Pehla Nasha...The first intoxication RagLak FS

Posted: 3 years ago

Pehla Nasha...The first intoxication...Introduction

This is my first RagLak FS.Earlier RagLak were a part of my ffs like Ye jawani hai Deewani,Saathiya,Socha na tha.But they were multi star ffs where RagLak were not the leads .I had converted a ff on RagLak and RagLak readers supported me.That's why I decided to come up with a new RagLak story.Though this is a RagLak story Zain Ada will also get enough importance in this story.Even Rudra Maya are there in his story.But they are a supporting jodi.But RagLak will be the leads.

The first love is very special.The first love is the first intoxication too.Will the first love be the last love for all of them?Will the first intoxication will remain till the end for every couple?Not everyone is lucky to get their first love with them till eternity.Which couple will be lucky to be with their first intoxication till the end?Let us see.

I dedicate this FS to VarshaThomar2,palchin2995,SarojTiwari3.Because these 3 wanted Zain Ada jodi in Har dil jo pyar Karega,but I could'nt add Zain Ada there as Arjun Bijlani won the poll over Zain.So in this FS I am adding Zain Ada for them.

I thank my dearest friend ashpatel for the banner.

Posted: 3 years ago

Congrats on new story, nice to see Zain and Ada here, waiting for update

Posted: 3 years ago

congrats on the new FS

nice intro

Posted: 3 years ago

Congratualtions on your new FS



Title is Intriguing 

Posted: 3 years ago

The Couple RagLak is my first read on them 


Introduction is very Interesting 

Posted: 3 years ago


Pehla Nasha...The first intoxication...Part 1

A cremation is going on.

Yuvraj was hugging a corpse and crying.

Laksh and Ragini were in tears.

Ragini:Yuvi is shattered.He is broken completely.

Laksh:He lost the girl he loved the most.Nobody should face what Yuvi faced.

Ragini nodded painfully.

After 2 years...

Midnight...

Laksh cupped Ragini's face in his hands and said:Happy wedding Anniversary my bacha...

Ragini pouted:I am not a bacha.

Laksh:But for me,you will be always a bacha.How can I forget that sweet girl in school uniform.

Ragini smiled.

Ragini:Well...Happy anniversary to you too Laksh.

Laksh:Let us celebrate.

Ragini:Without her I don't feel like celebrating.She used to be in full fun to entertain us.

Laksh:Oh come on Ragini...

Ragini:No Laksh...

He embraced her from behind rubbing his chin on her shoulder.

Laksh:Now also you don't feel like celebrating?

Ragini who was melted in his romantic touch just blushed.

Laksh-Ragini romanced passionately.

Aaj agar milan ki raat hoti
Jaane kya baat hoti
Toh kya baat hoti

Sunn te hai jab pyar ho to
Diye jal uthte hai
Tan mein man mein aur nayan mein
Diye jal uthte hain

Aaja piya aaja, Aaja piya aaja ho..
Aaja piya aaja tere hi tere hi liye
Jalte diye
Bitaani tere saaye mein saaye mein
Zindaghani bitani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Kabhi kabhi, Kabhi kabhi aise diyon se
Lag hai jaati aag bhi
Dhule dhule se anchalon pe
Lag hai jaate daag bhi
Hai veerano mein badal te
Dekhe man ke baag bhi

Sapnon mein shringar ho toh
Diye jal uthte hain
Khwahishon ke aur sharam ke
Diye jal uthte hain



Aaja piya aaja
Tere hi, tere hi liye jalte diye
Bitaani tere saaye mein, saaye mein


Zindaghani bitaani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein


Mera nahin, Mera nahin hai woh diya
Jo jal raha hai mere liye


Meri taraf kyun yeh ujaale
Aaye hai inko rokiye


Yun beghani roshni mein
Kab talak koi jiye

Saanson mein jhankar ho to


Diye jal uthte hain


Jhanjhron mein kanganon mein
Diye jal uthte hain

Aaja piya aaja, Hmm jalte diye
Bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein


Zindghani bitani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Saaye mein saaye tere
Saaye mein tere bitaani zindagani
Saaye mein saaye tere


Saaye mein tere bitaani zindagani  – Prem Ratan Dhan Payo

A grand wedding anniversary party of Laksh Ragini.

