Rishbala os affection part 3 (last epi) posted on 4thApril 2020

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Affection:-

A guy tell his love Confession with very passionately, intensity can seen his eyes.

It's none other than superstar rk.

Rk:tumhe Mera Isha ho,tumhe Mera junoon bas tum he tum.

Aur tum mujhse door jaana chate ho,reh paunge mere Bina her sako gye.

Aapne Baatein ek baar khud hi socha lo.. chup ho abhi..

Lekin tum jawab doge mujhe aur mere iss darak the hui dill ko.

"Cut it"

Excellent shoot rk,too good rina,it was a very amazing shot and with this today is pack up." Director.


Rk come out of the set many fans were waiting they were madly after him.

Rk give them some of his autograph and sit on the car.

Security shoo the fans..

Rk,the superstar..

Rk himself don't know when he start calling superstar.the life til now was very good and bad with him.

He is basically from Delhi were he lived with his parents but at the age of 11,his father died and mother get married.

He never accept his mother's husband netither he.

Years passed at the age 21 when he was 3rd year , mother gone pass and step father took off from his responsibility.

Rk had always be a dream of becoming a actor he was doing plays and theatres also.

Rk come to Mumbai to make his dream true.


Rk come out of his thoughts when driver call him that rk mansion has come.

Rk enter to the mansion and see the most cute moment of his lives.

Malik and madhu ,Madhu is scolding Malik for not take his medicine.

Madhu: Malik..kya yeh aap Aapne medicine kyu thik time pe Nahi lete.

Sab Kuch mujhe karna parta hai.


Rk intrupt in their moment.

Rk: Madhu,Malik yeh Jaan buckar karte hai taake there daat kha saake,unhe bohat Pasand Jo hai there daat.

Madhu:agaye aap..

Ruke yeh aapke liye chai Bana dete ho.

Rk:arre main..

Madhu:koi baat nahi hoge mein Lee aayte ho.

Haar kisi ki bas Aapne ma'am ke Karne hai.

Madhu leaves to kitchen and Malik ,rk laugh at her childness.


When rk come to Mumbai he was alone no friends no Accent's no one ,

And more over his wallet was Rob.

When he find out he get tensed and faint in the Kamal studio where he come for audicine.


when he open his eyes he find himself in a chapel with Malik Malik found rk on road and get know what happened with him from watchman,Malik is a stuntman.

Malik was a genious man,he get impress with rk by his behaviour and asked him to stay with his house with him and his teenage 16 year's old daughter Madhu.

Madhu is only daughter of Malik and padmini, padmini died few years later after Madhu born.madhu is Apple of malik eyes,Malik also loved Rishabh as he see his 1st baby boy in Rishabh who died 1 moths years old.

Malik see that baby in rk,so he had affection for rk though many people say a lot as he bring a young stranger boy to his house where yeh upgoing girl living,but Malik rubbish them,rk too know all this and he tried to leave the place but he nether have any work nor place nor Malik is let him leaving.

Rk to start living but help Malik in his work,help Madhu to do his homework actually he was take care madhu a lot,he keep trying to get into films but not getting any chance.

He work in a small library and which income comes he give Malik for his household work.

Rk had a great affection for Madhu,she is a little baby for him but he doesn't know that this little baby start liking him, loving him immensely.

He keep pray to God for rk's success,his happiness.first it was teenage crush which soon turn into deep love which can't remove from her heart.


He feel so nice when rk do rehearsal with her for his audicines. In that time also Madhu can tell his heart talk's.

1 years passed,rk keep struggling and one fine day he get notified by a director and he signed rk as lead actor with this he  get many more films 1st film doesn't not work,

Rk was upset seeing this but madhu encourage him and his 2nd film was as a 2nd lead but with this role audience get symphysis with him with his role and his position Change he thanked Thapki as it was her idea to sign him this film.

Now rk got a star status he give back to back hit , super hot, blockbuster movie..

He becomes king on box office.

He built mansion with named rk mansion.he shift with Madhu and Malik to this mansion.

Malik Denise to stay with rk ,but he can't agrue more as he argues a lot and he helped rk a lot more over madhu is dieing to live with rk.

So he agree.

Now it has been 5 year's, Madhu is 22 years old a young beautiful girl.

Many things change but one thing doesn't change that was her live for rk,

But rk never realise her love.

With Time,.Madhu is observed with rk.

But for rk she is a baby girl.


Rk is having dinner with kk and all paising of madhu

Rk :malik,aapke beti ne na humare adat he bigar deya hai itna acha khana khela khela ke..

