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Part 1 


This was such an Interesting Start 

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Good that Ragini admitted that its her fault

Loved this pic

Those imaginations 😂

Loved the compound dance

Laksh and Maya are furious

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Pehla Nasha...The first intoxication...Part 3

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The school bell rang.All the students went out.

Akashi went to the washroom before leaving the school.Suddenly Yuvraj pulled her towards him shocking him.

Akashi:Yuvi!

Yuvraj:Why are you dancing so much with Rudra?

Akashi smiled:So what?We are all friends.Right?

Yuvraj:Ya...but I wish you danced with me instead of dancing with Rudra.

Akashi was very happy to hear it.

Akashi:Why is it like that?

Yuvraj:Because...Because I love you.

Akashi was really happy.

Akashi pulled his cheeks:My jealous boy is so cute.Hey..I danced with Rudra purposefully to make you jealous.

Yuvraj was surprised:But why?

Akashi:I was upset that you were not minding you.So to make you realize your feelings for me I did that.

Yuvraj:But i had already realized my love for you long ago.I did'nt express it as I wanted you to realize it first.

Akashi was surprised.

Akashi:I also fell in love with you long ago.But I wanted you to confess it.

Yuvraj was surprised.

Yuvraj:Like you wished I confessed my love first.What about you?

Akashi blushed:I love you too Yuvi.

He was very happy.

Ragini came that way and smiled seeing Yuvraj-Akashi sharing a romantic eye lock.

Ragini thought:Now Laksh must have realized his love.He will confess his love now.

Ragini ran towards Laksh.

Laksh:Why did you run away?Don't go away from my eye sight.

Ragini:You can't live without seeing me even for some minutes?

Laksh:Stop it.Why I said like that is because if you are not in front of me if anyone attacks you I will not be able to protect you.After all I am your bodyguard.

Ragini:Why don't you admit that you want to protect me because you love me?

Laksh:There is no love.I am only a bodyguard.And you are just a bacha I have been asked to protect.And I don't want a school student as my girl friend.Understand?

Ragini's heart was broken into pieces.She was struggling hard to not show her tears.

Present...

Somebody asked:Poor Ragini.Laksh..did'nt you feel sad to see her hurt?

Laksh:Yes.But I was helpless as I could not even imagine romancing a school student.

Ragini smiled.

"Then when did you confess your love?"

Laksh:It took a lot of time.

Ragini pouted:Yes,he made me wait for years.

Laksh giggled.

Past....

Rudra went to Yuvraj-Maya's home.Their mother Jhanvi welcomed him:Come Rudra...Yuvi is not here.He has gone to the gym.Maya is inside her room.

Rudra:Ok aunty.I will go meet Maya and come.

Rudra went inside Maya's room.Maya was sitting down.She was gloomy.Rudra at next to her.She was stunned to see him:Rudra..you?

Rudra:Why not?You are asking as if I came here for the first time.Why are you looking upset?

Maya lied:I am not upset.

Rudra:Maya..I have been seeing you since the childhood days.I know that you are upset and I know the reason too.

Maya's lips shivered:What is the reason?

Rudra:You became upset seeing me dance with Ragini and Akashi.

Maya was embarrassed.

Rudra:Hey...you know that they are my friends.Then why are you jealous?

Maya was looking dull:I am sorry Rudra.

Rudra:Actually Ragini loves Laksh and Akashi loves Yuvi.Just to seek their attention only they danced with me.

Maya could'nt believe it:Really?Someone to love Yuvi bhai.

Rudra looked at her deeply:There is someone to love you also Maya.

Maya looked at him deeply.

He took a rose from behind and gave it to her:I love you Maya.

Maya was very happy:I love you too Rudra.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Suddenly Yuvraj barged in.Seeing him Rudra and Maya got up shyly.

Yuvraj smiled:I am very happy for you both.

Maya was so happy that she ran towards him and hugged him:Bhai..

Yuvraj smiled:Who can be better than Rudra for you?

Maya smiled.

Maya looked at him:Bhai..you and Akashi?

Yuvraj blushed:Ya...

Maya:I am so happy bhai.You both make a sweet couple.

Yuvraj smiled:Ya.

Yuvraj hugged Rudra:My future brother in law.

They both giggled.

Rudra-Maya and Yuvraj Akashi's love blossomed in the school.It continued in their college life also.But Ragini and Laksh remained as a body guard and the girl who he had to protect.

Finally the college life came to an end.

Yuvraj showed something to Akashi:Akashi..look there...

Akashi looked there.

Suddenly Yuvraj pecked her cheek.She blushed.

Akashi:So purposefully you asked me to look there,so that you can give me surprise kiss.

Yuvraj:Ya.Otherwise how can the kiss be a surprise?

They giggled.

Ragini looked at Laksh painfully.

Ragini:I am going abroad.You will not have to tolerate anymore as your job as my bodyguard is going to over now.

Laksh looked at her emotionally.

Ragini:But Laksh,I love you..I will always love you.I know what you will say now.You are a bacha..so...

Laksh interrupted her:You are not a kid anymore as you are not in school now.You have finished your college.So now I won't feel that I am romancing a kid.

