Jaane Kya Baat Hai - A KuKu Fanfiction (Chapter 8 UPDATED- pg 6) - Page 2

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CHAPTER 4

 

"Arey jaldi karo bhaiyya, shaadi aaj hai, agale saal nahi" Kuhu shouted across the hall to the decorations staff. Just as she finished tying up the last bouquet, her phone rang. It was Kunal. She hesitated, almost cut the call, but then decided against it. It could be urgent, she thought.

 

"Bolo Kunal"

 

"Kya kar rahi ho tum? Mere ghar se nikalte pehle tum chali gayi. Tum meri wait to kar sakti thi na?" Kunal said frustratedly.

 

Kuhu was livid. The nerve of this man! It was the last day of the marriage that HE was ending, and he had the guts to tell her that she should have waited for him?

 

"Main bohot busy hun Kunal, mere paas time nahi hai baat karne ke liye", Kuhu snapped and hung up.

 

Kunal was shocked.Did she really just cut his call? He finally reached the wedding venue and ran up the stairs into the hall.

 

"Kuhu kahan chali gayi?" Kunal asked one of the women from the NGO that were helping with the flower arrangements.

 

"Kuhu didi to abhi abhi apni mai ke ghar gayi, Mishti didi ko madat karne ke liye."

 

Kunal's heart dropped. Kuhu had left right when he had arrived. He got into his car and started driving frantically to the Maheshwari house.



 

"Kuhu! Meri help karo! Main yeh lehenga akeli nahi pehen sakti hoon!" Mishti called Kuhu.

 

Kuhu entered the sunlit room where Mishti was struggling to get ready. She looked around. This was the room that she and Mishti shared since childhood. She could hear the laughter, the shouting, the bickering, and the giggling like it was yesterday.Enveloped in nostalgia, she wished that she could go back in time to the simpler days, the days where everything wasn't this complicated and tough.

 

Mishti turned around and snapped her fingers in her face. "Kuhu, kahan kho gayi tu? Sab theek hai na?"

 

Kuhu jolted out of her daze. "Haan, sab theek hai." She helped Mishti tie her lehenga and put the finishing touches on her makeup and hair. She was about to leave, when Mishti caught her hand.

 

"Kuhu, aaj meri shaadi hai. Aaj ke baad hum ek ghar mein phirse rahenge. Kya hum ek fresh startkar sakte hain? Main nahi chahti hun ki hum lade. Main chahti hun ki hum sisters rahein, hamesha hamesha ke liye," Mishti said gently.

 

Kuhu hesitated.Years of frustration and pain circled in her head. Every time Mishti was prioritized over her, every time people gave Mishti more attention than her, and every time her own grandparents would ignore her for Mishti, she would grow jealous and upset. But now that they were older, Kuhu felt nothing but exhaustion. Tired of being second best to everyone. Tired of being everyone's last priority. She turned around and said "Mishti, main bhi nahi chahti hun ki hum lade. But main yeh bhi bhool nahi sakti ki hum kitne lad chuke hain, aur kisliye lade. Shaadi ke baad, sab vaise ho jayenge, jaise bachpan mein hua karte the. Aur main yeh baat ignore nahi kar sakti."

 

Mishi was about to protest, but Kuhu shook her head. "Koi baat nahi hain, Mishti. Shaadi ke baad, tume jo sahi lage, tum vo karo. Lekin mujhse kuch expect mat karna."Saying that, Kuhu left the room. Her heart was heavy, but she wasn't about to make promises she knew she couldn't keep.

 


 

Kunal was on his way to Maheshwari house when Abir called him.

 

"Haan, bolo bhai."

 

"Nanko kahan ho tum, yaar?! Shaadi ke liye sirf kuch time baaki hai, aur tu ghar par hi nahin hai?" Abir exclaimed.

 

"Arey bhai vo actually-"

 

"Nanko mujhe kuch nahin sunna, tu abhi ghar aa jaa, barat ki taiyyari karni hai. Please yaar." Abir said commandingly.

 

Kunal was in a fix.He wanted desperately to talk to Kuhu, but it was his brother's wedding day. He thought to himself, "I can talk to Kuhu at the wedding. But right now, Abir bhai needs me."

Thinking this, he turned the car around and drove back home.

 

A few hours later…

 

The baarat reached the wedding venue, in its full glory. Music was blasting loudly, money was being thrown, and the Rajvansh family was dancing like crazy. Abir looked majestic sitting on his white horse, wearing a cream color sherwani with navy blue and gold accents. Kunal danced, but less enthusiastically, as his eyes searched for Kuhu in the entourage waiting to welcome them at the entrance. But sadly, she was no where to be found.