Aap iss me Shaadi ke pech pare ho na main toh iss me Shaadi kisi se Nahi hone dunga ,Ghar pe pure Zindagi betha ke rakhunga.


Malik and Madhu laugh.

at room, 

Madhu is on and off her lighy a smile appear on her face. she remembers her moments with rk


Mainu ishq tera lae dooba

Haan ishq tera lae dooba


Mainu ishq tera lae dooba

Haan ishq tera lae dooba


Aisa kyun hota hai

Tere jaane ke baad

Lagta hai haathon mein

Reh gaye tere haath


Tu shaamil hai mere

Hansne mein, rone mein

Hai kya koyi kami

Mere paagal hone mein


Mainu ishq tera le dooba

Haan ishq tera le dooba


Mainu ishq tera lae dooba

Haan ishq tera lae dooba


Rk come to the room  and see hr smiling. 

Rk :yeh Madhu. 

yun akele akele kis baat pe muskura rahe hai. 

Madhu:kyu mere mushkurahat ache na hai. 

mere papa toh kehte hai ke mere smile he mera sab se bade Beauty hai. 

Rk :han woh toh hai lekin tere papa ko tere smile kya wajah pata hai mujhe nahi. 

Madhu:bas yese he. 

Rk :jitna ladkiya ko main jante ho naa woh yun akele kab mushkurate hai jante hai tu. 


Rk come close to her and say in low voice. 

Rk:tab woh jab  kisi ko chahne lagte hai,ishq mein hote hai. 


this brings a smile on her face. 


Mainu ishq tera lae dooba

Haan ishq tera lae dooba 


Madhu feels shy and hit rk,Madhu lie down on bed. 

Madhh:jaaye hume abhi sona hai. 


Rk smiles and wish her good night. 

Rk adjust her comforter and leaves the room. 


Power goes. Madhu wake up and see this. 

Madhu:yeh light's ko ka hua. 

she goes downstairs and calls out Malik rk and others.

She sees someone coming and asks who is there.

Rk,Malik and servents with knife and cake. They all say surprise. The lights come

madhu sees everyone . She smiles by the surprise decorations and arrangement.


She hugs Malik and rk 

Madhu:AAp logo ne Kiya yeh sab.


Malik says no, rk did everything, I just helped him.

Madhh asks wah rk mere liye itna kuch magar but why. 

Rk :taake hum sabko baata sakte hai ke sirf tu he nahi hum bhi tere liye bohat kuch kar sakte hai. 


Madhu thanks him. She cuts cake and feeds everyone.

 (I tried to finish this story in this part but I will take time so I'm posting the next part soon till then enjoy.

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Beautiful update

loved it

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Rishbala os affection
Os part 2:-

Rk and Malik are having dinner with is made by Madhu.
Rk:Malik main na Chah Kar bhi Madhu ko Khana Bana be se Nahi rokh Sakta.
Arre kaise roko itna taste Khana jo Bana te hai ek dum best.
Iss se toh cocking book lekhna chahe..
Malik:abhi kuch maat bolo usse usske toh haar haste mein shock badal jaata hai ,Kuch hafte pehli keh rahe the dolphin trainer bane gye usse pehli criminology pe study kare gye usske Kuch din pehli professor ,aur kya bolo.
Madhu:papa..
Malik:sach keh Raha hoon,pata Nahi kis pagal ko yeh Pasand aayenge .
Rk:Malik aap humesha iss me Shaadi ke peche kyu pare rehte ho,Woh abhi bache hai.
Malik:18 years tak bache hote hai abhi toh 22 ke hai.
Mere dill hai usske Shaadi deke jai,ek ache se ladka ke Saath.
Kya pata Hoga ke Nahi.

Rk and Madhu get sad as they know Malik had disease , anything can happen anytime.
Rk:Mera toh Mann Nahi hai use less aur ke pas send kya yahe Aapne ghar rakhdo
Madhu really happy to hear This.

Nandini Kapoor ,a renowned actress best known for being heroine to rk.
They have done six films togather actually Nandini is from a business can good at heart even had a golden heart.

Both rk and Nadini had link up in media and it's true one point as they like each other and share a good bonding but didn't tell their Confession to each other but they know what's other mind.

Nandini also liked Madhu and looked her as her younger sister.
Madhu too notice the changes when Nandini is around to rk.rk give Nandini   time more.

Bittuji the manegar of rk,now rk and madhu true feelings but he never say anything to rk not madhu about them bittuji know Madhu had feeling for rk and rk had feeling for Nadini.
Bittuji looked Madhu as his sister feel sad as he knew maybe her dream can't true.

