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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nia_doll

Fantastic update

Now BrinDev married life should start and you are continuing it 

As ami said i think you can update every Saturday or Sunday 

Thanks a lot for the sweet words πŸ€—

Thanks for the love and support dearπŸ€—

Thanks for the hope you have in me πŸ€—

Will consider that for sure dear πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: maclean

Great update

Hey dont end please loving the story

Continue soon please

Thanks a lot dear πŸ€—

I didn't mean to end , but it's just my plans got me off πŸ˜Š

I'll try my best to do the best dear πŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: tehreemsajid

I feel you should continue it 

Its awesome 

BrinDev to start new journey please continue that at least another two to five chapters of their marriage life please

I'm really sorry for disappointing you all πŸ€—

I couldn't help but cut it short because of my sudden changes in my schedule πŸ€—

But I will try my best to do the right thing πŸ€—

For sure I will consider your requests dear 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

Hey got your update finally 

As always brilliant 

Yeahhh all tortures ended and they started happy life eagerly waiting for Next

Do end continue it 

Update every weekend na 

Hoping that you will continue i am loving ur story 

Yeah, at last πŸ˜†

Thanks a lot for those encouraging words πŸ€—

Sorry for ending it like this dear but in some way will try my best to pay back to all your love and support πŸ€—

I'm happy that you are loving it and I'm always thankful to this love and support πŸ€—

Thank you so much for this immense support dears πŸ€—

Will consider for sure πŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NIALOVE

Awesome dear 

But i want you to move ahead with the story

Thanks a lot for the support dear πŸ€—

For sure will try my best πŸ˜‡

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NiaDiva

Fantastic update

Don't stop like this 

Do continue soon 

Thanks a lot dear for this constant love and support πŸ€—

I will try my best to satisfy you all dears πŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: nishalluv

Wonderful story dear 

Thank you so much dear πŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: JiyaNishal

Fantastic dear

I don't know but i want you to continue 

Now only actual story starts na 

Thanks a lot dear πŸ€—

I'm trying my best to giving you all the best πŸ€—

Thanks for this immense love and support πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 3 years ago

Bonus Update - Marriage Day


Dev's POV

The day is here; our wedding day. This the day we all have been waiting for. We had come across so many to stand here hand in hand. Our childhood friendship , our unplanned wedding, our endless fights, so many mystery deaths , discovering the truth of Brinda of all finding my own identity. But yeah mysteries do make life interesting , the sorrows and pain we went through made our bond much stronger. The tuff time gave me and Brinda to spend quality time with each other and make the best use of it. It taught us what life was. It made our bond grow stronger, it made us fell for each other , once again but much stronger and deeper than before. 


I remember that night when everything ended at the mandir. Though I knew ma was the one to kill my family I couldn't help myself killing her but I did, we did kill her to stop her from doing any more evil works. It was not so easy for us. Though everything ended the big question that stood in front of us were our relationship. My love for Brinda and our relationship was a rhetorical question ; a question without any answer. I was not ready to leave her ; not again at any cost and I was sure not to negotiate in that. Though Brinda insisted to move away from my life I knew that she was pretending because I have seen that love for me in her eyes. All those days we spent together in our childhood and these few days when we worked together so many things have changed. Our relationship has grown much more stronger.


With my utmost love for Brinda and the trust I had on us I asked Panditji for a way in which I could be Brinda's. I didn't want our birth identifies to separate our love. Now it doesn't matter to me whether she was a Naagin and I was a human, it doesn't matter to me whether we were meant to be or not , all what I cared was I needed Brinda in my life. No matter what I was determined to make us happen, once again forever. With the help of Panditji we found out the way. We prayed Lord Shivji and with his blessings we planned to start our new journey. I didn't want to take away the naagin identity of Brinda but it was the only way she was mine and Brinda happily accepted it. Brinda was no more a naagin and nothing could now stop us from being together forever.     


After getting the blessings of panditji we walked in silence through the parking lot. When we got to our car, involuntarily I hugged her, holding her tightly against me, an embrace still on the right side of propriety, one that could still be considered friendly, but only just. When we broke apart, her face was flushed, her eyes shining. The shine on her face was very new and it did hold lots of emotions in it. "You savor the moment because there might not be many more", this was such a moment which I never wanted to end. Slowly our distance broke up, bringing us much closer where we could hear both our hearts beating so hard in our rib cages. 


Slowly my lips closed her small lips and sealed it.  And I was kissing her. Once, twice, until I’ve had a taste and realize I’ll never have enough. I could feel that she was fully into it and it was more of a soulful kiss than one of a romantic one. My hands were everywhere up her back and her arms tightening around my neck and suddenly I started kissing her harder, deeper, with a fervent urgent need I’ve never known before. It was all what I needed at that time. Still she was not kissing back. But she wasn't either reluctant too. 