Laksh-Ragini cut the cake and fed each other.

Yuvraj,Rudra,Maya clapped his hands.

Yuvraj,Rudra,Maya:Happy Anniversary to the most beautiful couple.

Laksh-Ragini smiled.

Yuvraj:Laksh..I feel jealous of you.You are with your lovely wife.But I am all alone.

Laksh patted his shoulder:Don't behave like Devdas.

Yuvraj smiled slightly.

Suddenly somebody asked Laksh -Ragini.

"Tell something about your partner".

Ragini smiled:Laksh is my first love.My last love also.

Laksh:Ragini is my first and last love.But my first intoxication also.And my all time intoxication.

Ragini:You were also my first intoxication.In fact you are always my intoxication.

Laksh smiled.

Everyone giggled hearing the word Intoxication.

"Tell us about your love story".

Ragini:It started in school.

All were surprised.

Yuvraj:My love story also started in school and it's slightly connected to their love story.

"That's so cute.Guys...share your love story with us".

Laksh-Ragini smiled.

Flash back...

Ragini,Akashi,Rudra,Yuvraj and Maya were thick friends in school.Maya was Yuvraj's sister.They were higher secondary students.

One day...

All were waiting for Ragini in the school compound.

Suddenly Ragini got out of the car.Shockingly another man also got out of her car and followed her.

Akashi:Ragini,who is this?

Ragini got irritated:This is my bodyguard Laksh.

All were surprised:Bodyguard?

Ragini:Yes.My politician dad feels that his enemies may harm me.So he appointed a bodyguard for me.

Yuvraj:Cool.Guess when I become a police officer my wife and kids will also have a bodyguard.

Akashi:Oh no Yuvi.

Yuvraj:I was talking about my future wife and kids.What is your problem?

Akashi said in her mind:Because I want to be your future wife.Why can't you understand that Yuvi?

Maya laughed:Bhai,you are only in school.Still you are thinking of your future wife and kids.

Everyone laughed.

Yuvraj said in his mind:Because I have already found my future wife.Akashi.

Ragini stared at Laksh:Hey bodyguard..I am with my friends.I need privacy.Just leave.

Laksh:Sorry,Sir has told me not to leave you alone even for a second.

Ragini was very angry:Dad..how could you?

Laksh:Your dad is protective about you.That's why.

Ragini:But you are a nuisance for me.

Laksh became dull:How will I make her understand it's seriousness?

Laksh sat near Ragini in the classroom also which made Ragini very angry.

Akashi went near Yuvraj.

Akashi:Yuvi...I can understand today's portion which the teacher taught.

Yuvraj:No problem Akashi.I will explain it to you.

Yuvraj started reading it and explaining it to her.

Akashi was lost in him.

His gestures looked very cute to her.

Background song-Pehla nasha...(Jo jeeta wahi sikandar).

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sUJ_qk9tS8s&feature=youtu.be

Do watch Zain Ada VM

Days passed....

Once there was a Diwali party in school.Ragini was dressed in a traditional lehenga.

Seeing Laksh behind,Ragini was so angry that she shouted at him:Why can't you leave me alone at least on Diwali?Because of you I can't even enjoy diwali properly.

Laksh became upset.

Ragini:Please..I beg of you.At least today you please spare me.

Ragini shed tears.Her tears melted him,but he was helpless.

Laksh:I am sorry.I can't.For security,I have to be near you.

Ragini suppressed her anger and pretended to be calm.

Ragini:Ok.Can I go to my classroom?

Laksh:Why?Because all are in the  hall for the celebration.The classroom is empty.

Ragini:Don't question me.I will go wherever I want.

Ragini walked to the classroom while Laksh followed her.They both entered the classroom.Suddenly Ragini got out of the classroom and closed the door.

Laksh was shocked.

Laksh:Please open the door.

Ragini laughed.

Ragini said sarcastically:Now let me see how you will come out and follow me.