One Day,
In shooting,a Tolly was about to fall but Nandini save rk but still rk get injures bad bruise.
Rk is thankful to Nandini who nurse him.and take care of him
Rk:Jaan bacha le hai.
Nandini:toh ab yeh Jaan mere hai.
Rk:jab chahe yeh Jaan le lo ...
Nandini stop rk saying that and nod no.

At house,
thapki dresses his wound and crying.
He says I got bruises why are you crying.
Madhu:main kaha roo rahe hoon.
Rk :acha toi yeh ansu.
Madhui :kuch gir gaya hoga

She says take your shirt off I will apply medicine.
She helps him in taking his shirt off. Madhu:rishu,tumhe toh bohat chot lage hai.
I think we should go to the doctor.
He says Doctor se mill aya ho.
tum bas abhi mere dressing karwa do.

Madhu dresses his wound.
sHe says if something happened to you I would have died.
he says don't say that.
Madhu tear eyes looking at Rishabh.

Tere Kaandhe Se Hi Lag Ke
Yaara Beete Umar Saari
Socho Kaisi Hogi Kismat
Hua Yun Toh Phir Humaari
Saare Aansoon Toh Ho Tere
Aur Aankhein Ho Humaari
Tere Dard Humein Jo Mile Pyaar Mein
Tere Dard Humein Jo Mile Pyaar Mein
Hum Khushi Se Yun Bhar Jayenge
Hum Mar Jayenge Ho O..
Hum Mar Jayenge.

An outhouse,
Madhu make rk  have soup.
Rk : madhu,mein pe sakta ho.
Madhu :tob mere haathi se pene mein kya karabhi hai.
Rk :thik hai baba.
tum jeete peelo mujhe soup aapne konl se mulam se haatho se.
Madhu :rk ....
they smile.

At morning,
Nandini come to meet rk she make food for rk and help him to feed.
Rk:wah Nandini Hume toh pata Nahi tha tum itne ache Khana Bana te ho Madhu ko takkar de skate ho.
Nandini:magar woh hai kahan.

at mandir,
Madhu climbing the stairs in one leg.
one woman :beta, yesa kya mannat hai jis ke wajah se tum yese mandir arahe Ho.

Madhu:haan, wajah mere aurvmere baghwan ki bech mein.

Madhubala come to Mandir with such a difficultess.
Madhu  pray god.
Madhu:thank you bhagwn ji aapne mere rishu ko riksha ki aur please abhi aap unka tabriyat bhi thik kar de jiye.

at home,
Rk and nandini play chess.
Nandini:dekhe ye raja ji humne aapko choro taraf se gher liye hai.
Rk :mere chal abhi baki hai.

they were talking when they see madhu entering. her leg got bruises.
they tense and come to her.
Nandini : Madhu, yeh kya hua hai tumhare pair ko.

Rk :shoe nahi pehna kya tumne.
Nandini:jarur toot gaye hoge.
Rk:kya karte hai tu.
aapna dyan thik se nahi rakh te.

Servent bring medicine and give it to madhu
Rk applies to madhu feet.
Madhu :ouch..
Rk :sorry..
Nandini get a call and she leaves from there.

Rk to madhu :chalo aao. ab ek doon ghante aram karlo.
thik ho jaye gya.
Madhu:main abhi aapke chai bana dete ho.
Rk :koi jarurat nahi.
Madhu:kaise nahi bina chai peye subha aapkea sar dart karta hai.
Madhu : Nandini ne mujhe pelaya hai.
aur aabhi tun aram karo.
aao room mein mein chor deta Ho.
Days passed,
Malik health are not well,its unknown to madhu as they don't want give her sadness.malik is always had tension about Madhu,now madhu is became rk's tension,he is mature ,he knows he will always there for Madhu but madhu need some one who will had a best bond with a person who will take care her.love her.
He too know what madhu to get married like madhu,Madhu is unaware of them,she is still in her dream ,her and Rishabh happy life dream.

Nandini too get to know about madhu,she too want that so she decided to groom her well so that any guy can't reject her.

Nandini bring her for shopping to help her look more beautiful and attractive.
Madhubala is already beautiful just glow her beauty.
Rk and Nandini do shopping for her.
Her when they return.

Nandini left and madhu is also leaving when she looked at rk.
the flowers tab which is hanging rk head is about to fall.
Rk is busy on phone.
Madhu:rk..

Madhu run to rk and side him and the pot fall on ground.
but rk and madhu lose their balance and fall on each other.
on ground.
they both shocked,they look at his eyes.
and a song plays in bg.