Before she could withdraw her mind from its far places, my arms were around her, as sure and hard as on the dark road. A small limp left from her lips expressing her helplessness. And the quiet face of Brinda was blurred and drowned to nothingness.I bent back her head across my arm and kissed her, softly at first, and then with a swift gradation of intensity that made her cling to me as the only solid thing in a dizzy swaying world. I kissed her back. Insistentlay my mouth was parting her shaking lips, sending wild tremors along her nerves, evoking from her sensations she had never known she was capable of feeling. And before very long she kissed me back with the same need and passion. That was all what I needed to seal her as mine. It was all the approval I needed from her. Love you Brinda. 


That night ended so beautifully under the stars to be correctly said it was the start of a very good beginning. No more secrets and mysteries we were now for each other. I couldn't wait for a better day than that night. When we broke out from our world of kiss I went in my knees to propose her , to ask her to be mine, to be mine forever and she accepted it with happy tears wetting her cute cheeks. 


Then we planned not to miss any part of our wedding rituals. Starting from mehendi and sangeet we made sure we had everything done.  The celebrations were done in full swing. Every moments passed away so beautifully. My name in her hands looked so beautiful. Though she had tried her best to hide it in her beautiful design that decorated her hands and arms I found my name within minutes. Dev imprinted on her palm made my inside go wild. Then the grand sangeet we had was real fun. With everyone dancing and rejoicing themselves. Dancing together, hand in hand in close proximity remembered us the drunken night, but this time it brought immense  happiness on us. That night felt so good today. Just like that the wedding day arrived.


Today dressing up myself again as a Bridegroom for my princess to make her mine forever. I dressed myself in long Kurta what Brinda had selected for me, then added some gel and combed my hair and finally attached a small brochure on my kurta. I got down to meet my family members who were waiting for me. Lot has changed after ma's demise. I expected my other cousins who weren't the killers to scold me and show their hatred on me but it was the opposite. They accepted me with whole heart. They were initially very angry but when Brinda and me explained them all what happened they did accept me. 


The marriage stage was decorated with flowers and with a fire as witness for our wedding. The house looked so new and it had a special glow today. It was beautifully decorated all over and lightened up very well. I was greeted by my cousins. Brinda's mom , who grew her up for so long ( Here I haven't killed Brinda's step mother ) performed the welcoming ritual and lead me to  the to the Mandap. The panditji who was there all along our journey was doing the rituals for us today. It was our kind request to him and he did accept it happily. The wedding ceremony began by offering a prayer to Lord Ganesh. My eyes were searching for my princess, Brinda. 


I couldn't stop myself but search for her. No matter how hard I tried my eyes went in search of my princess. Now it was the time for her to come, Panditji called Brinda's ma to bring my princess to the mandap. Brinda escorted down the aisle to the Mandap in her beautiful long; heavy red saree by her cousins. Her presence enlightened the place. I couldn't stop myself from admiring her. She was beautifully caring that red saree on her. It adorned her beauty more.  Upon her arrival, the Brinda's father took her hand and lead her into the Mandap. Then the Kanya Daan took place. Then we exchanged fresh flower garlands that signifyied the acceptance of one another and to pledge our respect for one another as partners in life. Panditji explaining us each and every rituals we started doing it. 


The moment our eyes met the whole universe went out of sight. The only thing I could see was her beautiful eyes thtlat had all the love for me. She simply smiled taking away my breath with her.  Next it was time for the Mangalpheras, we had to circle the holy fire four times with our wedding scarves tied together. In place of Brinda's brother my cousin came up to join the ritual. The pandit told us that the four circles symbolize the four basic human goals of Dharma, Artha, Karma and Moksha. Next was taking the seven steps together representing the vows and promises we ought to  make each other. More of a ritual we did it by our heart. My first promise was to provide a nourishing and pure diet for our household and avoid the things which are harmful to our healthy living. The next one was develop physical , mental and spiritual powers together. Next we promised to increase our wealth by righteous means and proper use. 


Our fourth promise was to acquire knowledge, happiness and harmony by mutual love and trust. Then to be blessed with strong and virtuous children. Our sixth promise was for accomplishing self-restraint and longevity. The last was that we shall always be true to each other, work together for prosperity and happiness and remain lifelong partners.  The vows weren't the simple words uttered by the panditji but it was the words that we engraved in our hearts. Next Brinda's mother brought us the sweets (Kansar). Kansar Bhakshan was the couple's first meal together. We offered Kansar to one another to symbolizing union. Wedding with every rituals felt so magical. When Brinda fed me my share I silently bit her fingers making her gasp which she quickly covered with her beautiful smile. She was so cute. She then rolled her eyes silently so that none noticed her symbolizing me to behave right. The very moment I wanted to pull her cute cheeks as she looked like a small embarrassed kid. 


