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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: inavars

Rano's voice!!!!!!!!

nope! πŸ˜› πŸ˜†

Yeaaa....give it to her Rano...yell at her!!! 😑 I still can't get over the fact that Bani would hide herself even from her own sister...what did she ever do to her?! 😭

slight oversight on Bani's part na?! πŸ˜•

AMAZING part Cordy!! LOVE Tony and Rano πŸ˜† the only smart ones!! πŸ˜†

thank you CEOji!! how's the TRP's doing?!! πŸ˜‰

AWESOMETACULAR πŸ‘ You don't understand how extremely happy I am right now!! πŸ‘ Bani is back in the Walia mansion and will get bashed left right and center by Rano (hint hint)...okay usually I'm not a bani basher...but really...it's just not right what she did to poor rano...letting her believe she's dead

update soooooooooon!!

i already did update, go read it!! i hope it makes you even happier!!! πŸ˜ƒ 😳 πŸ˜†

and you're in US?!....good...i can stalk you! πŸ˜† sorry...a bit hyper...from catching up with all the great FF's 😳 πŸ˜†

stalkerji, no need!!! i already updated!! but you can come find me anyway sravi! πŸ€—

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: laddoo598

Cordy USA is closer to me than UK 😈
I am coming to get you πŸ˜†
Seriously what a place to stop? 😭
But that was Jai for sure πŸ˜ƒ
Super duper update, πŸ‘ cant wait for the next part 😊
Bani's reaction,Jai's happiness everything πŸ˜ƒ
Thanks soo much honey! πŸ€—



πŸ˜† laddooji!! aajao for sure, but all belans and joote are banned!! πŸ˜›

thanks for the compliments huni, next part is already up, hope you enjoy that too!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: fsam

Cordy this part was awesome. Loved it.

as usual, thanks so much farah! 😳

Beautifully shown how Bani's true feelings come to the forefront, how she always expected to be there. Not only does she remember their good times but all her memories return.

she never really forgot them in the first place! 😭

Loved the way she feels sad to see her roses have died and JW's connection of her life to the roses. Was wonderfully portrayed.

thanks dear! i know how much you liked that part, hope you like the next part too!! πŸ˜ƒ

So we have another cupid in the form of Sabrina.

Waiting for the next part.

Hope you are enjoying your trip to Atlanta.

we have 3 cupids here, saby rano and tony!! and they make a rocking team!! πŸ˜†


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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shahni4

Cords...
What an amazing part!!!
Loved the romantic flashback...Perfection ....no other word comes to mind except Perfection!!!

thanks nina! glad you liked it! 😳

What I would do to see that lovely flashback on screen with the detail you described!!!
Send the Kreatives your ideas!!!

if the kreatives would listen i'd gladly give up my day job to write romantic j-b scenes!! πŸ˜†

And what a place to end!!! I do sense some angry sparks flying though!!!!!

Wish Krishna had accompanied Bani to see Mr Dost!!!

Continue soon!!!

Nina

read part 18 and find out!! πŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
Cordy,

That was a really emotional reunion, the anguish Bani felt when she saw him, the happiness Jai felt when he first saw her, the anger and the relief...all caught very nicely...

Loved it!! πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
haila!!! πŸ˜ƒ Cordy 😳 😳 😳 ....i took ur warning πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ...but it did not work ...i still fainted 😳 .....hehehehehe πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

thats was sure a hot and *ahem*..... hapening part 😳 .......so she is finally home πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ...well that is just great πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ...just wht tinku likes to see πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ....great......and seems like she got a great 😳 😳 😳 ...heart warming welcome πŸ˜‰ ...ok..i am gonna behave myself 😳 😳 😳 ....hahaha

i luved they was u described the whole emotions πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ....that bani and jai was feeling 😭 😭 😭 ....just great πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ....very beautifully written yaar πŸ˜ƒ .....tinku tho clean bowl hogaee 😳 😳 😳 ......