Suno na kahe kya suno na
Dil mera suno na, suno zara
Teri baahon mein mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
Teri baahon mein hogi subah

Be-intehaan
Yoon pyaar kar be-intehaa
Dekha karoon saari umar
Tere nishaan be-intehan
Koi kasar naa rahe, meri khabar na rahe
Chhoo le mujhe is kadar be-intehaan.

Rk and madhu both stand up.
Rk :ouch..
Madhu asks if his fingers are paining. He says haan thoda sa.
. madhu bring bring to the hall.
Madhu:bethe yeh yahan hum abhi aayte hai.

She goes and brings salt water.
She asks him to soak his fingers in salt water.
He hesistantly soaks, but takes them out hurriedly.
Rk:aahnn
She asks kya hua if it water is hot.
He says not hotter than him.
She asks him to soak then.
thode der rakh dege yeh thik jo gaye gya.
Rk :nahi yeh gharam hai. its hot more than me too.
Madhu laugh.

He soaks and asks how does she know about this remedy.
she says when her legs used to swell after running in school computation. her mother used to soak her feet in salt water and she used to get relief.

Rk :acha toh tum aapna sabse jaruri jagah soak kyu nahi kiya.
Madhu:jaruri jagah.
Rk :hum apna saar, woh iss pani mein rakhte toh woh thik ho jaate.
toh haar baar mujhse takra kar girti nahi.

Madhu:kya rishu  aap bhi naa.
Rk :main kya sach bol raha hoon.
Madhu:main jan buchke girye thode naa.
Rk:acha hua, tu mere saath girte hai warna koi aur ladke ke saath yun baar bar girti naa woh toh 100% sochta ke tu uspe line maar rahe hai.

Madhu get irrited. He feels relief from his pain.
Madhu:aap mera yun mazak uraha rahe hai.
jane do main he kyu baar baar aapke pas aayte ho.

Madhu was leaving when her eyes fall on a  cockroach, she is hell sacred from cockroach.
Madhu:cockroach...
she shout and jump on the bed,
Rj First was shocked then see cockroach and he jumped double on bed and hug Madhu.

both are hugging each other while being scared.
Madhu:rishu,mujhe naa cockroach se bohat darr lagta hai.
Rk :darr chota sab hai mera aur cockroach ke beche.
aah..
Madhu e toh humare taraf aaraha hai.
Madhu:dekh raha hai..
aande thode na ho.
Rk :tera barosha nahi.
Madhu:aap bhi naa.
Rk :sorry sorry..
aaah...
mr. cockroach maine aapka kya bigara hai..
You don't know me I'm a superstar ,mein kitna powerful ho pata Nahi hai tumhe.

Madhu:cockroch e saare treats nahi manta.
Rk :toh kya manta. .
Madhu: rishu,hum attack karte hai.
Rk :kis desh par..
Madhu:kisi desh par nahi, filhal ke liye humare dusman cockroach pe.
Rk:thapki, yaar mere pas revolver toh cupboard pe hai.

shootting skills ache hai mere.
Madhu:rk,aapko ho kya gaya hai..
mere aatma aapke ander chale aaye hai ka.
yese behke behke baate main karte ho. mujhpe suit karta hai aap paar nahi.
yeh vase isse usse attack karte hai.
Rk :tu kar.
Madhu:main kyu aap.
Ri:thik hai.

he take the vase and look at the floor bit the cockroach is gone.
Rk :oh madhu darr ke bhag gaya hoga..
Madhu:haan..
they both come down from bed as soon they fall their feet, the cockroach appears again.
and they both give a shoot that the whole mansion shaken up.

Madhu and rk shouting like a hell.
its become earthquake by their shouting. servent are shocked.
"cockroach...
cockroach.. ...

Madhu and rk running here to there in room.
Bittuji:yesa shor kaisa..

he run to the room and find rk and madhu running here to there.
Madhu: bittuji..
Rk: bittuji,aap agaye hume bacho..

Bittuji see the cockroach and run away . Madhu and rk surprised.
Rk:yeh kaise staff hai humare,yun musibaat main khud bak jaate hai..

madhu see cockroach going to towards him.
Madhu:rk cockroach.. they again start running.

Bittuji come again and spray on cockroach, and he died.
They get relief.
Time passed..
Malik health is not well Madhu also know it,rk take madhu's responsiblty for her marriage.
Rk trying to find a guy for madhu who should be like him rich handsome smart good at heart..
For madhu he is rejecting every guy as he want the best for madhu.
Finally ,he get a nice guy raunaq miltal.
Son of a high-class business man.and a very nice guy.
But madhu is broken when she got to know about that rk is not love her he eventually getting her married to someone else and also he get to know about rk and Nandini relationship from bittuji who finally spoke to her, revealing the truth,so that she can move on but now she walk so far that it impossible for madhu to forget rk.
Precap:last part.

