New concept:Drishti father has work on kotha. Where they work girls selling. He is drunk man.Drishti father force her work on dance bar getting money. Because of Divya, Drishti sell herself to Rakshit.Rakshit hates girls as his mother went to others for money..So after that's He hates girls and he bought Drishti in anger.So guys how is the concept.I hope u all will support me.
CharacterSketch:
SureshSharma:
He is fatherof Divya Drishti. He works on kotha where girls has sell. His life is onlydrinking and sleeping with girls.
He wants hisdaughter who is so beautiful do same work as gets lots of money.
DrishtiSharma:
A very kindheart girl she loves her little sister so much. She can do anything for her.She only reason of her smile.
DivyaSharma:
A very funloving girl. She loves her di so much. She give her mother love.
RakshitShergill:
A very angryyoung man:
He hates girlsso much he thinks all girls are same. He has drinking habbit. He has only onerelation which is his little brother Shikhar.
ShikharShergill:
He is veryresponsible boy. Who loves his brother and respect girl so much. He and Divyaare good friend.
nice banner.very different concept.wonder how drishti will change rakshit's attitude towards women
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Part 1:
A small house:
Two little girls sitting on bed.
Divi have this said Drishti trying to feed her little sister.
No I want mama cried Divya.
Their mother died few back.
Divi I am here na with u see your Di said Drishti wipe her tears.
Divya hug Drishti and start crying.
Drishti make her calm and feed her food.
Divya hold Drishti hand.
Aaah she scream in pain.
What happens Di asked Divya seeing burn mark.
Nothing my hand burn while making food said Drishti without caring her pain.
Divya kiss on her hand.
Know it will gone u see said Divya.
Drishti smile and hug her sister.
A while later:
Drishti try to make her sister sleep.
They hear noises.
Both went out and look from their room door.
Suresh was full drunk and dancing with girl.
They are going cozy.
Drishti keep palm in Divya eyes and take her inside.
Divya hug Drishti in fear.
Nothing Divya lets we sleep said Drishti.
She takes her sister in arms and lay her on bed.
Divya hug Drishti tightly.
Noises was too loud.
Drishti keep hand on Divya ears but she hearing everything.
Divya sleep hugging her but Drishti getting tears.
She remember her mother who taking her last breath.
Drishti take care of your little sister and never gets her knows about your father and his work. I want her stay away from all this and u to stay away from this type of work and never trust any man. All are same they only need for their use said Vidya and died.
Drishti close her eyes and sleep.
After few years:
Divya Drishti grow up.
Drishti come out from washroom found Divya sleeping peacefully.
Divi get up it’s too late we have to had food said Drishti trying to wake her sister.
Divya open her eyes and found her life.
Di said Divya and hug her.
Drishti got smile and kiss on her forehead.
Get up lazy girl said Drishti caress her hair.
Drishti a shouting voice come.
Coming papa replied Drishti in trembling voice and went out.
Yes papa said Drishti coming in front of Surresh.
He slap her tightly that’s she fell down on floor and got hurt in elbow.
Part 2:
Surresh slap Drishti tightly that she fall on floor and got hurt in elbow.
He pull her from hairs.
Where is my food and beer asked Suresh pulling her hairs?
Papa it’s on your room told Drishti in painful voice.
He push her badly and went inside room.
Divya come out found Drishti on floor.
Di shout Divya and rush to her.
She make her sit on sofa and saw her wound.
She blow air on wound.
Why papa always do this asked Divya.
Its ok Divi he is our papa said Drishti.
U always say that only said Divya and she got angry.
Drishti back hug her.
Sorry leave na I am hungry let’s eat food said Drishti.
Divya got melt and smile.
They are start feeding each other.
Suddenly Surresh friend come inside.
Divya feel irritated seeing him.
Lo he is come said Divya to Drishti.
Sssh said Drishti.
Hello uncle greet Drishti.
Hello Drishti beta said him and gaze Drishti from head to toe.
Divya feel angry see this.
Uncle dad is inside said Divya in anger.
He went inside giving glare to Divya.
How badly he looking u I will kill him said Divya in anger.
My angry bird know your college time go said Drishti giving her lunch box.
She kiss on Drishti cheeks and went.
Drishti smile on her craziness.
Surresh ji try to understand your Drishti is so beautiful she can earn well for u said his friend.
I think u right and I know how to make her angree.
Both laugh evilly.
DD scene was nice.I doubt whether the burn Mark was caused by cooking or their dad.drishti's last moment with her mom was sad.as her mom said drishti never let divya know anything.their dad hurting drishti was sad
suresh's friend is looking at drishti in a bad way.this is so cheap.chee both Suresh n friend are thinking of using her beauty to make money.so cheap minded people
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