FF: Manthan: Vish ya Amrit (completed) - Page 8

Nikki!!

The part is awesome, loved Ved's dramatic Piaa.

Thanks...

Well, that was supposed to be added in the last chapter but as I explained to Nushy earlier, I had to add it in this part...

The whole confusion, NiSa working out and Nishant and Mo inparallel explaining Pia how to defeat the other, real Pia seems to have some great plans😃 and both Pias are in attack mode.

loved all 3 signs, and how to reach the place. Thrill and research is superb! Keep writing!

That Nishant and Mo explaining everything in parallel was something which made me nervous... I didn't want it to be confusing. I had to rewrite it twice so that the dialogues match the flow....

Real Pia has a plan but I don't know whether it is a great one or not. Let's see...

PS. I have not done any major research for this... 😆

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Nikki!!

The part is awesome, loved Ved's dramatic Piaa.

Thanks...

Well, that was supposed to be added in the last chapter but as I explained to Nushy earlier, I had to add it in this part...

The whole confusion, NiSa working out and Nishant and Mo inparallel explaining Pia how to defeat the other, real Pia seems to have some great plans😃 and both Pias are in attack mode.

loved all 3 signs, and how to reach the place. Thrill and research is superb! Keep writing!

That Nishant and Mo explaining everything in parallel was something which made me nervous... I didn't want it to be confusing. I had to rewrite it twice so that the dialogues match the flow....

Real Pia has a plan but I don't know whether it is a great one or not. Let's see...

PS. I have not done any major research for this... 😆

Okay!

Can get it, but you wrote very very well!

Indeed, it will be.

🤣 then you are very good.

Can get it, but you wrote very very well!

Thanks...

Indeed, it will be.

Fingers crossed!!

🤣 then you are very good.

Good?? Really??

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Can get it, but you wrote very very well!

Thanks...

Indeed, it will be.

Fingers crossed!!

🤣 then you are very good.

Good?? Really??

Yes!!!

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Yes she is split... No division of the body in top half and bottom half.

Dono ke paas sar se lekar pair tak ka shareer hai par nahi bhi hai... More like two ghostly halves.

like this 

and then the other half is filled with a ghostly shape 

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Yes. You can write anything you want in the text box. I just wrote this as an example. 

And you first need to paste the link & when u go back to edit then.

Okay... Thanks.

Regarding the nervousness. No pressure okay. I don't have high expectations or something like that.  

Write what u want to write. 

Hopefully the next part might also turn out to be fine... 

oh and pm whenever u write a new part.

I'm not so active these days so i don't come to know when you've posted. 

Sure, I will... 👍🏼

don't worry just focus on your  writing . Forget everything else. 

Originally posted by: Hallyumint

like this 

and then the other half is filled with a ghostly shape 

Nope... Itna detail main nahi gaye hain.

Consider them as two ghosts, both with complete body parts... Sort of partly invisible maybe... Although, I don't know how to explain it more properly...

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Nope... Itna detail main nahi gaye hain.

Consider them as two ghosts, both with complete body parts... Sort of partly invisible maybe... Although, I don't know how to explain it more properly...

i think  i understand. It's just when u said split i imagined... That would have been funny tho 😆.

Maybe comedy can come later. 

I think u mean to say their body is sort of translucent.  

i think  i understand. It's just when u said split i imagined... That would have been funny tho 😆.

Maybe comedy can come later. 

Comedy can come later... Maybe once I finish with this, I might try another one...

I think u mean to say their body is sort of translucent.  

Yes... Translucent is the exact word. 

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

i think  i understand. It's just when u said split i imagined... That would have been funny tho 😆.

Maybe comedy can come later. 

Comedy can come later... Maybe once I finish with this, I might try another one...

Whatever u feel like. You have to admit the sight of half talking Piya is funny . Not to mention it would give Ved & any one else a heart attack.

I think u mean to say their body is sort of translucent.  

Yes... Translucent is the exact word. 

I had to envision this war horse coming back as a ghost  for a story& how would he look like. That's exactly how ...translucent.