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So sad how can rk fal for someone poor madhu feel sad fr her hating rk cant je see love in madhu eyes

My heart broke  unble to see rk loves other girls  other then madhu

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So sad how can rk fal for someone poor madhu feel sad fr her hating rk cant je see love in madhu eyes

My heart broke  unble to see rk loves other girls  other then madhu

next part will be very interesting and catchy or unexpected

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Good update with nice rm moments

Rk always treated madhu as baby girl its hard for him to imagine madhu in other way,Malik did so much for him so as for now he is showing gratitude,respect ,responsibility towards them

Malik health not good,madhu got to know rk loves some other

curious to know how rk gonna realize his love for madhu

thanks for the update

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Part 3

at mandap, 

Nandini is taking phere, she is sad but no let anyone tknow. 

Rk and madhu stand together. and show flowers on them. 

Madhu see the couple doing rituals. 

she imagined rk and she taking phere,

Rk wear her mangalsutra and fill her maang with sindoor. 

Tadev lagnam suridam tadev

To get the right auspicious time

Naara balam chandra balan tadev

To get the strength of stars and the moon

Vidya balam daiv balan tadev

To get the strength of knowledge

Lakshmi pate tendra yugam swaramiWorship the husband of Goddess Lakshmi (Lord Vishnu)Shubmangal sawadha

Madhu come out of imagination and see Nandini done with her marriage, she looks at rk who have no expression. 

Rk went to Malik and talk little then all busy in dinner. 

Madhu come to the room of resort,they are staying in resort where different small small guest house built she is one of them.they come here to attend Nandini wedding.

she  take out a saree. the saree is her mother.she most of time care with any tour.

Madhu:maa yeh aapke saree, jante hai yeh hume kitna pasand hai hum na isse aapne shaadi pe pehenge aur mere shaadi dur nahi hai. 

bas kuch waqt aur wahan Nandini ke bidai hoge aur phir Rishabh aayenge,

papa ke pas mera haath mange, 

aur papa haan kahenge kyu ke unka toh rk favourite hai. 

maa, main aaj bohat kush ho. 

Madhu twill her again and again. 

Madhu:ab jab Rishabh aayenge na tab sirf woh nahi aayenge.. 

mere naye zindegi aayenge. 

wahe toh honge mere naye zindegi. 

she laughed all her heart out. 

Madhu:aaj main aapne kushi nahi samhal pa rahe ho. 

dil kar raha hai ke asman ke chand sitare tor ke logo mein baath du. 

nacho gana gake logo ko aapne khushi batao. 

log mujhe mere kush kismate pe mubarak baad de, 

maa, kahe main kushi se deewane toh nahi hote jaa rahe ho naa..

kahe mere kushiyun ko mere he nazar na lag gaye. 

Madhu twill herself again and again in happiness. 

at terace, 

Rk open the beer bottle he remembers his moments with nandiniand her marriage in front of him, her bidai. 

in her bidai,

she didn't look back at her. he have tears in his eyes. 

Ho... Ho ho ho aa aa...

Yeh mere dil ka jaana

Ek aakhri faisla hai

Ab saath hoga na tera

Yeh dard ki intehaan hai

Tha pyar tera toh jhootha

Sacha magar yeh Khuda hai

Tanhaiyon me hoon roya

Tab jaake mujhko mila hai

Duniya ke rishton me toh

Yeh hota hi raha hai

Laila aur Majnu bhi toh

Ek doosre se juda hain

Tanhaai ka ashq mitayen yahaan

Barbaddiyan bhi sabko jaane mili hain kahaan

Tere bina hum jee lenge

Phir kyun rahe koi gile

Tere bina hum seh lenge

Woh zakhm jo tujh se mile. aa ha haan!

he was thinking all this when he heard sound of shouting... 

he run and see cottage of their is burning in fire. he is shocked.

he run downstairs, all are panic, fire service are coming. 

Malik: madhu.. madhu ander hai jaldi pani lao.. 

Rishabh get shocked. he heard madhu voice. 

She shouting for help..

Malik: madhu,mere Madhu ander hai jane doon hume.. 

Malik tries to went in side but people holding her tightly. 

Rishabh see madhu struck in the fire. he shouti" Madhu.. "

Rk comes to the backdoor..He knocks on it..as its blocked and madhu is asks for help

Madhu see rk and screams to him for helping .

Rk is trying to push the things and is struggling.He puts all efforts. while increasing the intensity of the fire..

Rk manages to enter while madhu  forward her hand and rk  too, but madhu start having breathing problems and falls on the ground coz of suffocatio.