She walked back to the hall victoriously.

All were enjoying.

Rudra could not take his eyes off Maya's traditional look.

Rudra:I can't believe that you wore a traditional dress.You look so different Maya.

Maya smiled cutely:You liked it?

Rudra smiled:Yes Maya baby.

She blushed.

Akashi stood near Yuvraj to gain his attention,but he did not even look at her.

Akashi thought:I struggled hard to wear this Indian dress.But Yuvi is not even looking at me.Idiot!

Akashi walked away.Yuvraj tilted his head to see her.A smile appeared on his face.

Suddenly some goons entered and caught Ragini.All were shocked.

Ragini screamed.

The Principal:Where is the bodyguard?

Ragini wept:I am suffering because of the blunder i did.

There Laksh knocked the classroom door so hard that it got opened.

The goons tried to drag away Ragini.Yuvraj and Rudra tried to pull her away from them.But they got pushed away by the goons.Ragini was crying.Suddenly Laksh came there running.Ragini was relieved.Laksh started punching the goons.The Principal rang up the police and they came.They arrested the goons.But one goon pushed Ragini so harshly that she fell down injuring herself.

Laksh screamed:Raginiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Laksh ran towards her.That goon was also caught by the police.

Laksh kept her head on his lap:Ragini.

He looked back and said:I am taking her to the hospital.

Laksh lifted her up

(Thank you Salley for this picture).

and rushed to the hospital.

(Thank you Salley for this picture).

Posted: 3 years ago

I think Yuvraj is hugging Avni's corpse

RagLak anniversary romantic scenes were very nice

Like me, you are also a very big fan of Rudra and Maya

Laksh is Ragini's bodyguard 😂


Hey, why didn't you write the Bodyguard movie title song on his entry? It would've been so cool 😊

Maya and Rudra are so cute

Akashi and Yuvraaj's edit is so nice

Is that really an edit? I don't see your name

Oh so thats what u needed those pics for, welcome, my pleasure

Update soon

Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks a lot.

Sorry,I could'nt remember Bodyguard Title song when I wrote that scene.

Zain Ada edit is not mine.I got it from google.


Originally posted by salley145


I think Yuvraj is hugging Avni's corpse

RagLak anniversary romantic scenes were very nice

Like me, you are also a very big fan of Rudra and Maya

Laksh is Ragini's bodyguard 😂


Hey, why didn't you write the Bodyguard movie title song on his entry? It would've been so cool 😊

Maya and Rudra are so cute

Akashi and Yuvraaj's edit is so nice

Is that really an edit? I don't see your name

Oh so thats what u needed those pics for, welcome, my pleasure

Update soon

Posted: 3 years ago

lovely update... superb;y written 

Posted: 3 years ago

Thank u my dear friends 4 the comments


Pehla Nasha...The first intoxication...Part 2

Thanks a lot Reena for the lovely edits.

Ragini was treated in the hospital and after some time she gained consciousness.

Her father Shekar and Laksh were very happy.

Shekar:Ragini,are you alright?

Ragini:Yes dad.

Shekar shouted at Laksh:I appointed you to protect my daughter.But you failed completely in that.I regret appointing you as my daughter's bodyguard.

Laksh felt guilty:I am sorry Sir.

Shekar:I don't need any sorry.You are fired.

Ragini felt upset.

Ragini:No dad.It's not his fault.It's all because of me.I locked him in the room to escape from him.Still he came out to save me.Now I am alive only because of Laksh.

Shekar was shocked:What a big blunder did you do Ragini?

Ragini:I am sorry dad.I did'nt expect this much.

Shekar was very upset:It's ok.But don't repeat it.

Ragini:Never again dad.I promise.

After a few days Ragini got recovered.

Ragini looked at Laksh:I am very sorry Laksh. Please forgive me.

Laksh:It's ok Ragini.

Ragini:Thank you for saving me.

Laksh:No need of thanking me.I just did my duty.

Ragini smiled.

Ragini returned to school.

Ragini was surprised to see Laksh as her teacher.She looked at him amusingly.

