A PreRish Fic Kleptomania Completed 28-11-2019 - Page 11

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Eeekkkkkssss

Kya hua?

And how's it?

Give a unbiased answer.

Originally posted by: Tammanaarora9

Kya hua?

And how's it?

Give a unbiased answer.

 

Originally posted by: oa2019

 what a lovely ending  to your story.

Share your opinions also 

What does you like the most and about what you don't 

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

i am speechless trying to decifer in words the beauty of it. 

Okkkkaaayyy

i like the fact that it was a slow burn as conditions like that don't get better over night. the only criticism (and there's not any really) is of you could space out your paragraphs just to make it a lot easier to read.

Originally posted by: oa2019

i like the fact that it was a slow burn as conditions like that don't get better over night. the only criticism (and there's not any really) is of you could space out your paragraphs just to make it a lot easier to read.

Point is noted my lord 

Originally posted by: Tammanaarora9

Point is noted my lord 

lol thanks.

Originally posted by: Tammanaarora9

Point is noted my lord 

lol thanks

sorry for double post. btw is there a way to delete a post?

Very nice update 👏

I like the way prena telling him the story....their cute conversation..

Beautiful ending..❤️