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Posted: 4 years ago

So far the couples are matched pretty well. They have the same tastes. But the mehndi lady's mistake is foretelling us something.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Shlok and Omkara weren't ready to marry but seeing the beautiful twins, they agreed

Shlok and Gauri's earring scene was lovely

Asha teasing Omkara was funny

temple meeting was also nicely written

funny that Asha and Om reacted the same way seeing food

the trick to identify their partners was so funny

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Posted: 4 years ago

engagement scenes were romantic

mehendi letters got exchanged
dance was nice

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Posted: 4 years ago

great update... thanks for the pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely Update 



The Mendhi ladies 

was that a genuine mistake or is this

something that will actually happen 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank u very much


Junooniyat (Obsession) Part 3

Shlok and Gauri's wedding…..
Shlok ties mangalsuthra around Gauri's neck and fills her hairline with vermilion.
The photographers clicked their photographs.

 

 Shlok's and Gauri's room..
Shlok enters the room.He is stunned to see Gauri in a night suit.She blushes seeing him.

sajna ve.... sajna ve.....

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon

Shlok:I thought you will wear traditional attire tonight.

Gauri:I know..that’s what all the girls do for their wedding night.But I was feeling suffocated in heavy lehenga and heavy jewellery.That’s why I wore a simple night suit.Sorry.If you want I will wear an Indian attire now.

Shlok:No need.Your comfort is more important.Which dress you wear does’nt matter.You can wear whatever you want.

Chupke se ahista
ho raha hoon lapata
uljha sawaalo mein ab teri
hai khayalon mein
kaisi yeh chahat hai
roke yeh na ruke ek pal nah raahat hai,
dhadkan gawaa chuke

Gauri cups his face in her hands:You are so sweet Shlok.

He smiles. 

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Khoye hai kuch alfaaz kyun
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
kya naam doon kya naam doon

Shlok cups her face in his hands.

Shlok:I am so lucky to have you as my life partner.I feel blessed.


She blushes.

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon,
iss marz ko kaise sahoon
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon,
kya naam doon kya naam doon


SHLOK:I love you Gauri.

GAURI blushes:I love you too Shlok.



Saiyaan ve ab rasta dikha de tu
Tujkho hai vaasta dua de tu


Saiyaan ve ab rasta dikha de tu
Tujkho hai vaasta dua de tu


They share an eye lock.

Man ke munder pe baithaa hai gher ke
mujhko ghoore hai yeh ehsaas
Khwahishon ke lehron Mein
Roshan hui sehron mein

He carries her in his arms.

dikhne laga hai ab tu khaas
kaise hai yeh kadi jo tute hi nahin
Tumse hai jaa judi eshaaron mein kahin

 

Both were looking into each others eyes romantically.

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon khoye hai
kuch alfaaz kyun
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon,
kya naam doon ko kya naam doon


He pecks her forehead sweetly.She forgets herself.



 Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
kya naam doon,kya naam doon
Saiyaan ve ab rasta dikha de tu 2


Tujkho hai vaasta dua de tu
Saiyaan ve ab rasta dikha de tu 2
Tujkho hai vaasta.......

She pecks his cheeks sweetly.He smiles.


Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
kya naam doon,kya naam doon(IPKKND EBF).

Asha gets a surprise parcel.She opens it.It's a beautiful white saree.She sees a chip.It's written "With love.. your Omkara.."
Her mobile rings.She attends the call.
"Hi Asha..I am Omkara".
Asha:Hi..
OMKARA:Did you get my gift?
Asha:Yes.




OMKARA:How is it?
Asha:Very beautiful.
OMKARA:I want you to wear that and come with me for a date tonight.You will come.Right?


Asha:Ok…I will come.

He smiles.

Omkara and Asha meet outside.Omkara is bowled over by her beauty.
OMKARA:You look very pretty Asha.
Asha:Thanks Omkara.



Omkara:You look good in Indian clothes also.You prefer western outfits.But for a change only I gifted you a saree.Hope you are fine with this.

Asha:I liked this.Thank you.

Omkara smiles.

OMKARA:You must have got a lot of compliments for your beauty.So my compliment may not be exciting you.
She simply smiles.
OMKARA:You have won the beauty contest in the college.Right?
Asha:Yes.



Omkara looks at her deeply:No wonder that you have won beauty contests.Because you are very beautiful Asha.

Seeing him gaze at her she felt uncomfortable.
Omkara leads her to the car.
They reach a cool isolated place .

Omkara holds her hand and dances.

