ArAnya SS: Raabta chapter-1 updated pg 3

Posted: 5 months ago

Hi guys, i am.not a great writer but just wanted to try something. Plz your honest reviews so i can improve. 


It was a night like every night but still was different. Millions of star embracing the sky. There they both were standing at balcony sipping warm cup.of coffee and staring at the star. She turned towards him overwelmed with all the feelings which she felt, with moist eyes finally gathering courage to.speak, tightly squeezing railing with her hands, closing eyes, taking a deep breath she turned towards him.

Arjun ji !

Hearing his name, he turned towards her. His soft ,deep.eyes used to.make her weak.

Mujhe kuch kehna tha 


 Vo mein 

He started noticing her eyes filled with so many emotions

She finally spoke with her voice breaking

Looked him in eyes 

Vo mei.. mein apko pas..

She finally realised what she was going to say nd stopped . 

For who would want to spoil such a pure and beautiful realtionship.

She turned around with tears in her eyes.

Vo mujhe na bahut neend aa rahi hai 

Good nyt!

She ran and left him wondering what it was she wanted to say! What it was for girl who never lies lied !

He pondered as he saw her retreating figure.

Will they ever be able to step close? Or will they be caged in these unsaid emotions

What does future hold for them?

Posted: 5 months ago

Wow Aranya first SS's simple and beautifulsmiley27 ....plzzz do continue soon ....eager to read ur version of ArAnya love story smiley27smiley27

Posted: 5 months ago

Beautiful written.. 

Plz do continue smiley42

Posted: 5 months ago

Okay. I'm really excited rn. 

Please do continue soon smiley42

Puneett is smiley27smiley42

Posted: 5 months ago

Beautiful piece of writing 

Please continue

Posted: 5 months ago

It's awesome.want to read more.

Posted: 5 months ago

Beautiful one❤🤩

Posted: 4 months ago

Plzz continue 🙏

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