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Hey guys sorry for such a late update, was busy with my duties. Hope you all like it 

                           Chapter-1

                       "Clumsy girl, meticulous guy"

Shimla

It was bright summer morning with sun shinning its brightest.  Birds welcoming their day with melodious chirping. There sun being at its playful best, bestowed its rays on room where girl in her early twenties was sleeping like a peaceful baby. The rays grazing  the cream curtains fell upon eyes of girls, reminding her for its time  to wake. The girl so stubborn, frowned her eyebrows and ignored the sun. 

That extra sleep in the morning is beauty, she thought.

But the alarm was there to remind it was time to wake up

Alarm ringing....

Bzzzzx.. beep beep

The girl woke up with a jerk with her hair all messy , turned towards the side table .

As she watched the clock, her eyes went big with the shock of realistion of over sleeping again

She tied her hair in messy bun, threw her quilt away ,got of the bed wearing her sleepers hapzardly rushed to start the day.


Cursing herself she ran towards another room

Hey bagwaan, pllz plllz aaj mat karna, kal pakka jaldi utho ji, pllz.pllz ....

Lavo tera kuch ni ho sakta. 

Pacing towards the room, she hit her toe on a shelf in living room

Aaa aah ouch.! Limping she opened the door 

Aah aah! 

Kabir! She shouted in hope of waking a 6 years old boy. She rushed towrds his bed. Pushed his quilt away 

"Kabir uth na, school ke late ho jayega phir se maam gussa kargi ,

Miss lavanaya kashyap, its been 3 days straight kabir has been late, this is highly irresponsible.


Before she could complete her sentence, she heard his sleepy voice

" Bus lavo, subah subah plz.shaanti rehene do"

She pushed him away in bathroom

1 hour later 

Lavanya dressed herself and went to kitchen to prepare for kabir's breakfast and tiffin.

She made his favorite grilled cheese and choclate milk. 

" Kabir, breakfast is ready, table pe rakh diya hai, did you pack your bag? "

"Yes , lavo "

She smiled,hearing how responsible this little guy is starting to get. The chaotic morning, now slowly turned into peaceful morning.

Phone ringing...

She picked up her phone and put the phone on speaker as she was busy packing tiffin for kabir 

" Hello, morning maa"

" Morning beta, tayaar ho gayi, kabir tayaar ho ga ,khaana kha liye

" Maa,.maa saans to le lo, shukar hai aaj meri chutti thi, varna aaj phir ghar mein 

" Earth quake aa jaana tha " shouted kabir from behind 

Lavanya stared at him and signaled him to eat

Kabir : kya badi maa , apne apni beti kuch nahi sikhaya , is ki shaadi hui na to is ka pati to 

Lavanya pulled his ears playfully

Lavanaya: kya ha, subh subah kuch zyaad hi uch vichaar nai aa rahe apke

Kabir : aah aah lavo aah hurts ,badi maa

Lavanaya's mom was smiling on other side hearing this chaotic, playful relationship

Maa: lavo plz kabir ko kuch mat kaho, sahi to keh raha hai, subah uth thi nai ho, din mein 100 baar thokar khaati ho, kitchen mein khaana kam, cheeze zyaada girati ho 

Lavanaya: ( with slight irritation) Maa plz

Maa: aacha baaba sorry, mein na baad mein baat karti ho papa ko late ho raha hai

Both in synchrony bye maa 

   Bye badi maa

Lavanya : with a tinge of naughtiness in her eyes ,approched kabir : kis ke pati ka bura haal ho ga ha 

Kabir : lavo vo to mein mazaak kar raaha tha ( (sensing the danger) joking

She tickcled kabir making him and her both rofl hugged him tightly and gave him parting kiss on his cheek as he went to school

Lavanya ( muttering to herself )

Vaise baat to sahi thi, pata nahi kis beechare ki zindagi mein hardam machani hai meine.

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Delhi

In this chaotic delhi, the guy loved his peaceful morning. Waking up at 6 in the morning, working out , ready at 8. The sun and alarm always missed their chance when it comes to him for he disliked any change. A tall guy in his late twenties, with ruffled hair for his eyes so deep,that anyone will drown in them. Wearing a green t-shirt doing justice to his worked out body and black pjs, staring out his window he was sipping his hot black coffee with little sugar no milk. He loved looking out his window.for the huge backyard with cherry blossom tree at the end ,birds chirping, flowers blossoming with the rays of sun falling on its leaves. 

Taking a deep breath " Ah! I love this morning, so serene, so quite, so.peaceful" 

Hearing the knock on the door, he turned to open the door 

As he opened the door, the girl in her early twenties with two pigtails wearing a big smile greeted him 

Mahika: Good morning bhai,

Before he could complete his reply, she made her way in his room

Mahika: packing ho gayi , offcourse ho hi gayi ho gi aap last minute k liye thodhi na kuch chodte ho. 

Arjun: I know tum gussa ho, but you know its important na( sensing the slight anger in mahika's voice)

Mahika turned towards him with slight tears forming in her eyes, hugged Arjun tightly 

Mahika: you know na i love you the most, and i'll always support you but Shimla jaana jazoori, vo bhi kitna kuch ho jaane k baad 

Arjun broke the hug, seated mahika on his bed. He looked around and noticed the bean bag, pulled it towards mahika and sat . He wiped her tears, held.her cheek and assured her in his deep voice 

Arjun: maho shimla mein kya hua kya nahi,.vo.ik past tha. Ye deal bahut important hai you know na how much dad wants it.

Mahika: ok thik hai, aacha maa ne kaka se baat karli hai, unho ne apke rehne k.liye sub arrangements kar diye hai. 

Kitni ajeeb family hai na hamari mom, dad US mein hai , aap shimla chale jayogay or mein yaha delhi mein.

Arjun: meine to option diya tha, k aaja mere saath

Mahika: bhai ,aap to jaante 

Arjun: i know office ka project hai, zaroori hai but maho jis din project complete ho ga next day you have to come.shimla, mujhe pata nai kitna tym.lag jaye 

Mahika: i know baba, aacha breakfast meine bana k rakh diya hai, mein ready hone jaati ho, office ka tym ho raya, apko bye bolne aayi thi.

Giving him a side hug

Mahika: take care bhai, I'll miss you 

Arjun( giving her a peck on forehead) : miss you too

As she reached her door, Mahika turned towards Arjun with tinge.of playful ness in her voice 

Vaise bhai, asa na ho ki shimla mein apki is peaceful si zinadagi mein hardam mach jaye!

Arjun (shaking his head) : Asa kuch nai ho ga 

Arjun malhotra ko.apni peaceful si zindagi bahut pyaari hai.

Mahika: well you never.know , 

Arjun playfully threw a pillow towards her

Mahika : Aah! Ok ok  i am joking no  bye 

Arjun : bye 


What chaos waits next for lavanya ?

What lies ahead of Arjun?

Will Mahika's words will get true?







Edited by sheen97 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice start ❤️.....clumsy Lavo and disciplined Arjun ....awaiting their first meeting ....it ll be fun ...she ll bring havocs in his peaceful life 😆


Btw Kabir kaun hain???😳


Thks for the update dear🤗 ....ll await the next one ❤️