Serendipity- A SuVan SS - Page 2

Originally posted by: SuVan_EDKV2

i really had to re-read the chapter again in order to formulate some words but the only thing which comes to my mind is - HOLY SHIT Lavy! (sorry for this, but couldn't help it 😆). like... THIS! THIS should have been how the Post-Leap should have been introduced to us!

behen, tu kyun nahi hain yaar show kay writers ka part? that was really brilliant 👏👏

keep it up girl 😊👍🏼

Thanks a lot Tanya❤️

Mujhe koi writer contact hi nahi karta #sedlife😭🤣🤣 jk... being a writer for a serial ain't my thing😆 thanks though!❤️

Originally posted by: nancy56

Oh my!!!! I love it! I love it!

This is just the thing I wanted to read, and it looks surreal. Some dejavu kinda thing happening to me.

I am waiting and your write up is lovely!! We will love it the way you write, short sweet and fulfilling ❤ 

Awww....thanks a lot!❤️

Hopefully will stand upto your expectations😃

Originally posted by: Prizi

Its destiny again.. They are in same place.. awesome start..love to read more

Thanks dear❤️

Originally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart

Congratulations on writing another piece🥳

Finally the case got a closer so them! And there they came again in same Cantt! The last para got me excited! 

"Bhopal held a bitter taste in her heart... some of her confidence too!" I liked this line! The confident Suman was somehow lost in the Justice cum Revenge battle!

The storyline is awesome. I liked the name Serendipity. 

Thanks a lot❤️

Yes, you got it....I want her confidence to go low for a while because what she holds at present is over-confidence! 

Thanks! I wasn't able to give it a proper name but at last thought of Serendipity and thought it was apt for my story😆

Originally posted by: Vageeshwarics

Res(Mujhe nahi lagta mai Unres karna yaad rakhungi🤣)

Hum yaad dilaenge😈

Originally posted by: Bucky

Res

(Why am I never in time for my Babu's work😭)

Don't be sad Babu🤗

Not your fault! I always release my work at odd timings😆

Originally posted by: Meena_J

amazing job

Thanks❤️

Originally posted by: Starry_Love

 This SS is a great start Lavanya. I do hope that you continue. 

The guilt of Suman, her feeling the emptiness, her wanting to just hide away, its perfectly written. 

Sometimes guilt drives us away rather than facing the reality and that is what Suman seems to have done. In a moment of anger, Shravan and Suman may have exchanged some words but deep down we know they do not mean to hurt each other. Suman is in a state where she wants Sharvan to be happy and wants to move on but I do hope that she realises her heart lies within Sharvan.

The SS is beautifully put, describing Suman's guilt, her yearning at the same time of wanting to be with the person she loves.

Its amazing. 

Much love, 

Soph x

Keep up the good work darling xx

Thanks a lot for your amazing comment Sophs...means a lot❤️🤗

Me too hopes she realises the truth at least in my story😆

Thanks once again!

Originally posted by: Bucky

Res

(Why am I never in time for my Babu's work😭)

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Interesting start Lavy! Yayy! You've set a Kashmiri camp setting! Maza ayega!

Can't wait to read how the story unfolds. Thanks for writing this story. Khair show mein nahi par yahan toh mile👍🏼

Unresed😃

Nice start Lavy and thank you for writing something on the army track. I hope we will get so see something like this in the show too. 
I will be waiting for the next chapter. ❤️