Vansh and Riddhima OS: Injured

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Hi Guys, 


just gave a try to write an OS using some scenes from IMMJ and some parts from my imagination. Hope you guys like it. 


Blood. There was some blood on the floor. “Yeh khoon! Riddhima! Riddhima!” Vansh called out. He saw the bathroom door closed and waited to get a response from Riddhima. “Zaroor Riddhima ko hi chot lagi hogi!” thought Vansh while he was waiting for her to open the door. “Kis kis ko samhal hoon iss ghar mein!” murmured Vansh while waiting impatiently for her to open the door. As soon as he heard the bathroom door open and he rushed towards her. Without giving her a chance to react, he just picked her up like she weighed nothing in his arms and settled her on the bed.


Riddhima was totally in shock as it all happened quickly. One moment she had just opened the bathroom door and the next moment, she was already seated on the bed with Vansh checking her face, neck and hands.”Vansh....ye kya kar rahe ho tum?” she called out but his attention was on checking her for her injury. “Riddhima, kahan lagi hai tumhe. Doctor ko bulaun kya? Tumhara dhyan kaha rehta hai? Angre! Angre!” 


Hearing Vansh calling for Angre, the family rushed to Vansh’s room. Even Angre had actually sprinted to his boss room with his gun thinking there was some danger. As soon as Angre reached the room, he was baffled to see his boss fretting over his wife.

Angre: “Boss” 

Vansh looking at Angre: “Gun ke saath kya kar rahi ho. Jaldi doctor ko bulao”

Angre: “Ok boss”

As Angre turned to leave the room to make the call, 

Riddhima: “Angre ruko! Doctor ki zaroorat nahi hai. Kuch nahi hua hai mujhe. I’m alright.”


Vansh could clearly see that Riddhima was feeling some pain as her face contorted when she stood up and approached his family. However she was trying to mask her pain in front of his family members. Vansh was so frustrated with his darling wife. “Ye ziddi ladki ka main kya karun!”, he thought. Here he was worried about her and there she was trying to comfort his family members first.


Vansh: “Riddhima, tum kya bol rahi ho”

Riddhima: “Vansh, Kuch nahi hua hai! Sirf ek choti si chot aayi hai! Iss keliye tum poori ghar ko disturb mat karo. Bohot late ho chuka hai! Sorry Dadi, sab ko disturbance hogaya! Please maaf kar dijiye”

Dadi: “Arre! Koi baat nahi beta. Tum theek toh ho na?”
Riddhima: “Haan Dadi. Main theek hu.” 

Dadi: “Theek hai beta. Good night. Kuch chaiye toh bula lena. Main chalti hoon. Sab chalo apne apne kamre mein.”


Hearing Dadi’s instruction, everybody left for their rooms. As soon as the crowd dispersed from their room, Vansh held Riddhima by her waist and guided her to the bed. 


Vansh: “Iss bed par kaanta hai kya. Jab bhi rest karne ko kehta hoon, tum bed se uth jaati ho. Kon tumhe uthne ko kaha? Ab batao mujhe, kahan chot lagi hai tumhe.” 

Riddhima: “Arre, tum kehne ka mauka deti toh me kahungi na! Pair mein lagi hai. Kaanch lag gayi thi but maine nikal diya.”

Vansh: “Dikhao mujhe.”

Vansh inspected her wound. He was glad that it was not so deep. 

Vansh: “Thank god chot deep nahi hai. Abhi keliye main bandage kardunga! Kal Doctor ko bulaunga, woh tumhe injection dengi.”

Saying so, he went to rummage his drawer for the first aid kit. Once it was found, he went back to Riddhima and kneeled down to do the first aid. While he was bandaging her leg, 

Vansh: “By the way, mujhe nahi laga ki tum tumhari talent ko itni jaldi prove karogi.”

Vansh said to her amused.

Riddhima: “Meri talent? kya talent?”

Vansh smirked: “Wahi! That musibaton ki mamle main magnet ho tum. Actually problem kahi bhi ho, tum toh usse apni taraf khichi leti ho!”

Riddhima: “Kya! Tum mujhe musibaton ki magnet kaha. Meri pair ko chodo. Main apni bandage khud karlungi. Chodo meri pair ko”


Riddhima tried to get up from the bed forgetting about her injury. As soon as she exerted some pressure on her injured leg, she could not withstand the pain and began to fall backwards. Afraid of the impact, she closed her eyes letting out a shriek. However the fall never came. Vansh as usual being the knight in shining armour had saved her from the fall using his quick reflexes. Opening her eyes, 

Riddhima: “Chodo mujhe.”