I simply smiled at her. Next was the precious moment we all were waiting for.  The panditji took the Mangal Sutra , the sacred necklace made from black beads. Taking it from the panditji I tied it around Brinda's neck and every one applauded and congratulated us. A pair of tears rolled down Brinda's cheek. I swept her tears with her my thumb and smiled at her for which she nodded with a smile. Then I took the Sindoor in my hand and applied in the center parting of the Brinda's hair as a promise to fulfill her every wish. I promised her soul fully to  stand by her in thick and thin for eternity. There  were happy applause and shouts around us, Brinda's parents eyes were glimmering with happy tears. Brinda is officially mine. BrinDev together. I couldn't stop myself but immediately hold her hands in mine. I took her small hands and held it tight, She was mine. The smile wouldn't leave my lips and the happy tears wouldn't stop rolling down her cheeks. 


We went to my in-laws and took the blessings. Ma and papa blessed us both. The smile on their faces were priceless. Then everyone came to congratulate us and later went for their lunch. Only before I got some time with my wife , my stupid cousins made their way towards us. It was then undoubtedly their time where they teased us as much as they could. Not to forget that Brinda was now red as a tomato, her cheeks were flushing red.   " You look so hot like a red tomato", I slowly whispered in her ears without anyone hearing us and for the second time she gasped taken by my sudden move. Then she did something which I never expected. Without anyone noticing us she pinched my thighs and smiled in triumph. The fighting cock Brinda was back. Before I could react we were pulled on to the lunch table to have our lunch.


Then we fed each other our lunch amidst the teasing of my cousins. Then the photoshoot and other rituals took place. The whole evening passed by with our rituals. Then before the dawn she walked in pushing the pot of rice with her leg and them imprinting her leg marks on the floor. Welcoming my princess spiritually into our house.   

 

It was then our Sughraat ( first night ). It was not that we hadn't been together before but tonight it felt much different. I couldn't control my excitement for some reason. Within these short span if time our life has changed a lot. This was what we had all been waiting for. Now she was mine; mine forever. My heart and soul was searching for her and calling her and as if she heard me she walked in. Her shyness making her more beautiful. She was moving so elegantly. As soon as she walked in she locked the doors and shyly walked in. Then she fell on my legs seeking blessings and I immediately held her up by her arms and made her sit on the bed. 


The very first thing I wanted to do was to make my promise to her which I wanted to say her since very long. " Brinda..", "Dev..." , we spoke in unison. I nodded her to continue but she wanted me to continue. So I spoke all what I wanted to say her , " Brinda, I know we have come across a lot and we had seen a lot. I also know that life will still have a lot for us to deal with. The only promise I want to give you is that no matter what I will always be by you Brinda. I will share all your sorrows, be a good friend to you whenever you need me , my shoulders are always there for you to cry out your sorrow , I will always be there as your husband when you need a support to hold on to, I will be that man in your life who keeps sadness and sorrows away from your life and gift you all the happiness the universe has". 


The moment I gave my word to her , her slender arms went around my back hugging me and burying her face in me. " You spoke all what I wanted to say you Dev. Thank you so much Dev. Thanks a lot. You have no idea how much this means to me. I promise you Dev, I will be the same. I will be everything to you. No matter what we will always be together ", she spoke tears rolling down cheeks. I slowly cupped her face in my hands, my thumb wiping away her tears I spoke, " No Brinda. Not even in your happiness you should be crying . I never want to see you crying again". With that I hugged my wife again. 


Together we are starting our new journey...........





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Hi all πŸ€—

Thanks for the immense love and support πŸ€—

Love you all my sweet family πŸ€—


Really sorry for ending the story in a rush πŸ˜Š  

Hope this bonus updates can compensate them πŸ˜‰

I can't promise to give more of this bonus updates on this story πŸ€—

But for sure I promise to write more on BrinDev πŸ€—


I started writing on BrinDev because of my love for them but now I'm writing more because of your love and support to me πŸ€—


I will try my best to keep up your expectations πŸ€—


I'm always thankful and grateful to this love and support πŸ€—



With lots of love ❣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Both the updates are brilliant 

You are amazing

Oh no you thought to end πŸ˜²Dare you do it 

Thanks for bonus i am lucky read both updates together 

Take your time but continue