She keeps begging for his help..as rk tries to reach to her! He falls down in the process. 

fire reach every where 

Rk scrambles to reach to thapki but madhu is fallen on floor having breathing problems and can't stand too. 

a steel ton of fire is falling on  thapki. 

Rk tries to stand but, its fall on madhu which injures her a Lot. 

Rk finally stands up.

he run and see the steel burning madhu. he finally reached to her and removes the steel in time before its  burnt madhu a lot and carries madhu. in his arms thru the fire and brings her out  from the fire!!

Rk see madhu is unconscious. and her body is burnt a lot. all shocked to see madhu.

at hospital, 

doctor treat treating Madhu,all bittuji rk malik are standing. 

doctor comes out and look at them. 

Malik:doctor, madhu ke halat kaise hai. 

Rk:woh thik toh hai naa. 

Bittuji:batai kuch. 

doctor :aap logo ne usse aag se bacha toh liye but she injure critically. 

hume nahi lagta woh zinda reh payegye jaada waqt. 

her lower part got burnt,sharrer ke bohat hisa jaal gaya hai sirf sakal ko gaale ko chor ke.

hume nahi lagta she will survive.  but we are trying soon you will allow to meet her. 

all are shocked have tears in their eyes, they remembered their moments with madhu.

Malik was about to fall when rk hold him. 

Malik cryingly said to rk 

Malik:dekho na Rishabh kya ho raha hai yeh, tum kuch karo na, 

tumne toh kaha tha ke madhu ke shaadi tum karwao gye, woh bhi bohat dum dam se, jao apna yeh wad pura karlo, aapna farz  pura karo, 

usse yese he dulhan bano jaise tumne kahe the. 

usse thik kardo, uske abhi umar nahi hai jane ke, 

jaa toh main raha hoon..

kuch waqt mein,lekin mere Madhu ko iss halat mein, 

humesha se uske liye sapne dekha jab se woh paida hui hai, uske study, uska kaam, uske shaadi.. 

Malik cries and rk also shocked. 

Rk look at all of their Face and walk away in dilemma. 

Nandini is sitting in the filght and look at down. she remembered something which change her life. 

At flashback,

Nandini:tum pyaar karte hoon rk se aur woh.. 

Madhu:tumhare rehte hui woh mujhse kaise pyaar kar sakta hai. 

maine Rishabh se pyaar karte hoon, itne kya koi soch nahi sakta. 

jiban saathi ke roop mein main unhe dekh chuke. 

mere muskurana, mere zindegi ke karan ban gaye hai. 

Nandini, Rishabh agar mujhe nahi mila na toh madhu bhi kabhi nahi mile gye. 

Nandini:nahi Madhu yesa maat bol. 

Madhu:Yaad Karo Nandini mere birthday pe tumhe Kaha tha jo main kabhi chaunge tumse tum Woh doge 

toh main aapne zindegi aapne rishabh ko mangte ho. 

Nandini:paar madhu rk tumse nahi.. 

Madhu:yesa maat bolo, sunne mein bhi taklif hote hai. 

Nandini, tumhe toh aapne naam, surat ke ke wajah se ache se acha rishta mill gaye gya. 

par mere kismat main aaye yeh heera maat chino.. 

main maar jaunge. 

Madhu say a lot which prick at Nandini's heart 

Nandini can't take anymore hearing madhu's plead and run out of room. 

when Rishabh get the news of Nandini getting married to e big doctor in America, he get shocked, he asked Nandini about her decision, 

she like ritwik her fiance, and she like rk as friend.

she never think rk anymore which hurt him,he can't believe Nandini is saying through they never proposed each other but with the affection they know that they love each other.but now they wedding is fixed and Nandini is not saying anything,

Nandini act as she feels sad for rk as a friend ,she asked him to move on, that's too with Madhu...

Rk First shocked.

Rk:pagal ho Gaya ho tum, nandini main Kabhi kisi aur se pyaar Nahi jar sakta aur tum chate ho ke main  Madhu ko Aapne biwi bano,Maine humesha Madhu ke kushi chahe hai,aur Woh kushi main Kabhi Nahi de Sakta samjhe tum...

Nandini:lekin usske kushi tum ho.

Woh tum chate hai ..

Rk calmly.

Rk:usske aanko mein masomiyat hai,shararat hai magar pyaar Nahi..

Nandini:pyaar hai rk,pyaar hai, Bohat pyaar,Maine Dekha hai mehsos bhi Kiya hai yeh..

Maine toh humesha socha ke tumhe usse Shaadi Karo gye.

Woh tunhare alawa kisi aur ke Saath kushi nahi mill page gye 

Soch na iss baare mein rk.

