh tumhi baataogi mujhe . 



Preview : Anupriya kidnapped 

Edited by Max789 - 3 years ago