 

As they stepped inside, a shower of blue flowers rained upon them, and they were greeted with a royal sight. Golden chandeliers glistened with diamonds in the soft light while flowers adorned every corner of the hall. The mandap was a magical sight to see, with navy blue and gold chiffon drapes and flowers and pearls interwoven on each pillar. Everyone gasped, unable to believe their eyes.

 

"Kuhu bhabhi kitni talented hai, hain na bhai?" Ketki said excitedly to Abir and Kunal.

 

"Haan Ketu. Kuhu has really outdone herself this time," Abir said proudly.

 

Kunal smiled. So this is what she was busy with when she cut his call. He was blown away by the effort she put into his brother's wedding. He made a mental note to thank her when he saw her.  He looked around everywhere, but still could not see Kuhu.

 

Finally, Mishti walked down the stairs, escorted by Kuhu and her Badi Maa. Everyone gasped again. Mishti looked like a dream in her wedding lehenga. But while everyone watched Mishti, Kunal only had eyes for someone else.

 

Kuhu was wearing a navy blue and cream colored lehenga with an almost-backless blouse, draped traditionally. Her eyes were adorned with just a bit of kajal, and her lashes were long and thick. Her hair was swept back into a braided bun at the nape of her neck, but a few of her curly strands framed her face. Her cheeks were colored pink just a tiny bit, but her lips were colored a gorgeous, deep red. Kunal couldn't stop staring at her. She was so, so beautiful. How had he not noticed her like this before?

 

Just as Kuhu helped Mishti sit down next to Abir, Kunal and Kuhu made eye contact. Kunal gazed into her eyes softly, however, her eyes were filled with a cold indifference. He made an attempt to go over to her, but she was immediately called away by the caterers.He was about to follow her, when mami ji stopped him and said "Tu kaha jaraha hai? Tumhare bhai ke piche khade raho."

 

Kuhu returned just in time for the pheras, but stood on the other side of the mandap, purposely avoiding Kunal. Kunal didn't notice her return, as she was hidden by the pillar. Once the wedding was complete, and Mishti and Abir took everyone's blessings, the families and guests moved to the courtyard outside to eat dinner. Kunal tried to get a hold of Kuhu, but she slipped from his grasp as the crowd of people carried her away from him. He sighed in frustration.

 

Kuhu was about to stay in the courtyard with everyone else, when Jasmeet chachi called her and asked her to bring her purse from inside, as she had forgotten it. As Kuhu went back, she heard someone whispering on the phone in the corner of the entrance.

 

"Tum meri baat suno. Ab tum aa sakte ho, clear target hai. Vo bahar khadi hai, sab ke saath. Goli chalane ke baat, tum vahan se bhaag jao. Lekin target miss nahi karna chahiye. Vo ladki Mishti aaj bach nahi chahiye."

 

Kuhu was shell-shocked. It was Meenakshi aunty. She turned around and ran as quickly as she could to the courtyard, looking around frantically for Mishti. This couldn't be happening. Meenakshi aunty couldn't get away with this. Kuhu couldn't let Abir bhai's happiness get snatched from him. Not when he had just  gotten it back.

 

Kunal grabbed Kuhu's arm. "Kuhu tum mujhe ab avoid nahin kar sakti. Tum-"

 

"Kunal, chhodo mujhe!" Kuhu screamed, and ripped her arm from his hand.

 

"Kuhu wait!" Kunal was about to follow her, when he heard a loud, resounding gunshot.

 

In horror, he stared at Kuhu. She was standing directly in front of Mishti. Kuhu's eyes were glazed over, as blood seeped through her cream blouse. 


To be continued...

Edited by journalgirl321 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

OMG what an amazing part 👍🏼, totally was not expecting the twist. Dont leave us at such a cliffhanger for long. Please update soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago

wow beautiful update👍🏼

great twist🤢

do update soon

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Oh damn! Totally did not see that coming!! Really want to know what happens next. Don't leave us hanging. Do update soon. 

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Its just damn awesome.... please please please update next parts soon....😍🤩🤩🤩

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What a wonderful story. Great writing and you ended the chapter with a cliff hanger. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

❤️❤️

Thanks for this. I loved how you left Kuhu and Mishti's equation as it is; it's a complicated one but real.

Oooo the suspense! Do continue.

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Pls update the next part.... Waiting eagerly for it... Plssss

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Oh yes!! Meera, do update this!

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Heyyyyy I'm sorry I haven't been regular! School has been crazy these days, but I'll try my best to be a little bit more regular. Here's chapter 5. I hope you like it!


CHAPTER 5


2 months later


It was another morning in the Rajvansh house. Like clockwork, the rooster crowed, the smell of coffee and breakfast permeated the air, and just like that, everyone was up and about. However, something was different. Something was… missing.

