A Mishbir Story - Meri dhunon ka tarana tu update pt 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhi19

show mein tho milne se na raha... atleast i enjoyed mishbir convo here...



Thanks Ruhi.  Haan show mein ye sab baat karenge toh show khatam πŸ˜†

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: angelfire78



Thanks Ruhi.  Haan show mein ye sab baat karenge toh show khatam πŸ˜†

thats true...πŸ˜†

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Posted: 3 years ago

Note: Short update, but I need something else to distract me from the current track. I'll write more soon.


Abir and Mishti start their drive back home. 


M - Kunal se baat hui? Ghar mein sab theek hai?

A - Haan lekin woh jaldi wapas aane ko keh raha tha. Parson janta curfew hai na aur uske baad shayad lockdown bhi ho sakti hai. 

M - OK, ghar hi toh ja rahe hain. 

A - Actually main soch raha tha…

M - Kya?

A - Humein didi se baat karni hai. Agar lockdown announce hua toh unko NGO mein kuch help chahiye toh hum kar sakte hain.

M - OK main call karti hoon. Lekin Abir, agar hum unke help karenge toh naanu aur ghar mein baki sab ke liye risky ho sakti hai na?

A - Haan (thinking for a minute) hum lockdown tak alag reh sakte hain na?

M - NGO mein?

A - Nahi hamare ghar mein

M - Hamare ghar?

A - Kal gundon ne sar pe mara tha?

M (perplexed) - Nahi

A - Raat ko theek se soyi nahi?

M (getting annoyed) - Nahi

A - Nashte mein badam nahi khaya?

M (irritated now) - Abir!

A - Toh phir bhool kaise gayi? Dikhaya tha na tumhe? (With a smile) Waise main room mein doodh ke saath wait karne ke liye tayyar hoon. Agar tum jaogi toh shayad phir se so jaogi (laughing).

M - Tum bahut ajeeb ho. 

A - Main toh sirf apni patni ki sapne poora karna chahta hoon.

M - Abir, tumne woh ghar ab tak rakha hai?

A - Arre kyun nahi? Accha investment hai yaar!

M - Idiot. Main toh...agar bech dete toh bhoolna aur aasan hota na?

A (singing) - Chahe bhi toh bhool na paaye...mann mast magan mann mast magan bas tera naam dohraaye

He looks at her and smiles and Mishti smiles back. Then she starts looking serious again. 

M - Shayad ghar mein sab ko accha nahi lagega agar hum alag rahe toh. Woh sab isi baat se darr rahe the na

A - Mishti yeh permanent nahi hai na. Lockdown tak hi toh hai aur ghar mein sab ke health ke liye important yehi theek rahega 

M - Unko lagega ki mujhe ghar mein rehna chahiye, help karne ke liye. Kaam tum bhi toh kar sakte ho na

A (singing again) - Maahi mainu chaddeyo na ke tere bin dil nahio lagna

M - Abir!

A - Kaisi wife ho yaar tum? Meri help nahi karogi? Ghar mein help karne ke liye Nanko aur Kuhu hain na? Agar dono honge toh better hoga actually. Main ghar mein baat karta hoon

M - OK, yahan break leke kuch kha lete hain. NGO didi se bhi baat ho jayegi aur phir ghar phone karke unse bhi baat kar lete hain

They get out and order food. 

M - Khana aane tak main didi ko call karti hoon.

A - Haan khana aane tak wapas aa jana. Kya pata kisi ne khana chura liya toh?

M (confused) - Tum kya bol rahe ho Abir?

A (grinning at her) - Yehi ki mere life mein kaafi chor hain, angry chorni aur cinderella chor ke baad ek khichdi chor bhi aa gayi

Mishti moves closer to him.

M - Tumhare life mein chor sirf main hoon Ajeeb Rajvansh chahe woh angry chorni ho, cinderella chor ho, ya phir khichdi chor ho.

A (now he is confused) - Matlab?

M - Maine khichdi chor ki kahani tumhari diary mein pada. 

A - Accha, diary chor kahin ki...par tum khichdi chor kaise? Woh toh

M - Main wapas aayi aur Ananya di ko restaurant mein mili thi. Maine khichdi order kiya, unke paas ek tha aur unhone bola ki kisi ne pehle se order kiya toh maine aadha chura liya aur note choda ki

A - ki tumne haq chodna bandh kar diya

M (smiling) - Haan

Abir smiles and moves even closer.

A - Toh ab kya kar rahi ho? Le lo apna haq!

M (looking around and moving back) - Tum sach mein ajeeb ho! Woh aate hi honge khana lekar. Main didi ko phone karti hoon.


Mishti calls and finalizes plans with the NGO didi. Then Abir calls home and informs them about their plans to stay elsewhere. He also calls Jugnu and asks him to get some things to MishBir house. They eat and resume their journey.

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Posted: 3 years ago

wow daya...

pura mishbir FD ki dream hain ye... mishbir in mishbir house...

im waiting for next...

finally only one chorni in abir's life...❀️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhi19

wow daya...

pura mishbir FD ki dream hain ye... mishbir in mishbir house...

im waiting for next...

finally only one chorni in abir's life...❀️


ab toh yeh dreams aise hi puri karni padengi πŸ˜Š. Working on the next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: angelfire78


ab toh yeh dreams aise hi puri karni padengi πŸ˜Š. Working on the next part.

our FD writers are enough to fullfill our dreams... eagerly waiting for next...