Abhi mujhe jaana hoga muhrat Ka waqt ho raha hai.

flashback ends, 

Nandini:sayad madhu humese jaad rk ka kyal rakte hai. usse pyaar karte hai magar kya sirf iss wajah se mera pyaar nahi jeet paaya. 

(so guy's this was a stupid twist of my story which i wanted,we always saw madhu like bechare ya head strong.. 

but i make her anti heroine, for madhu,rk is her world, when she gets to know rk'love, she break the relationship with Nandini, 

seeing him in pain she still keep calm, and enjoyed her victory, 

but now the question, will she win or not) 

at room, 

all are in room of madhu, she is having breathing problems but she still taking Rk name. 

Madhu: Rishabh...

Rishabh. 

Papa,rk kaha hai. 

pata nahi aayenge ye Nahi....

kaha hai woh.. 

"Madhu "

Rk enter the room and see madhu emotionally look at him. 

now madhu is repenting what see done. she give pain to rk only to gain him. 

but now what she is going to die. who will take care of him. 

Nandini too get married. god punished her for being so selfish. ..

Rk walk to her holding a packet. 

Madhu admire him he is so handsome more than her thinking she always want a guy with fair complexion. 

Rk look at madhu then Malik 

Rk:malik

aapko yaad hai.

aap se wada kiya tha ke Madhu ko dulhan main banaunga. 

toh bas woh wada pura karna chata ho. 

Malik:ab kaise Rishabh

Rk: main abhi madhu ko dulhan bana na chata ho. 

main madhu ko aapne dulhan bana na chata ho. 

all get shocked even madhu also. 

all is in shocked what Rk is telling this 

girl r may can't live a hour, he want to marry her. 

Malik: Rishabh,yeh tum kya keh rahe ho, tum hosh mein toh ho naa. 

Bittuji:chief,malik bilkul sahi keh rahe hai. 

Rk : madhu ke shaadi apka sapna tha naa woh kab aap se mera ho gaya,mujhe nahi paata chala. 

Rishabh sit next to madhubala

Madhu:rk....

Rk :haan rk hi ho main, tera hone wala pati. 

ab na tujhe tera bolna sahi nahi hai. 

toh aaj se tu tum ho gaye. 

shaadi karoge mujhe se. 

Madhu don't said anything, Rk make madhu sit and sat on her back. 

Madhu rest her head on his arms. 

Rk place saree on her forehead. 

Rk: madhu,aaj tu bohat sundar lag rahe hai. 

Madhu:jooth..

Rk :main jooth nahi bolta, ek dum dulhan lag rahe hai, 

lekin haan ek chiz ke kame hai. 

Madhu:kya...

Rk take sindoor from cot and fill her maang, madhu close her eyes and feel blessed. she have tears in eyes. 

and other are shocked. 

Madhu: rishabh....

Rk:ek chutki sindur ke kimaat tum ka jano madhubala babu.. 

oh sorry gender ka problem hai waise babu ka opposite ka hota hai. 

baby rakh do. 

Madhu smiles. 

Madhu:rk,aap jante hai mere halat.. kisi bhi waqt jaa sakte hoo main. 

Madhu hug rk.

Rk :abhi shaadi ke hai saath janam ka vaada hai woh aur tum jaane ke baad kar rahe ho. 

kahe jane nahi wale ho tum.. 

haan, 

main Nandini se pyaar karta tha, woh sayad kismat main nahi the. 

Now its make madhu nervous. 

Rk:lekin jab yahan tujhe iss tarah dekha na, woh Nandini ka gram bhi chota lag ne laga. 

main sirf tujhse shaadi iss liye nahi kiya ke main Malik se apne vaada pura karo ya Nandini se, ya tujhe daya kar ke. 

maine tujhe sindoor laga kyu ki main laga na chata tha. 

nahi jane dena chata tha tujhe, 

aur tujhe kuch nahi hoga kyu pata hai. 

tujhe mere bohat saara seva karna hai, kyu ab main tera sirf Rishabh nahi pati ho, pati parmeshwar, tera suhaag. 

Madhu laugh little. 

Rk :aur kuch log hote hai naa. 

pyaar karke shaadi karte hai aur kuch log shaadi karke pyaar. 

we are in 2nd chatogory. 

Madhu laughs. Madhu hug rk too.

She close her eyes. 

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Madhu open her eyes and see the room, she sat in the bed, when someone enter her room, its none other than her husband rk. 

Rk :good morning biwi. 

Rk:good morning, arre tum kyu laaye. 

Madhu :oh madam abhi bhi bukhar hai tumhe...

