My desire to make you mine RoNakshi SS Last part pg7 - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice 🤗🤗🤗but was this the last part ? Cause I want it to go on🥰🥰🥰🥰

Edit: I just read the pm u sent me saying that there is 1 more part left it made me so happy. I’m really excited to read it. And after u are done I will post a long detailed view of the entire SS promise.

Till then take care stay safe and upload the next part soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Superb update

Continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm! 

remarkable update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Rohit loves Sona but has not confessed it to her as the latter is going to marry Sumit. Happy that Veena & Pari understood Rohit's love for Sona. Sumit & his parents canceled their wedding with Sona saying she has an affair with Rohit. Glad that Suman gave them back. Rohit slapped Sumit for, calling Sona a characterless girl. Hope Rohit accepts Sona's love.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Such a Beautiful and Vibrant Part

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Posted: 3 years ago
  • Thank u everyone 4 supporting me in this cute journey.

This FF is ending here.plz give a detailed comment.

Plz write

Ur favourite character.Why?

Ur favourite scene.



My desire to make you mine Part 7

After a year...

A big cake was brought by Suman and Veena.

The cutest couple Rohit and Sonakshi arrived.

Everyone wished them:Happy wedding anniversary..

Rohit-Sonakshi smiled happily.

Rohit took the mike and said:On this occasion I want to thank my wife Sona.Only because of her we are together.If she was not adamant about winning my heart I would have suppressed my love for her forever like a fool.

Sonakshi:When there is a cute person like you how can I not be crazily in love with you?

Rohit-Sonakshi shared a sweet romantic eye lock.

They cut the cake together and fed each other.

Rohit-Sonakshi danced beautifully.

Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko

Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam

Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani

Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam

Oh, Le Liya Dil, Oh Haai Mera Dil

Haai Dil Lekar Mujhko Na Behlaana

Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko

Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam

Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani

Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam

( Bahaar Banke Aaoon Kabhi Tumhaari Duniya Mein

Guzar Na Jaaye Yeh Din Kahin Isi Tamanna Mein )… (2)

Tum Mere Ho, Ho Tum Mere Ho

Aaj Tum Itna Vaada Karte Jaana

Chura Liya

Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko

Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam

Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani

Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam

Ho, Sajaaoonga Lutkar Bhi Tere Badan Ki Daali Ko

Lahoo Jigar Ka Doonga Haseen Labon Ki Laali Ko

Sajaaoonga Lutkar Bhi Tere Badan Ki Daali Ko

Lahoo Jigar Ka Doonga Haseen Labon Ki Laali Ko

Hai Vafa Kya Is Jahaan Ko

Ek Din Dikhla Doonga Main Deewana

Chura Liya

Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko

Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam

Badalke Meri Tum Zindagaani

Kahin Badal Na Jaana Sanam

Le Liya Dil, Haai Mera Dil

Haai Dil Lekar Mujhko Na Behlaana

Chura Liya Hai Tumne Jo Dil Ko

Nazar Nahin Churaana Sanam

Hm Hm Hm Hm, Hm Hm Hm Hm… (2)(Yaadon ki Baraat)

After the dance to her surprise Rohit made her wear a bracelet.

Rohit:This is my wedding anniversary gift.

She smiled happily and embraced him.

To everyone’s surprise Akhil took a ring and proposed Pari.

Akhil:Pari,to be frank I fell for you at first sight itself.

Pari was surprised.

Akhil:I love you madly Pari.Will you turn our friendship into love?

Pari:I won’t change our friendship into love.

Akhil became upset.

Pari:Because I want our friendship to be there always.But yes..I too love you Akhil.

Akhil was surprised.

Pari:I don’t know how I fell for you.All I know is I love you.

Akhil was very happy.

Akhil:Will you marry me?

Pari:Yes Akhil.

Akhil made her wear the ring.

Everyone clapped hands for them.

Rohit-Sona were in their room.

Sona:Rohit...you did'nt ask me for your wedding anniversary gift.Don't you want any gift?

Rohit:You already gave me a gift.Your beautiful smile is the  gift.

She smiled.

Sona:But I have a very special gift for you Rohit.

Rohit:Really?

Sonakshi sat closer to him:Yes.

Rohit:What's that gift?

Sona:You are going to be a father.

Rohit was stunned:What?How I am going to be a father?

Sona:You are a brainless Doctor.I am pregnant.

He could not believe his ears.A smile appeared on his face.

Rohit:Really?

Sona:Yes.

Rohit:Thank you so much Sona.This is the best wedding anniversary gift.

He pecked her cheek in excitement.

Rohit:Now onwards you have to be more careful about your health.You have to take calcium and iron tablets.

He kept giving her instructions.

Sonakshi thought:Again typical doctor talk.

Rohit slept off on her shoulder while talking continuously.

Sonakshi smiled:Guess Rohit himself got bored of his non stop doctor talk and slept off.

After 2 months...

Sonakshi:Rohit...our baby is really hungry these days.

Rohit:You eat well Sona.Our baby needs more food.I will bring dinner again for you.

Sona:I don't want dinner again.I already had it.The baby is hungry for icecream.

Rohit smiled:Naughty baby.No wonder..as the mother is naughty.

Sona kicked his shoulder:Rohit..

They giggled and got into an embrace.

They went out at night and found an icecream stall.They bought icecream from there.

Sona smiled at Rohit:We will share icecream.If I don't share the icecream with it's papa the baby will get angry.

Rohit smiled looking at her deeply.

They romanced feeding icecream to each other.

Chalte chalet raho pe naa jane kab

Hum dono ek huye…

Sehra tu samandar main phir yun

Hum kaise mil gaye

Ulje huye the ishq ke dhaage

Aabb se raah tumse jud gaya…


Rohit:I need more icecream from you.

Sona:But my icecream is over.

Rohit:No..

Sona:What are you saying Rohit?

Rohit held her hand and showed her finger to her.It had a drop of icecream on it.

Sona:You are so observant.

Rohit:I observe everything about you Sona.

She smiled.

Rohit brought her finger close to his lips and he sucked the icecream drop.She was blushing.

Kahan hum…

Kahan tum…

Raab se mangu

Tujhe haar dum

She embraced him shyly.

Kahan hum…

Kahan tum…

Raab se mangu

Tujhe haar dum(KHKT)

Months passed and Sonakshi gave birth to a sweet baby girl.

Rohit carried the baby in his arms.

Rohit:It's name will be...

Sonakshi:Oh Rohit...don't name her.You will name her Vitamin C ,Vitamin D or you will choose some medicine's name for her.So I will name her.

Rohit:Ok baba...you name her.But what name?

Sonakshi took the baby in her arms and looked at her smiling.

Sona:Ronakshi...

Rohit smiled.

Sona:It's the combination of Rohit Sonakshi.

Rohit smiled:Actually I also chose this name.

Sona was surprised:Really?

Rohit:Yes.Because it is the combination of our names.

They both held their baby together and called her cutely:Ronakshi!

Years passed...But Rohit-Sonakshi's love remained the same.

Rohit-Sonakshi lived happily with Ronakshi.

The end

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Posted: 3 years ago

Haven't commented on this thread but I have been a reader for quite some time now!

And it is just Awesome⭐️

Lovely writing🥳

Keep it up👍🏼😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

beautiful update.... nice end 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Beautiful ending

Thanks for pm