haila!! mere jai jaanu ko lagee toh nahi πŸ˜† ...yaar bani was loosing the plot ...would not blame her though πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .....though mere jai jaanu ka kya fault hai 😭 😭 😭 ....well i think she forgave him πŸ˜‰ ....especailly the way things ended 😳 😳 😳 ....haila!! ended or just started πŸ˜‰ ....hehehehe 🀣 ......

plzzzzz cont sooon yaar πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ ....as always ...was a pleasure reading it 😳 😳 😳 ......and tinku luved it 😳 .......well i think its gonna take some time to get over it 😳 😳 😳 ......i am still blushing like crazy πŸ˜‰ ...do u blame me πŸ˜› πŸ˜› ......



luv
tinku 😳

p.s is this a gud time to ask for an update??? πŸ˜† ...heheheh πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Edited by TINK - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Even better!!! 😳 😳 😳

I was thinking I would love a little bani bashing from Rano...but finding Jai on the doorstep is muuuuuuuuuuuuuch better 😳 😳 😳

Operation Reunion πŸ˜† πŸ˜† I love them!!

Now to Jai-Bani!!! Poor Jai...so many thappads?! πŸ˜† it's okay i guess...he's strong...he can take it πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

And the "after-thappad" 😳 😳 😳 that was so beautifully written Cordy!! 😳

Loved the last line: she's finally home!! πŸ˜› Now bring Krishu to WM so they can be a happy family πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey...here is the promised detailed comment....lol..

Cordy...donesn't matter with the warning...some of the kiddos here have worst imagination than us...imagine being asked by a 15 year old to include a repeat of June 19 in ur FF...πŸ˜†....

Cordy...I can so imagine being shocked...imagine the dead talking to you..plus if it someone you so loved...I am sure the poor thing was shocked out of her wits...

What was Jai about? he is so mean to her to begin with...but love the change of tone...when he sees her...so much concern and dare i say love...

Wonderful job with writing Bani's emotions...πŸ‘...the angst...the anger...the pain...the hurt...beautifully done...and the rain...marvellous touch...

Awesome job of describing Jai's thoughts too...the fear...the pain...the need...the curioisity...and then the anger...I am at a loss of words right now...πŸ‘

Bani's outburst was as natural as natural can be...and Jai's reaction was also perfect...

Tony tusi great ho...I like this tony...kitna wafadar hai...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

OMG...was it the brandy that got into Bani...no I am sure she was drunk on love...who wouldn't be...Jai hai itna acha..😳...

I am glad she is back home...and he had found his manzil...am looking forward to the next one...

wonderful undate cords...you are awesom...

Rivs

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey cords..it was beautiful...sala operation to itni jaldi kamyab ho gaya.. πŸ˜†

rano cud take this up as a full time job..lol...

the jb reunion was much needed for them and for me... i know im a sad soul...sucker for love and romance 😳

update soon
neetu
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sweet Chaitali,

Mindblowing two parts!!!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Loved your updates!!!!!!! πŸ˜›
So Bani back at Walia Mansion!!!! 😊
Stunned to see JW Alive!!!!!! 😲 😲 😲
And the monlogue between Jai-Bani!!!! 😊
Hai Maar Dala Aapne....... πŸ˜‰
And that was one passionate scene!!!! 😳
U wrote.....wowzers!!!!!! πŸ˜›
Haila...I was reading and going Haila...Haila...
Yahan....kya hoona tha...Aur Kya Ho Gaya Bhaiya...
Hai...Mora Saaiya..... πŸ˜‰

Cannot wait to read the next part.......!!!!!!
Pls continue soooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!

As per Tradition....
Here is a famous song of Aradhana,
Roop Tera Mastana,
Pyaar Mera Deewana,
Bhool Koi Hamse,
Na Ho Jaye.......

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish
Edited by mk727272 - 18 years ago

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