Suddenly she realized that she was imagining Laksh as her teacher.She turned back.She saw Laksh standing there to guard her.She smiled.

Ragini and Akashi were exercising together.

Ragini:Akashi...you love Yuvi.Right?

Akashi blushed:Only you know that I love Yuvi.Then why are you asking this again?

Ragini:Just asking.How did you feel when you realized your love for Yuvi?

Akashi:I was always dreaming of him.

Ragini smiled.

All were in the play ground.

Ragini was standing with her classmates.

All were watching the boys play foot ball.

All were clapping and cheering up the players.

Laksh stood on a corner.The moment Ragini's eyes struck him,her eyes were only on Laksh while others were enjoying the match.

Their classmate Ranjana asked:Ragini,where are your eyes?

Ragini blushed.

Akashi whispered:Ragini,why do I feel that you are looking at Laksh?

Ragini blushed.

Akashi:So you love Laksh?

Ragini was shy.Akashi smiled.

Ragini and Akashi were looking at Laksh Yuvraj adoring them.

Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya


Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya
Maine Sun liya

Ragini imagined herself as a Fairy tale Princess

and dancing with Laksh.

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal


Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Akashi imagined romancing Yuvraj.

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin


Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin


Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen


Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin

Yuvraj was imagining romancing Akashi.

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal


Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Rudra-Maya were sharing a romantic eye lock secretly.

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar


Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata


Rudra-Maya imagined dancing with each other.


Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke
Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke
Reh jaoon jaise main haar ke
Aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se




Ragini and Akashi imagined having cute moments with Laksh and Yuvraj.


Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar


Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar


Kar loon main kya apna haal


Aye dil-e-bekaraar


Mere dil-e-bekaraar(Jo jeeta wohi sikandar).

Ragini was sitting in the library with a book.The librarian was sleeping.Ragini felt like laughing.

Ragini:This is the best opportunity.

She gestured Laksh to come and sit near her.Laksh sat near her.

Ragini:Laksh,I am straight forward.So I am telling you directly.I love you.

Laksh was shocked:What are you saying Ragini?What a stupid prank!I know that you are a prankster.But this is too much.

Ragini:It's not a prank Laksh.I really love you.

Laksh was shocked.

Laksh:Are you out of senses?You are a famous politician's daughter.But I am only your bodyguard.

Ragini:So what?Love is not based on status.Even though my dad is a kadoos I can assure you that he will not stand against my wish.

Laksh:Stop your childishness Ragini.

Ragini felt upset.

Laksh led Ragini to the car to go back home.

Suddenly Ragini tried to kiss Laksh.

Laksh moved backward in shock.

Laksh:Move away.You are only in school.Are you not ashamed to kiss?

Ragini:No,I am not ashamed to kiss you.Because I love you.

Laksh:Stop it.I don't like you kissing me.

Ragini got angry:I challenge you.One day I will kiss you and you will love it.

Laksh murmured in irritation:Mad girl.

Laksh:You are a bacha and behave like that.Get inside the car now.

Ragini got inside the car angrily.

Ragini-Akashi were sitting together and eating in the canteen.Laksh was sitting at the back.

Ragini:Laksh rejected my proposal.

Akashi:Even Yuvi is not minding me.

Ragini:We have to make them understand our importance.

Akashi:But how?

Rudra came and sat near them:Hi guys.

Akashi:We are not guys.We are girls.

Rudra giggled:Ok girls.

Suddenly Ragini got an idea.

Ragini:Rudra..we need your help.

Rudra:What help?You need my notes?

Ragini:Why should we need notes when we are upto date in notes?It's the matter of love.

Rudra:Love?

Ragini:Yes.I love Laksh and Akashi loves Yuvi.

Rudra was surprised:Really?Cool.

Akashi:But both these stupid guys are not understanding our love.

Ragini:Rudra,you please help us to make them jealous.

Rudra was stunned:Me?

Ragini:Ya.Who else can help us better than you?

Rudra:Ok..done.

Ragini-Akashi became happy.

Rudra-Ragini-Akashi started dancing together on the school compound.Laksh,Yuvraj and Maya were fuming with jealousy.


