Hi guys, i am.not a great writer but just wanted to try something. Plz tell.me your honest reviews so i can improve.
It was a night like every night but still was different. Millions of star embracing the sky. There they both were standing at balcony sipping warm cup.of coffee and staring at the star. She turned towards him overwelmed with all the feelings which she felt, with moist eyes finally gathering courage to.speak, tightly squeezing railing with her hands, closing eyes, taking a deep breath she turned towards him.
Arjun ji !
Hearing his name, he turned towards her. His soft ,deep.eyes used to.make her weak.
Mujhe kuch kehna tha
He started noticing her eyes filled with so many emotions
She finally spoke with her voice breaking
Looked him in eyes
Vo mei.. mein apko pas..
She finally realised what she was going to say nd stopped .
For who would want to spoil such a pure and beautiful realtionship.
She turned around with tears in her eyes.
Vo mujhe na bahut neend aa rahi hai
She ran and left him wondering what it was she wanted to say! What it was for girl who never lies lied !
He pondered as he saw her retreating figure.
Will they ever be able to step close? Or will they be caged in these unsaid emotions
What does future hold for them?
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