Vansh: “Riddhima, bachon ki tara behas karna band karo. Mujhe theek se bandage bandne do.”

Seeing Vansh in his angry mode, Riddhima quickly set on the bed and quietly watched Vansh go about tying the bandage. After Vansh was done,


Vansh: “Ab so jao. Good night!”


As Vansh was moving back to his couch, Riddhima held his hand and stopped him.


Riddhima: “Kahan ja rahe ho?”

Riddhima was surprised at herself when she stopped Vansh! 

Riddhima inner thoughts: “Ye main kya keh rahi hu. Main kyun roka usse?”

Vansh: “Couch”

Hearing Vansh, Riddhima was pulled out of her thoughts. Before she could stop herself.

Riddhima: “Jaise ki tum keh raha tha na. Sach mein iss bed par kaante nahi lagi joh tumhe bhi ja kar couch par sona pade!”

Vansh: “Tum comfortable nahi hogi isliye"

Riddhima: “Main hi tumhe bed par sone keliye ke rahi hoon. Bed bada hai, dono fit honge! Tum bhi bed par so jao.”


On Riddhima’s insistence, Vansh went to sleep on the other side of the bed. He lifted the blanket and covered both himself and Riddhima. He looked at Riddhima who had her back to him and closed his eyes. It had been 10 mins since both of them went to bed. However, he could feel Riddhima tossing on the bed unable to fall asleep. Vansh started to wonder if she was not able to sleep because of his presence on the bed. As he was about to get up from the bed, Riddhima turned to face him. 


Riddhima: “Ab kahan ja rahe ho?”

Vansh: “Tumhe neend nahi aa rahi hai na so main couch par chala jaata hu”

Riddhima: “Nahi. Let jao.”

Vansh inner thoughts: “Ab kya hua hai isse?” 

Riddhima: “Tumhara haath do mujhe.”


Vansh was puzzled but nevertheless extended his hand to her. She quickly held to his hand tightly closed her eyes muttering “Good night”. Within seconds, she fell into a deep sleep while Vansh was amused at her new habit to sleep holding his hand. Unable to restrain himself, he gave a peck on her forehead and whispered “Good Night Sweetheart”. Slowly he too fell asleep while staring at her contended face.


The End.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#2

Aw❤️

Vansh can't see even a drop of blood near his wife, how much did his heart race thinking that she hurt herself! He didn't even let her say a word, while his worry spoke a thousand 🥺


Their cute nok-jhok, haye


They slept together on the same bed, Riddhima couldn't sleep without assuring that he was beside her! His presence makes her feel safe and sound, and that's how they are, just perfect for each other ❤️


Beautiful OS!


-Sanu

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Super storyline is amazing keep it up heart touching os well done good luck for ur next creative os and FF hope I get another chance to read ur next update

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Posted: 3 years ago
#4

Aww

So cute

VR's care❤️

Riddhima touched seeing this side of VR

Bed pe kaante nahi lage hai🤣

And ending was so cute

Riddhima asking him to sleep on bed

VR concerned that because_of him she could not sleep, but she said nahi yahi ruko

and hand holding❤️

Thanks for writing 👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awww it's very cute arul 👏

Good job ese likha karo 😆

Both of them r adorable in this❤️

Bichara angre🤣yaha bhi mandli ko bula liya vansh ne 🤣accha he dadi le gayi😆

Bed scene ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#6

Haaye...arul...

Achcha tha OS...

Mandali kabhi picha na chhode inka...

Aangre to angre hai...gun leke chala aaya🤣

Itni sari fikar biwi ke liye...

Chot pe dawai lagaimujhe mil gaya marham scene...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Cute and beautiful OS...

VR ka care 😍😍❤️❤️

Bed pe kaante lage hai kya???

Aww... Their cute nokjhok!!!

Magnet wali baat cracked me up!!!

Do write more.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#8

Wow Arul. So cute and beautiful os. 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was so good

Do write more

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Aw❤️

Vansh can't see even a drop of blood near his wife, how much did his heart race thinking that she hurt herself! He didn't even let her say a word, while his worry spoke a thousand 🥺


Their cute nok-jhok, haye


They slept together on the same bed, Riddhima couldn't sleep without assuring that he was beside her! His presence makes her feel safe and sound, and that's how they are, just perfect for each other ❤️


Beautiful OS!


-Sanu

Thank you so much 🤗