Koi mil gaya…
Koi mil gaya…
Koi mil gaya…

Mujhko kya hua hai,
Kyoon main kho gaya hoon
Pagal tha main pehle,
Ya ab ho gaya hoon


Behki hain nigahein,
Aur bikhare hain baal
Tumne banaya hai kya,
Apna yeh haal
Koi mil gaya..koi mil gaya
Mera dil gaya..mera dil gaya
Kya bataoon yaaron.
Kya bataoon yaaron,
Main to hil gaya
Main to hil gaya
Koi mil gaya, mil hi gaya mil gaya
Aey, mil hi gaya mil gaya

Mujhko kya hua hai, are,
Are kyoon main kho gaya hoon
Aey, pagal tha main pehle,


Ya ab ho gaya hoon
Behki hain nigahein
Aur bikhare hain baal
Tumne banaya hai,
Kya apna ye haal
Koi mil gaya..koi mil gaya..
Mera dil gaya..mera dil gaya


Kya bataoon yaaron
Kya bataoon yaaron
O, main to hil gaya
Main to hil gaya
Koi mil gaya, mil hi gaya mil gaya
Are, mil hi gaya mil gaya…

Jane kya ho gaya hai mujhe,


Deewana log kehne lage…
Ye deewanegi hai kya,


Humein bhi to ho pata
Tumko kya ho gaya
Are, kal tak mujhko sab hosh tha
Dil mein khushiyoon ka josh tha
Phir ye baichainey hai kyoon,


Phir ye betaabi hai kyoon
Kya koi kho gaya
Koi mil gaya koi mil gaya
O, mera dil gaya mera dil gaya
Kya bataoon yaaron
Kya bataoon yaaron,
O, main to hil gaya
Main to hil gaya
Koi mil gaya, mil hi gaya mil gaya
Aey, mil hi gaya mil gaya


Badal ban kar kaun aa gaya
Kaun hai jo dil pe yoon chaa gaya
Chahoon ke bataoon main,
Phir bhi keh na paoon main
Naam uska hai kya…

O, naam na lo par kuch to kaho
Halka sa koi ek ishara to do
Meri aankhon mein hai woh,
Meri sanson mein hai woh
Aur kahoon tumse kya…


Koi mil gaya koi mil gaya
Mera dil gaya
O, mera dil gaya
Kya bataoon yaaron,
Kya bataoon yaaron
Main to hil gaya
Main to hil gaya
Koi mil gaya
Mil hi gaya mil gaya
Aey, mil hi gaya mil gaya


Mujhko kya hua hai,
Kyoon main kho gaya hoon
Pagal tha main pehle,


Ya ab ho gaya hoon
Behki hain nigahein
Aur bikhare hain baal
Banaya hai, kya apna ye haal
O, koi mil gaya
Koi mil gaya
Are, mera dil gaya
Mera dil gaya
Kya bataoon yaaron
Kya bataoon yaaron,
O, main to hil gaya
Main to hil gaya
Koi mil gaya, mil hi gaya
Mil gaya mil hi gaya mil gaya
Mil hi gaya mil gaya
O, mil hi gaya mil gaya…(KKHH).

Yuvraj:How can Akashi dance with Rudra?She is supposed to dance only with me.

Laksh:How this play boy Rudra is dancing and flirting with both the girls.He could have at least spared Ragini.

Maya was upset:I thought Rudra loves me.But is he more interested in Akashi and Ragini?Whom does he love more?Ragini or Akashi?

Maya was becoming insecure.

Yuvraj and Maya left angrily.Laksh turned off his face to not see the dance.

Rudra-Ragini and Akashi did high five and laughed.

Ragini:Guess our plan worked.

Akashi:Ya.It was so much of fun to watch them jealous and irritated.

Ragini:Ya.

Rudra:But I feel bad for Maya.She is hurt.

Akashi:We know that you and Maya have feelings for each other.Before she gets hurt go and pacify her.

Ragini:Also confess your love to her.She deserves to know that you also love her.

Rudra smiled:Ya.



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