Ragini was stunned.

Ragini:Means?

Suddenly flower petals fell over Ragini.Ragini was excited.

Ragini saw that it's her friends who did it.

They:It's Laksh who arranged the flower fall.

Ragini looked at Laksh in disbelief.

Slowly she smiled:Laksh,you did this for me?

Laksh smiled:Yes.

Ragini:But why?

Laksh:Because you are not a kid anymore.So to express my romantic feelings for you instead of chocolates I arranged flowers.

Ragini:What?Romantic feelings?

Laksh smiled:Yes,I love you Ragini.

Ragini was surprised:Laksh...

Ragini:So finally you are convinced that I am not a kid.

Laksh:Yes.But I will call you bacha only as I am used to calling you like that.

Ragini pouted:Noooo

Laksh giggled.

Laksh:Will you let me be your bodyguard forever?

Ragini:Always...

She embraced him.He embraced him back.

Present....

Ragini:As expected my dad also supported us.We all were very happy.But a storm arrived in our life which took our dearest friend from us.

Everyone shed tears.

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Pehla Nasha...The first intoxication...Part 4

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Ragini and Laksh were on their first date.

Laksh held her hand and rubbed it softly.They both were looking at other romantically.

Ragini moved closer to Laksh's face to kiss him.

Laksh put his finger on her lips.

Laksh:Control yourself Ragini.

Ragini:What's your problem Laksh?In school also you did'nt allow me to kiss you.Now we are lovers.Then what's the problem?

Laksh:I am a sanskari type Ragini.Kissing and all only after marriage.

Ragini smiled:Oh..my sanskari boy friend..let the wedding take place.Then I won't leave you.

Laksh:Most welcome.

She smiled.

Time passed...Yuvraj became a police officer.

Laksh-Ragini engagement function...

Shekar:Laksh..you put ring on my Ragini's finger.

Laksh:Not like that uncle.

All were confused.

Laksh's mom Annapurna:What are you saying Laksh?

Laksh smiled.He knelt down before Ragini holding the ring.

Laksh:Ragini,will you marry me?

Everyone was surprised.

Ragini held the tip of his finger:Yes Laksh.I have been waiting for that since my school days.

Laksh smiled and put the ring on her finger.

Ragini took the ring in her hand:Laksh,will you marry me?

Laksh:Yes bacha...

Ragini faked anger:Youuuuuuu...

They both laughed.

Ragini put the ring on his finger.

Annapurna:I have never seen such an engagement before.

Shekar:Me too.

Everyone giggled.

Akashi to Yuvraj: Yuvi..Laksh proposed Ragini for marriage.Rudra and Maya are also going to get married.When will you propose me for marriage?

Yuvraj:Do you really want to marry me?

Akashi:What rubbish are you asking me Yuvi?

Yuvraj:I am serious Akashi.I am having second thoughts about marrying you.

Akashi was shocked:Yuvi!

Yuvraj:Akashi,now I am a Police officer.I have many enemies.Your life will not be safe if you marry me.You may face danger.

Akashi:Yuvi..my love is not that weak to leave you to safeguard my own life.

Yuvraj:I know that Akashi.I trust your love completely.I also love you.So I am scared to put your life at risk by marrying you.I can't imagine anything happening to you.

Akashi:No Yuvi.Don't think like that.

Yuvraj:Not only that.Sometimes I may lose my life.Why do you want to live as a widow?

Akashi:Stop it Yuvi.I will live with your memoies.But I want to be your wife.Please don't say no Yuvi.

Yuvraj-Akashi shared an emotional eye lock.

Akashi:Propose me Yuvi.

Yuvraj was silent.

Akashi:Don't waste time.Propose to me.

Yuvraj knelt down before Akashi:Akashi,will you marry me?

Akashi:Yes dear.

Yuvraj held her hand:You are risking your own life to marry me.So I promise you that I will protect you from every danger even if I die.

Akashi:Stop it stupid.I will not let anything happen to you.I will wear vermilion on my hairline in your name till the end.

They both smiled.

Rudra-Maya got engaged.


Laksh-Ragini,

and Yuvraj-Akashi got married.

In the bedroom....

Laksh entered the room.Seeing him in excitement Ragini rushed towards him.But she slipped her leg.Laksh caught her at the right time.

Moh moh ke dhaage
Moh moh ke dhaage
 hmmm...
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe

They shared a passionate eye lock.

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe
Hai rom rom iktaara
Hai rom rom iktaara
Jo baadalon mein se guzre

Ragini stared at his lips.

Ragini:The time has come to attack you Laksh.

She winked at him.He smiled.

She claimed his lips.He also responded passionately.

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

Ragini moved away shyly.Laksh went and stood near her.

He leaned against her back.She smiled.

Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna
Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna
Kaise tune ankahaa, tune ankahaa sab sunaa
Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna

Slowly Ragini walked to the opposite side.They turned back and looked at each other  smiling.

Tu din sa hai, main raat
Aa na dono mill jaayein shamon ki tarah
 Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

Ragini sat there.Laksh came behind her.