Mishti helped Parul maasi set the table as she did every morning, and waited for everyone to come to breakfast. She knew, however, that this would be completely useless. For the past two months, the family no longer sat together at mealtimes. The house, which was once filled with laughter and happiness, now echoed in dead silence. No one talked to each other for a span longer than 15 seconds, and everyone generally avoided eye contact with each other, out of fear of having to relive the pain. 

Ketki came down the stairs, engrossed in her phone, carrying a load of files in her other hand. 

“Arrey Ketu! Aaja, naashta karlo” Mishti called, seeing her come. 

“Nahin bhabhi, aaj meeting hai aur mere paas time nahin hai”, Ketki said absentmindedly, and walked out the door. 

The rest of the family members emerged, one by one, and all gave excuses to not eat breakfast at the dining table. Dejected, Mishti sat down at the table and was about to begin eating, when she heard Abir’s voice. 

“Mere bina naashta kar rahi ho? Not fair,” Abir strode to the table and took a seat. “Arrey wah, kachori! My favorite.” Grinning, Abir piled on his plate and began to eat. 

Mishti looked at him sadly. “It’s ok, Abir. Mere mann rakhne ke liye tumhein yeh natak karne ki zaroorat nahin hai”. 

Abir stopped eating to look at Mishti. “Mishti, kabhi kabhi humein natak karne ki zaroorat hai. Taaki humein apna dard hamesha mehsoos na karne pade.”

A tear rolled down Mishti’s cheek. Abir, noticing this, wipes the tear from her face. “Aaj no rona dhona. Aaj tum sirf smile karogi.”

Mishti gave Abir a pained smile. But she knew that nothing would ever be the same, and she wasn’t sure if she’d ever be able to genuinely smile for a long time. 



Kunal stared at himself in the mirror. His beard had grown out, and dark circles under his eyes and worry lines marred his handsome face. He groaned a little under his breath in exhaustion and picked up the photo frame on the table next to him. His thumb grazed Kuhu’s face as he gazed at his wedding picture. His mind wandered back to the night of his wedding, where he screamed at Kuhu while she sobbed, begging him to give their relationship just one chance. He looked back into the mirror at himself, this time, loathingly. Oh how he wished he could just talk to her, just once. He just wanted to apologize to her. He just wanted to hear her sweet, melodious voice in his ears again. 


Flashback


Everything moved in slow motion. Kunal was the first one to reach Kuhu after Mishti. He held her in his arms and shook her. Screams echoed around them, as everyone ran to Kuhu. Blood was everywhere, as Kunal desperately tried to keep Kuhu awake, not having even fully processed what had just happened. 

Everything was a blur after that. The ambulance came and took Kuhu, with Kunal and Varsha riding shotgun in the back. Kunal was in a state of shock as he looked at his pale wife, her lehenga drenched in blood. Varsha was sobbing, begging Kuhu to wake up. 

The doctors rushed Kuhu into surgery right away. Varsha, Badi Maa, Mishti, and Jasmeet chachi sobbed together, while Bade papa did his best to console Shaurya and the others. Parul maasi held Ketki and Nidhi mami, crying, while Meenakshi stood in the corner, horrified that Kuhu had gotten shot instead. Kunal started to slowly walk away from them in shock, shaking and trembling. He looked down at his hands, which were covered in Kuhu’s blood. He staggered and almost fell, when Abir caught him just in time. 

“Bhai yeh kaise ho gaya, vo mere aankhon ke saamne toh thi, mujhe usse protect karna chahiye tha, main—“ Kunal wept, burying his face in his brother’s shoulder. 

Abir had no words. His bro, his best friend, his brother’s wife had been shot. And now, his brother was in so much pain. 

“Nanko tumhein nahin pata tha, apne aap ko blame mat karo itna, please,” Abir begged Kunal, trying his best to console his little brother. 

The surgeon came out after a long night and declared the surgery successful, but that it would be touch and go for a while before Kuhu stabilized. Everyone was jubilant. Everything was going to be just fine. Right?


Present


Kunal walked the corridors of the hospital that had grown familiar to him over the last two months. He paused, before opening the door to the room he visited every day and spent time in, for hours on end. His heart sank to his stomach as he was, once again, greeted with the sight of Kuhu hooked up to a machine, tubes snaking out of her hospital gown. He went and sat next to her, caressing her face gently, tucking one of her loose curls behind her ear. 

“Kuhu, please uth jao. Please,” Kunal whispered. A lone tear rolled down his face. What if his beautiful rainbow was lost to him forever?


To be continued...

Edited by journalgirl321 - 4 years ago