Madhu:abhi nahi hai. 

Rk:iska matlab yeh nahi, tum pure ghar pe bhaagte raho gye. 

Madhu:bache kaha hai.

Rk : bittuji ke saath bahar gaye hui hai. 

acha abhi yeh lo breakfast your favourite. 

Madhu:acha yeh taklif lene ke kya jarurat the. 

Rk :waise tum yeh mat samjhna ke main yeh sab tumhare liye kar raha hoon. yeh sab main apne selfish reasons ke liye kar raha hoon. 

Madhu:matlab..

Rk:matlab tum jaldi thik ho jao. 

aur mujhe his highness ke tarah treat karo. 

Rk get up, your clothes, your breakfast, your lunch.. 

Madhu:how Mean. 

waise main abhi thik ho. 

aur kal tumhe lunch ke waqt chuti leke ana hoga. 

Rk :kal kya hai..

Madhu:bhul gaye tum.. 

kal mera exivtion hai...

Rk :oh haan, 

Rk get a  call and excuse himself. 

Madhu in mind :15 saal ho gaye hai humare aur rk le shaadi mein pata bhi nahi chala. 

aaj bhi main sochte Ho, ke mujhe samjh mein nahi aayta. 

mujhe laga tha uss waqt sayad mein maar jaunge. 

paar i fight and win... 

bohat waqt laga mujhe thik hone main.. paar uss waqt mein rk mere saaye ke tarah the mere saath.. 

Humne aapne zindegi ke shuruwat kar liye.. 

lekin papa ne humare saath chor diya. 

Nandini America mein rehte hai, 

 Humne aur rk be Aapne rishte ko pyaar mein badal Diya.

at flashback, 

Rk and madhu walking in the park. 

Rk: madhu,car mein chalte hai. 

barish hoge.. 

madhu:toh chalo na bheeg te hai. 

Madhu hold Rk hand and run in the garden. rain is Falling.

Rk and madhu both lie down on grass. and close their eyes end smile. 

then both get up. 

Madhufixed her dupatta, her body is cilng with her body. 

Rk look her intense. 

both stand up,rk open his coat and make madhu wear the coat. 

both feel nervous, 

Rk look at madhu eyes and lost in them. 

he approach to kiss madhu and she closed her eyes. 

flashback ends. 

Madhu look at outside, its raining heavily. 

Madhu:the relationship which start with my mistake is now our life, my and Rk 

ek baar mere he samne ek astrologer ne kaha tha Rk ko kaha tha ke usse uska koi apna he dhoka dega, 

kaha pata hoga ke woh aapna main he hunge. 

jab Nandini ke shaadi hui the, main selfish ke tarah un dunno ka dukh nahi aapna sukh chaha... 

aur jab hospital mein the tab keh ne ke halat mein nahi the aur aaj tak kabhi nahi keh paaye. 

main kabhi yeh sach nahi keh paaye rk se kyu ki main Rishabh ko dukhi nahi dekh sake. 

Rk mujh pe bohat viswas karte hai,bohat pyaar karte hai. 

agar unhe pata chale gya, maine unke saath ka kiya woh sayad tut jayenge. 

aur main yeh dekh nahi sakte. 

aaj main aur Rk kush hai,lekin aaj tak kabhi yeh sach kehne ki himmat nahi ho paaye...

yeh boch saare Zindagi utha rahe hoon. 

Madhu was thinking went little boy and little girl enter the room calling madhu as maa. 

boy name is Arjun and girl name is vibha

Madhu:arjun..vibha ,yeh sab ka hai, kapde kitne ganda kar rakha hai tum logo ne. 

Vibha:mere wajah se nahi bhaiya ke wajah se hua hai.. 

Arjun:yeh vibha maine ka kiya.. 

tune bola tha..

Madhu:bus karo, dad kaha hai tumhare.. 

Arjun:papa aapne study main hai. 

Madhu:tum dunno jao kapde badlo. 

Madhu come downstairs,she come to the kitchen, 

she make tea for Rk and come to the study. 

Rk see madhu and come to the study. 

Rk :arre, madhu tum kyu taklif kiya, kya jarurat  the. 

Rk:jarurat the, mere banai chai ke peye tumhe waqt ho gaya aur chai peye bina tumhara din pura nahi hota hai. 

Rk smiles, both sit and have tea With each other. they smiles looking at each other. 

ends here. 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#9

Good update with nice twist

didn't expected this side of Madhu

Rk had no idea what had happened n what madhu did

RM are together n happily living with their kids

thanks for the story

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Posted: 3 years ago
#10

Superb update,I loved it so so so much.Start a new story soon