Ragini stood up and looked at him passionately.

Ki teri jhooti baatein main saari maan loon
Ki teri jhooti baatein main saari maan loon
Aankhon se tere sach sabhi
Sab kuch abhi jaan lu
Ki teri jhooti baatein main saari maan loon

Suddenly they embraced each other.

Tezz hain dhaara, behte se hum awaara
Aa tham ke saanse le yahaan

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe(Dum Laga Ke Haisha).

Akashi was dressed in a decorated green saree.Yuvraj was mesmerized by her beauty.

Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari zubaan te dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginnu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai


Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari zubaan te dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginnu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai

Seeing him gaze at her the shy Akashi sat on the sofa without looking at him.

Yuvraj came near her with a smile.

Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno, meri khamoshiyan
Raat se hai lambhi kahin, dil ki yeh dastaan
Kaise kahoon
Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari zubaan te dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginnu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai
Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno, meri khamoshiyan
Raat se hai lambhi kahin, dil ki yeh dastaan
Kaise kahoon kaise kahoon

He sat behind her and kept his chin on her shoulder passionately.

Akashi got melted in his hot romantic touch.


 Tumse mujhe yeh kehna tha woh keh raha tha humdum

Ho saamne toh kya kahoon, kya kehna tha humdum
Kaise yeh, jazbaat hain
Iss dil mein toh, din raat hain
Honthon pe kyun aane se yeh sharmaate hain
Aankhon mein kyun yeh har gadi aa jaate hain
Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari zubaan te dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginnu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai

They romanced each other passionately.

Hum kyun kahe, joban kahe, ik baat hai jaana
Dhadkan kahe, dhadkan sune, woh raat hai jaana
Dil bole bin hai bolta
Sab raaz hai yeh kholta
Jab khwab hai, jazbaat hai, ehsaas hai
Toh kehna kya, toh sunn na kya, awaaz hai
Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari zubaan te dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginnu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai
Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno, meri khamoshiyan
Raat se hai lambhi kahin, dil ki yeh dastaan
Kaise kahoon.(Force).

Akashi stood in front of the mirror.

Yuvraj came near her and made her wear her earrings.Then he brushed her hair.

Yuvraj:Now my Akashi looks more gorgeous.

She blushed.

They all were living happily.

Maya and Akashi were chatting and smiling.

Suddenly Akashi got a phone call.

The phone fell down from Akashi's hand.

Maya was shocked:What happened Akashi?

Akashi:Maya...Yuvi has been kidnapped by a goon whom Yuvi had arrested.He had escaped from the prison.Now to take revenge he kidnapped Yuvi.

Maya was shocked:Yuvi Bhai...

Akashi was in tears:I want to save my Yuvi.

Maya:We will save him Akashi.

They informed this to Rudra,Ragini and Laksh too.

Rudra:Don't go there alone.I will come now with the cops.

Maya:Sorry Rudra.My brother is in danger.I can't wait anymore.

Rudra:No Maya.

Without listening Maya cut the call.

Akashi and Maya went there.Seeing Yuvraj tied up there Akashi and Maya cried.

Yuvraj:Why did you come to this dangerous place?

The goon Ramesh:I called your wife here.I don't know who this girl is.Since you arrested me my wife committed suicide.So you should know the pain of losing your wife.So in front of you I will kill your wife.

Yuvraj,Akashi and Maya were shocked.

Yuvraj:Please don't do anything to my wife.

Ramesh smirked.

Akashi:Kill me.But leave my husband.

Yuvraj:Are you mad Akashi?Leave from here.I can't see you getting tortured in front of me.

Akashi:I can't leave you alone here and leave.Even I can't see you getting tortured in front of me.

Ramesh:Good.So it's time for you to die.

Ramesh pointed the gun at Akashi.Yuvraj tried hard to remove the ropes.

Suddenly he heard a gun shot.

Yuvraj screamed:Akashiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Present.....

Ragini:That moment we lost our best friend.

Ragini,Laksh,Rudra,Maya and Yuvraj were in tears.


Edited by jasminerahul - 3 years ago
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Amazing Introduction.

P1 - P4

RagLak nok jhok was cute. Akashi and Ragini taking Rudra's help to make their love jealous were adorable. Rudra & Maya's love confession was romantic. Ragini getting irritated by Laksh following her as a bodyguard reminded me of the movie. 

Ragini locked up Laksh in the classroom for her privacy. Sad that goons tried to kidnap Ragini. Laksh saving Ragini at the nick of time was a treat. Sad that Ragini got injured and got admitted to the hospital. It's unfortunate that Shekar blamed Laksh and was about to fire him; however, any father in that position would do that. But it was good that Ragini supported him. 

Ragini proposed to Laksh, but he said that she is a child, and he can't imagine himself romancing with a child. What was Laksh doing apart from working for Shekar as Ragini's bodyguard? Yuvraj and Akashi's wedding took place all of a sudden

Yuvraj's concern for his love is right after he became a police officer.

Ramesh kidnapping Yuvraj was shocking.

Mayra and Akashi went to that spot.

Anushi's death was tragic.

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Part 4

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