Kaise kahun ishq mein tere
Kitna hoon betaab main
Aankhon se aankhe mila ke
Chura loon tere khwaab main Mere saaye hain saath mein
Yaara jis jagah tum ho

Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho.Wajah tum ho. O... Hai ye nasha, ya hai zehar
Iss pyar ko hum kya naam de
(Iss pyar ko hum kya naam dein)
Hai ye nasha, ya hai zehar
Iss pyar ko hum kya naam de
Kab se adhuri hai ik daastaan
Aaja usey aaj anjaam de
Tumhe bhuloon kaise main
Meri pehli khata tum ho

Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho.Wajah tum ho. oo...

Kya jaane tu mere iraade
Le jaunga saansein chura ke
(Saansein chura ke)
Kya jaane tu mere iraade
Le jaunga saansein chura ke
Dil keh raha hai gunehgaar ban ja
Bada chain hai inn gunaahon se aage
Main gumshuda si raat hoon
Meri khushnuma subah tum ho

Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho.Wajah tum ho. Wajah tum ho(Hate story3).
 


Omkara goes closer to her .Asha becomes insecure.
Omkara does'nt realize it.He puts his arms on her shoulder.He is becoming closer and closer to her.He caresses her face with passion.He is in another world where there was only him, his Asha and their passionate love.He leans towards her to touch her sweetly with his lips.Asha becomes nervous and moves away from him.
Asha:Omkara..what are you doing?

He asks in a husky soft voice:Why..?We love each other.Right?

Asha:But we are not married yet.Before marriage..this is not right.

Omkara:I am sorry Asha if I made you uncomfortable.I thought since you are a modern girl you don't mind all this.After all we are going to get married soon.
Asha: But..i think this is not needed now.

OMKARA:But why Asha?Why are you hesitating?
Asha:Omkara..
OMKARA:Tell me Asha..we love each other.Then what’s the problem?By the way I won’t cross limits before marriage.Though I am modern I don’t follow western culture.Just a little bit of romance Asha.

He goes closer to her.Her wet eyes captures his vision.
Omkara becomes becomes serious.
OMKARA:Asha?I never thought that our intimacy will hurt you this much.You are so modern.You love night parties like me.So I thought you won’t have hesitation.

Asha:I am a modern girl.But Omkara…In India even the most ultra modern girls can romance only the person they love.They can’t have physical intimacy with anyone else.

Omkara could not believe it:What?Asha…what did you say?

Asha:I'm sorry Omkara.You are not the person I love.
Omkara is shocked:Asha!
Asha:I am sorry Omkara.

Omkara got angry and held her shoulders tight.
OMKARA:Then whom do you love?
She is not able to face Omkara.Lowering her eye balls she says :Shlok!


Omkara is shocked.He can't believe his ears.He was numb for a moment.



Omkara:No,you are fooling me like you always do.But don't use your usual tricks.I know that you are a big prankster.But this is not  a joke Asha..
She weeps:No,it's true.I don't love you.
Tears dwell in his ears.
OMKARA:Shlok?
Asha:Yes.It was love at first sight.But papa and Maa chose Shlok for Gauri.Thus I lost Shlok.


Asha cries.

Omkara's heart pains.

OMKARA:Then why did'nt you tell me before?
Asha:Because I did’nt want to hurt Gauri and my parents.But i can't cheat you anymore.Because I feel that you love me like crazy.Your love is giving me pain as i don't feel the same for you.


Omkara is broken completely.
OMKARA:You broke my heart Asha.You don't deserve my love.


Asha:Omkara!
Omkara fumed with anger:You cheated everyone.How will Shlok,Gauri and our parents react if they come to know the truth?I hate you Asha.

 Asha has no answer.She is really shattered.
Asha walks away crying.

Omkara is shattered.

He says silently:I loved you madly.But you cheated me.How can I live without you Asha?
Omkara heart cries loudly out of pain.

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Asha was brave enough to tell the truth. Omkar should not have blasted her for that.

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Posted: 4 years ago

terrific update. thanks for the pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Shlok and Gauri were just amazing

Asha insecure with Omkara and even told him that she loves shlok

Omkara blasted at her getting hurt

continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

In part 2 Sad that astrologer told both the families that Ashkara wedding has to get postponed. Omkara telling Asha that he can't stay away from her for long is sensational. Asha's shopping with Rilok was amazing. Shlok & Gauri's scenes are romantic. Omkara teasing Asha in the bachelor's party was insensitive.  Asha telling Omkara that Shlok does not tease Gauri as he does to her was frank. Loved Shlok supporting Asha. The song sequences are romantic.

Edited by vatika_r - 4 years ago